FinaIes FunkeIn wrote:

sacred covenant wrote:

Title: Revenge
Arist: CaptainSparkelz
BPM: 120
Map Link:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/243262
please helping

Hello! Thank you for entering my Q, i'll continue this mod as the week goes on

For some odd reason the timestamps won link, i'll fix that as I figure out why

Diamond:

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00:00:383 (1) - This hits on a funny offbeat, consider moving it so it fits the rhythm or beat

00:00:383 (1) - Same goes for here

00:21:758 - This hit doesn't match the beat or rhythm, move it one tick over

00:39:133 - For this jump segment consider making it a shape, like a star or some sort of proper polygon

00:43:758 - Consider making this a slider from 00:43:758 - to 00:44:008 -

00:55:383 - This doesn't seem to land on a beat or rhythm, it sounds close but not actually

00:58:133 (3) - Again with the jumps try not to make the notes land so random across the board

00:58:133 (3) - The repeat into the end of the slider doesn't match the rhythm or beat

00:58:133 (3) - The end of the first 2 sliders doesn't match rhythm or beat

00:58:133 (3) - This sustained slider doesn't match rhythm or beat, the syncopation is nice but feels funny to play

00:58:133 (3) - Same case with this slider as well

01:20:383 (1) - Consider making this slider match the rhythm

01:21:383 (3) - Consider making this slider match the rhythm

01:39:758 (4) - This beat doesn't land on the rhythm or beat, it's syncopated

01:40:133 (5) - Same case as above here

01:40:383 (1) - Sliders 1-4 all sustain a but too long and the ends of them dont match very well with the rhythm or beat

01:43:133 (1) - Again try not to make the jumps so random

01:53:883 (5) - There's no reason for a double tap to be here

01:55:758 (5) - Same here

02:00:383 (1) - Slider sustains for a bit too long

02:00:883 (2) - Slider sustains for a bit too long

02:17:883 (1) - Be consistent with your rhythm or beat hits here

03:29:633 (6) - A triple hit here is very awkward

03:33:758 (2) - Consider moving this slider closer to the first one then move it back one tick and extend it to the rhythm

03:36:445 (1) - Not enough time to spin, consider using a slider instead

Iron:

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Stone:

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Wooden:

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LexiaLovesU wrote:

Do not post a mod here post in the maps thread its easier for mappers to find it there and they need your mods for Star Priority so it just seems silly to post it here for this map post the mod in here Beatmap's Thread

schwarzvgrune wrote:

is this queue open for testplay？
if not please ignore this

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i'd like to have your testplay on diffs that you could play (preferrably 1 set of the said mode.
i.e. if you play STD may i request testplay for all STD diffs?
i.e. if you play taiko may i request testplay for all taiko diffs?
i.e. if you play mania may i request testplay for all mania 4K (only 4K) diffs?

thanks <3

Artist: Nakagawa Ken
Title: Welcome to the Workshop!
Source: Atelier III - Grand Phantasm
BPM: 100
Play Time: 01:51
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