1. Hard (2.68 stars, 214 notes)
2. Normal (1.92 stars, 142 notes)

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Regraz wrote:

Shiro-san :3

Shiro wrote:

blasphemy!

neonat wrote:

Hard - ???

1. The timing is a bit off imo, as for me it was 20ms late than it should be, maybe you need a bit a recheck on that
2. Add custom combo colors to make it more beautiful

1. I'm not sure to have diffrent SV on lowest diff 00:17:789 - unless you have an Easy diff then it's probably fine, because the SV diffrence on 00:17:789 - and here 00:24:745 - is prety big imo, beginners might be shock when the slider suddenly goes faster hahaha XD
2. 00:19:528 (3) - 00:23:006 (3) - How about adding whistle on head? because the trumpet sound on big tick give us a strong feeling when we hear closer, so might be better if we emphsized them imo
3. 00:40:397 (3,1) - To prevent that overlapping and to make the flow mare natural, how about you ctrl+> this one 00:41:267 (4) - and re-adjust the position of this 00:41:919 (5,1) - so it's something like this on the end http://puu.sh/hoZ2X/dc438198ea.jpg
4. 00:52:571 (1,1) - I'm not sure about the using of that two spinner, maybe it's better to have single spinner that stop on here 00:56:050 - instead
5. 02:01:702 (4,1) - Kinda too close on timeline, maybe it's better to replace 02:01:702 (4) - with circle on here 02:01:702 - http://puu.sh/hoZkF/4703bde1a7.jpg so it can have more proper time before that last spinner

1. 00:19:528 - 00:23:006 - How about to add whistle there? because the trumpet sound on big tick give us a strong feeling when we hear closer, so might be better if we emphsized them imo
2. 01:06:050 (7) - How about change the rhythm on that one into something like this? http://puu.sh/hoZYO/e9825520b9.jpg because the curent is a bit odd while you missed not to map strong flute sound here 01:06:267 -
3. 01:32:354 (3,4) - How about change the rhythm on those two, because the curent is sound weird imo, maybe it's better to use this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/hoZKs/c02572cc20.jpg it's emphsized the drum sound better imo http://puu.sh/hoZMv/b7e802afd1.jpg

1. 00:19:528 - 00:23:006 - How about to add whistle there? because the trumpet sound on big tick give us a strong feeling when we hear closer, so might be better if we emphsized them imo
2. 00:24:311 (7) - Move up a bit to x:101 y:175 to prevent some minor overlap
3. 00:52:789 (1) - 00:56:050 (1) - Inconsistency hitsound imo, why those two spinner have clap on them? while on Normal and Hard diff doesn't have
4. 01:13:006 (7) - Better ctrl+g that one imo, because flow a bit not comfortable when the slider goes up twice
5. 01:32:354 (5,6) - Aparently same sugestion as Hard, how about change the rhythm on that one? because the curent is sound weird imo, maybe it's better to use this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/hp0u5/59ed1c1a2c.jpg it's emphsized the drum sound better imo http://puu.sh/hp0v1/6b1c8771e9.jpg
6. 01:38:658 (3) - Minor stack, maybe it's better to stack completely with 01:37:137 (7) -

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo as requested
Some small sugestion from me,


[Normal]

1. I'm not sure to have diffrent SV on lowest diff 00:17:789 - unless you have an Easy diff then it's probably fine, because the SV diffrence on 00:17:789 - and here 00:24:745 - is prety big imo, beginners might be shock when the slider suddenly goes faster hahaha XD It's fine imo.
2. 00:19:528 (3) - 00:23:006 (3) - How about adding whistle on head? because the trumpet sound on big tick give us a strong feeling when we hear closer, so might be better if we emphsized them imo
3. 00:40:397 (3,1) - To prevent that overlapping and to make the flow mare natural, how about you ctrl+> this one 00:41:267 (4) - and re-adjust the position of this 00:41:919 (5,1) - so it's something like this on the end http://puu.sh/hoZ2X/dc438198ea.jpg
4. 00:52:571 (1,1) - I'm not sure about the using of that two spinner, maybe it's better to have single spinner that stop on here 00:56:050 - instead
5. 02:01:702 (4,1) - Kinda too close on timeline, maybe it's better to replace 02:01:702 (4) - with circle on here 02:01:702 - http://puu.sh/hoZkF/4703bde1a7.jpg so it can have more proper time before that last spinner it's also fine.

Goodluck regraz~

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo as requested
Some small sugestion from me,

[Hard]

1. 00:19:528 - 00:23:006 - How about to add whistle there? because the trumpet sound on big tick give us a strong feeling when we hear closer, so might be better if we emphsized them imo
2. 01:06:050 (7) - How about change the rhythm on that one into something like this? http://puu.sh/hoZYO/e9825520b9.jpg because the curent is a bit odd while you missed not to map strong flute sound here 01:06:267 -
3. 01:32:354 (3,4) - How about change the rhythm on those two, because the curent is sound weird imo, maybe it's better to use this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/hoZKs/c02572cc20.jpg it's emphsized the drum sound better imo Ah This I feel mine is better.http://puu.sh/hoZMv/b7e802afd1.jpg

Goodluck regraz~

Kagamine Ren wrote:

As your pm req:

General

1. 所有diff都没选combo colour

Normal

1. 00:24:311 (4,1) - 尽管这是Normal，但是这仍然是最低难度，不建议这么玩，减小一点间距
2. 00:38:658 (1,3) - 这overlap不好吧，把3移下来点
3. 01:16:484 (6) - 建议拆成1个滑条1个圈，或者换成折返，因为01:16:702 - 这个音好像不该漏
4. 01:32:354 - 加圈？音乐里这里有个超重的音

Hard

1. 00:40:397 (5) - 换成折返节奏更好？maybe
2. 01:05:615 (6,7) - 这实在不好看，建议统一一下形状

Immortal

1. 01:00:397 (3,5) - 这blanket歪的太大了...
2. 01:29:093 (4,5) - 这距离跟1/2一样，建议把后面的滑条拉远点
3. 01:30:615 (6) - 这后面突然就是跳，太不和谐，要跳这个也跳一点
4. kiai段明明比前面激烈，怎么感觉比前面简单很多..-.
5. 然互就是blanket很多没弄好，再修一修吧。

gl

CoLouRed GlaZeE wrote:

不会摸;w;因为第二次摸图 M4M

General

1. 建议把Hard难度的AR调到7，Immortal的AR调到8会更好

Normal

1. 摸不出这个难度

Hard

1. 01:05:397 - 这里应该放个note，后面也是01:08:876 - 01:15:832 - ，Hard难度应该要这样的

Immortal

1. 00:35:832 (2) - 这个放到x:32 y:192 美观要重要
2. 00:37:571 (6) - 这个放到x:416 y:160 ^
3. 00:42:789 (2) - 这个也要放到x:408 y:120
4. 00:50:615 (3) - 这个放到这里x:112 y:320更好！
   
5. 01:10:615 (2) - 这个放到这里x:432 y:304
   
6. 后面也有很多这样的应该放到更合适的位置，我知道你这样是增加难度Zzz 不过你自己可以决定放不放;w;
   
7. 01:43:876 (7) - 这个放到x:216 y:264 01:44:528 (10) - 这个放到x:384 y:224 这样更美观
   
8. 01:48:224 (1,2,3,4) - 这些可以考虑放远点
   
9. 01:53:224 - 如果这里不加个note会不好，玩家可能一瞬间读不了这里

就这么多;w;
Good luck

ZZHBOY wrote:

bubbled

[ Abhor ] wrote:

噫!!!

Shiro wrote:

how dare you map nightwish without a Shiro diff
blasphemy!

ZZHBOY wrote:

reply Mystyk's post please, you can call me for rebubble if you think you can make a improvement in your map's quality.

Mystyk wrote:

tbh I think preview would fit better here 01:34:311 -
also what's with these default combo colors? they don't fit the background ;_; imo these would fit better - http://puu.sh/i2kzW/7634e5ed75.png
(and it's easy to see them imo)
and the song cut ;_; you should have mapped the full song orz
00:59:093 - 00:59:528 - this could have been such a cute little stream </3
01:09:963 (1,2) - it was quite annoying to me that (2) was that close to the previous sliderend
same here 01:10:832 (3,4) - and etc...there is really too much of this but it's only my personal opinion anyway
01:24:745 (3,4) - this is so unappealing :C it's unpleasant to look at orz
in general I think that the difficulty has a bit too many unnecessary jumps (big spacing too) but it's not bad to play (but the combo color was really disturbing lol I hope you change it before it's ranked)
it's just my opinion not really a mod so don't even think about giving kudosu (that is if you at least thinking about changing anything after bubble but still combo colors...please :C)

[Colours]
Combo1 : 158,138,86
Combo2 : 219,209,162
Combo3 : 235,235,235