00:50:982 (4,5,6) - The triple is here is unnecessary, it's practically the same sound as 00:48:169 (2) - Maybe do something similar here instead of the triple
Fixed!00:54:029 (4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm maybe a somewhat curved stream? I think converting this pattern into a stream would best
I am not sure,my intention is to make the stream unique instead of putting usual streams here,i will test it out01:08:326 (1,2,3,4) - ^
^01:15:826 (1,4,2,3) - Recurve these sliders so they're the same size all the way
, 01:15:826 (1,4) - fine and 01:18:169 (2,3) - fine but I think it'd look better if they had the same curve
Fixed!01:35:982 (5,6) - Stack on 01:36:451 (1) - maybe? I like the idea, but I think it'd look a lot cleaner if it was stacked
Fixed!01:39:263 (5) - Shorten to red tick and reverse it, she sings on the red tick, imo it feels empty
Fixed!01:49:576 (1) - Idk about this clap, maybe remove it?
Fixed!01:59:771 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Recurve the stream, maybe something like
this?
Nice idea02:15:826 (1,2,3) - Instead of those, maybe a slider starting 02:15:826 (1) - to 02:16:294 (3) -
Nah i will keep it that way02:19:576 (1,2) - Stack that triple onto 02:19:810 (3) -
Fixed!02:30:357 (1) - Don't know if you intended to hitsound the entire slider as a clap
Not sure,maybe hitsounding the whole thing works as well02:59:888 (4) - Same problem as 01:39:263 (5) -
Fixed!04:12:310 (1,2,3) - I would stack this triple, to match the pattern
Nah,i dont wanna be repetitive04:17:935 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Might be me but the hitsounds are weird here
Lol, actually i want it that way xD04:48:169 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd make a stream
I kinda like this slider stream style at this part xD05:25:669 (3) - Not a big fan of this slider :c
Fixed!All I could find D:!
heheheheIt's a pretty solid map, good luck on getting it approved soon
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Very nice song ^^
Oh yeah don't forget to use ctrl + shift + a to double check everything