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Asterisk - Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass [Taiko|Osu]

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Famous
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 14. März 2016 at 18:36:22

Artist: Asterisk
Title: Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass
Source: のんのんびより
Tags: dnb and non biyori miyauchi renge charlotte
BPM: 175
Filesize: 1806kb
Play Time: 00:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Charlotte's Muzukashii (2,79 stars, 195 notes)
  2. Charlotte's Oni (3,76 stars, 278 notes)
  3. Easy (1,6 stars, 66 notes)
  4. Hard (3,52 stars, 140 notes)
  5. Insane (4,66 stars, 231 notes)
  6. Normal (2,17 stars, 97 notes)


Download: Asterisk - Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First ranked map!

Thanks to Charlotte for Taiko diff's!

Finally, after one year it is ranked!
A9M
Hi m4m from your queue
00:50:136 (3) -blanket 00:51:165 (4) -
00:12:422 (2) - move to x:356,y216
00:21:165 (5) - move to x:420,y176
00:21:336 (1) - add clap
00:10:365 (1,2,3,4,1) -  
00:31:793 (5) -
00:39:850 (5,6,7,8) - I think that close. more spase

Thank you for being patient with my English.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Famous

NeK0Nyqn wrote:

Hi m4m from your queue
00:50:136 (3) -blanket 00:51:165 (4) - | Fixed the blanket.
00:12:422 (2) - move to x:356,y216 | Changed.
00:21:165 (5) - move to x:420,y176 | Changed.
00:21:336 (1) - add clap | Added.
00:10:365 (1,2,3,4,1) - | No.
00:31:793 (5) - | Done.
00:39:850 (5,6,7,8) - I think that close. more spase | I guess that's fine.

Thank you for being patient with my English. | No problem.
Good luck! | Thanks~
Thanks for your mod~
meii18
since the song's genre is drum and bass , why you not add drum and bass at tags as you did with dnb ?
Topic Starter
Famous

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

since the song's genre is drum and bass , why you not add drum and bass at tags as you did with dnb ?
Because "Drum and Bass" already named in the title. That's not necessary anymore to add it to the tags. :3
Krimek
Sexy mod as requested :3

[General]
  1. Resize BG to 1366x768
  2. Turn off Countdown
  3. Turn off "Letterbox during breaks"
  4. How about Combo Colours? xD
  5. 00:54:250 -Turn down Volume to 50~60%


[Easy]
  1. 00:32:307 (1) - Remove clap


[Normal]
  1. 00:54:250 (1) - Add finish


[Hard]
  1. 00:21:336 (1) - Remove clap
  2. 00:32:307 (1) - Add finish
  3. 00:52:879 (3) - Add finish


[Insane]
  1. 00:13:793 (3) - Move it to x:456|y:152, so the distance of the sliders are same to 00:13:622 (2) - and (2) is also more symetric.
  2. 00:28:879 (9) - I would prefer NC it
  3. 00:44:650 (5) - NC
  4. 00:44:993 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 00:54:250 (1) - Add finish


Love that one *^* Take my star famus senpui~
Topic Starter
Famous

Krimek wrote:

Sexy mod as requested :3

[General]
  1. Resize BG to 1366x768 | Not necessary.
  2. Turn off Countdown | Done.
  3. Turn off "Letterbox during breaks" | Done.
  4. How about Combo Colours? xD | Changed xD
  5. 00:54:250 -Turn down Volume to 50~60% | Done.


[Easy]
  1. 00:32:307 (1) - Remove clap | Done.


[Normal]
  1. 00:54:250 (1) - Add finish | Done.


[Hard]
  1. 00:21:336 (1) - Remove clap | Done.
  2. 00:32:307 (1) - Add finish | Done.
  3. 00:52:879 (3) - Add finish | Done.


[Insane]
  1. 00:13:793 (3) - Move it to x:456|y:152, so the distance of the sliders are same to 00:13:622 (2) - and (2) is also more symetric. | Done.
  2. 00:28:879 (9) - I would prefer NC it | Done.
  3. 00:44:650 (5) - NC | Done.
  4. 00:44:993 (1) - Remove NC | Done.
  5. 00:54:250 (1) - Add finish | Done.


Love that one *^* Take my star famus senpui~ | Arigatou~! *^*
Thanks for your mod~ :3
ohad1881
hi there!
from ur m4m queue!
easy
00:15:165 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:30:936 (1,2) - i think this is 2 hard for an easy diff
00:34:365 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:50:136 (3,5) - ^^
00:52:879 (1,2) - to hard for easy -_-
normal
00:09:507 (2) - i don't think this overlap is acceptable
00:12:765 (3) - fix DS
00:13:793 (5) - ^^
00:14:136 (7) - ^^
00:15:507 (2) - ^^
00:16:536 (2) - ^^
wow u have a lot of them ill stop tell you
00:43:279 (1) - overlap
hard-ar 8 pls
00:16:536 (3) - this is not good because the slider b4 hide it
insane
00:54:250 (1) - make it far away?
GL!
Topic Starter
Famous
I'll check out your mod later.
Wafu

From modding queue

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Romanisation of れんちょんのドラムンベース is wrong. ちょん is not chan but chon. Thus the name of the song is Ren-chon no Drum and Bass. You can confirm it by watching the anime or it is just enough to say ちゃん = chan, because ゃ (ya) adds "a" at the and, while ょ (yo) adds "o" at the end. Additionally -chan/-tan/-kun and other name additions should be always romanised with all lower letters, thus not -Chon, but -chon.
  2. Add のんのんびより to source as it is an original source. Then move Non Biyori (not Non Non Biyori) to tags as it is only a romanisation. Second Non is useless, as tags are for searching and tags can be used multiple times in search without being twice in tags, so it would be just useless.
  3. Decrease volume of all timing and inherited points by 10%. Currently, because of choice of the hitsounds, it really messes up the song. Sometimes you can barely hear the song, because the snares and normal hitsounds are too loud. -10% just sounds perfectly balanced. Applies to all difficulties.
  4. Remove Japanese from tags, because the beatmap language will be set later by BN/QAT.
  5. Usage of HP Drain is quite unbalanced. I recommend to use 4 on Normal, 6 on Hard (it really is impossible to fail at all, it doesn't drain anything on mistake because of the high count of objects) and 7,5-8 on insane. That makes it much more balanced.


Easy


  1. 00:30:936 (1,2) - This pattern is really inappropriate for easy difficulty. This just leads to confusion of the newbies. There is too little time, but too many clicks. To keep consistency with music, yet make it easier (also there is no reason for it to be same as Normal, when it is supposed to be easier), try to use this rhythm pattern.
  2. 00:52:879 (1,2) - Same as above, also in this place, it is harder than on Normal, what really doesn't make sense.
  3. 00:20:993 (4) - This is also not really good idea. BPM itself does make the map harder, thus using 1/4 is really a killer. Just replace it with a note on 00:20:993 and it should fit to the song and you will avoid all the trouble.
  4. 00:42:936 (4) - Same as above
Fine difficulty, just the 1/4 gaps would be really annoying for newbies, without them, I have no problem to say it is great.


Insane


  1. 00:30:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little idea there. You used higher spacing on streams when there were more snares and so on, but on these deep drums, you mostly used 0.60x spacing. 00:51:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is actually the same stream and you didn't change the spacing, so it would be a bit more sensible if you used the same spacing as before.


Conclusion: Rankable
I pretty much liked the map. There were just minor mistakes, but the map has enough quality to get through the ranking process. Just don't give this up and get few more mods to polish this map. Good job, have my star (when I get kd, I'll give also the second one)
Topic Starter
Famous

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
from ur m4m queue!
easy
00:15:165 (4,1) - fix blanket | There is nothing to fix.
00:30:936 (1,2) - i think this is 2 hard for an easy diff | Not sure about this.
00:34:365 (4,1) - fix blanket | Again, there is nothing to fix.
00:50:136 (3,5) - ^^ | ^
00:52:879 (1,2) - to hard for easy -_- | Still not sure.
normal
00:09:507 (2) - i don't think this overlap is acceptable I don't think so.
00:12:765 (3) - fix DS | I don't think this is really that necessary but I fixed it.
00:13:793 (5) - ^^ | Since the "streams" are faster than normal + it's way easier to play, that fine.
00:14:136 (7) - ^^ | ^
00:15:507 (2) - ^^ | ^
00:16:536 (2) - ^^ | ^
wow u have a lot of them ill stop tell you | ^
00:43:279 (1) - overlap | So?
hard-ar 8 pls | No.
00:16:536 (3) - this is not good because the slider b4 hide it | It's a hard difficutly and a hard player should be able to play this.
insane
00:54:250 (1) - make it far away? | No. Why?
GL!
I'm sorry, I'm not giving you kudosu for that because your mod wasn't really helpful at all... :c but I really appreciate your mod! Thanks though! :3
Topic Starter
Famous

Wafu wrote:


From modding queue

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Romanisation of れんちょんのドラムンベース is wrong. ちょん is not chan but chon. Thus the name of the song is Ren-chon no Drum and Bass. You can confirm it by watching the anime or it is just enough to say ちゃん = chan, because ゃ (ya) adds "a" at the and, while ょ (yo) adds "o" at the end. Additionally -chan/-tan/-kun and other name additions should be always romanised with all lower letters, thus not -Chon, but -chon. | I planned watching this anime. I checked this out and it's true. But "chan" would be okay too. Fixed the title.
  2. Add のんのんびより to source as it is an original source. Then move Non Biyori (not Non Non Biyori) to tags as it is only a romanisation. Second Non is useless, as tags are for searching and tags can be used multiple times in search without being twice in tags, so it would be just useless. | Also changed this. Thanks.
  3. Decrease volume of all timing and inherited points by 10%. Currently, because of choice of the hitsounds, it really messes up the song. Sometimes you can barely hear the song, because the snares and normal hitsounds are too loud. -10% just sounds perfectly balanced. Applies to all difficulties. | Well it really sounds way better now.
  4. Remove Japanese from tags, because the beatmap language will be set later by BN/QAT. | Changed.
  5. Usage of HP Drain is quite unbalanced. I recommend to use 4 on Normal, 6 on Hard (it really is impossible to fail at all, it doesn't drain anything on mistake because of the high count of objects) and 7,5-8 on insane. That makes it much more balanced. | Changed.


Easy


  1. 00:30:936 (1,2) - This pattern is really inappropriate for easy difficulty. This just leads to confusion of the newbies. There is too little time, but too many clicks. To keep consistency with music, yet make it easier (also there is no reason for it to be same as Normal, when it is supposed to be easier), try to use this rhythm pattern. | Changed that part. Actually I don't really see a problem here but perhaps that's just because I'm not playing easy maps... xD
  2. 00:52:879 (1,2) - Same as above, also in this place, it is harder than on Normal, what really doesn't make sense. | [/color]
  3. 00:20:993 (4) - This is also not really good idea. BPM itself does make the map harder, thus using 1/4 is really a killer. Just replace it with a note on 00:20:993 and it should fit to the song and you will avoid all the trouble. | [/color]
  4. 00:42:936 (4) - Same as above | ^
Fine difficulty, just the 1/4 gaps would be really annoying for newbies, without them, I have no problem to say it is great. | Thank you very much! :D


Insane


  1. 00:30:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little idea there. You used higher spacing on streams when there were more snares and so on, but on these deep drums, you mostly used 0.60x spacing. 00:51:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is actually the same stream and you didn't change the spacing, so it would be a bit more sensible if you used the same spacing as before. | Fixed stream spacing.


Conclusion: Rankable | \°3°/
I pretty much liked the map. There were just minor mistakes, but the map has enough quality to get through the ranking process. Just don't give this up and get few more mods to polish this map. Good job, have my star (when I get kd, I'll give also the second one) | Thank you very much! THAT'S a mod! Of course you'll get your kudosu! :D
Shiny-
From my queue~
oh my god I am in love with this song this is godly holy shit
11/10 thighhigh pic btw :]

[General]
-I'm not sure about the Source. It's a remix of something Renge sings directly from the show, but I don't think it's based off anything from the Non Non Biyori OST. I think Kongou Pak is good evidence to keep the source (voice remix, not OST), but it seems a bit weird
-Add Miyauchi Renge to tags?
-A bit strange how the offset starts where there's no music. It doesn't really matter, just pointing it out
-Oh yeah, fix title's capitalization to "Ren-chon" with a lowercase C (explained in Wafu's mod)

[Easy]
My only complaint was the repeat 1/2 sliders. But apparently you already fixed them.
I see no bad flow or notable overlap issues. Beautiful map, solid diff!

[Normal]
I have nothing to bitch about here :[

[Hard]
00:16:536 (3) - put this all the way in the slider track to make it look cleaner
00:51:507 (1,2) - having two 1/1 sliders here that far away feels really inappropriate since the tempo is still pretty fast

[Insane]
00:32:650 (2,3) - this stack feels weird since it's the only stack like it in the whole map. i think putting the 2 on the end of the 4 will play better
00:29:736 (2,3,4,1) - Ctrl+G the 2, 3, and 4 and I feel like it plays a lot better http://puu.sh/gSa9f.jpg
00:43:022 (7) - this note is unnecessary, there's no drum beat on that tick. removing it would make the triple into the 1 feel stronger, but it's up to you.
00:48:765 (1) - I feel like you could lower the volume starting here and gradually raise it throughout the stream. It would add a pretty nice effect
00:53:565 (3,4,5,6,7) - stacking this stream feels out of place

Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful enough. This is what you get for giving me an already good map >:(
~Star~

RANK THIS NOW PLS
Topic Starter
Famous

[ Way ] wrote:

From my queue~
oh my god I am in love with this song this is godly holy shit | :D
11/10 thighhigh pic btw :] | ;)

[General]
-I'm not sure about the Source. It's a remix of something Renge sings directly from the show, but I don't think it's based off anything from the Non Non Biyori OST. I think Kongou Pak is good evidence to keep the source (voice remix, not OST), but it seems a bit weird | I understand what you mean, but that's fine, because Asterisk (already named as artist) made a song with the voices from Non Non Niyori.
-Add Miyauchi Renge to tags? | Added.
-A bit strange how the offset starts where there's no music. It doesn't really matter, just pointing it out | Just like you said, that doesn't matter at all as long as the timing is right.
-Oh yeah, fix title's capitalization to "Ren-chon" with a lowercase C (explained in Wafu's mod) | -3- fixed.

[Easy]
My only complaint was the repeat 1/2 sliders. But apparently you already fixed them. | Hue.
I see no bad flow or notable overlap issues. Beautiful map, solid diff! | Thanks! :3

[Normal]
I have nothing to bitch about here :[ | That's actually a good thing, isn't it?

[Hard]
00:16:536 (3) - put this all the way in the slider track to make it look cleaner | Changed.
00:51:507 (1,2) - having two 1/1 sliders here that far away feels really inappropriate since the tempo is still pretty fast | I guess that's fine like that.

[Insane]
00:32:650 (2,3) - this stack feels weird since it's the only stack like it in the whole map. i think putting the 2 on the end of the 4 will play better | Moved 00:32:650 (2) to x:184 ; y:220
00:29:736 (2,3,4,1) - Ctrl+G the 2, 3, and 4 and I feel like it plays a lot better http://puu.sh/gSa9f.jpg | I don't think so. I leave it like that.
00:43:022 (7) - this note is unnecessary, there's no drum beat on that tick. removing it would make the triple into the 1 feel stronger, but it's up to you. | Changed.
00:48:765 (1) - I feel like you could lower the volume starting here and gradually raise it throughout the stream. It would add a pretty nice effect | Hm... I'm not sure about it.
00:53:565 (3,4,5,6,7) - stacking this stream feels out of place | Not to me.

Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful enough. This is what you get for giving me an already good map >:( | It was helpful. x)
~Star~ | Thank you very much! <3

RANK THIS NOW PLS | I WILL!!!
Thanks for your mod!~ :3
eiri-
[I feel like I'm being rude here, since most of the mods are so short. ;; I'm sorry! >.<]

Easy~

(You might consider making the cs to maybe 2.5, but

that's just me. Since it's an easy.)

00:08:993 (1)- Would sound better as a reverse slider

then a circle at 00:10:022 -
Same for 00:11:736 (3) circle at 00:12:765
Extend 00:14:479 (3) - till 00:15:507 -
00:22:707 (3)- extend till 00:23:393 then circle at

00:23:735 -
00:25:450 - (3) extend till 00:26:136 - then circle at

00:26:479 -
00:39:164 (3) extend till 00:39:850 - circle at

00:40:193 -

Normal~

00:19:965 (1,2,3) - Sounds better as a slider since it's a held out note.
00:22:707 (3) - Change to reverse slider
00:25:450 (3,4,5) - Change to slider
00:30:936 (3) -Move a little bit from 00:31:622 (4) - and don't have it reverse twice.
00:53:565 (4) - Have it reverse twice.

Hard~

Add a circle at 00:24:679 -
Add a circle at 00:33:593 -
Add a circle at 00:36:679 - , 00:36:850 - , and 00:37:022 - Or consider making it different sliders. Because it sounds too spaced out from how the kiai started.
Same at 00:45:079 - and 00:45:250 -
IMO overall past 00:35:050 - when you start using longer sliders it sounds weird from how the map was initially started. (Shorter sliders and more circles) You may want to consider Changing it to make the flow continuous.

Insane~

Add a circle at 00:23:307 - and 00:23:479 -
(I don't really have any problems with this difficulty besides some long sliders at some parts, but it's nothing major for me to ask you to fix.)
Reiki
Modding from queue since I'm reeealy bored right now, and a mod might refresh me a bit.
This song tho, xD

[Overview]

  1. Kinda minor, but you should remove "Anime" from tags, as it's considered as a genre and that will be defined later when map gets qualified/ranked, so players will be able to find map from that. If you don't believe me, you could check most of ranked maps' genres, and you'll see Anime in them (since most ranked maps come from anime :P).
  2. Sweet clap. Nothing more to complain about.

[Easy]

  1. 00:15:850 (1) - Maybe curve the near-end part of this slider for, Idk, a bit better flow? Possible result here (shape is okay IMO)
  2. 00:30:936 (1,2) - Seems new Easies will become Normals eventually, if they continue mapping 1/1 and also add 1/2 sliders like this. *ahem* What I meant was: 1/2 sliders are a little too fast for beginners since they are still learning how to click and hold sliders, and finding a fast slider with a reverse will confuse them on most situations (especially if they haven't even started to play lots of maps yet). So, I suggest to turn those things into 1/1 sliders (or circles, w/e) instead, to make it a bit more beginner-friendly. Same goes to 00:52:879 (1,2) - close to the end.
  3. Nice Easy diff. Simple enough (except for ^) and cool flow-wise.

[Normal]

  1. Spacing of all your 1/2 notes is inconsistent to the rest of the map's Distance Snapping. Mentioning it since you should make it constant (and 1/2 notes are still close to each other to be playable, so there isn't any much issue for that). I'm sure you know it's important to use the DS on easier diffs by now. Saying this I save myself from mentioning every note individually, since they are everywhere.
  2. 00:19:279 (5,1) - I don't know if you're trying to blanket here (and most likely, you're doing it), but try to fix it.
  3. 00:21:336 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:24:079 (1,2) - Flow here's kinda messed up, since slider goes down and the other one is upside (with an ascending trajectory, messing flow even more). I think something like this flows a little better.
  5. 00:30:936 (3,4) - Using multiple reverses is kinda hard to play, since players might not know when slider will stop reversing (since it's so short ;w;), so you should change this somehow. Same for 00:52:879 (3) -
  6. Nice diff, but multiple reverses aren't really good for Easy and Normal diffs IMO. ;w;

[Hard]

  1. 00:26:822 (1,1,1,1) - Alright... those four sliders are so awfully long, so it's a bit boring to just keep them pressed. You could make them more interesting. I thought of something that maybe you can do instead of those sliders for mere fun; but it's up to you if you decide to apply it or not (and you might be able to do interesting arrangements, so it isn't a loss :D). Well, I came in mind with those things (screenshot 1 and 2 cover the area of first and second slider, respectively; while screenshot 3 covers the area of last two sliders):
  2. Curiously, it doesn't feel right for me to wait for the sliders ^ to finish, but it does feel okay for 00:48:765 (1,1) - Weird. o.o
  3. 00:53:565 (5,1) - I don't really feel confortable playing those things, since song doesn't suggest a stack. A jump would fit better IMO, since last beat is strong.
  4. Nice diff. I liked it, except for the only things I mentioned since they make diff so boring. o.o

Insane is okay in my view, but you should unstack 00:53:565 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - the last circle from the stream, since I think a jump fits more (and some people can't even control their streaming and might end hitting last note earlier hi myself ;w;). But I think the jump fits since it's a strong beat, and it would be fun, since stacking on the end is just too anti-climatic.

Map is okay overall. Just some little issues here and there, but kinda minor.
Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Famous

Sukida Ahri wrote:

[I feel like I'm being rude here, since most of the mods are so short. ;; I'm sorry! >.<]

Easy~

(You might consider making the cs to maybe 2.5, but | CS 3 is okay.

that's just me. Since it's an easy.)

00:08:993 (1)- Would sound better as a reverse slider | I'm not sure about that...

then a circle at 00:10:022 -
Same for 00:11:736 (3) circle at 00:12:765
Extend 00:14:479 (3) - till 00:15:507 - | But this is fine.
00:22:707 (3)- extend till 00:23:393 then circle at

00:23:735 -
00:25:450 - (3) extend till 00:26:136 - then circle at

00:26:479 -
00:39:164 (3) extend till 00:39:850 - circle at

00:40:193 -

Normal~

00:19:965 (1,2,3) - Sounds better as a slider since it's a held out note. | Replaced circles to slider.
00:22:707 (3) - Change to reverse slider | This doesn't sound right to me.
00:25:450 (3,4,5) - Change to slider | Why? :c
00:30:936 (3) -Move a little bit from 00:31:622 (4) - and don't have it reverse twice. | That's fine.
00:53:565 (4) - Have it reverse twice. | No, because there's no drum between 00:53:565 (4,1).

Hard~

Add a circle at 00:24:679 - | This'll destroy the keep of adding triples at this difficutly. And this also doesn't really fit imo.
Add a circle at 00:33:593 -
Add a circle at 00:36:679 - , 00:36:850 - , and 00:37:022 - Or consider making it different sliders. Because it sounds too spaced out from how the kiai started.
Same at 00:45:079 - and 00:45:250 -
IMO overall past 00:35:050 - when you start using longer sliders it sounds weird from how the map was initially started. (Shorter sliders and more circles) You may want to consider Changing it to make the flow continuous. | If you listen closely, you'll hear the stretched notes there. This is also fine.

Insane~

Add a circle at 00:23:307 - and 00:23:479 - | But there's no stream. D:
(I don't really have any problems with this difficulty besides some long sliders at some parts, but it's nothing major for me to ask you to fix.)

LixRei wrote:

Modding from queue since I'm reeealy bored right now, and a mod might refresh me a bit.
This song tho, xD | xD

[Overview]

  1. Kinda minor, but you should remove "Anime" from tags, as it's considered as a genre and that will be defined later when map gets qualified/ranked, so players will be able to find map from that. If you don't believe me, you could check most of ranked maps' genres, and you'll see Anime in them (since most ranked maps come from anime :P). | I believe you, but people are able to change tags at ranked though. But I have no problem to remove it now. :3
  2. Sweet clap. Nothing more to complain about. | Lol, thanks. xD

[Easy]

  1. 00:15:850 (1) - Maybe curve the near-end part of this slider for, Idk, a bit better flow? Possible result here (shape is okay IMO) | Changed.
  2. 00:30:936 (1,2) - Seems new Easies will become Normals eventually, if they continue mapping 1/1 and also add 1/2 sliders like this. *ahem* What I meant was: 1/2 sliders are a little too fast for beginners since they are still learning how to click and hold sliders, and finding a fast slider with a reverse will confuse them on most situations (especially if they haven't even started to play lots of maps yet). So, I suggest to turn those things into 1/1 sliders (or circles, w/e) instead, to make it a bit more beginner-friendly. Same goes to 00:52:879 (1,2) - close to the end. | When I was a beginner, I held the god damn key at reversed sliders as long as the "300" popped out. And I don't think this is a big problem at all. Of course I'll change it if more people complain about it.
  3. Nice Easy diff. Simple enough (except for ^) and cool flow-wise. | Thank you~

[Normal]

  1. Spacing of all your 1/2 notes is inconsistent to the rest of the map's Distance Snapping. Mentioning it since you should make it constant (and 1/2 notes are still close to each other to be playable, so there isn't any much issue for that). I'm sure you know it's important to use the DS on easier diffs by now. Saying this I save myself from mentioning every note individually, since they are everywhere. | *sigh* how many times I get this mod? Alright: Since the "streams" at normal are easier to play with a lower spacing this doesn't really matter. I know many ranked maps did the same. As far as I know this is not a unrankable issue. I'll leave it like that until BN's want me to fix it.
  2. 00:19:279 (5,1) - I don't know if you're trying to blanket here (and most likely, you're doing it), but try to fix it. | Already fixed from previous mod.
  3. 00:21:336 (1,2) - ^ | Okay I kinda messed up with this blanket. xD
  4. 00:24:079 (1,2) - Flow here's kinda messed up, since slider goes down and the other one is upside (with an ascending trajectory, messing flow even more). I think something like this flows a little better. | Fixed flow.
  5. 00:30:936 (3,4) - Using multiple reverses is kinda hard to play, since players might not know when slider will stop reversing (since it's so short ;w;), so you should change this somehow. Same for 00:52:879 (3) - | Leave it like that until another guy have a solution for it since it looks fine to me.
  6. Nice diff, but multiple reverses aren't really good for Easy and Normal diffs IMO. ;w; | :P

[Hard]

  1. 00:26:822 (1,1,1,1) - Alright... those four sliders are so awfully long, so it's a bit boring to just keep them pressed. You could make them more interesting. I thought of something that maybe you can do instead of those sliders for mere fun; but it's up to you if you decide to apply it or not (and you might be able to do interesting arrangements, so it isn't a loss :D). Well, I came in mind with those things (screenshot 1 and 2 cover the area of first and second slider, respectively; while screenshot 3 covers the area of last two sliders):
  2. Curiously, it doesn't feel right for me to wait for the sliders ^ to finish, but it does feel okay for 00:48:765 (1,1) - Weird. o.o
  3. 00:53:565 (5,1) - I don't really feel confortable playing those things, since song doesn't suggest a stack. A jump would fit better IMO, since last beat is strong.
  4. Nice diff. I liked it, except for the only things I mentioned since they make diff so boring. o.o
| Changed everything!

Insane is okay in my view, but you should unstack 00:53:565 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - the last circle from the stream, since I think a jump fits more (and some people can't even control their streaming and might end hitting last note earlier hi myself ;w;). But I think the jump fits since it's a strong beat, and it would be fun, since stacking on the end is just too anti-climatic. | That's the fun of the last stacking circle. Since it's Insane streams also should be challenging. Still changed the end stream.

Map is okay overall. Just some little issues here and there, but kinda minor.
Good luck! :D
Thanks you both for your mod! o/
Saut
hey babe


  • [General]
  1. ich bin nicht sicher ob die kiai wirklich sooo notwendig ist, da es der gleiche beat ist und der vocal nur mit dieser melodie ersetzt wird und ich nicht wirklich denke dass das der Hochpunkt des songs ist .-. Hätte hier ne 1/4 beat kiai eingebaut - von 00:32:307 - 00:32:393 boom (außerdem ist dann nicht mehr die halbe map kiai hehe)
  2. warum so ein starker grün ton als vierte Farbe? Ist zwar nicht sonderlich gravierend, könntest aber ein heller grün ton nehmen, der ein wenig mehr zum boden des bg passt und dann color 2 und 3 tauschen, damit keine verwirrung entsteht ich hab das gras entdeckt, als ich ne farbpalette machen wollte - nice saut
  3. zum einen ist dein bg etwas zu klein (ich weiß ist nicht 100% nötig aber da es 1920x1080p versionen gibt wäre es doch ziemlich niceeee) und zum anderen ist am rand jeweils links und rechts ein kleiner balken der mich in den wahsinn treibt pzpzpzpz
  4. Du Stratege könntest kyubey fragen ob er das hier ranken möchte https://osu.ppy.sh/b/651070, falls nicht nimm die diff ins set auf die ist gut und macht sich schön als extra im set hehe
  5. ich wusste nicht dass du so ordentlich mappen kannst (jetzt weiß ich wen ich frage wenn ich kein bock hab ne leichte diff zu mappen hue) gg

  • [Easypeasy]
  1. 00:19:965 (3,4) - gefährlicher move hier in nem 175bpm song nach 4 takten zu stacken (in ner easy zumindest) - also fraglich aber ich würds nich riskieren
  2. 00:30:936 (1,2) - daraus lieber zwei 1/1 slider machen, vergiss nicht wir mappen für die größten noobs hier
  3. 00:41:907 (3,4) - ^^
  4. 00:43:279 (1,4) - argh - einfach ein wenig runter (und rotieren damits noch ein blanket ist) damit nervensägen wie ich nicht rummeckern können
  5. 00:52:879 (1,2) - wie oben, vllt kann man es hier lassen "das große finale" aber ich hätte daraus auch einfach zwei 1/1 gemacht
  6. 00:52:879 (1) - nc weg und den nc hier hin hauen 00:51:507 (5) , falls du bei deinem 8takt nc rhythmus bleiben willst, was ich dir auch empfehle (ansonsten würde der letzte nc hier 00:54:250 (1) - auch nicht so viel sinn machen)
  7. 00:54:250 (1) - sampleset soft und den soft-hitfinish verweden, passt imo viel besser hier da kein boom boom da ist
  8. 00:18:593 (1,2) - blanket kann hier ein wenig verbessert werden

  • [normalo]
  1. 00:09:336 - 00:10:022 - höre keine claps hier in der musik wieso setzt du welche hue - 00:09:507 - hier hör ich ein clap aber du nicht D:
  2. gibt es einen grund wieso du bei 1/2 wechsel 0.8 ds wählst und bei 1/1 1.0? .-. Aber da du es konsequent gemacht hast denke ich dass es inordnung ist (frag mal bei den bns und qats nach)
  3. 00:14:479 (1,1) - mach die parallel wenn du sweg hast -
  4. 00:16:536 (2,2) - argh aber alles andere sähe hässlich aus, lass es lieber so
  5. 00:20:993 (3,4,1) - du könntest hier 3 und 4 auch um 2 blanken, du könntest es aber auch sein lassen (so wie hier, wenn ich das richtig interpretiere 00:27:507 (2,3,1) )
  6. 00:30:936 (3,4) - ohohohoh du kleiner fuchs willst du dass die normal spieler sterben? Die 1/2 slider sind viel zu kurz um zu erkennen dass es zwei kickbacks sind und logisch erschließen werden sie es sich wohl kaum hah. Wenn du unbedingt alle 1/2 beats mappen willst könntest du sowas stattdessen amchen z.b. http://puu.sh/gY53u/c91bd6ccfa.jpg auch wenn es nervig sein wird das zu platzieren - sryyy
  7. 00:37:450 (6,7,1) - ist extremst nah an der bar dran, ich wäre hier vorsichtig, da viele auch größere bars haben. Einfach ein wenig runter damit dann bist du auf der sicheren seite.
  8. 00:37:107 (5,1) - blaaaanket improvement
  9. 00:42:250 (4,5,1) - an dieser stelle vllt ein wenig deutlicher machen indem du die 5 und 1 so platzierst:
  10. 00:43:965 (2,3) - blanket (ich liebe es mit diesen blanket punkten die mapper zu nerven)
  11. 00:52:879 (3,4) - ^^ wie bereits erwähnt, lass die Normal spieler am leben
  12. an manchen stellen ist die wahl des NC fraglich, da in der normal noch relativ wenig objekte sind würd ich auch hier ein 8takt rhythmus wählen (was du auch in der mitte irgendwo gemacht hast!) Dann kommst du durchschnittlich auf einen 8er combo was schön ist.
    Also an diesen stellen Nc's: 00:10:365 - 00:13:107 (8) - 00:15:850 - 00:18:593 - 00:21:336 - 00:24:079 - usw usw und an allen anderen stellen weggg
  13. 00:54:250 (1) - soft-hitfinish wenn du cool bist
  14. 00:52:879 (3) - ich sehe gerade dass du hier kein nc gemacht hast, in der easy aber schon :^) deswegen mach ihn in der easy weg, wie bereits erwähnt
  15. 00:26:479 (6,1) - wenn du sexappeal zeigen willst, kannst du den hier ja auch noch ein wenig krümmen, wie du das davor irgendwann schonmal gemacht hast >:^)
  16. 00:31:622 (4) - höre kein clap hier an dieser stelle .-. 00:31:965 - 00:31:793 - an diesen stellen ists okee

  • [hardcore]
  1. 00:08:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - das gleiche mit den sounds wie oben bei der normal
  2. 00:10:365 (1) - wo ist der finish sound, den du bei den der ez und normalo hattest? Der hat mir hier gefallen :^)
  3. 00:14:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - sowas hier wäre flowtechnisch noch eleganter gewesen, aber ich bemerke dass du in der hard auch konsequente ds verwendet hast (was nicht sein muss), deswegen wäre es schade dafür das ds zu brechen (aber als keiner gedanke)
    http://puu.sh/gY70d/d42a716289.jpg
  4. 00:15:165 (4,1) - das muss nicht seinnnnnn 00:15:850 (1) - rotate -8° und platzieren, reicht vollkommen (vllt noch 00:16:536 (3) - ein wenig höher damit es nicht das sliderende berührt)
  5. 00:15:850 (1) - vllt auch strg+g an dieser stelle, fühlt sich natürlicher für mich an
  6. 00:21:336 (1,3) - die kleine ecke vllt parallel zur 3 formen?
  7. 00:26:822 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - der part ist etwas boring, du könntest vllt zum abschluss aus 00:29:565 (1,2) - 4 kickbackslider machen (passt auch perfekt zu den vocals)
    ich weiß du wirst mich hassen, da du einiges rerangen musst aber ich finde es lohnt sich und variatio ist immer gutttt
  8. 00:54:079 - an dieser stelle könnte noch ein soft circle hin, ich hör da was in der musik (da du ja schon 1/4 mappst sollte der ton auch berücksichtigt werden) 00:54:079 (6) - also einfach die 6 auf den head von 4 und dann läuft das ding
  9. 00:54:250 (1) - soft-sampleset
  10. die kiai in der diff find ich ist sehr nice gemappt, deswegen will ich nicht an kleinen sachen wie, dass die 00:37:107 (4) - ein wenig hoch könnte damit sie unterm slider ist oder 00:42:422 (3,2) - der overlap hier ;)§!"EJSA - joking
  11. konsquenter 4takt nc plsss 00:17:222 (1) -
  12. 00:44:650 (5,1) - NC sollte schon bei 5 anfangen wenn du auf die musik hörst und deinem pattern folgst :^)))
  13. 00:52:879 (1) - nccc
  14. 00:47:050 (3) - die 3 ein wenig mehr nach links drehen oder alternativ die 2 ein wenig rotieren, damit die 3 genau zwischen slider end und slider head ist
  15. 00:08:993 - hier die lautstärke lieber etwas runter auf~40% weil es schon deutlich leiser ist als der dnb part des songs (das kannst du bei jeder diff machen)
  16. 00:12:250 (2,3,4,5,6) - nach nem testplay frag ich mich ob der song an dieser stelle so viele circles hintereinander her gibt, sieht schick aus aber vllt wäre ein slider da zwischen etwas angenehmer, da du nicht mal in der insane hier so eine kette hast - vllt laber ich auch bullshit wer weiß
  17. 00:13:622 (2,3,4,1) - könntest hier einwenig rumspielen und so ne schicke raute formen, kannst du aber auch sein lassen

  • [in$ane]
  1. 00:08:993 - 40% nicht vergessen und die clap sounds
  2. 00:10:022 (1,2,3,4) - falls du mir mit den clap sounds übrigens nciht zustimmen solltest und du sie so behalten möchtest könntest du hier aus dem letzten stream zwei 1/4 slider machen, da diese dann schön zu den clapsounds passen
  3. 00:11:736 (1) - strg+g spielt sich ziemlich sexy hier, aber dann solltest du vllt für 2 und 3 ne neue konstellation finden
  4. 00:14:993 (2,3,4,5) - da das deine schwierigste stufe ist könntest du extremst böse sein und sowas hier wagen
  5. 00:21:336 (1,3) - wenn schon overlap dann richtig overlap (also hälfte vom head schneiden lassen aber nicht so halbe dinger wo nur die ecke gecshnitten wird)
  6. 00:22:365 (4) - ein bisschen bisschen weiter runter für flow - wirklich nicht viel damit so ne leicht ovale bewegung entsteht
  7. 00:23:565 (4,5,6) - hier auch passend zur bewegung vllt
  8. 00:29:565 (1,2,3,4) - etwas zu unnatürlich imo, kann ma nspielen aber meeeehh
  9. 00:31:965 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - 2 könnte so platziert werden dass es ein blanket mit dem stream macht, sieht nice aus müsstest dann aber die nächsten paar objekte anpassen
  10. wenn wir schon mal bei kleinigkeiten sind 00:32:222 (9,1) - könntest hier die 9 und 1 etwas weniger krümmen, damit es zur form vom letzten tripple passt
  11. 00:34:879 (7) - slightly höher für perfektes dreieck mit 00:34:022 (1,3,7) - und die 1 dann etwas weiter nach rechts. und warum? why not
  12. 00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,1) - meh flow ist so lala und dann noch overlap (falls ich hier nichts verschoben habe lol)
  13. 00:40:022 (6,7,8,1,2) - bisschen wenig ds hier, findest du nicht? (dafür dass wir uns sogar mitten in der kiai befinden >:^) )
  14. 00:44:993 (2,3,4) - die 3 ein wenig weiter nach links damit ein gleiseitiges dreieck entsteht, spielt sich besser als so ein großer sprung zur 4 imo
  15. 00:54:079 - auch hier sollte ein circle sein imo, kannst ja sowas machen sieht ganz nett aus:
  16. 00:54:250 (1) - vergiss den softy hier nicht

sehr nette map, such dir ein paar bns die map sollte eig problemlos fluppen, falls ich noch was finde geb ich dir bescheid - viel glück


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Saut wrote:

hey babe


  • [General]
  1. ich bin nicht sicher ob die kiai wirklich sooo notwendig ist, da es der gleiche beat ist und der vocal nur mit dieser melodie ersetzt wird und ich nicht wirklich denke dass das der Hochpunkt des songs ist .-. Hätte hier ne 1/4 beat kiai eingebaut - von 00:32:307 - 00:32:393 boom (außerdem ist dann nicht mehr die halbe map kiai hehe) | Bin ich mir selbst unsicher. Ich lass das erstmal so und warte ab, was BN's zu sagen.
  2. warum so ein starker grün ton als vierte Farbe? Ist zwar nicht sonderlich gravierend, könntest aber ein heller grün ton nehmen, der ein wenig mehr zum boden des bg passt und dann color 2 und 3 tauschen, damit keine verwirrung entsteht ich hab das gras entdeckt, als ich ne farbpalette machen wollte - nice saut | Lol
  3. zum einen ist dein bg etwas zu klein (ich weiß ist nicht 100% nötig aber da es 1920x1080p versionen gibt wäre es doch ziemlich niceeee) und zum anderen ist am rand jeweils links und rechts ein kleiner balken der mich in den wahsinn treibt pzpzpzpz | Fixed. Background übernommen.
  4. Du Stratege könntest kyubey fragen ob er das hier ranken möchte https://osu.ppy.sh/b/651070, falls nicht nimm die diff ins set auf die ist gut und macht sich schön als extra im set hehe | Extra diff finde ich bei diesem Lied unnötig. Zudem gefällt mir persönlich seine map um ehrlich zu sein nicht so.
  5. ich wusste nicht dass du so ordentlich mappen kannst (jetzt weiß ich wen ich frage wenn ich kein bock hab ne leichte diff zu mappen hue) gg | :^)

  • [Easypeasy]
  1. 00:19:965 (3,4) - gefährlicher move hier in nem 175bpm song nach 4 takten zu stacken (in ner easy zumindest) - also fraglich aber ich würds nich riskieren | Ich denke nicht, dass das ein Problem darstellt, da man den circle ohne Probleme sehen kann.
  2. 00:30:936 (1,2) - daraus lieber zwei 1/1 slider machen, vergiss nicht wir mappen für die größten noobs hier | Selbst die größten noobs wissen, dass man bei einem reversed Slider nicht los lassen soll. Also denke ich, dass das ebenfalls nicht so ein großes Problem darstellen.
  3. 00:41:907 (3,4) - ^^ | ^
  4. 00:43:279 (1,4) - argh - einfach ein wenig runter (und rotieren damits noch ein blanket ist) damit nervensägen wie ich nicht rummeckern können | Wenn ich es richtig verstanden habe, sollte ich einfach die blankets fixen? Done.
  5. 00:52:879 (1,2) - wie oben, vllt kann man es hier lassen "das große finale" aber ich hätte daraus auch einfach zwei 1/1 gemacht | ^
  6. 00:52:879 (1) - nc weg und den nc hier hin hauen 00:51:507 (5) , falls du bei deinem 8takt nc rhythmus bleiben willst, was ich dir auch empfehle (ansonsten würde der letzte nc hier 00:54:250 (1) - auch nicht so viel sinn machen) | Done.
  7. 00:54:250 (1) - sampleset soft und den soft-hitfinish verweden, passt imo viel besser hier da kein boom boom da ist | Done.
  8. 00:18:593 (1,2) - blanket kann hier ein wenig verbessert werden | Das... ist eine sehr gute Idee.

  • [normalo]
  1. 00:09:336 - 00:10:022 - höre keine claps hier in der musik wieso setzt du welche hue - 00:09:507 - hier hör ich ein clap aber du nicht D: | Hab die claps in whistles abegändert.
  2. gibt es einen grund wieso du bei 1/2 wechsel 0.8 ds wählst und bei 1/1 1.0? .-. Aber da du es konsequent gemacht hast denke ich dass es inordnung ist (frag mal bei den bns und qats nach) | Das habe ich nun oft genug erklärt, wieso ich das getan habe.
  3. 00:14:479 (1,1) - mach die parallel wenn du sweg hast - | My SWAG Level is not high enough... aber ich hab's trotzdem abgeändert. xD
  4. 00:16:536 (2,2) - argh aber alles andere sähe hässlich aus, lass es lieber so | Lol.
  5. 00:20:993 (3,4,1) - du könntest hier 3 und 4 auch um 2 blanken, du könntest es aber auch sein lassen (so wie hier, wenn ich das richtig interpretiere 00:27:507 (2,3,1) ) | Ist es doch...?
  6. 00:30:936 (3,4) - ohohohoh du kleiner fuchs willst du dass die normal spieler sterben? Die 1/2 slider sind viel zu kurz um zu erkennen dass es zwei kickbacks sind und logisch erschließen werden sie es sich wohl kaum hah. Wenn du unbedingt alle 1/2 beats mappen willst könntest du sowas stattdessen amchen z.b. http://puu.sh/gY53u/c91bd6ccfa.jpg auch wenn es nervig sein wird das zu platzieren - sryyy | Das macht es nicht besser... Außerdem denke ich, dass die Normal spieler sowieso viel zu unterschätzt werden.
  7. 00:37:450 (6,7,1) - ist extremst nah an der bar dran, ich wäre hier vorsichtig, da viele auch größere bars haben. Einfach ein wenig runter damit dann bist du auf der sicheren seite. | Fixed.
  8. 00:37:107 (5,1) - blaaaanket improvement | Schon getan.
  9. 00:42:250 (4,5,1) - an dieser stelle vllt ein wenig deutlicher machen indem du die 5 und 1 so platzierst: | Done.
  10. 00:43:965 (2,3) - blanket (ich liebe es mit diesen blanket punkten die mapper zu nerven) | Done.
  11. 00:52:879 (3,4) - ^^ wie bereits erwähnt, lass die Normal spieler am leben | ^
  12. an manchen stellen ist die wahl des NC fraglich, da in der normal noch relativ wenig objekte sind würd ich auch hier ein 8takt rhythmus wählen (was du auch in der mitte irgendwo gemacht hast!) Dann kommst du durchschnittlich auf einen 8er combo was schön ist. | Hab ich. (Hoff ich zumindest xD)
    Also an diesen stellen Nc's: 00:10:365 - 00:13:107 (8) - 00:15:850 - 00:18:593 - 00:21:336 - 00:24:079 - usw usw und an allen anderen stellen weggg
  13. 00:54:250 (1) - soft-hitfinish wenn du cool bist | Bereits getan, wie in allen anderen diffs auch.
  14. 00:52:879 (3) - ich sehe gerade dass du hier kein nc gemacht hast, in der easy aber schon :^) deswegen mach ihn in der easy weg, wie bereits erwähnt | Jo.
  15. 00:26:479 (6,1) - wenn du sexappeal zeigen willst, kannst du den hier ja auch noch ein wenig krümmen, wie du das davor irgendwann schonmal gemacht hast >:^) | Done.
  16. 00:31:622 (4) - höre kein clap hier an dieser stelle .-. 00:31:965 - 00:31:793 - an diesen stellen ists okee | Heißt das jetzt, dass ich da ein Clap einfüge soll? Wenn nicht: da ist kein Clap.

  • [hardcore]
  1. 00:08:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - das gleiche mit den sounds wie oben bei der normal | Schon gemacht.
  2. 00:10:365 (1) - wo ist der finish sound, den du bei den der ez und normalo hattest? Der hat mir hier gefallen :^) | Ich darf auch mal was vergessen! T_T
  3. 00:14:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - sowas hier wäre flowtechnisch noch eleganter gewesen, aber ich bemerke dass du in der hard auch konsequente ds verwendet hast (was nicht sein muss), deswegen wäre es schade dafür das ds zu brechen (aber als keiner gedanke)
    http://puu.sh/gY70d/d42a716289.jpg
  4. 00:15:165 (4,1) - das muss nicht seinnnnnn 00:15:850 (1) - rotate -8° und platzieren, reicht vollkommen (vllt noch 00:16:536 (3) - ein wenig höher damit es nicht das sliderende berührt) | Done.
  5. 00:15:850 (1) - vllt auch strg+g an dieser stelle, fühlt sich natürlicher für mich an | Done.
  6. 00:21:336 (1,3) - die kleine ecke vllt parallel zur 3 formen? | Ich weiß nicht, was ich mir dabei gedacht habe.
  7. 00:26:822 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - der part ist etwas boring, du könntest vllt zum abschluss aus 00:29:565 (1,2) - 4 kickbackslider machen (passt auch perfekt zu den vocals) | Ich lass das erstmal so.
    ich weiß du wirst mich hassen, da du einiges rerangen musst aber ich finde es lohnt sich und variatio ist immer gutttt
  8. 00:54:079 - an dieser stelle könnte noch ein soft circle hin, ich hör da was in der musik (da du ja schon 1/4 mappst sollte der ton auch berücksichtigt werden) 00:54:079 (6) - also einfach die 6 auf den head von 4 und dann läuft das ding | Done.
  9. 00:54:250 (1) - soft-sampleset
  10. die kiai in der diff find ich ist sehr nice gemappt, deswegen will ich nicht an kleinen sachen wie, dass die 00:37:107 (4) - ein wenig hoch könnte damit sie unterm slider ist oder 00:42:422 (3,2) - der overlap hier ;)§!"EJSA - joking | Done.
  11. konsquenter 4takt nc plsss 00:17:222 (1) - | Done.
  12. 00:44:650 (5,1) - NC sollte schon bei 5 anfangen wenn du auf die musik hörst und deinem pattern folgst :^))) | Find' ich auch.
  13. 00:52:879 (1) - nccc | Done.
  14. 00:47:050 (3) - die 3 ein wenig mehr nach links drehen oder alternativ die 2 ein wenig rotieren, damit die 3 genau zwischen slider end und slider head ist | Done.
  15. 00:08:993 - hier die lautstärke lieber etwas runter auf~40% weil es schon deutlich leiser ist als der dnb part des songs (das kannst du bei jeder diff machen) | Done.
  16. 00:12:250 (2,3,4,5,6) - nach nem testplay frag ich mich ob der song an dieser stelle so viele circles hintereinander her gibt, sieht schick aus aber vllt wäre ein slider da zwischen etwas angenehmer, da du nicht mal in der insane hier so eine kette hast - vllt laber ich auch bullshit wer weiß | 00:12:765 (5,6) hab ich nun in ein Slider ersetzt.
  17. 00:13:622 (2,3,4,1) - könntest hier einwenig rumspielen und so ne schicke raute formen, kannst du aber auch sein lassen | Das lass ich lieber.

  • [in$ane]
  1. 00:08:993 - 40% nicht vergessen und die clap sounds | Schon gemacht. x)
  2. 00:10:022 (1,2,3,4) - falls du mir mit den clap sounds übrigens nciht zustimmen solltest und du sie so behalten möchtest könntest du hier aus dem letzten stream zwei 1/4 slider machen, da diese dann schön zu den clapsounds passen | Hitsounds sind schon geändert.
  3. 00:11:736 (1) - strg+g spielt sich ziemlich sexy hier, aber dann solltest du vllt für 2 und 3 ne neue konstellation finden | Done.
  4. 00:14:993 (2,3,4,5) - da das deine schwierigste stufe ist könntest du extremst böse sein und sowas hier wagen | Nein, ich finde sowas hässlich. :D
  5. 00:21:336 (1,3) - wenn schon overlap dann richtig overlap (also hälfte vom head schneiden lassen aber nicht so halbe dinger wo nur die ecke gecshnitten wird) | Done.
  6. 00:22:365 (4) - ein bisschen bisschen weiter runter für flow - wirklich nicht viel damit so ne leicht ovale bewegung entsteht | Wegem vorherigem schon erledigt.
  7. 00:23:565 (4,5,6) - hier auch passend zur bewegung vllt | Done.
  8. 00:29:565 (1,2,3,4) - etwas zu unnatürlich imo, kann ma nspielen aber meeeehh | Done.
  9. 00:31:965 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - 2 könnte so platziert werden dass es ein blanket mit dem stream macht, sieht nice aus müsstest dann aber die nächsten paar objekte anpassen | Done.
  10. wenn wir schon mal bei kleinigkeiten sind 00:32:222 (9,1) - könntest hier die 9 und 1 etwas weniger krümmen, damit es zur form vom letzten tripple passt | Ich hab dagegen nichts auszusetzen.
  11. 00:34:879 (7) - slightly höher für perfektes dreieck mit 00:34:022 (1,3,7) - und die 1 dann etwas weiter nach rechts. und warum? why not | Nicht mal ansatzweise nötig, habs aber trotzdem gemacht. xD
  12. 00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,1) - meh flow ist so lala und dann noch overlap (falls ich hier nichts verschoben habe lol) | Hab den flow etwas abegändert.
  13. 00:40:022 (6,7,8,1,2) - bisschen wenig ds hier, findest du nicht? (dafür dass wir uns sogar mitten in der kiai befinden >:^) ) | Spricht doch nichts dagegen, oder? :P
  14. 00:44:993 (2,3,4) - die 3 ein wenig weiter nach links damit ein gleiseitiges dreieck entsteht, spielt sich besser als so ein großer sprung zur 4 imo | Done.
  15. 00:54:079 - auch hier sollte ein circle sein imo, kannst ja sowas machen sieht ganz nett aus: | Circle hinzugefügt.
  16. 00:54:250 (1) - vergiss den softy hier nicht | Niemals. ^^

sehr nette map, such dir ein paar bns die map sollte eig problemlos fluppen, falls ich noch was finde geb ich dir bescheid - viel glück


modden ist nervig ;-;
Vielen dank für deinen Aufwendigen mod~ o/
Charlotte
hello~ Taiko diff done/

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