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I love the song, and the map :)
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[Extra]
  1. 00:13:887 (1,5,5,1) - There's a few spots here in the intro where these drum beats lie. I believe you said you haven't touched hitsounding yet in a post earlier, but keep this in mind for when you do. Otherwise, I'd love to see these drum beats emphasised.
  2. 00:37:335 (2,1) - NC inconsistency here. You start up a new one the second time when the vocals come in.
  3. 00:46:990 (1,4) - Similar thingy here.
  4. 01:14:231 (6) - This isn't completely straight. http://puu.sh/oawEA/be75d5c9bf.jpg
  5. 01:25:266 (6) - I'm certain this is copy pasta from before, in which the last note is not straight again.
  6. 01:33:887 - Not too sure why the hitsounds suddenly change here. The tempo remains the same from after the chorus.
  7. 02:25:611 (8,9,10,11) - I enjoy your style of using back and forth kicksliders, but I'd love to see it here as well. It was really weird playing it for the first time and seeing them placed almost randomly like that.


That's all apart from the end. Sorry this was a short one. This is one of my favourites at the moment. Good luck with ranking <3
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hOI!

tbh this map has always been so nice to play
mod will probs be really small as map is soo good

extra

because of the star rating, wouldn't an OD like 8,7 better? 9 seems to high to me for this star rating

00:23:542 (5,6,7,8) - why have stacks when you can also put in small linear jumps? keeps the player more active
00:37:335 (2) - doesn't this need a NC?
00:46:473 (6,1) - idk blanket these maybe?
01:58:025 (5,6) - this feels really awkward to play, maybe move 6 to the other side of 5. maybe stack it with 01:58:714 (1) -
02:08:025 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get the random high spacing between this, maybe consider lowering it
02:25:611 (8) - you had NC on these first, so why not now?
I feel like the whole ending could've been mapped more difficult or maybe decreasing in difficulty, it now feels like you undermapped a lot, eventhough you mapped an extra diff. Please take this in consideration

sorry for the short mod, really tried my best to point some things out ;w;

gl on the mapset! really, really hope this gets into the ranking section
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Here, I made a GD for this map! On another note, such an amazing song! Alone together is my favorite FOB song, and it's so cool that you found a Krewella remix!


http://www.mediafire.com/download/usw32 ... ert%5D.osu


Good job and good luck! ~TNT
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Maakkeli wrote:

I. 02:08:369 (6) - pls NC
yes fixed. for some reason editor doesn't want to show me combo colors, they are all white, so i can't check if i have other NC missing
Also fixed what Euny said
http://pastebin.com/8yZfutVz
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I'm too lazy to start writing what I've changed and what I haven't, but basically I remapped the end to make it more interesting and took some points from the previous mods to improve the map, thanks for the mods!
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It's been ages since I seriously modded actively, so eerything is kinda covered in rust.

[General]
  1. General stuff like dubstep and FOB would be quite useful in the tags. think if there's anything else missing, but I don't really think so.
  2. Combo Colour 1 is dark brown, might fade a bit with the BG. How about making it slightly brighter?


[Easy]
  1. 00:03:197 (1,2) - try to avoid 3/2 beats, as they are tricky for beginners and may trouble or puzzle them. Especially when you start your map with them. Why not try this instead?
  2. 00:08:714 (1,2) - try to avoid spacing patterns like this. Players might ignore the reverse arrow and hit (2) too early.
  3. 01:15:611 (2) - might get overlapped with the HP-Bar on smaller and non-widescreen displays.
  4. 01:30:438 - finish the slider (2) - here, as the vocals suggest. This will make much more sense, as newbies focus on stronger stuff.

    Neat!


[Natsu's Normal]
  1. Inconsistent with the other difficulties. Probably an 1/2 slider in the end could fix that?
  2. 00:34:404 (3,4) - the previous stacks were way more readable due to the circle/slider_with_a_new_combo thing. Since there's no new combo it might be a bit tricky for the intro.

    I liked this one. CS4 makes things super tidy and lovely.


[grumd's Hard]
  1. Would be really neat if you could fix slowdowns and speed-ups to certain combo colours. It's not necessary, but it's helpful for those, who are learning SV changes.
  2. 00:03:197 (1,1) - I would use 1/2 sliders for each of the loud beats. This way, every beat gets proper emphasis.

    Great.


[Kyshiro's Light Insane]
  1. 00:54:576 - not really happy with the way vocals are ignored here. Try an 1/2 slider with a repeat?
  2. 01:35:438 (1,2) - feels overexaggerated. Consider dropping Ds values here a little.
    Note: 01:37:162 (2,3) - same as above.
  3. 02:37:335 - try to shorten the slider and add a circle here? The drum is begging for a clickable beat here.

    Not bad!



[CBH's Insane]
  1. 01:53:197 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - I would increase spacing every 2nd measure or so, starting with low values. So, when 1/4s pop up, players are ready to take them and the whole part feels kind of relaxing and lets players recover.
  2. 02:42:852 (1,3) - minor - personally not a huge fan of these sliders. I don't really see how the curves at the ends make the slider work better with the song MInd explaining it?

    Not bad, I liked it.


[Extra]
No creative custom diff name this time?
  1. 00:17:335 (3,4) - minor - probably that'd be better if you could make these two similar to each other. Just a personal preference.
  2. 00:49:749 (4) - normally, I would advice to stress SV changes with new combos. These are pretty readable, though. You might try to place an NC here just to see whether you like it or not, though.
    Note: in case you like the idea with NCs for SV changes, do this more often!

    That is a nice one, too!


That is a pretty neat set. Call me back!
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Woo!
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All fixed :) , btw im not sure about the cs4, if bakari really want me to change it, feel free to change it for me, Aia.

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68369
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Alone Together (Krewella Remix)
TitleUnicode:Alone Together (Krewella Remix)
Artist:Fall Out Boy
ArtistUnicode:Fall Out Boy
Creator:Aia
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:
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CS 4 is just my personal preference, I did not even list it in the post as an actual thing. Feel free to leave it as it is now. :p

There's a star icon went missing, fixed that.
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Fixed everything mentioned and improved this part 01:53:197 - 02:12:507 -
Thank you very much Bakari.
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GOGOGOGOGOGO AIAAAAAAAAAAAA
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Secretpipe wrote:

GOGOGOGOGOGO AIAAAAAAAAAAAA
Waiting for Kyshiro and grumd :|
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Bakari wrote:

[grumd's Hard]
  1. Would be really neat if you could fix slowdowns and speed-ups to certain combo colours. It's not necessary, but it's helpful for those, who are learning SV changes.
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  2. 00:03:197 (1,1) - I would use 1/2 sliders for each of the loud beats. This way, every beat gets proper emphasis.
    я правда не особо понял, что ты имеешь в виду. какие именно биты для тебя здесь loud? как ты видишь использование 1/2 здесь? что насчёт других нот? было бы неплохо увидеть какой-то скрин, чтобы понять твою идею. я посмотрел-покрутил этот момент и не придумал ничего слишком хорошего. да, вокал на концах слайдеров длинных, но это имеет смысл, так как я старался слишком много лишних нот в этом месте (как и во всей карте) не пихать, маппал исключительно по вокалу здесь, всё-таки это хардец
Спасибо

http://pastebin.com/raw/cjMi8zVR
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Here is the update btw, seems like you didnt get the one I've sent you yesterday.


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Title:Alone Together (Krewella Remix)
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Bakari wrote:

[Kyshiro's Light Insane]
  1. 00:54:576 - not really happy with the way vocals are ignored here. Try an 1/2 slider with a repeat? Sure
  2. 01:35:438 (1,2) - feels overexaggerated. Consider dropping Ds values here a little. Doesn't really feel exaggerated imo, the first one follows the music more than the vocals, that it kind of follows it is a plus i guess, and for the second one you're kind of right but ehh, consistency maybe and it's not /that/ bad to have a jump here and there
    Note: 01:37:162 (2,3) - same as above.
  3. 02:37:335 - try to shorten the slider and add a circle here? The drum is begging for a clickable beat here. fixed

    Not bad!
thanks
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Bakari wrote:

It's been ages since I seriously modded actively, so eerything is kinda covered in rust.

[General]
  1. General stuff like dubstep and FOB would be quite useful in the tags. think if there's anything else missing, but I don't really think so.
  2. Combo Colour 1 is dark brown, might fade a bit with the BG. How about making it slightly brighter?


[Easy]
  1. 00:03:197 (1,2) - try to avoid 3/2 beats, as they are tricky for beginners and may trouble or puzzle them. Especially when you start your map with them. Why not try this instead?
  2. 00:08:714 (1,2) - try to avoid spacing patterns like this. Players might ignore the reverse arrow and hit (2) too early.
  3. 01:15:611 (2) - might get overlapped with the HP-Bar on smaller and non-widescreen displays.
  4. 01:30:438 - finish the slider (2) - here, as the vocals suggest. This will make much more sense, as newbies focus on stronger stuff.

    [Extra]
    No creative custom diff name this time?
    1. 00:17:335 (3,4) - minor - probably that'd be better if you could make these two similar to each other. Just a personal preference.
    2. 00:49:749 (4) - normally, I would advice to stress SV changes with new combos. These are pretty readable, though. You might try to place an NC here just to see whether you like it or not, though.
      Note: in case you like the idea with NCs for SV changes, do this more often!

      That is a nice one, too!


That is a pretty neat set. Call me back!
Fixed everything except the "dubstep" tag because I really don't think this one needs it.

Thank you!
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Now we are alone together, my friends. Just you, me and this shiny bubble.

Bubbled!
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We are getting there!
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Secretpipe wrote:

We are getting there!
Well, it took long enough!
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