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idk how much you can improve to this map, thou at least this is a for app map orz
good luck
M@STER
- 00:57:544 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - change order into 4 3 6 5 8 7 can be better to me, because it can show bell's pitch shifting by notes spread, not the current stacked ones.
- 01:07:154 (4,5) - dat vocal is so special, consider to follow it.
- 01:25:201 (1) - the later part of the stream should give larger volume in hs.
- 01:31:998 (6) - do ctrl+g can show vocal's emotion by ds better here.
- 01:57:779 (5,1) - idk why overmap triplet everywhere but undermap this obvious rhythm orz.
- 02:28:716 (1) - maybe give a tapping obj at the white line to show the start of vocal track?
- 03:36:919 (1) - nc here is not necessary.
- 03:42:076 (1,2,3) - the brass beats are so special here, why don't follow it by overmapping triplet stream? ofc to the later part for the brass solo section, there can be more interesting pattern appeared to give the track's nice rhythm all a try imo.
- 03:51:451 (1,2,3) - here can be 5 notes' stream to follow the violin.
- 04:00:123 (4,5) - it's a pity to ignore the brass again... maybe change slider 4 into two 1/4 sliders? similar suggestion to 04:58:951 (1,2,3,4) - as well.
- 04:20:982 (7,8) - swap them is better to me. same to 05:00:357 (6,7) - as well.
- 04:47:466 (5,1) - not necessary to give that big jump orz.
- 04:49:341 (7) - do ctrl+g to this slider for similar style before?
- 05:26:841 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should rearrange this part to give consistent ds setting.
- 05:34:576 (5) - add nc for bpm shifting pls.
- really need to give more attention to the rhythm setting, just listen to the song carefully in detail, or lower playback rate.
good luck