done. EZ and HD diff fixed , mod all apllied..

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

[Avalon's NM]

SPOILER

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  it looks good
  01:08:106 (68106|1) - should be clap
  01:10:068 (70068|2) -
  01:10:414 (70414|3,70876|2,71337|3,71799|2) - all of them should be clap
  01:10:183 (70183|1,70645|0,71106|1,71568|0) - all of them should be clap
  01:42:953 (102953|1) - should be clap
  01:52:414 (112414|2) - C
  01:54:376 (114376|1,114491|2) - C
  01:55:414 (115414|2,115645|0,116106|1) - change them to clap OK all applied :3
  very good diff, i'm speechless omg, thank you >///<

[Avalon's MX]

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• 
  I love that beginning
  00:21:722 (21722|0) - move this to 2 for balance, but also for flow hmm, actually that notes for a vocal expression :3
  00:50:799 (50799|0) - same here too, move this to 2 same here too Okay
  01:10:068 (70068|1) - better change it to clap Okay
  01:10:183 - http://puu.sh/mQAdG/15cb2a32a0.jpg how about follow this patterns? hmm ... the bass keep repeat so it would be nice for rhythm yes, it's nice . . applied
  01:31:876 (91876|2) - add C Okay
  02:27:260 (147260|2) - same here too Okay
  very good Insane diff, it spoke out very well, good job =w=)b

[Overall]
It's a good map btw, but easy diff need some works imo, it would be good if you guys do a little self-mod after done fixing this mod
Call me after you done, good luck

[Update NM & MX]
http://puu.sh/mRhSF/4bbeaa70f8.rar

EZ diff fixed and updated

Thanks KK <3

Go Goh ( `_J`)9

wait tacos frum meh, de mappur say this gud for tacos (`L_`)~



otherwissss cuz Indo sonk :\_________/

Surono wrote:

Go Goh ( `_J`)9

wait tacos frum meh, de mappur say this gud for tacos (`L_`)~



otherwissss cuz Indo sonk :\_________/

How about nachos?

yo ngene ki

-BANGKE- wrote:

yo ngene ki

yo ngono kuwi

dasar uwong jowowwwwww

#javaNESEEE

so loud here

vangke sanget niki nggih :v

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

vangke sanget niki nggih :v

enten menopo nggih? :v

erlinadewi- wrote:

enten menopo nggih? :v

Aku rapopo TwT

main indo pake lagu osu
#BIARGREGET

gonna do nazi mod below, its erlina's risk to ask a mod from me :^)
nazi = generalized & not so detailed mod with comments

[MX]
00:00:260 (260|0) - i honestly surprised how you put double notes for such beginning, i don't see anything wrong though, but i'd rather see single note imo..
also how the pattern repeats for whole beginning while the song dont, its really bugging me
00:03:953 (3953|1,4414|1,4876|1) - after per every 8 bar, i didn't see why you have to put same pattern, so, http://puu.sh/n3Y7a.png

00:14:799 (14799|3) - and again the pattern repeats like previous stanza while the song pace is clearly change

00:53:568 (53568|1) - 00:55:414 (55414|2) - those downbeats are catchy with single note

01:14:683 (74683|3,74683|2,74799|1,74799|0,74914|2,74914|3,75030|1,75030|0,75145|2,75145|3,75260|1,75260|0) - this is where i start losing my interest, overnote
wanna some advice? :
use 1 note for 1 instrument : 01:14:683 (74683|3,74799|0,74914|3,75030|0,75145|3,75260|0) - synth 01:14:799 (74799|1,75260|1) - drum

remove any note that doesn't represent any instrument in bga : 01:14:683 (74683|2,74914|2,75030|1,75145|2) -

01:20:914 - could add note

the problem repeats itself thorough the map : forcing poly-rhythm into long doublet sequence (like 12 34 12 34 12 pattern)
maybe my ear doesn't really catch what you're trying to layer because im not wearing earphone, but this actually helps me to determine which instrument that are audible enough to be layered with single and / or double notes, and which is not to layer with any note..

but yeee, if mapping is about taste, you can reject my suggestion below, OR you can review your GD on shana's map : Koike Joanna - BEAUTIFUL WORLD, impressive single & double note usage tbh, too bad i can't find any here..

[HD]
i almost have no problem with this diff, all notes fits perfectly with some additional suggestion below

00:57:953 (57953|0,58645|3) - i don't see why you don't layer the previous part (00:51:722 (51722|3,52414|3,53106|2) - 00:53:568 (53568|0,54260|1,54953|2) - 00:55:414 (55414|3,56106|3,56799|1) - ) with same 3/2 rhythm

01:15:722 (75722|3,75953|2) - turn this into 1/2 LN and 01:16:068 (76068|1) - remove this, don't forget to move 01:16:183 (76183|2) - somewhere
also i like these 01:52:645 (112645|3,113106|3,113568|3,114030|3) - 01:50:799 (110799|0,111260|0,111722|0,112183|0) - "anchor", where sometimes its easier for player to feel that you are layering constant bulid-up drum in bga


NM & EZ are clean, for EZ itself you can create more rigid 1 4 1 4 2 3 2 3 pattern more, beginner loves that

and since erlina ask for rebubble, the answer is not yet..

^pocotan saya gimana nasibnya kakak :'(

#kenaphpkah?

I will reply ajee's mods tommorow. ><

ajeemaniz wrote:

gonna do nazi mod below, its erlina's risk to ask a mod from me :^)
nazi = generalized & not so detailed mod with comments

[MX]
00:00:260 (260|0) - i honestly surprised how you put double notes for such beginning, i don't see anything wrong though, but i'd rather see single note imo..
also how the pattern repeats for whole beginning while the song dont, its really bugging me
so, if it just single note . . . what is the difference between NM ?
lagian sebenarnya gak berat2 amat ini 2 note kok ;w; . . . setiap ada synth or something else (idk apa itu nama instruemennya) ya w kasi 2 aja sekalian buat flowsnya

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I love that beginning

ya mungkin ini sebenarnya beda persepsi aja . . . semoga bisa dimengerti

00:03:953 (3953|1,4414|1,4876|1) - after per every 8 bar, i didn't see why you have to put same pattern, so, http://puu.sh/n3Y7a.png okay, re-arranged

00:14:799 (14799|3) - and again the pattern repeats like previous stanza while the song pace is clearly change re-arranged

00:53:568 (53568|1) - 00:55:414 (55414|2) - those downbeats are catchy with single note [color=#0000FF]changed to double notes, according to this part 00:46:183 -

01:14:683 (74683|3,74683|2,74799|1,74799|0,74914|2,74914|3,75030|1,75030|0,75145|2,75145|3,75260|1,75260|0) - this is where i start losing my interest, overnote
wanna some advice? :
use 1 note for 1 instrument : 01:14:683 (74683|3,74799|0,74914|3,75030|0,75145|3,75260|0) - synth 01:14:799 (74799|1,75260|1) - drum

remove any note that doesn't represent any instrument in bga : 01:14:683 (74683|2,74914|2,75030|1,75145|2) - ^ ^ ini nih yang susah saya ngejelasinnya . . . kalo saya delete itu, trus apa bedanya sama diff HD
well, menurut saya synth (atau apalah itu namanya) seperti ini 01:14:799 (74799|0,74799|1,74914|3,74914|2,75030|1,75030|0,75145|3,75145|2,75260|0,75260|1) - net not net not net, atau 01:18:030 - net not 01:18:376 - not net not net dan sebagainya . . . cukup kuat kok suaranya buat dikasih 2 note, bahkan suaranya itu nggak kalah sama kick soundnya . . . . well, diff ini kuga mulai dari bagian kiai pertamanya mostly saya kasih 2 note buat instrument itu
but okay . . . buat membuat ini diff clear, saya delete bagian ini 01:14:683 - 01:23:568 - 01:25:414 - daaaan seterusnya untuk membuat fokus ke instrumen itu

01:20:914 - could add note not really clear to map, lagian ada LN disampingnya, malah membikin bad part itu nanti

the problem repeats itself thorough the map : forcing poly-rhythm into long doublet sequence (like 12 34 12 34 12 pattern)
maybe my ear doesn't really catch what you're trying to layer because im not wearing earphone, but this actually helps me to determine which instrument that are audible enough to be layered with single and / or double notes, and which is not to layer with any note.. hmmm, that's really clear with earphone dude . . . i can sure

but yeee, if mapping is about taste, you can reject my suggestion below, OR you can review your GD on shana's map : Koike Joanna - BEAUTIFUL WORLD, impressive single & double note usage tbh, too bad i can't find any here.. Beautiful World nggak bisa saya jadikan review, soalnya itu lagunya high BPM . . . dan untuk penggunaan 2 note dan sebagainya saya nggak bisa lagi pakai konsep yg sama di lagu itu, karena ini lagunya slow BPM . . . karena ngehit double note di low BPM gak susah-susah amat dibanding high BPM, dan menurut saya ini lagu lebih cocok di map 2 note pada instrument lain selain kick . . . itulah perbedaan judgement saya dilagu ini

i hope it can explain everything . . . i can't do anything more for this diff
yeah, makasih banyak ajee . . . mostly i rearranged some part in this diff and reduce some usage of 2 notes

here is my update ==> http://puu.sh/n53HW/46587474e5.rar NM sama MX nya

ajeemaniz wrote:

gonna do nazi mod below, its erlina's risk to ask a mod from me :^)
nazi = generalized & not so detailed mod with comments

[HD]
i almost have no problem with this diff, all notes fits perfectly with some additional suggestion below

00:57:953 (57953|0,58645|3) - i don't see why you don't layer the previous part (00:51:722 (51722|3,52414|3,53106|2) - 00:53:568 (53568|0,54260|1,54953|2) - 00:55:414 (55414|3,56106|3,56799|1) - ) with same 3/2 rhythm fixed

01:15:722 (75722|3,75953|2) - turn this into 1/2 LN and 01:16:068 (76068|1) - remove this, don't forget to move 01:16:183 (76183|2) - somewhere no, biar sama seperti yang lainnya

also i like these 01:52:645 (112645|3,113106|3,113568|3,114030|3) - 01:50:799 (110799|0,111260|0,111722|0,112183|0) - "anchor", where sometimes its easier for player to feel that you are layering constant bulid-up drum in bga ><


NM & EZ are clean, for EZ itself you can create more rigid 1 4 1 4 2 3 2 3 pattern more, beginner loves that okay

and since erlina ask for rebubble, the answer is not yet..

thx for mod

overnote is not an excuse to gain harder pattern, in fact the 12 34 12 34 pattern is the least-hardest pattern in 4K (as most people say) because its very easy to read..
randomized double and single stream sequence could be more harder tho, depends on the BPM, and i bet people will play this map with DT sooo yah..

lemme recheck again sooner or later, internet being asdf right now and i had to finish my project couple days ahead.. orz

ajeemaniz wrote:

randomized double and single stream sequence could be more harder tho, depends on the BPM, and i bet people will play this map with DT sooo yah..

why you still care of people play this with DT ? that mod is destroy the pureness of song itself . . . . and pls, it's only 5-10 % percent possibility from 100% people play this with DT , and only ET player that look for challenge play this with DT . . . but i don't care at all, this song is not for challenge
and please, for me it's not overnote . . . use your earphone please, this is really big sound here

udah jee, pake indo aja . . . ini map nya lagu indo, mappernya juga indo . . . tbh gw males juga pke english
apakah kami orang asing bagimu, atau kamu yg orang asing ?
wkwkwk

paino paino.. mencangkul di sawah, bertani. mukul bedug pake tjari otje. atau nyolong rujak. atau nyeret2 bunder2. blwah
main indo pake lagu osu, biar gw cupu., ______.

si guk guk ge be el ka, makanya maen bedug di mall, bayar parkir 2000.

Surono wrote:

paino paino.. mencangkul di sawah, bertani. mukul bedug pake tjari otje. atau nyolong rujak. atau nyeret2 bunder2. blwah
main indo pake lagu osu, biar gw cupu., ______.

si guk guk ge be el ka, makanya maen bedug di mall, bayar parkir 2000.

Kurang sajen si surono '-'

Aiinng MACAN!!!!!!!!1111111111!!!!!!1111

'all BN speaks in english, otherwise noted', gw sih ngikut apa yg ditulis di wiki ajah, jadi threadnya lebih transparan, grammar nazi sedikit boleh kok.. '-'

last stuff deh, terpaksa pinjem earphone adek deh, untung dia dah tidur xP

[Insane]
02:09:491 (129491|1,129606|2,129837|2,129953|1) - 02:11:337 (131337|2,131453|1,131683|1,131799|2) - ctrl + h

[Hard]
00:11:337 (11337|2,11799|2,12260|2,12491|1) - ctrl + h
00:12:953 (12953|2,13183|1,13645|1,14106|1,14337|2) - ^

ajeemaniz wrote:

'all BN speaks in english, otherwise noted', gw sih ngikut apa yg ditulis di wiki ajah, jadi threadnya lebih transparan, grammar nazi sedikit boleh kok.. '-'

last stuff deh, terpaksa pinjem earphone adek deh, untung dia dah tidur xP

[Hard]
00:11:337 (11337|2,11799|2,12260|2,12491|1) - ctrl + h done
00:12:953 (12953|2,13183|1,13645|1,14106|1,14337|2) - ^ done

Fixed ajee ><)/ plz rebub : D

oh, okay . . . i'm sorry for that ._.
all that ajee mentioned is fixed, and i do some re-arrange to reduce repetitive pattern
update http://puu.sh/neybd/9bdf52ed31.rar
thanks for your time > <

everything is fixed >w<

ok, there's no more problem since last re-check.. good luck!

ajeemaniz wrote:

ok, there's no more problem since last re-check.. good luck!

yeahh... thx for re-check and rebub this map ajee <3

CONGRATSSSSS

Congrats aaaa

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

REDSHiFT feat. Hatsune Miku - 4U (Short Ver.) [OsuMania Modding]

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(heart4U)

Congratulations

BIG THANKS 4U KK.. AAAAAAA

Congratulation~
Erlin-san & Aval-san

GRAAAAAAAAATZ MBA ELIIIIINNNN!!!!! >A<

yay :'D

Nicee, finally my partner map's has qualify ><

Gratzzz elin <3

GG

Gratz btw

ajeemaniz wrote:

last stuff deh, terpaksa pinjem earphone adek deh, untung dia dah tidur xP

baper(bacoedPerasaan) cecete, makanya ngemap taiko. tanpa hedset pun tau itu "dung" atau "tek", dan "tss" "dsst"

Kimcil Hokya 4U :U
ucapan slamet wis ing kasil

seems i am late . . . congratulations !

Thanks guys ><

what the hell is this


ntar panggil QAT (sama siapa aja bisa) buat fix genre itu ke "Novelty (Other)"
masa pke japanese sih

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

what the hell is this


ntar panggil QAT (sama siapa aja bisa) buat fix genre itu ke "Novelty (Other)"
masa pke japanese sih

Baru ngehhh okayy

redshift konser nak jogja pamerin iki ae wes :V VVV: V:V:V:V:VV:V

CONGRATS =w=

more REDSHiFT in ranked section \o/

many but thank you very much for the song, really gustas.te I give my vote, I hope to see more vocaloid songs on here. :3

congratulations..
*super telat :v

Hadehh -_- lagu osu yg enak apaan yak