1. Hard (4.94 stars, 314 notes)
2. Lunatic (4.99 stars, 466 notes)
3. Normal (3.15 stars, 156 notes)

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
emm... cut the unused part of the mp3? Will do it soon EDIT: think ill leave it as it is

[Normal]
Overall-1?
00:38:225 (2) - whistle?
00:41:016 (2) - ^
00:50:086 (2,4) - ^
00:53:923 (1) - whistle at the start
00:56:714 (1) - ^
01:45:202 (2) - whistle?
01:46:946 (1) - whistle at the end?
01:47:644 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:004 (1,3) - remove sliderwhistle.
00:24:795 (1,2,3) - ^
00:28:807 (1,3) - remove sliderwhistle
00:37:702 (2,3) - 2+ 3's end whistle.
00:38:574 (1,3) - 1's end + 3's end whistle.
00:40:493 (2) - whistle.
00:48:865 (2,3,5,7) - 2+3's end+5's end+7 whistle.
01:10:667 (1) - remove sliderwhistle.

[Insane]
OA 9 wins yeah! yeah~
00:49:039 (4,5) - whistle at the end?
00:50:958 (2) - whistle.
00:51:132 (3) - remove sliderwhistle= =
01:44:156 (1,2,4,6,8) - 1's end+2's end+4+6+8 whistle.
01:46:772 (2,4,5) - 2+4's start+5's end whistle.
01:54:446 (7) - whistle

1. 60% mapped? uhh, I think it's the score that forced you to give up the left part :3

1. 00:07:876 (1) - finish? I noticed that you put a finish in [I] but not in [N] and [H] (also this section in [N] and [H] lack hitsounds imo)
2. 00:31:597 (T) - if you change the volume, let the time section a little ealier than the note. For example, this section should be set at 00:31:510.
3. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?

1. 00:31:597 (T) - the same issue as Normal
2. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?

1. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?
2. 00:20:435 (T) - time secion issue as Normal
3. very wild jumps! X3

Colin Hou wrote:

[Normal]:

1. 00:07:876 (1) - finish? I noticed that you put a finish in [I] but not in [N] and [H] (also this section in [N] and [H] lack hitsounds imo)
2. 00:31:597 (T) - if you change the volume, let the time section a little ealier than the note. For example, this section should be set at 00:31:510. Don't think it really matters that much? but changed anyway if im wrong
3. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?

[Hard]:

1. 00:31:597 (T) - the same issue as Normal
2. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?

[Insane]:

1. 01:41:365 (1) - finish?

Star~

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
-You have to Resnap All Notes on all diffs. That's necessary because if I resnap the notes on the all diffs and then I try to quit the system ask me to save. Done

•Insane•
00:09:272 (3) - Make this symmetrical to the previous slider? Maybe copying the (2) slider and then flip horizontally. X
00:22:528 (4) - Wrong spacing. Was purposely done like that (increasing and decreasing spacing)
00:17:295 (4) - The end of this slider doesn't match with the (1) Wasn't meant to lol, and the player wont really notice because of the high OD
00:25:318 (4) - Wrong spacing. same as above
01:41:888 (4) - 2 grids left? (lv3) same as above

•Hard•
01:54:621 (6,7) - ^ Fixed

•Normal•
Maybe the slider velocity of this diff is too high for a Normal. What do you think about reducing it? I think its fine

That's all.
Nice map~
Star~

Pokie wrote:

General
- osb appeared blah thought i deleted it X_X

Normal
00:20:435 (T) - move this section to 00:20:347
00:28:807 (1,2) - whistle at end of sliders o.o?
02:07:877 (3) - clap at end of slider o.o?

Hard
00:20:435 (T) - move this section to 00:20:347
00:31:597 (T) - move to 00:31:510
02:04:388 (5,6,7) - 1 grid down

Insane
(Press Skip button) > " 3, 2, 1, GO! " > missmissmissmissmiss > failed XD
00:50:435 (7) - whistle?
02:13:807 (2) - miss a clap here?

Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) You need an easier diff to make the beginner player easy to play I won't make one for now (because i really don't think so), but if BATs complain i guess i'll have to D:
2) Cut the mp3 please No Talked with Eph in the past and he said i should leave it (to keep quality)

[Normal]
00:42:411 (4) - Is not stacked with 3 at the end Fixed

[Insane]
00:31:249 (9) - New combo? Removed combo for other stream instead

Gabi wrote:

................................offset -10ms

Gabi wrote:

................................offset -10ms............. sorry >.< (i'll try to ask lyby or someone to confirm it again -_-)

Lybydose wrote:

Gabi wrote:

................................offset -10ms............. sorry >.< (i'll try to ask lyby or someone to confirm it again -_-)

I'm coming up with +5 from that (so 7,872). Fixed

The artist would be better as "ALiCE'S EMOTiON" than Nomiya Ayumi. And uh...delete the .osb while you're updating that. Done..and i swear, that .osb file just keeps coming back XD

Normal:

There are a few things that are a bit hard for the easiest difficulty. Mostly these short spinners that have notes right after them:

00:17:634 (1) -
00:30:192 (1) -
00:52:518 (1) -
01:48:332 (1) -
I didn't change all the spinners, i think i did half of them or so because i think its fine.

These stacked notes would probably be confusing to newer players as well: 02:19:029 (1) and 02:20:425 (1) - just unstack them. Possibly, but that gives them a reason to play it again if they stuff up XD

Also not a big fan of all the 1/2 "kick sliders" everywhere, but they are fine I suppose. It wouldn't hurt to lower HP drain by 1 or 2 either. Done

Alternatively, you could just keep that stuff as it is and make an easier difficulty if you wanted.

00:19:029 (1) - this slider is synced to...nothing? Extend 1/4? What! where did the 0.5x go off to

Hard:

Fine.

Insane:

Too Easy

Why isn't it named Lunatic?!

I don't have any issues with using OD9, but I I'm probably biased because I love OD9 . It is higher than what most people are comfortable playing with though. Combo colors 1 and 3 make it sometimes difficult to see the approach circles at times though, especially at OD9. Make them a bit brighter? Changed blue to green

ignorethis wrote:

just note that overall 9 doesn't fit for this map <3

great map