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Florence + The Machine - My Boy Builds Coffins

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Powerdrone
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Powerdrone
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 13, 2010 at 9:24:22 AM

Artist: Florence + The Machine
Title: My Boy Builds Coffins
Tags: Lungs DiamondCrash
BPM: 122
Filesize: 6690kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. DC's Hard (4.45 stars, 184 notes)
  2. Easy (1.27 stars, 152 notes)
  3. Insane (4.87 stars, 372 notes)
  4. Normal (2.98 stars, 215 notes)
Download: Florence + The Machine - My Boy Builds Coffins
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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One of these days he'll make one for you.

Easy - Complete
Normal - Complete
Hard - Complete (Courtesy of DiamondCrash)
Insane - Complete

Found a lolful background of Florence! Thanks to Jarby for the better quality image, and to RandomJibberish for correcting the sizing.

For Jar's project.

If your mod tells DC or I to move things so they aren't touching the HP bar your mod will probably be ignored <3

June 24, 2010 - Completed and moved to Pending.
June 25, 2010 - Fixed according to IAmNotShinta's modding.
June 29, 2010 - Fixed according to DiamondCrash's modding.
June 30, 2010 - Added DiamondCrash's Hard difficulty.
July 5, 2010 - Fixed according to JarJarJacob's modding.
July 7, 2010 - Fixed according to Garven's modding. Insane yet to be completely updated with the new slider velocity.
July 14, 2010 - Finished up Insane with the new slider velocity.
July 21, 2010 - Fixed according to Garven's modding.
July 30, 2010 - Fixed according to Derekku's modding. Added Easy.
August 2, 2010 - Updated DC's Hard.
August 4, 2010 - Fixed according to Agent Spin Here Mashley's modding.
August 15, 2010 - Fixed some things according to Dusty's modding.
August 16, 2010 - Fixed a few things according to Vass_Bass' modding.
August 16, 2010 - Fixed according to Lesjuh's modding.
August 17, 2010 - Fixed according to yangzd88's modding.
August 17, 2010 - Fixed according to SadKangaroo's modding.
August 18, 2010 - Fixed a few things according to RandomJibberish's modding.
August 23, 2010 - Fixed according to TheVileOne's modding.
August 27, 2010 - Fixed a few things according to Bikko's modding.
August 31, 2010 - Fixed according to Krisom's modding.
September 2, 2010 - Fixed according to Lanttu's modding.
September 12, 2010 - Fixed according to Larto's modding.
September 13, 2010 - Bubbled by Larto! <3
September 16, 2010 - Ranked by Ephemeral! <3
Last edited by Powerdrone , edited 52 times in total.
NotShinta
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Joined September 2009
NotShinta
I don't care what everyone else does, map to the end on easier difficulties.
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish

IAmNotShinta wrote:

I don't care what everyone else does, map to the end on easier difficulties.
YES

Will mod and star when finished
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone

IAmNotShinta wrote:

I don't care what everyone else does, map to the end on easier difficulties.
O... okay. -_-

=P
NotShinta
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NotShinta
1/6 and 1/8

What noo consult RJ

Easy
00:28:845 (4,5,6) - I respect the use of symmetry, but spacing.
00:36:715 (4,5,6) - ^
01:53:948 (1) - Blarrghghhrhghs
01:55:916 (1) - ^ I should really post a slider nazi but sorry I can not be bothered
Too many spinners close to beats mate. Big spinners

Insane
Too streamy etc.

Get back to me when you fix the snap and I'll mod insane/star/make a rubbish guest diff
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
I think you'll find it's 1/8.
I'll get a hard for you, if that's alright.

Easy;

WHY IS THERE NO BREAK
01:48:046 (1) - Left 1 grid and up quite a bit
Powerdrone
464 posts
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Powerdrone
A hard would be divine~

I'll take a look at that and fix it up. Thanks! =)
La Cataline
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2010
La Cataline
this map is great.

[easy]
02:02:680(3) spacing. I see you wanted to make a figure here, so never mind. :D

star.
Powerdrone
464 posts
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Topic Starter
Powerdrone

La Cataline wrote:

this map is great.

[easy]
02:02:680(3) spacing. I see you wanted to make a figure here, so never mind. :D

star.
Yeah, the spacing there is a little off. It's not a ridiculous jump or anything.. it should be fine =P

Thanks!
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain
ahem unzip in the song folder full submit

Download: 16403 Florence + The Machine - My Boy Builds Coffins.zip
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
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Powerdrone
Your diff is great, but the beginning is pretty much the same pattern three times in a row copy pasted... perhaps you could change that up a little bit please? Even just flipping it horizontal or something. Thanks a ton!
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain
oi add my name to the tags and actually the bit from 00:43:111 to 00:50:490 shouldn't actually be there so get rid of it
Powerdrone
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Powerdrone
That fixes my issue with the copy pasta~

Thanks again Diamond!
NotShinta
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NotShinta
Oh yeah.

The wave sliders in DC's diff could be better but eh 00:59:591 (4,5,6) is sexier than the background

Which reminds me what's with the SB
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
122 BPM and 11,640 offset works better. Your background is a bit small, so here is a bigger and higher quality version of it. And here is a better quality mp3 to keep Ephemeral happy.

Easy:

This is more like Normal bordering on Hard. Might want to change the name of it and adjust the difficult settings a bit as HP Drain seems to be too low.
02:37:238 (7,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Change the combo numbering to 1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3. It works better.

Insane:

Not sure how others feel about it, but I really don't like this "random" 1/4 usage. This could use a break, preferably at the same place as Easy.
00:29:337 (8,9,10) - Works better snapped like this.
00:37:208 (6,7,8) - [url]Works better snapped like this.[/url]
00:39:422 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing change seems a bit pointless here, you know. Put a new combo on 6 if you're going to keep it.
01:39:068 (6) - 1/4 forward to match vocals?
01:57:884 (4,5,6) - The barrage of claps is just nasty.
02:04:525 (1) - Seems odd to use a spinner here.

DC's Hard:

I believe a lot of this can be more correctly snapped to 1/6. Check what I suggested for Easy and follow from there. Having two breaks seems excessive here as well, but whatever. It should end at the same place as the other two difficulties as well.
Garven
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Garven
As per your request:

Timing: Offset 11,596
I'd get someone to double check this, but this played FAR better than what you have now. Don't forget to resnap everything.

[Normal]
00:13:607 (5) - New combo?
The new combos are kind of weird. Try to keep the majority of them at four beats each and it should be fine.
01:04:754 (1,2,3,4) - :/ Maybe do a one-repeat slider instead of the stack?
01:33:279 (7,1) - Looks kinda weird.
01:39:426 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe reposition these to get rid of that ugly overlap?
01:41:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - This played awkwardly since you went with the vocals right before it, then you go with a syncopated rhythm against the vocals right afterward...

[DC's Hard]
The map's great once the offset is fixed~
Kinda funny that it had a different offset than the other two anyway, though..

[Insane]
This is really cramped. The low OD, distance snap, and slider velocity make everything make me kinda go "ugh." Ugh. Not very fun to play for me. I'd recommend you up those three things mentioned and reposition/remap. If I modded as-is, I'd just constantly whine about all the overlapping and half-covered up stuff. :P

Call me back for a re-mod on the Insane diff if you choose to adjust things.
Powerdrone
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Powerdrone
I'll get to it later, I'm kind of busy. -_-

Hopefully I'll have the map fixed up in the next two days or so.
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain
Kay.

Download: Florence + The Machine - My Boy Builds Coffins (Powerdrone311) [DC's Hard].osu
Garven
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Garven
Aaand I'm back.

No kds please since it's an extension of the previous mod.

[Insane]
00:15:534 (1,2,3,4) - These played kind of awkwardly after you set up the rhythm with the single beats. I kept wanted to click early.
00:19:468 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:53:280 (10) - Maybe position this more to the left so there's left being covered up?
01:36:190 (8) - New combo?
01:39:878 (1,2,3) - Maybe reposition these so they aren't partially covering each other? You can break distance snap a little bit - it won't hurt the playability at all.
01:57:829 (4,5,6,7) - This... doesn't fit the music at all.
02:39:386 (5) - New combo. You lose a ton of health otherwise.

And there you go.
braian5234
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braian5234
8-)
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Derekku
[General]
*Unnecessary .osb in folder (since I don't see a FLO-TOUCHED-UP.jpg) ??
*Offset feels just a tiny tiny bit early. Perhaps try 11,605?

[Normal]
01:14:550 (1) - expected a finish or something on this instead of a clap o-o;
01:33:239 (7,1) - spacing?
01:53:895 (1,2) - I don't like how badly hidden (2) is under (1)
02:02:255 (2,3) - spacing?
02:17:501 - kiai should start on the white tick, and having two inherited sections is pointless/redundant
02:20:452 (1) - perhaps center this?
02:21:436 - same kiai/inherited section comment. Have the inherited section that ends kiai 1/4th before, and then the new kiai section on the white tick. You're sorta doing it backwards at the moment. :v
02:25:370 (1) - ^
02:28:813 (1) - why doesn't this (along with kiai) start on the next white tick like the previous spinners?
*Anyway, I'm not sure if this many kiai fountains will be allowed.
*Overall, this difficulty is fine as a [Normal], but it's too hard to be the easiest in the set. If the 1/2 streams were spaced closely together (and possible some of them changed into sliders), it might be okay, but right now you have long streams of 1/2 notes at 122bpm. That is essentially clicking at 244bpm which is a bit too tough. So.. you can either tone down this diff a bit or add an Easy; Your pick.

[DC's Hard]
*I'm really not sure about the 1/6th snap in here. Some of it sounds really off and also a lot trickier than Insane. =/
01:16:681 - why do you have two inherited sections after the spinner? It's redundant.
02:17:501 (1) - Expected a regular finish on here (and why does kiai end halfway through?)
*Yeah, many many notes sounded off due to the 1/6th snap while listening. I'm not sure what you want to do about that. :/

[Insane]
*kiai should be the same throughout the mapper's difficulties. Since I don't think that the multiple fountains will be allowed in Normal, use this kiai instead.
00:52:911 (9,10,11) - a bit hard-to-read
01:57:829 (4,5) - This sounds really bad. Especially with the 1/8th snap. The following pic shows what I hear and what sounds much better:

02:10:001 (3,4) - wow this is really unexpected. Just because this is insane doesn't mean you should leave unpredictable offbeats as single notes. Please make this a slider instead. =x
02:18:608 - why end kiai during the spinner?
02:47:009 (5) - add an extra control/anchor point at the end (ctrl-click while the slider is selected) so that the repeat arrow faces the correct direction.
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain

Derekku wrote:

[DC's Hard]
*I'm really not sure about the 1/6th snap in here. Some of it sounds really off and also a lot trickier than Insane. =/ Personally, I thought it wasn't, but I was told to change it, so y'know.
01:16:681 - why do you have two inherited sections after the spinner? It's redundant. Fixed.
02:17:501 (1) - Expected a regular finish on here (and why does kiai end halfway through?) No idea.
I still have the 1/4 version. Use whichever.

Download: Florence + The Machine - My Boy Builds Coffins (Powerdrone311) [DC's Hard].osu
Powerdrone
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Topic Starter
Powerdrone
I think I like the 1/4th version. <3
Mashley
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Mashley
I hate your background, it's silly. Use something with coffins.
I reckon the first two kiai sections are unnecessary, the music doesn't have a kiai feel at those parts.

Easy
00:25:375 (3) - Huh? Why did you put 0.5x here?
01:00:785 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:227 - I don't like this empty space, slap a note down here

Normal
01:06:686 (1) - Remove this new combo
01:37:670 (1) - ^

DC's Hard
Fine

Insane
00:33:982 (4) - Eh? I don't think you should use a jiggly slider here, it doesn't fit the music.
00:47:998 (1) - Remove new combo.
Powerdrone
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Powerdrone

Mashley wrote:

I hate your background, it's silly. Use something with coffins. I'll take a look for a background with coffins. If I can't find something to my liking I'll keep this one. (It's Florence, it's relevant :) )
I reckon the first two kiai sections are unnecessary, the music doesn't have a kiai feel at those parts. Changed!

Easy
00:25:375 (3) - Huh? Why did you put 0.5x here? Fixed. >_>
01:00:785 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
01:04:227 - I don't like this empty space, slap a note down here Sure, why not~

Normal
01:06:686 (1) - Remove this new combo Done
01:37:670 (1) - ^ Done

DC's Hard
Fine Sexy

Insane
00:33:982 (4) - Eh? I don't think you should use a jiggly slider here, it doesn't fit the music. You're right, plus it's fun to save this for the end~
00:47:998 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
I edited the Kiai in DC's Hard. If you think it should be changed back let me know~
Kotone
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Joined August 2008
Kotone
Umm...I think hitsound not good.
But I can't help you on hitsound...sorry〞^〝

Easy
00:30:785(1,2)-2 grid up?
00:32:260(3)-1 grid down?
00:39:145(2)-1 grid left

Normal
00:15:539(1,1)-1 grid up

DC's
01:49:468(1,2,3,4,5)-check spacing?

Insane
fine
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. DC's Hard has a different offset from other diffs.
  2. hitsounds too loud, try to use 70% volume
[Easy]:
  1. 00:39:145 (2) - HP bar touch
  2. 00:56:850 (3) - ^
[Normal]:
  1. 00:15:539 (1) - HP bar touch
  2. 00:30:293 (1) - ^
[DC's Hard]:
  1. 00:35:083 (1,2,3,4) - stacked on the HP bar
  2. ...too many
[Insane]:
  1. 02:47:014 (5) - put the finish at the beginning circle.
Feels a bit sad to see so many notes under the HP bar, do you use a default skin to map this and test the diffs all?
And, why this background?

Not that bad though, so here is my star.
Powerdrone
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Powerdrone

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. DC's Hard has a different offset from other diffs. Thanks, didn't notice that.
  2. hitsounds too loud, try to use 70% volume I disagree, but I lowered the hitsounds volume slightly anyways.
[Easy]:
  1. 00:39:145 (2) - HP bar touch It's rankable, and barely noticeable. It's not like it's completely under the bar or something, it's like the tip of the edge. >_>
  2. 00:56:850 (3) - ^
[Normal]:
  1. 00:15:539 (1) - HP bar touch
  2. 00:30:293 (1) - ^
[DC's Hard]:
  1. 00:35:083 (1,2,3,4) - stacked on the HP bar
  2. ...too many
[Insane]:
  1. 02:47:014 (5) - put the finish at the beginning circle.
Feels a bit sad to see so many notes under the HP bar, do you use a default skin to map this and test the diffs all? I use the osu! Ends With You skin. I tried it with the default skin and it looks fine anyways. It's rankable, and it's not as though the circle is completely underneath the bar or something ridiculous.
And, why this background? The background is of the artist who sings this song.

Not that bad though, so here is my star.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
hm, your diffs have lots of circles partially going underneath sliders, it looks ugly

[Easy]
02:17:014 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - hm... I don't know

[Normal]
OD+2
00:50:949 (1,1) - these are pretty obviously lopsided...
02:27:834 (1,2,3) - felt awkward

[DC's Hard]
The sliderwhistles are kind of weird when all of the sliders have them.
00:35:089 (1,2,3,4) - I think it should be closer to (3)
...You didn't map the whole thing? I see why, it's kind of hard to map, but maybe you could get rainbow sliders to work here?

[Insane]
00:45:047 (11) - oh hey, this slider is pretty good :D

---

I didn't get to finish modding this, sorry. If I remember later I'll finish modding [Insane]

---

EDIT:

About hitsounds and claps and such, I don't really see a pattern to your clap usage (i.e. having claps on drum notes or every other beat...). Not like you have to have clap patterns or stuff, but it just feels haphazard to me...

[Insane]
00:32:506 (1) - Sounds a little weird
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
Very coloristiс BG..why you use that combo colors?
Mb change them like this:
Source?

Easy
00:45:047 (5,5) - make it simmetrical
01:40:867 (4,5) - mb 4 grids down and 1 right?
02:02:260 (2) - make it simmetrical

Normal
01:02:260 (1,2,3,4, 5) - 2 grids up
02:05:703 (1,1) - make it simmetrical

DC's Hard
Mb make quieter sounds?
01:42:466 (3,4) - move it down like (1) and (2) (but it's bad)

Insane
00:48:736 (10) - add whistle?

Good map, star
Powerdrone
464 posts
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Topic Starter
Powerdrone

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Very coloristiс BG..why you use that combo colors?
Mb change them like this: I don't know if I understand your logic here... or your choice of combo colors.
Source? I'm 98% sure I don't need a source here.

Easy
00:45:047 (5,5) - make it simmetrical Why this one and not the other? Anyway I think I fixed them both.
01:40:867 (4,5) - mb 4 grids down and 1 right? mb no
02:02:260 (2) - make it simmetrical I tried.

Normal
01:02:260 (1,2,3,4, 5) - 2 grids up
02:05:703 (1,1) - make it simmetrical I don't understand how it isn't really... symmetrical... >_>?

DC's Hard
Mb make quieter sounds?
01:42:466 (3,4) - move it down like (1) and (2) (but it's bad)

Insane
00:48:736 (10) - add whistle? Tried it, doesn't fit well imo.

Good map, star
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Remove .osb file and full submit!

Insane
Slider tick rate 2 just like in Hard.
00:52:916 (9) - One grid down ^_~
01:05:949 (1) - Remove combo
01:06:686 (3) - New combo (Minor vocal stuff~)
01:40:867 (3) - U sure about this anti-jump? Keep it if you want, just pointing out.
02:03:490 (1) - Remove combo
02:45:047 (1) - I'd place this one further from the previous beat.

Hmmyeah, that's it!
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
Song is good...BG is scary
[General]
In your combo color there are two red.

[NM]
00:17:506 (1) - Remove new combo
00:58:326 (4) - Finish hitsound

[DC]
Good~
Slider tick reduce to 1?

[IS]
01:39:883 (1,2,3) - Finish hitsound sounds terrible...
01:43:080 (5,9) - ^
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone

yangzd88 wrote:

Song is good...BG is scary
[General]
In your combo color there are two red. Silver, Blue, Red, Orange

[NM]
00:17:506 (1) - Remove new combo The combos for the intro are for every 4 beats. Those sliders are 4 beats long.
00:58:326 (4) - Finish hitsound Okay~

[DC]
Good~
Slider tick reduce to 1?

[IS]
01:39:883 (1,2,3) - Finish hitsound sounds terrible... Erm.. I think I fixed it.
01:43:080 (5,9) - ^ Fixed~
IceBeam
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IceBeam
[Easy]
00:19:473 (1) - Isn't it a bit close,huh?
01:06:195 (5,1,2,3) - How bout placing them diamond-shaped?
02:09:637 (1) - 1 grid left?

[Normal]
It's fine.And just my opinion - this diff. could work as Easy.Cause the "Easy" you have atm is like a boring Beginner.In addition,if you remove your Easy and rename Normal to it,you could add another Hard(Insane).

[DC's Hard]
Fine,but...
00:43:080 - Do you really need this break?
Anyway...
[Easy] - Total Play Length - 143 s
[Your one] - Total Play Length - 82 s

[Insane]
00:32:506 (1) - What does it following?
01:03:244 (4) - Can you switch off the Grid Snap and manually place it right between those sliders?
01:14:064 (8) - Finish maybe?


Song is simply awesome.
Rank it! go go go~
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Easy]
00:19:473 (1) - Isn't it a bit close,huh? It is... but I'm going to leave it for now. :<
01:06:195 (5,1,2,3) - How bout placing them diamond-shaped? Sure, why not~
02:09:637 (1) - 1 grid left? Thanks! Didn't notice that.

[Normal]
It's fine.And just my opinion - this diff. could work as Easy.Cause the "Easy" you have atm is like a boring Beginner.In addition,if you remove your Easy and rename Normal to it,you could add another Hard(Insane). My current normal used to be this map's easy, but Derekku told me it was too hard to be the easiest difficulty. I think the difficulty set is fine how it is right now, but thanks!

[DC's Hard]
Fine,but...
00:43:080 - Do you really need this break?
Anyway...
[Easy] - Total Play Length - 143 s
[Your one] - Total Play Length - 82 s

[Insane]
00:32:506 (1) - What does it following? "He has no"
01:03:244 (4) - Can you switch off the Grid Snap and manually place it right between those sliders? I think I fixed it~
01:14:064 (8) - Finish maybe? I don't know what to do about this hitsounding. I need a hitsounding mod xD


Song is simply awesome.
Rank it! go go go~
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
I didn't get Easy, full submit.

General
Crop the BG to the right ratio
Whoops I did it by accident
SPOILER

Normal
Feels like an Easy at the start
Also parts don't feel like they're following anything
Nothing techincally wrong though

DC's Hard
I love you

Insane
Really fun diff. Drain feels a little high but it's probably just because I fail
00:32:497 (1) - Random slider
00:52:661 (7,8,9) - Haaard to read. It made me fail first time
01:33:235 - Add a beat here?
01:33:727 - 02:00:776 - Meant to be half speed
02:01:759 - 02:17:497 - ^
02:33:235 - 02:47:497 - ^

Great map
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone

RandomJibberish wrote:

I didn't get Easy, full submit. Oops~
General
Crop the BG to the right ratio What is the right ratio?
Whoops I did it by accident What does this mean? And why is there an empty spoilerbox here?
SPOILER

Normal
Feels like an Easy at the start
Also parts don't feel like they're following anything
Nothing techincally wrong though

DC's Hard
I love you

Insane
Really fun diff. Drain feels a little high but it's probably just because I fail
00:32:497 (1) - Random slider But but but but but I don't understand ;_;
00:52:661 (7,8,9) - Haaard to read. It made me fail first time I think I've fixed it.
01:33:235 - Add a beat here? Here's where I get confused. All the times you've given me don't match up with any of the times in the actual map. This time is the end of a slider. >_>
01:33:727 - 02:00:776 - Meant to be half speed Why is the second half of my map supposed to be in half speed? I honestly don't understand this suggestion, and will not update my map with half speed.
02:01:759 - 02:17:497 - ^
02:33:235 - 02:47:497 - ^

Great map
TheVileOne
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TheVileOne
Easy

01:41:113 (5) - Remove finish. It sounds better without.

Normal

00:49:719 (2,3) - Replace claps with whistles.

00:57:588 (2,3) - ^

01:02:752 (3,4,5) - Remove claps and make it whistle, whistle, whistle/finish

01:03:736 (1,2,3) - ^

01:04:719 (1) - ^ Start- whistle, reverse-whistle- end- whistle/finish (Finishes your 3,3,3 hitsound pattern)

01:10:621 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Follow the same hitsound rhythm for these notes.

02:05:457 (6) - Too close to 5. Move down 1 unit.

02:07:670 (1,2,3) - Doesn't sound right to me. Try making note 2 a whistle to fill the hitsound void.

02:20:457 (1) - Add whistle

02:21:441 (1) - Why isn't this a clap like the other spinners? Add clap.

02:24:391 (1) - Add whistle.

DC's Hard

Hitsounds are too loud for the song IMO. They sound much nicer on the 3rd from last volume tick.

00:30:048 (4,1) - Jump is a tad too large for my tastes. I suggest you move 00:31:278 (1,2,3) - down 3 units and left 2 units to make it flow a little better.

00:33:982 (3,1) - This jump also exceeds the pace a bit. I suggest moving this 00:35:089 (1,2,3,4) - to around where I suggested you shift note 1 in the above fix. Or maybe somewhere to the left so that note 5 will distance snap properly.

01:32:261 (1,2,3) - Notes are touching the lifebar. Move down 1-2 units. Move 01:32:999 (4,5) - down accordingly 1 or 2 units

02:05:704 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Design so that 02:06:442 (6) - isn't touching the lifebar.

Insane

00:21:441 (1) - Add a clap to the first reverse, a whistle to the second, and a clap to the end.

00:23:408 (1) - Add a clap to the beginning and a whistle at the first reverse, clap on the second reverse

00:28:818 (7,8,9) - It generally doesn't flow when you have to move like this. Move (8,9) right some units (and the notes after when needed) slightly so there's some forward momentum when making the transition.

00:31:277 (3,4,5) - Forward 2-3 units for the same reason above. Remember to keep 00:32:014 (6) - in mind so that it conforms with the same spacing.

00:36:441 (5) - Add a clap to the beginning of this to go along with the clap pattern you made with the previous 2 sliders.

00:41:850 (11) - Remove the clap at the end of this.

00:52:670 (7) - Add a new combo to this.

00:52:916 (9,10) - You don't need to change just yet. Just tell me how well this increased spacing flows?

00:59:555 (4) - Add a clap to the end

01:00:293 (1) - ^

01:02:260 (1) - Add clap (This will continue the pattern)

01:03:244 (4) - ^

01:03:490 (5) - Remove clap in beginning and add it to the end.

01:04:227 (7) - Add clap

01:05:211 (12) - ^

01:05:457 (13) - Remove finish and add clap

01:06:195 (15) - Add clap

01:30:785 (2) - Add whistle
01:31:768 (5) - ^

01:32:260 (7) - Add clap to start, whistle to reverse, and clap to end

01:47:998 (1) - Add clap to reverse part

01:55:621 (12) - Remove clap from end and replace with whistle.
01:56:359 (13) - ^



Star.
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone
Oh my god that was pretty much a hitsound mod I love you so muchhhhhhhhhhh <333333333333

I'll fix it all tomorrow!~ THANK YOU!!!!!!
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
hi this is all I'm changing thanks

Download: Florence + The Machine - My Boy Builds Coffins (Powerdrone) [DC's Hard].osu
Bikko
151 posts
Joined January 2010
Bikko
My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.

Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND ABOUT IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
GREEN : NAZI
PURPLE : DO NOT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY

[General]
- Disable countdown at all diff.
- IMO, We don't need 320kb mp3 file. recompress it plz.
- I'm just check your OSB file and I found a stroyboard. Where is FLO-TOUCHED-UP.jpg file? Your mapset not containing this file. well.. This OSB file is really needed?

[Easy]
- OD +1 or 2
02:33:244 (1) - Spinner's 100/300 cover this note a momently. I think this position is not good to noobs. Can you change it?

[Normal]
01:38:162 (1,2,3) - each slider's beat interval is same. (1)'s tail and (2)'s head is not overlapped, but (2) and (3) is. just curious.
01:47:998 (1) - delete new combo.
02:45:047 (1,2,3) - move to left 1 grid.

[DC's Hard]
01:05:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - How about this? just suggestion.
SPOILER
01:32:999 (4,5) - 7 grid down? to Vertically line of screen.
02:06:442 (6) - default HP BG cover it a little bit... not so looks good.

good, good.

[Insane]
00:53:285 (4,5) - 1 grid down.

seems fine.[list:85f41]
+Star, good luck!
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Insane]
Fine

[DC's Hard]
00:59:556 (4) - Out of bounds (same for all copied parts that are at the top) look:
SPOILER
Other than that fine.

[Normal]
Fine

[Easy]
Fine

Looks good, have a star!~
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone
Just so you know, it is DEFINITELY rankable to have objects touching the HP Bar. Please don't include that in your mod, especially for DC's difficulty. <3
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish

Powerdrone wrote:

RandomJibberish wrote:

I didn't get Easy, full submit. Oops~
General
Crop the BG to the right ratio What is the right ratio?
Whoops I did it by accident What does this mean? And why is there an empty spoilerbox here?
SPOILER
I fail, I cropped your BG then forgot to put it in the post.

The right ratio is 4:3 (width:height) for future reference :P

It's in here. Really.
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone
Thank you very much Jibber!~
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
I came~

General-
Kiai Time sections are not snapped~

Easy-
00:25:375 (3,1) - The end of (3) should have a clap, and the finish should be moved to (1)
00:30:785 (1,2) - (2) should have the new combo, not (1)
00:38:654 (1,2) - ^
00:43:080 (1) - Add a finish here instead of a clap.
00:43:572 (2,3,4) - You might want to clap (2) and (4) instead of (3).
00:47:014 (1,2,3,4) - You might want to clap (2) and (4) instead of (3) and (1).
00:58:326 (4,1) - Remove (4)'s finish, it should be on (1).
01:06:195 (5) - Add a clap here instead of a finish.
01:47:998 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
02:01:768 (1) - This is the fisrt note of a Kiai, so I'd suggest you to add a finish to give it more emphasis :P
02:07:670 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
02:09:637 (1) - Add a finish?

Normal-
00:17:506 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
00:26:359 (2,1) - Remove (2)'s finish, add a clap there instead. Then, add a finish at (1).
00:45:047 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
00:52:916 (1) - ^
01:33:736 (1,2) - (2) should have the new combo, not (1)
01:40:375 (1) - remove this new combo?
01:45:539 (8,1) - Add the finish at (1)'s start instead of (8)?
01:47:998 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
01:50:949 (1) - remove this new combo?
01:58:818 (1) - ^
02:01:768 (1) - Add a finish at the start.
02:05:703 (1)/ 02:07:670 (1) - These sliderwhistles sound weird imo. Remove them?
02:15:293 (1,2) - (2) should have the new combo, not (1)

DreamCast's Hard-
Great~

Insane-
00:15:908 (2) - I expected this one to be 1/4 earlier
00:17:014 (4) - ^
00:19:965 (2) - ^
00:20:949 (4) - ^
00:43:080 (1) - Add a finish :v?
00:58:818 (1) - ^
01:14:555 (1) - Add a finish here, just like in Easy and Normal.
01:30:293 (1) - Add a finish
01:40:867 (3) - Remove the finish at the end.
02:00:785 (11) - Add a finish at the end :P
02:36:195 (1) - This sliderwhistle sounds weird imo. Remove it?

Good map, but now I hate the song :P

I left~
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone
I'll get to your mod tomorrow or something, my apologies. I greatly appreciate you modding it!
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Powerdrone

Krisom wrote:

I came~ I lol'd~

General-
Kiai Time sections are not snapped~ This is over my head. :< I don't know if there's an easier way, but I think I fixed it by deleting and re-adding the kiai.

Easy-
00:25:375 (3,1) - The end of (3) should have a clap, and the finish should be moved to (1)
00:30:785 (1,2) - (2) should have the new combo, not (1)
00:38:654 (1,2) - ^
00:43:080 (1) - Add a finish here instead of a clap.
00:43:572 (2,3,4) - You might want to clap (2) and (4) instead of (3).
00:47:014 (1,2,3,4) - You might want to clap (2) and (4) instead of (3) and (1).
00:58:326 (4,1) - Remove (4)'s finish, it should be on (1).
01:06:195 (5) - Add a clap here instead of a finish.
01:47:998 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
02:01:768 (1) - This is the fisrt note of a Kiai, so I'd suggest you to add a finish to give it more emphasis :P
02:07:670 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
02:09:637 (1) - Add a finish?

Normal-
00:17:506 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it The new combos here all placed every 4 beats. Not gonna remove this one.
00:26:359 (2,1) - Remove (2)'s finish, add a clap there instead. Then, add a finish at (1).
00:45:047 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
00:52:916 (1) - ^
01:33:736 (1,2) - (2) should have the new combo, not (1)
01:40:375 (1) - remove this new combo?
01:45:539 (8,1) - Add the finish at (1)'s start instead of (8)?
01:47:998 (1) - You sure this slider is woth a new combo? I'd remove it
01:50:949 (1) - remove this new combo?
01:58:818 (1) - ^
02:01:768 (1) - Add a finish at the start.
02:05:703 (1)/ 02:07:670 (1) - These sliderwhistles sound weird imo. Remove them?
02:15:293 (1,2) - (2) should have the new combo, not (1)

DreamCast's Hard-
Great~

Insane-
00:15:908 (2) - I expected this one to be 1/4 earlier I don't see why you would, the music here doesn't call for 1/4 timing like the previous measure. Did not change.
00:17:014 (4) - ^
00:19:965 (2) - ^
00:20:949 (4) - ^
00:43:080 (1) - Add a finish :v?
00:58:818 (1) - ^
01:14:555 (1) - Add a finish here, just like in Easy and Normal.
01:30:293 (1) - Add a finish
01:40:867 (3) - Remove the finish at the end.
02:00:785 (11) - Add a finish at the end :P
02:36:195 (1) - This sliderwhistle sounds weird imo. Remove it?

Good map, but now I hate the song :P

I left~ Oh... lol ruiner.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Sorry I'm so late, I quess i missed your first post. @_@;

[Insane]
~ I don't like this clap pattern at the beginning, maybe change the claps to whistles? >: ~
00:45:047 (11) - Move this 3 grids up and 2 grids left, also new combo here and delete it from the next (1)?
00:45:047 (11) - couple of grids up if you moved the previous slider.
00:47:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It's only my personal opinion and addiction with centered cymmetrical stuff but... Distance snap and center this? XD
00:56:604 (10) - New combo
00:58:080 (6) - I dun like how this overlaps with (3,4,5) and (2), move the end of the slider?
01:04:719 (9) - New combo
01:55:621 (12) - ^
01:57:342 (1) - Delete new combo and new combo on 01:57:834 (4)?

[DC's]
01:11:360 (4,5,6) - Not really necessary at all but I would flip this horisontaly. XD
02:14:310 (5,6,7) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:506 (1) - New combo off?
00:25:375 (1) - ^
01:50:949 (1) - ^

Starred~ :3
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