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Trey Parker - America FUCK YEAH !

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SamiPale
Your notes are not on the tick D:

look this picture
You must put every note on ticks


When you finish this ,resnap all notes
Timing-->Resnap All Notes


no kudosu until I give a real mod
(no need to post to my queue again,i will recheck automatically
Torran
^
To prevent messy snapping, here's what you should do:
  • 1. Go to the Timing Setup Panel and change the BPM to what it was originally (170), hit OK
    2. Go to the Timing Setup Panel again and change the BPM to 169.85, don't hit OK yet
    3. Click the "Scale to new timing" button and then OK
    4. Go to the Timing Setup Panel again and click the "Snap to new timing" button
    5. Check the "Recalculate slider lengths" box and use a snap divisor of 1/4, hit OK
MMzz
[Insane]
Lower the HP drain 2 ticks.

[All]
Change audio to Normal, not soft.
Topic Starter
Noob Man
Oh God, I'm really sorry, I feel ridiculous. D:
Thanks to soradg123. ~
MittenMasterzz : Done (but Insane is not really harder than Hard with a "low" HP drain rate... :/ ).

samipale wrote:

(no need to post to my queue again,i will recheck automatically
Ok, thank you very much. ^^'

I think it's okay now...
Fight69
Ohai o/

Je trouve la map très...carré, et surtout la plupart des notes sont au milieu de l'écran, du coup quand il y en a beaucoup, ca devient rapidement illisible

Quand tu appliquera mon mod, certaine corrections risquent d'entrainer d'autre erreurs, n'oublie pas de les corriger !

Pense aussi à faire des hitsounds sur la map, c'est important !

~East & Normal~

Cool, tout m'a l'air ok :D

~Hard~

00:22:516 (1) - Erreur de spacing
00:24:282 (7) - Erreur de spacing
00:25:165 (1) - Je trouve que ca sonne mieux quand le slider commence à 00:24:989
00:27:285 (3) - L'aligner avec le 2
00:52:366 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Un peu illisible tout ca :?
00:59:078 (5) - 2 cases bas + 1 droite avec grille niveau 3
01:02:080 (1) - Erreur de spacing, tu peut le placer en haut a droite ou tout la partie a gauche
01:12:148 (1) - Spacing
01:13:208 (4) - Spacing
01:14:621 (5) - Spacing
01:14:974 (1) - Spacing
01:15:327 (2) - Idem
01:16:034 (4) - Idem
01:16:387 (1) - Idem
01:17:447 (5) - Idem
01:17:800 (1) - Idem

...

Trop d'erreur de spacing sur cette diff ! >.<
Ce serait trop long si je poste tout, alors vérifie chaque note un par un avec le distance snap activé, tu verra les erreurs.
(bouge chaque note un tout ptit peu, si y a une erreur de spacing, elle se rapprochera ou s'éloignera automatique du cercle précédent)

01:44:647 (4) - Spacing, mettre cette note tout en bas a droite

~Insane~

Ici, je ne noterai pas les erreurs de spacing, il y en a trop, fait comme je t'ai dit pour la hard

00:40:709 (1) - New combo
01:42:704 (5,6) - Pourquoi ajouter des notes sur un "Fuck yeah" qu'on entend a peine ?
01:50:918 (4) - Supprime cette note

Voila !
J'espère que mon mod aura été utile.

~Star, bon début
Topic Starter
Noob Man

Fight69 wrote:

Je trouve la map très...carré, et surtout la plupart des notes sont au milieu de l'écran, du coup quand il y en a beaucoup, ca devient rapidement illisible
J'ai corrigé en changeant la disposition de pas mal de notes (revoyant en entier Hard et Insane).
J'espère que c'est mieux. ~

Fight69 wrote:

Pense aussi à faire des hitsounds sur la map, c'est important !
J'en ai ajouté, mais n'étant pas fan des hitsounds j'en ai mis assez peu. ^^'

Fight69 wrote:

~Hard~
[...]
Tout corrigé et revu. ^^'

Fight69 wrote:

~Insane~

Ici, je ne noterai pas les erreurs de spacing, il y en a trop, fait comme je t'ai dit pour la hard -> Corrigé et revu

00:40:709 (1) - New combo -> Done
01:42:704 (5,6) - Pourquoi ajouter des notes sur un "Fuck yeah" qu'on entend a peine ? -> T'as raison, notes retirées.
01:50:918 (4) - Supprime cette note -> Wut, je croyais qu'elle avait disparu quand j'ai tout resnappé. Oo' Fait.

Fight69 wrote:

J'espère que mon mod aura été utile.
Oui, merci. ^^

Fight69 wrote:

~Star, bon début
Kudosu, merci infiniment à toi.
Zetsubou Sensei
i like this map overall (F*** YEAH :P )

but my only concern is that insane is similar to hard...maybe add some streams or something like:

01:10:029 is a spinner .... why not stream it? it would be much more cooler in the map (just an opinion)

STAR
Topic Starter
Noob Man

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

i like this map overall (F*** YEAH :P )
Thank you very much. ^^'


According to your suggestion, I added some streams to differentiate Hard and Insane... Hope it's not overmapped. ^^'
Thanks for the star, kudosu ('cause you helped me to make my Insane harder than Hard). ~

EDIT : 'k, it was overmapped. xD Thanks to Fight69 and his IRC mod. :D
Drafura
Hell yeah !!! Good insane maybe i'll mod it later ;) star'd
Zetsubou Sensei
yea, great job on improving the insane and hard maps....they appear much better and funner to play

[Insane]
00:20:750 (4,5,6,7) - extend these to another tick (then re-snap them)

you dont have to do this one, but it kinda sounds better to me :P

01:10:029 - add an inheriting timing section and change note 1-12 (and 1...take off the new combo just so it looks better, so it would be 1-13) , then after adding the timing section, change the notes to a soft audio and and the whistle sound.

then add another timing section at 01:11:971 and change it back to the normal audio sound

(DO THE SAME WITH HARD DIFFICULTY)

^ this just makes its noticable of the soft techno sound in the background (remember you dont have to do this, maybe try it out and see how you feel about it :D )

Overall: the map is looking good! good luck getting it ranked! :)
Topic Starter
Noob Man

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

yea, great job on improving the insane and hard maps....they appear much better and funner to play
Thanks. :D

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

00:20:750 (4,5,6,7) - extend these to another tick (then re-snap them)
Done, except for the 7 : I think it'd be overmapping, and it'd not be readable. ^^' (<- is it a correct english ?)

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

01:10:029 [...]
Wah, that's clearly better. Oo' I didn't know it was possible, thank you very very much. ~

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Overall: the map is looking good! good luck getting it ranked! :)
Thank you very much for your precious help. :)
Zetsubou Sensei
Done, except for the 7 : I think it'd be overmapping, and it'd not be readable. ^^' (<- is it a correct english ?)
I see what you mean, and I noticed what you did... it sounds fine to me, but i think making 7 just a hit circle would sound better than the slider (check it out and see)

...and thats all i have to say for now :D
Topic Starter
Noob Man
You're right, once more. :)
Fixed. Thanks for your advices. ~
Miago Meowsome
cool
sexy-commando
quelle connerie cette solidarité française...........hum hum.....ouaihhh bravo c'est du beau boulot^^!!
Fight69
En attendant ma diff...Kudostar !
Topic Starter
Noob Man
Ouah, merci infiniment, Fight. =O
Merci aussi à Miago et sexy-commando. ^^
Fight69
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Delete the .osb and full submit. (the .osb file is in the song folder for this beatmap.)
Not really liking where you decided to end your beatmap. There's so much more you can do beyond that part. (excluding the two hardest difficulties.)

[Easy]
Raise circle size by one.
Boring because all you map to is the "Fuck Yeah!" in this difficulty.

[Normal]
Raise circle size by one.
00:17:041 (1) - Either shorten this for it to land on a white tick, or lengthen to land on a red tick. I suggest the white tick. What it is landing on right now isn't good.
00:36:823 through 00:40:709 - Extremely boring. All 1/1 beats and in a line. Use some beatmapping techniques.
01:02:257 - Rather long spinner you have here. Not recommended for a normal difficulty. I suggest you remap this.

[Hard]
It's okay.

[Insane]
You're mapping to the lyrics too much, you should try to map to the background music too.
I highly suggest that you raise the circle size by one on this difficulty.
00:59:608 (7) - No. I hate this slider.
01:51:359 - No. Just no. This long spinner is horrible.

[Fight69's fuckin' Hard !]
I'm not too fond of the difficulty name.
00:42:828 (7) - Spacing. Doesn't match (5) and (6).
01:51:006 - What's with you guys and this long spinner?
This difficulty was pretty good.

No star. Please fix things I've pointed out and PM me for a recheck.
Fight69
[Fight69's fuckin' Hard !]
I'm not too fond of the difficulty name. D:
00:42:828 (7) - Spacing. Doesn't match (5) and (6). Fix'd
01:51:006 - What's with you guys and this long spinner? Fix'd...i think >.>...
This difficulty was pretty good. Thank you :>
Download: Trey Parker - America FUCK YEAH ! (Noob Man) [Fight69's fuckin' Hard !].osu
Inozuma
Test diff for easy~
Download: Trey Parker - America FUCK YEAH ! (Noob Man) [Easy].osu

EDIT: Mod will come as well

[Overall]
Well, technically, there's not much to point out, but your map is way too much based on lyrics.
Hitsound-wise, it's sufficient, huh? since you did follow lyrics...
Well, at some parts, it is a bit too loud, I suggest to reduce a bit the volume. You can as well play with it, like reduce it on instrumental parts and such (like the end).


Keep in mind that it is majorly suggestion and my opinion.


[Easy]
Since I think you'll remap, I'll for the new version.


[Normal]
Hmmm, I think it's better without the end, like in Easy, since the end is a bit confusing.
And yeah, sometime, you follow lyrics partly, and it sounds just weird:
00:18:100 (2).
00:29:404 (2).

00:41:062 (1) - I think that should be better mapped.

And, well, that's all I can complain about.

[Hard]
Well, still too much on lyrics.
00:24:989 (1) - You should map the end of the slider instead of making it so long.
01:25:218 (4) - End it on white tick or make it into two notes.


[Insane]
Increase slider velocity! It's sloooow~
I feel it is a bit too cramped, but, huh, it plays not too bad.
01:17:800 (1,2,3,4) - Oh god, what is this.
01:19:213 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:36:169 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:38:995 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hum, not fond of these kind of stream-sliders, notes are better.


[Fight69's fuckin' hard]
Hmm, nothing to point out.
Just, hitsound-wise, I think clap every 2 beats instead of 4 is better.
Topic Starter
Noob Man

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

[Overall]
Delete the .osb and full submit. (the .osb file is in the song folder for this beatmap.) Done.
Not really liking where you decided to end your beatmap. There's so much more you can do beyond that part. (excluding the two hardest difficulties.) According to Inozuma's suggestion, I've decided to keep the end here in Easy and Normal. If you think it's really bad, I'll map a bit after the present end in those two difficulties. I added some notes in Hard, but I can't continue 'cause the song is... very strange after the current end. ^^'

[Easy]
Raise circle size by one. Done.
Boring because all you map to is the "Fuck Yeah!" in this difficulty. I remapped the Easy, is it less boring ? ~

[Normal]
Raise circle size by one. Done.
00:17:041 (1) - Either shorten this for it to land on a white tick, or lengthen to land on a red tick. I suggest the white tick. What it is landing on right now isn't good. Fixed.
00:36:823 through 00:40:709 - Extremely boring. All 1/1 beats and in a line. Use some beatmapping techniques. Fixed, is it better like that ?
01:02:257 - Rather long spinner you have here. Not recommended for a normal difficulty. I suggest you remap this. Remapped ; hope it's not too hard. xD

[Hard]
It's okay. Thanks. ^^'

[Insane]
You're mapping to the lyrics too much, you should try to map to the background music too. I tried, but I think this song must be mapped to lyrics. :/ I mapped to music everywhere I could.
I highly suggest that you raise the circle size by one on this difficulty. / Done.
00:59:608 (7) - No. I hate this slider. / I replaced by a little combo, is it better ?
01:51:359 - No. Just no. This long spinner is horrible. / Aouch. Yes, I remapped all the end of the map. Is it better like this ? ~

Inozuma wrote:

Test diff for easy~ I took this as a base for the beggining of my "new" Easy, with your permission. ^^' Thanks very much.

[Overall]
Well, technically, there's not much to point out, but your map is way too much based on lyrics. Yes, 'cause this is a song with interesting lyrics, and a background music uninteresting... =P
Hitsound-wise, it's sufficient, huh? since you did follow lyrics... Too much hitsounds break my ears. xD
Well, at some parts, it is a bit too loud, I suggest to reduce a bit the volume. You can as well play with it, like reduce it on instrumental parts and such (like the end). I... think it's not necessary, I hear very well the song... :s

[Normal]
Hmmm, I think it's better without the end, like in Easy, since the end is a bit confusing. Ok.
And yeah, sometime, you follow lyrics partly, and it sounds just weird:
00:18:100 (2). Fixed.
00:29:404 (2). Fixed.

00:41:062 (1) - I think that should be better mapped. 'k, remapped, to the lyrics. ^^"

[Hard]
Well, still too much on lyrics. Sorry about this. *-*
00:24:989 (1) - You should map the end of the slider instead of making it so long. Ok... Done.
01:25:218 (4) - End it on white tick or make it into two notes. Fixed.


[Insane]
Increase slider velocity! It's sloooow~ Hm... Yes, it's a trap. :D Seriously, I prefer slow sliders, it breaks the rythm imposed by the streams. =P
I feel it is a bit too cramped, but, huh, it plays not too bad. Oh, thanks. =O
01:17:800 (1,2,3,4) - Oh god, what is this. It was a trap ! Hm. Fixed. ~
01:19:213 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:36:169 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:38:995 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:44:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hum, not fond of these kind of stream-sliders, notes are better. 'k, fixed, I make a loooong stream. :D

Thanks for your mods. ~
Tatsuo
Recheck~

[Easy]
It's getting better.

[Normal]
00:36:823 - This got much better.

[Hard]
Skip.

[Insane]
Better, good.

[Fight69's fuckin' Hard !]
01:55:068 - Just this that I have to nitpick about. Replace with hit circles or streams. I don't know. Just not this slider.

*star*
Topic Starter
Noob Man
Thanks !
I give you a kudosu for your suggestion to Fight69. /o/
Fight69
Yuji Tokaji
yo Noob,

Star ~
banvi
Hello :D
Easy
ok
Normal
There is no overlap.
So
00:44:241 (2) put on (1)?
01:24:512 (3) put on (2) or (1)'s silder end?
Hard
00:08:033 (4,5) 1 grid down (grid lv3)
00:52:366 (1) ^
01:14:179 (1) 0.5 grid left (no use grid snap)
Insane
02:01:692 (6) just my suggestion : change spinner?
Fight69's
00:07:503 (1) 1 grid right?
00:47:067 (9,10) 1 grid up?
00:47:774 (11) 1 grid up & 1 grid left?
00:49:363 (5,6) 1 grid right
00:56:428 (1,2,3,4) ^
01:43:588 (5,6) ^
01:46:414 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) ^
01:55:863 (15) new combo?

nice~
star & gl ;)
Topic Starter
Noob Man

banvi wrote:

Easy
ok Thanks. ~
Normal
There is no overlap.
So
00:44:241 (2) put on (1)? Done.
01:24:512 (3) put on (2) or (1)'s silder end? On (2), done. ^^
Hard
00:08:033 (4,5) 1 grid down (grid lv3) Fixed.
00:52:366 (1) ^ ^
01:14:179 (1) 0.5 grid left (no use grid snap) Fixed.
Insane
02:01:692 (6) just my suggestion : change spinner? Hm... It's a too short spinner (only 1000 pts with Autoplay), I keep the slider. ~
Fight69's
[...] I let to Fight69

Thanks for the star. ^^
Fight69
Kurai
tg
Drafura
[insane]

A corriger
00:39:472 (7) - Faudrais que tu l'alignes avec 00:39:119 (6) - attention vérifie le spacing de ce qui suit après avoir fait ce changement

Légende pour les suggestions
pas très important
Ca m'agace

Suggestions
00:19:867 (1) - Le faire terminer ici 00:20:043 -
00:22:074 (1) - supprimer
00:22:163 (1) - new combo
00:23:223 (4) - le faire terminer ici 00:23:399 -
00:58:018 (1,2,3) - Le rythme est bien cassé je trouve donc je te propose soit de faire comme pour 00:56:605 (2,3,4,5,6) - soit de mettre un slider.
01:00:402 (4) - supprimer
01:02:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - essayes de remapper en faisant de legers zigs zags qui suivent la guitare.
01:24:689 (1) - Le faire terminer ici 01:25:925 - le HS colle mieux
01:48:710 (1,2,3) - Revoir cette partie en commencant par rajouter un rond ici : 01:49:063 - puis utliser des cercles à la place de 01:49:769 (3) - et finir sur un long slider ici : 01:50:829 -

Voilà si j'ai une dernière suggestion à faire ça serait d'utiliser de legers jumps (style spacing 1.8x) pour le Fuck Yeah depuis le début jusqu'à 00:44:418 - Après ca ferait un peu trop lourd je pense.
Allé jte met un exemple pour illustrer ma pensée :
Ca se passe : 00:32:937 (5) -



Garde en tête que je suis nouveau dans le domaine du mod donc n'hésites pas à demander à un autre moddeur si jamais une de mes modif te parait louche.
Topic Starter
Noob Man

Drafura wrote:

A corriger
00:39:472 (7) - Faudrais que tu l'alignes avec 00:39:119 (6) - attention vérifie le spacing de ce qui suit après avoir fait ce changement Fixed

Suggestions
00:19:867 (1) - Le faire terminer ici 00:20:043 - Fixed.
00:22:074 (1) - supprimer / Deleted.
00:22:163 (1) - new combo / Done.
00:23:223 (4) - le faire terminer ici 00:23:399 - Fixed.
00:58:018 (1,2,3) - Le rythme est bien cassé je trouve donc je te propose soit de faire comme pour 00:56:605 (2,3,4,5,6) - soit de mettre un slider. / Added a stream.
01:00:402 (4) - supprimer / Deleted.
01:02:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - essayes de remapper en faisant de legers zigs zags qui suivent la guitare. Remapped (merci pour ton aide via IRC !)
01:24:689 (1) - Le faire terminer ici 01:25:925 - le HS colle mieux ... T'as raison, fixed.
01:48:710 (1,2,3) - Revoir cette partie en commencant par rajouter un rond ici : 01:49:063 - puis utliser des cercles à la place de 01:49:769 (3) - et finir sur un long slider ici : 01:50:829 - J'ai remappé cette partie, j'esère que c'est mieux. ^^'

Voilà si j'ai une dernière suggestion à faire ça serait d'utiliser de legers jumps (style spacing 1.8x) pour le Fuck Yeah depuis le début jusqu'à 00:44:418 - Après ca ferait un peu trop lourd je pense.
Yay, ça améliore largement la map, merci ! :D
Merci pour ton mod. ~

Drafura wrote:

Garde en tête que je suis nouveau dans le domaine du mod donc n'hésites pas à demander à un autre moddeur si jamais une de mes modif te parait louche.
Vu comme tu mappes bien, je tiens ton mod comme plus que recevable. xD
roflninja
Hi,

[easy]
fine~

[normal]
00:51:659 (4) - no new combo?
the studden stop at the end kinda bugs me, so maybe add a spinner from 01:45:001 to 01:46:060? up to you

[hard]
end kinda bugs me again, but adding a spinner here might be wierd

[insane]
00:59:608 (1) - no new combo?

[fight69's]
01:11:971 (1) - i know this might be alot of work, but maybe center it?
01:25:572 - maybe put something in this gap? or was this purposly left empty?
01:27:691 (1,1,1,1) - I think this should be one combo, but up to you
01:36:169 (6) - new combo?

nice map
Topic Starter
Noob Man

roflninja wrote:

[easy]
fine~ Thanks. ~

[normal]
00:51:659 (4) - no new combo? New Combo added.
the studden stop at the end kinda bugs me, so maybe add a spinner from 01:45:001 to 01:46:060? up to you Hm... Yes, it's better. ^^

[hard]
end kinda bugs me again, but adding a spinner here might be wierd Yes, I've hesitated, but I prefer to end the map here. ^^'

[insane]
00:59:608 (1) - no new combo? Eh. There is a new combo. xD

[fight69's]
[...] I let to Fight69. ~

nice map Thank you for starring and modding ! :)
Kudosu. ~

EDIT : And thanks Kurai_ for kudostar. =O
Ekoro
Star =D

Dommage j'aurai voulu faire une guest diff.... Bah tant pis , j'vais me laisser mourir sur #french :|
Fight69

roflninja wrote:

[fight69's]
01:11:971 (1) - i know this might be alot of work, but maybe center it? Oh, not really ^^ Done
01:25:572 - maybe put something in this gap? or was this purposly left empty? Done with a spinner
01:27:691 (1,1,1,1) - I think this should be one combo, but up to you It's cool like that D:
01:36:169 (6) - new combo? No, each combo to 01:29:104 until 01:42:175 have 7-8 combos

nice map Thank you :>
Download: Trey Parker - America FUCK YEAH ! (Noob Man) [Fight69's fuckin' Hard !].osu
Dotsu
My Suggestions:

[Easy]

  • 00:31:524(1)Align with 5
    01:00:844(1):Add finish at the end of this slider
    01:17:094(3):Remove clap at the beginning of this slider
    01:42:528:Add a circle
    01:42:704(1):Spinner end at 01:46:060
[Normal]

  • 00:19:160(3):Add whistle or finish
    00:40:709:Set like this:
    Sorry,I forgot this :(
    01:10:029(1):Remove finish
    01:44:824:(1)Spinner start here
[Insane]

  • 01:24:689(1):Spinner end at 01:26:278
    01:45:707(10):Add finish at the end of this slider
[Fight69's fuckin' Hard !]

  • 01:50:829(6):Add finish
    01:55:863(1,2,3,4,5...):Put these under 14.
    01:57:541(1):Spinner start at here
    02:02:310(2):Add finish
Good map!

~STAR~
Fight69

impossiblexu wrote:

[Fight69's fuckin' Hard !]

  • 01:50:829(6):Add finish
    01:55:863(1,2,3,4,5...):Put these under 14.
    01:57:541(1):Spinner start at here
    02:02:310(2):Add finish
Good map!

Everything Done !


~STAR~
Thank you :D
Download: Trey Parker - America FUCK YEAH ! (Noob Man) [Fight69's fuckin' Hard !].osu
Topic Starter
Noob Man

impossiblexu wrote:

[Easy]

  • 00:31:524(1)Align with 5 Done.
    01:00:844(1):Add finish at the end of this slider Done.
    01:17:094(3):Remove clap at the beginning of this slider Done.
    01:42:528:Add a circle Done
    01:42:704(1):Spinner end at 01:46:060 Fixed
[Normal]

  • 00:19:160(3):Add whistle or finish Added a whistle.
    00:40:709:Set like this: [...] Ah, yes, it sounds better, fixed ! :)
    01:10:029(1):Remove finish Done.
    01:44:824:(1)Spinner start here Done
[Insane]

  • 01:24:689(1):Spinner end at 01:26:278 Done.
    01:45:707(10):Add finish at the end of this slider There was already this HS. ^^'
Good map!

~STAR~ Thank you very much, kudosu ! ~
aRiskOfRain
Easy;

00:13:508 (5,1) - Line up with the 4

Hard;

This has a higher slider speed than Insane. Either make this slider speed slower, and remap, or make insane's slider speed faster, and remap. Also, it has a higher slider speed than your extremely hard one. Call me back when you do one of those and I'll have a look.
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