ByBy_ChAn wrote:

I will bubble it :3

StarrStyx wrote:

never have I ever seen SP even crazier than this

CelsiusLK wrote:

can we break the sp limit ?

l.
o.
l.

Narcissu wrote:

[Normal]

00:12:932 (3,5) - DS fixed everything

00:46:814 (3) - ^

[Nostalgia]

02:25:285 - add whistle and clap instead of finish , same as 01:09:049 - 03:38:697 -

[storyboard]

60755 - it's to rapid imo , downbeat is 60932 …… only 177 ms to replace BG but “ 25285 - ” have 354 ms i think this one fits tho o/ the intro i wanted it to be more gradual but this one i want to be rather fast

Sprite,Background,Centre,"sb/bw.jpg",320,240
S,0,-100,,0.625
F,0,25285,25638,0,1
F,0,60755,60932,1,0 → F,0,60579,60932,1,0

and …… i suggest over 354 ms and cross downbeat

e …… storyboard down ??? other kiai without wing …… not done yet! ><

StarrStyx wrote:

never have I ever seen SP even crazier than this

Kibbleru wrote:

somebody do the lyrics for meeee ;_;

Kagamine Ren wrote:

2 stars per day!!

PLEASE BE QUICK
ONLY 45 KUDOSU REMAINING!!

HabiHolic wrote:

bubbled.

Kibbleru wrote:

HabiHolic wrote:

bubbled.

wtf lol sb still not done xD

1. 00:12:932 (3) - You may want to add the whistle here. Goes well alongside the instrument.
2. 01:07:814 - Actually, why don't you map the instrument here? Emphasizing it with a circle makes this part better accentuated. (Applies to similar parts, ofc.)
3. 01:17:873 (1) - NC placement inconsistency?
4. 02:52:461 - No finish? Really? I mean, the song is just asking for it...

• 04:12:055 (1) - Are you sure this slider follows the instruments correctly? Don't try guessing the rhythm and just use a circle at 04:12:263, IMO. This seems to be (almost?) impossible to snap correctly in a way that allows you to keep the slider as is.

1. 00:12:402 (3) - Considering it can be extremely hard to differentiate between a 1/1, 3/4, and 1/2 slider here, you should seriously consider connecting 00:12:402 (3,4,5) so they will be readable and players won't make a mistake of reading this slider as either a 1/1 or 1/2 slider due to the spacing.
2. 00:46:814 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:47:432 - You may want to make the hitsound here silent as there is actually nothing to map here. The hitsound only becomes a disturbance. (Applies to similar cases, for example 01:49:902, 01:50:255, and 03:20:608.)

Hinsvar wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

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wtf lol sb still not done xD

like seriously lol

I might give a mod.

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Normal

1. 00:12:932 (3) - You may want to add the whistle here. Goes well alongside the instrument. k
2. 01:07:814 - Actually, why don't you map the instrument here? Emphasizing it with a circle makes this part better accentuated. (Applies to similar parts, ofc.) well i wanted the normal to be rather easy since it's the easiest diff of the set q:
3. 01:17:873 (1) - NC placement inconsistency? oop
4. 02:52:461 - No finish? Really? I mean, the song is just asking for it... yeh

>Hard

• 04:12:055 (1) - Are you sure this slider follows the instruments correctly? Don't try guessing the rhythm and just use a circle at 04:12:263, IMO. This seems to be (almost?) impossible to snap correctly in a way that allows you to keep the slider as is. actually, yeah i did want to get some confirmation for the snapping there, as well as for the insane

>Nostalgia

1. 00:12:402 (3) - Considering it can be extremely hard to differentiate between a 1/1, 3/4, and 1/2 slider here, you should seriously consider connecting 00:12:402 (3,4,5) so they will be readable and players won't make a mistake of reading this slider as either a 1/1 or 1/2 slider due to the spacing. for both these, i just reduced the spacing, i really don't like having them touch, just doesn't look well for me also, its not that hard to tell imo too :X
2. 00:46:814 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:47:432 - You may want to make the hitsound here silent as there is actually nothing to map here. The hitsound only becomes a disturbance. (Applies to similar cases, for example 01:49:902, 01:50:255, and 03:20:608.) i think just because im using the softsampleset, it's fine. the other reason being, well, you know how picky the qats are these days ><, if i silence it too much itll be like; "dq silent hitsound blah blah blah".

My main problem with the mapset is the usage of "extended" sliders in Nostalgia. I understand you want to emphasize the instruments that come after them by using "active" objects, but the way you employ them has some flaws in it that makes playing them uncomfortable (and it's very noticeable).

Well, the map is already good enough as is, I guess. Just need a little more improvement.

Poke me once you're done with the mod (and storyboard of course lol).

Kibbleru wrote:

PLS IT NEEDS TO STAY THIS WAYY!

Kibbleru wrote:

PLS IT NEEDS TO STAY THIS WAYY!

pkk wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

PLS IT NEEDS TO STAY THIS WAYY!

no bitch I still have one more star I need to shoot

Okoratu wrote:

all i can say is that some of your lyrics are split wronlgy and would probably conflict with japanese grammar

examples:
02:13:108 - You split 笑う In 2 lines while it is one word Pronounced warau
01:05:302 - You don't split 好き Up pretty sureee
01:21:049 - You also don't split up しない
01:50:432 - PLSDON'TSPLIT 降る

These are just examples, I would get someone who's actually a native or something to confirm that these don't make sense with japanese grammar but the ones i pointed out is doing something similar like

Splitting verses like

'and then the rain fa
lls'
this so it may look extremely stupid to someone who actually speaks the language??

Kibbleru wrote:

im done the sb..

KSHR wrote:

bad jokes which may offend you lol

Kibbleru wrote:

I'm prepared to;
a. get bashed on how bad i made this.
b. ask someone else cuz its so bad you don't want to deal with it

Okay, I probably should choose both then.
a. You should never make lyrics SB again. NEVER AGAIN! im sorry senpai i will never try again ;_; ok time to start my next SB
b. Not only I but also others don't want to either for sure!!

The following are issues should be pointed out;
1. Most of lyrics images are too late to appear.
2. Lyrics have mistakes.

Let me correct mistakes first

Source: supercell's special site for Melt http://supercell.sc/melt/ (Click the menu named "word" and you will find the lyrics)

1. 00:25:991 - 朝＿目がさめて
2. 00:39:755 - 前髪を切った
3. 00:41:520 - 「どうしたの？」って
4. 00:59:520 - かわいいのよ！
5. 01:06:932 - 好きだなんて　絶対に言えない… (Because of the font, this looks different from the one written on the special site.)
   -----Deleted my mistake------
6. 01:14:697 - 目も合わせられない (会 means "meet" which doesn't fit with the meaning of lyrics.) umm. idk what to do for this one
7. 01:29:697 - …好きなの
8. 02:09:755 - 隣にいる＿君が笑う
9. 02:19:638 - 息がつまりそう (This kanji is indeed correct, but according to the special site, not used here.)
10. 02:24:049 - 触れてる右手が＿震える
11. 02:28:814 - 高(taka)鳴(na)る It looks like you are misunderstanding the reading of this word.
12. 02:37:991 - どうしよう…！
13. 02:46:814 - 時間を / 止めて　In Japanese grammar, it's strange to put a particle at the start of the sentence.
14. 02:56:344 - 死んでしまうわ！
15. 03:33:049 - 駅に着いてしまう…
16. 03:37:285 - 会えない＿近くて＿遠いよ
17. 03:44:344 - 手をつないで歩きたい！
18. 03:51:402 - いけないの？
19. 03:57:049 - 抱きしめて！
20. 03:59:344 - …なんてね

Let me know again when you are done fixing them. I still have lots of things to point out..! B) oh god owo
By the way, you may add "supercell" (which ryo belongs to) to the Tags.