1. 00:17:805 (1,2) - 00:18:555 (2) 에서 새로운 리듬이 시작되는거 같으니 뉴콤 바꾸시는게 좋으실거 같아요
2. 00:39:555 (1) - 이거 좀더 정확히 대칭으로 만들면 좋을것 같아요
3. 00:44:055 (3,1) - 노멀 난이도에서는 디스텐스 같게 유지해주세요
4. 01:47:430 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 이런식으로 뉴콤보 막쓰면 태그 플레이와 맞는 서클 찾기 힘들어집니다. 뉴콤 수 약간 줄여주시는거 추천해용

1. 01:04:680 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보 없어도 될것같아요
2. 01:29:242 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 화이트틱에 맞춰주세요. 박자 안맞는거 같습니다
3. 01:40:961 (6,1) - 연타 부분에서 간격 떨어뜨리는거 비추천합니다. 간격 좁게 해주시는거 추천
4. 01:51:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^

1. 00:27:367 (13) - 별로 음악이랑 안어울리는거 같아요. 지우시는거 추천합니다
2. 00:40:961 (5) - 음...이걸 앞에것처럼 숏슬라로 만들어보시고 뒤에 스피너를 00:41:148에서 시작해보시는거 어떠세요?
3. 00:54:555 - 음악이 여기서 시작되니 여기 노트 하나 있어야 할 것 같습니다
4. 00:57:555 - ^
5. 01:13:867 (3) - 노트가 적은부분이라 여기서 체력이 떨어져 죽기 쉬우니 뉴콤 넣으시는것도 좋을것 같아요
6. 02:09:836 (4) - 이거 02:09:742여기에다 놔보시는거 어떠세요?

Ranger wrote:

안녕하세요 한국인 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[Normal]

1. 00:17:805 (1,2) - 00:18:555 (2) 에서 새로운 리듬이 시작되는거 같으니 뉴콤 바꾸시는게 좋으실거 같아요 - 수정
2. 00:39:555 (1) - 이거 좀더 정확히 대칭으로 만들면 좋을것 같아요 - 수정
3. 00:44:055 (3,1) - 노멀 난이도에서는 디스텐스 같게 유지해주세요 - 수정
4. 01:47:430 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 이런식으로 뉴콤보 막쓰면 태그 플레이와 맞는 서클 찾기 힘들어집니다. 뉴콤 수 약간 줄여주시는거 추천해용 - 수정

[Hard]

이 난이도만 와이드스크린 서포트 해제되어있네요. - 수정
스타레이팅이 노멀 난이도에 비해 상당히 어려운 편입니다. 좀 줄이셔야 돼요. - 으아.. 지금것도 꽤 줄인건데.. 노력해보겠습니다.

1. 01:04:680 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보 없어도 될것같아요 - 수정
2. 01:29:242 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 화이트틱에 맞춰주세요. 박자 안맞는거 같습니다 - 전 개인적으로 엇박이 맞는거같은데.. 근데 2번연속 지적당하는거 보면 고치는게 맞는 것 같네요. 여튼수정
3. 01:40:961 (6,1) - 연타 부분에서 간격 떨어뜨리는거 비추천합니다. 간격 좁게 해주시는거 추천 - 수정
4. 01:51:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - 수정

[Insane]

1. 00:27:367 (13) - 별로 음악이랑 안어울리는거 같아요. 지우시는거 추천합니다 - 수정
2. 00:40:961 (5) - 음...이걸 앞에것처럼 숏슬라로 만들어보시고 뒤에 스피너를 00:41:148에서 시작해보시는거 어떠세요? - 수정
3. 00:54:555 - 음악이 여기서 시작되니 여기 노트 하나 있어야 할 것 같습니다 - 수정
4. 00:57:555 - ^ - 수정
5. 01:13:867 (3) - 노트가 적은부분이라 여기서 체력이 떨어져 죽기 쉬우니 뉴콤 넣으시는것도 좋을것 같아요 - 수정+뉴콤보를 그런식으로도 쓰는군요. (처음알음)
6. 02:09:836 (4) - 이거 02:09:742여기에다 놔보시는거 어떠세요? -보컬목소리에 맞춘거라 전 지금이 나은거 같아요.

굳 럭~

여러모로 부족한맵에 시간들여 모딩해주셔서 감사합니다!

TheBronyGames wrote:

NM from My modding Queue

00:12:742 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This part is just awkward to do, try just making these Triplets - (In my opinion) This is more fun to do than just clicking bunch of triplets. So keeping on it.

00:22:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders are unecesary, just replace them with singular hitrcles - Changed

00:39:836 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ - Changed

00:54:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try closing some of the distance between these jumps, cause this seems too ridiculous, even for an insane diff - Changed (reduced around 1/3)

00:57:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^^ - Changed



Overall, this is a decent map, that's got potential, but there's just a bit of kinks that needs to bee roughed out

Thanks!!

Stealthwave wrote:

Box

[Normal difficulty]:

Spinner should start at 01:30:555 instead of 01:30:930 just like Pituophis said. - Changed
And I also agree with Pituophis about the extra hit-circle at 02:26:430. - Changed (Actually Pituophis was saying about adding 02:26:055 (4) - this, but it seems I need one more.)

I'm a little sceptical to the 0.5 distance snap though. Since it's a relatively fast song and I don't think it fits that well, but I might be wrong. Let's skip that for now and move on to the other difficulties. Keep it! - Maybe I'll have to make Easy diff then increase Normal DS?

[Hard difficulty]:

00:25:961 (1) - It will feel more smooth if you move this to the other side of the slider I think. - Changed

00:29:992 (1) - This note is too far away so it ruins the flow a bit(distance snap rule). Move it closer to 00:29:805. - Changed

00:41:336 (1) - I think the stream feels better if you remove this circle. - I feel the stream more confusing this way, maybe it's because I got used to my map. I'll consider it later.


[Insane]: (Since i'm not that good on osu! normal I don't have that much experience in harder beatmaps)

00:12:555 (1) - This note is too far away so it ruins the flow a bit(distance snap rule). - Changed

00:12:555 (1) -->00:16:305 (3) - In this section of the song I think the triplets created by a slider and a hit-circle should one combo together. Also, the note after the slider should be closer to the slider. I understand that you did this on purpose to make it interesting and more challenging but I believe it feels really uncomfortable to play. - Changed

00:30:555 (1) - 00:31:867 (8) - Kinda cool part of the song. Though, you might wanna try to only make a slider every second note instead to not make it frustrating and exaggerating. - Changed (Replaced them with normal hitcircles for now.)

00:33:180 (6) is too close to 00:32:805 (4) - To make a better pattern you should change this - Seems ok to me. Is there any reason that these shouldn't be close?

00:35:805 (6,7,8) - These notes looks weird when stacked together, you have a hard time reading them. You could try and seperate them a bit - I think it looks awkward if they're separated but i also agree that they're hard to read. So I changed them to repeating slider.

00:36:180 (9,10,11) - Same goes here, they are hard to read. - ^

00:41:148 (1) - Try to move this spinner to 00:41:430. - Changed

00:56:805 (1,2) - Remove the slider and make it a tripple pattern. - Changed but I might want to make it back to the slider; think it feels too similar to this stream. 00:59:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)

01:02:805 (1,2) - Same here, tripple pattern. - ^

01:11:687 (2,3,4) - It might be better to use a repeating slider here instead. - I think repeating slider is too boring while the piano has a very fast trill at this part.

01:13:867 (1) - Remove this circle to make it fit better with the music - think it's fine now.(it fits with piano)

01:18:555 (1,2,3) - It might be better to change the combo to something like this http://gyazo.com/4a5c8ff69d3fdb2442cf7cdd0507730e - Rotated a bit from this to make the combo look like a square.

Either move 01:19:867 (4) to the combo or 01:19:680 (3) further away to make it feel smoother. - Changed the whole combo here.

01:21:367 (4) - I think it looks better if you this one further up. - I think it looks better when 01:20:992 (2,3,4) are on a same (straight) line (while DS is increasing).

01:34:867 (6) - If you reverse this one it will flow better - Changed

01:49:867 (1,2,3,4) - Weird stacking. - Changed

02:19:680 (6,7,8) - Weird stacking. - Changed (to repeating slider)

02:20:055 (9,10,11) - Weird stacking. - ^

02:26:430 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Same as above, might change the pattern. - Changed



In general you should change the combo colours to something more interesting, something fitting with the background or something metallic fitting with the song.
Whoa, I guess I found too much to say about the insane one, but I did my best. I overdid a little.

Thanks for reading, good luck! !

Thanks for your modding!!
It helped a lot!! (especially Insane diff)