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the brilliant green - Ash Like Snow

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MarioTwinsCG
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Joined May 2008
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MarioTwinsCG
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 06, 2008 at 2:32:04 PM

Artist: the brilliant green
Title: Ash Like Snow
BPM: 83.1
Filesize: 9171kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (2.67 stars, 220 notes)
Download: the brilliant green - Ash Like Snow
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First time composition. [Modified on May 6]
Last edited by MarioTwinsCG , edited 1 time in total.
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
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Card N'FoRcE
Weel, you did quite a good job for a first timer.
I don't think there are trouble in BPM or offset, but the beatspacing is sometimes really misleading...
For example:
53:15-54:60 = The beats are really badly placed; they have a different rythm than the others before
1:10:48 = The beat number 8 could be a little more far, it would help
1:26:91 = Same as before, the number 6
1:29:62 = maybe here is better to do "reverse selection"
1:52:72-1:52:90 = maybe beats 2 and 3 could be under the end of the slider before
1:53:98 = beat 5 is misleading, because is too close to beat 4
2:00:66 = maybe if beat 5 is more far it could help
2:05:72-2:06:08 = 4 and 5 could be better at a equal spacing as 1,2,3
2:16:91-2:24:13 = The spacing of thishis combo is very good, you should use this as model.
3:31:28 = beat 3 should be more far

A list of thing that could be fixed easily. There are some other minor issues but I think the beatmap can be played well.
Rolled
osu! Alumni
1,886 posts
Joined January 2008
Rolled
Nice job modding this Card.

Also, on top of card's corrections, your offset is... off. The song does work, and I'm not even sure if the correct offset will alter anything in the beatmap, but.. the first beat in the song is at an offset of 3326. Otherwise nice job with the timing.
MarioTwinsCG
2 posts
Joined May 2008
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MarioTwinsCG
Thanks for pointing out the misleading places guys. I actually felt them misleading when I played it myself lol. Now I changed some of the places and have this latest version modified. It is likely that it still has many places that can be done better. Any corrections/suggestions are greatly appreciated.

BTW I didnt change the offset but I am happy with the timing.
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