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nivnayuta - Hiiro Gekka Kyousai no Zetsu-1st Anniversary Rem

posted 2015-03-13T12:18:12+00:00

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Witch

Joined October 2013

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Witch 2015-03-13T12:18:12+00:00

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Last edited by Witch 2015-03-15T12:37:40+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

-shikaco-

Joined April 2014

-shikaco- 2015-03-15T06:36:09+00:00

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够整洁，建议多运用滑条。
00:38:412 (2) - 物件没有对齐时间轴
00:47:946 (1) - 从这里开始的到break的跳显得赘余了，配合音乐可以考虑用滑条补上音。
00:52:938 - Kiai开始时间没有对其时间轴
下面美丽？那就先骗个kd

Witch

Joined October 2013

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Witch 2015-03-15T12:31:35+00:00

shenjunhong27 wrote:
General
够整洁，建议多运用滑条。
00:38:412 (2) - 物件没有对齐时间轴 √
00:47:946 (1) - 从这里开始的到break的跳显得赘余了，配合音乐可以考虑用滑条补上音。√
00:52:938 - Kiai开始时间没有对其时间轴 √
下面美丽？那就先骗个kd

好丽

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