Rmdy wrote:

Hi

Easy
ar2 or 3 maybe
00:44:921 (5) - http://puu.sh/gtgqt/196391e2fe.jpg
00:55:356 (5) - little straighter
01:17:965 (5) - do it like consistent line
01:24:052 (4) - ^

Normal
00:04:052 (4,5) - consistent line too
00:32:312 (2) - rotate by -13
00:49:269 (3) - http://puu.sh/gthZp/e4cb5eb6d9.jpg
00:51:008 (5) - http://puu.sh/gti60/c8bd393260.jpg

Hard
00:17:965 - slider velocity higher (1.20 maybe)
00:44:051 (4,5) - do it like this
01:01:443 - slider velocity even higher at kiai (1.30)

I hope this little mod can help you

Chaoslitz wrote:

[notice]Kwantonese LoL

[Easy]

1. 00:01:443 (1,2,3) - 試下咁樣,follow個vocal, 00:01:878 開始 Fixed!
   
2. 00:31:878 (1,2,3,4) - 聽唔到你呢度跟咩map... Fixed!
3. 00:40:138 (1) - 試下咁樣 Fixed!
   
4. 00:43:617 (6) - note + slider instead Fixed!
   ...講真聽唔到個rhythm

[Normal]

1. 00:05:791 (6) - NC Fixed!
2. 00:06:225 (7,8) - 1/2 slider + slider Fixed!
3. 00:08:834 (11) - NC here not 00:09:704 (1) Fixed!
4. 00:10:138 (3) - 個slider搞咩 xDD Fixed!
5. 00:37:095 (5,1) - 太近 Fixed!
6. 00:46:225 (2,3) - 2.16x... xDD Fixed!
7. 00:52:312 (1) - note + slider Fixed!
8. 00:57:095 (2,3) - try this Fixed!
   
9. 00:59:704 (4,10) - NC Fixed!
10. 01:02:312 (12,13) - 太近

[Hard]

1. SV 0.8x for Hard會唔會細左d xDD Changed to 1.2
2. 00:06:225 (4,5,6,7,8) - create polygon circle please Fixed!
3. 00:13:617 (5) - slider 00:14:052完 Fixed!
4. 00:14:921 (1,2,3,4) - where is rhythm Fixed!
5. 00:44:051 (4,5) - blanket No?

好鍾意呢首ww Senya~<3
Easy-Hard ge rhythm要再改進,同埋easy normal diff keep番大概一樣de DS OK
good luck~

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:32:747 (3,4,5) - it may be difficult for players to play since this rhythm is different, try using reverse slider slider or slider + note instead Fixed , change them to reverse slider
2. 00:34:486 (3,4,5) - ^, and for all the same part ^
3. 01:03:182 (2,3,4) - triplet no needed hereFixed

good luck~

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Title:Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o (OP ver.)
TitleUnicode:色は匂へど 散りぬるを (OP ver.)
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Creator:Prophecy
Version:Walao's Lunatic
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192,248,77204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,77312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,77421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,77530,2,0,P|144:224|132:184,2,90,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,52,78182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,78399,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,78617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,78834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,52,79051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,79269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,340,79486,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,340,79595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,340,79704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,120,79921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,268,80138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,80356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,80573,2,0,P|240:120|268:200,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,81225,2,0,L|224:128,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,264,81660,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,292,81878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,264,82095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,292,82312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,264,82530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,82747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,264,82964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,83182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,136,83399,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,83617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,136,83834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,84051,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,252,84269,6,0,L|216:252,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,84704,2,0,L|324:252,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,48,85138,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,132,85356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,84,85573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,85791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,85899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,200,86008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,160,86225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,276,86443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,86660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,86769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,86878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,86986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,87095,2,0,P|168:256|180:236,1,90,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87530,12,4,93399,0:0:0:0:

examination wrote:

Sorry but my computer wasn't running well yesterday.
From my queue

[Cup]
For rhythms, I suggest you cut some length of the sliders short.
To be specific:
one example 00:03:182 (2) - This slider can be cut to 00:03:617 - 00:04:486 (Reason: 00:03:182 No any sound at this point) Fixed!!
Same problem exists throughout your whole mapset, plz correct them. Fixed!!

You can try to follow some vocals, e.g.:
00:08:182 (1) - consider this pattern here (only for rhythm, adjust the DS yourself) Fixed!!

SPOILER

01:01:008 (1) - 3 finishes must be too noisy, consider remove the later 2 finishes. Fixed!!
01:14:921 (4) - ^ Fixed!!
Same for other diffs

01:27:530 (2) - No need for a slider. A circle should be enough. Fixed!!


[Salad]
00:06:442 (2,3) - cut down the ds Fixed!!

Though it's playable, there still exists problems same as what I mentioned in Cup diff. Fixed!!

[Platter]
I really hope you can improve in the rhythms. [
e.g.:
00:40:030 and 00:40:356 - really nice points for notes, why not place them? Fixed!!
00:41:443 (1,2,3) - And this one doesn't fit the song, sounding really bad Fixed!!

For the rhythms you can find some patterns in [Walao's Lunatic], he did a good job though the flows are not fantastic.

The whole mapset (I mean std diffs and ctb diffs) still need more work~
Wish you good luck!

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, M4M

[General]

1. Unify your Kiai Times, there is no need for them to be separated. Also, Muzukashii use unified Kiais. So, make your Kiais constant between the diffs by unifying them all

[Easy]

1. 00:56:660 (1,2) - You should blanket here, and maybe rotate 00:57:965 (2) so it fits the blanket

[Normal]

1. Please check your spacing. Nothing is properly spaced. It's moslty 1.50x, but you often have 1.80x or 1.70x for no reason
2. Also, lots of the blankets are poorly done, and few stacks are good, please check that.
3. 00:07:530 (4,5) - That jump is too hard for a Normal or did you mean to put 00:07:747 (5) at 00:07:965 ?
4. 00:31:878 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed!
5. 00:33:182 (3,1) - Stack them Fixed!
6. 00:44:921 (6) - Move it at 00:44:486 (6) Fixed!
7. 00:51:008 (5,6) - Blanket Fixed!
8. 00:52:747 (1) - Blanket with 00:51:008 (5) 's tail Fixed!
9. 00:53:617 (2) - Stack with 00:51:008 (5) 's tail Fixed!
10. 00:54:052 (3,4) - Blanket Fixed!
11. 00:57:964 (3,1) - Improve the blanket Fixed!
12. 01:01:008 (5) - Add NC and remove NC on 01:01:443 (1) Fixed!

[Kantan]

1. Please unify the hitsounds. Only use claps for the k, and not whistles. Fixed!
2. 00:06:660 (8) - k Fixed!
3. 00:14:052 (17) - k Fixed!
4. 00:19:704 (3) - k Fixed!
5. 00:22:747 (7,8) - ctrl+g Fixed!
6. 01:10:138 (12) - k Fixed!
7. 01:11:443 (13,14) - ctrl+g Fixed!

[Futsuu]

1. 00:46:008 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - I don't like that Red Ticks pattern. It feels awkward. You should put the notes on the white ticks, imo
2. 00:45:791 (55,56,57) - Maybe make a kkd starting at 00:45:791 (55) and ending at 00:46:225

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:573 (24) - K Fixed!

Nothing to say about the Oni

Good luck for rank, and unify that Kiais !

EdamaMe411 wrote:

Hi~! m4m thank you!
Sorry I can taiko mod only

General

No problem~

Kantan

00:21:878 - add　''k''......order to unify the before the beat
00:22:747 (7) - delete......^same reason
00:23:182 (8) - change ''d''......^ same reason

Futsuu

No problem!

Muzukashii

00:20:791 (48) - delete....Because it is early in the song and a little note,please giving rest note
00:47:747 - 00:48:182 - add''k''......match better for your map~

Oni

00:02:312 (4) - delete,,,sound extra note (this point no music sound )

High quality taiko map!
Good luck

All Fixed! Thanks for your modding and support D

JudgeTheDude wrote:

[Futsuu]

1. 00:46:008 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - I don't like that Red Ticks pattern. It feels awkward. You should put the notes on the white ticks, imo I did this because, well, listen to the background. It's too complicated to do exactly what the background plays in a Futsuu, but it very closely follows an offbeat rhythm. I see where you're coming from, though.
2. 00:45:791 (55,56,57) - Maybe make a kkd starting at 00:45:791 (55) and ending at 00:46:225 Sure

EdamaMe411 wrote:

Futsuu

No problem! <3

rew0825 wrote:

[ Intelli's Futsuu]

change HP,OD to 4 all
change slider velocity to 1.40 , it's not fast bpm Sure

1. 00:03:182 (3) - change to k , consistency on kantan Sure
2. 00:08:617 (11) - move to 00:08:399 , will look be better Sure, even though it kinda is hard for a Futsuu
3. 00:10:356 (13) - move to 00:10:138 , ^ That's right next to a drumroll, that'll be too hard for Futsuu
4. 00:20:138 (6) - move to 00:21:008 , for some break on 00:20:138 I think mine sounds better
5. 00:21:878 (9) - Delete , for some break Same as before, it sounds broken up and disconnected
6. 00:24:051 (13) - change to k or D , look high sound Sure
7. 00:24:486 (14) - Delete , for some break Listening to the background, there is a musical build there, putting a space in the middle of a build ruins the effect
8. 00:24:921 (14) - change to d , look low sound Again, musical build thing
9. 00:27:312 (18,19) - Delete and add note k on 00:27:530 - again, it sounds broken, and disconnected this way. Also probably too hard for a futsuu, too(4 1/4s leading into a 1/2 run)
10. 00:28:399 (20) - change to D , before 00:28:399 (20) - is k k and end K it's look some hard Sure
11. 00:28:834 (21) - Delete for some break Sure
12. 00:30:573 (24) - Delete ^ Musical build thing again (sorry ;-;)
13. 00:30:138 (23,25) - Delete finish , it's unnecessary 23 Sure 25, though, is at the peak of a crescendo that instantly dives down into a soft section. It should be K to stay consistent with the music
14. 00:33:399 (28,31) - Delete , 00:31:878 to 00:45:791 look not want a hard
15. 00:40:356 (37,40) - Delete ^ I'm confused, do you want me to delete all that? If so, probably not the best idea, considering it's a 1:30s song and thats 15s of it
16. 00:40:573 (37) - change to d , low sound 1/4 dd doesn't belong in Futsuu, and it raises in pitch either way
17. 00:45:791 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - wtf this you can use this , you can use any color) Sure
18. 00:54:921 (61) - Delete , for some break Sure
19. 00:55:356 (61,63) - ctrl+g , look (61) is high sound that (63) Fixed?
20. 01:03:182 (77,79) - change (77) to d , change (79) change to k or D Sure
21. 01:03:617 (78) - Delete , for some break I really don't think that that's necessary
22. 01:04:921 (79,81,83) - Delete finish , it's unnecessary Sure
23. 01:10:138 (88,89) - Delete finish , ^ Sure
24. 01:17:530 (102) - Delete , some break I think it fits nicely as a setup for the finish note
25. 01:21:878 (107,109,110) - Delete finish , it's unnecessary Sure on the last one, but It sounds bland with the other 2 gone
26. 01:27:964 (117,118,1) - same kantan

Sure

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from PM mod request , M4M

[ Collab Kantan]

change HP to 4 , OD to 3 Fixed!
change slider velocity to 1.40 , it's not fast bpm Fixed!

1. 00:08:399 (10,11) - ctrl+g , follow melody Fixed!
2. 00:21:878 (7) - move to 00:22:312 , will be better Fixed!
3. 00:27:530 (12,13,14) - change to k d k , on (12) look high sound Fixed!
4. 00:38:834 (27) - change to d , look low sound Fixed!
5. 00:43:182 (33) - Delete , some break Fixed!
6. 01:03:182 (3,4) - ctrl+g , (4) high sound than (3) Fixed!
7. 01:09:704 (11) - change to d , follow melody Fixed!
8. 01:17:964 (23,24,25) - change to k k d , (23) look high sound
9. 01:21:443 (28) - change to k , look high sound Fixed!
10. 01:27:964 (37,38) - Delete it and move 01:28:508 (1) - to 01:27:638 No.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:747 (4,5,6,7,8) - Delete (4) and change (5,6,7,8) to dk dk , look will better Fixed!
2. 00:06:225 (11,12,13,14,15) - change to kkddk , look will better Fixed!
3. 00:08:182 (16,17,18,19) - change to kdkD Fixed!
4. 00:14:052 (29,30,31,32,33) - Delete it all and change to spinner start on 00:14:052 to 00:17:530 , for same other diff Fixed!
5. 00:18:182 (2,8) - Delete , 00:17:965 to 00:20:573 so long 2/1 Fixed!
6. ^ if accept 00:18:399 (2,3,4,5,6) - change to kkddk and 00:19:704 (7,8,9,10,11) - change to Ddkd Fixed!k , look will better
7. 00:22:530 (18) - Delete , look long 2/1 note Fixed!
8. 00:24:051 (23) - change to kFixed!
9. 00:24:269 (24) - Delete , look long 2/1 noteFixed!
10. 00:29:486 (38) - Delete ^Fixed!
11. 00:29:704 (38,39) - change to k all , look high soundFixed!
12. 00:32:312 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - change note to same 00:34:269 (8,9,10,11,12) , for consistencyFixed!
13. 00:41:443 (23,24,25,26,27) - ^ 00:39:704 (19,20,21,22) , for consistencyFixed!
14. 00:42:530 (27) - Delete , for some easy Fixed!
15. 00:44:486 (31) - Delete , for some breakFixed!
16. 00:45:791 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - how about to change this for better sound (you can use any color)Fixed!
17. 00:47:747 (40) - Delete , for some breakFixed!
18. 01:01:008 - move green line to 01:01:443 and Delete 01:01:008 (74,75) , some break for start kiaiFixed!
19. 01:01:660 (75,81) - Delete , look long 2/1 Fixed!
20. 01:04:051 (82) - change to k , high soundFixed!
21. 01:07:312 (92) - move to 01:07:530 and change to k , for better soundFixed!
22. 01:08:617 (97) - Delete , look long 2/1Fixed!
23. 01:09:486 (100) - Delete , some breakFixed!
24. 01:17:312 (124) - Delete , ^Fixed!
25. 01:17:964 (125) - change to k , high soundFixed!
26. 01:20:791 (135) - Delete , look long 2/1Fixed!
27. 01:21:660 (138) - Delete , ^Fixed!
28. 01:22:964 (143) - Delete , ^Fixed!
29. 01:24:269 (148,150) - Delete , ^Fixed!
    
    in Muzukashii you can use 4/1 note (ddd , kkk only)

Good luck

Thanks~ I will mod your map later

1. 01:17:964 remove maybe ? To follow vocal.
2. 01:21:443 ^

1. 01:22:312 why no finisher here ?

1. 00:47:312 this finisher works better with the following note.

1. 00:36:008 this note is weird (?) Maybe put to 00:36:225 or anywhere
2. 01:11:008 remove for consistency. Since you didn't put at 01:09:269

mliencheng wrote:

Short mod, request from forum queue


[ Collab Kantan]

1. 01:17:964 remove maybe ? To follow vocal. Fixed!
2. 01:21:443 ^

Fixed!


[ Intelli's Futsuu]

1. 01:22:312 why no finisher here ?

Fixed!


[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:47:312 this finisher works better with the following note.

Fixed!


[ WE's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:36:008 this note is weird (?) Maybe put to 00:36:225 or anywhere
2. 01:11:008 remove for consistency. Since you didn't put at 01:09:269

MangakaMoka wrote:

Some tips

General

1.Use this as BG.
Sure. Thanks you Moka ~
Reasons:
-uses the TH10 MoF AUTUMN theme
-contains stage boss Nitori. Old bg is about Sanae, and this theme is not Sanae's.

2. First timing point: Offset: 144, BPM: 138
No. Checked By QAT

MOD - Lunatic

!!!SUGGESTIONS IN MATTER OF PATTERN/RHYTHM !!!

Ill attach an osu data as a re-work to give u a preview of the modded map (wont fix the hitsounds though)

00:07:095 (5) - move the slider by moving the slider points. Will look like this:

first one: x = 396, y = 144
second one: x = 352, y = 112
third one: x = 304, y = 108

00:11:878 (1,2) - move to x = 156, y = 268 for flow from (2) to (3)

00:21:334 - Add a circle and use it with 00:21:225 (2) to make it a triple with the slider.

00:23:834 (2) - 00:24:051 (3) - take these two together as a triple instead of 00:24:051 (3,4,5)

00:27:747 (1,2,3,4) - Renew the square (Crtl+D) - Distance snap: 1,1x, Offset angle: 5°
Then move the whole square so that the first square corner has the coordinates x = 76, y = 272

00:30:138 (5) - let the new combo start on this slider and remove it on 00:30:573 (1)

00:35:356 (4,5,6,1) - Rhythmic idea: Switch rhythm pattern: first the single circle, then the triplets

00:36:986 - insert object for rhythm

00:37:095 (6) - Make this slider longer so the start, return and end point land on a white tick (and remove 00:37:964 (7))

00:41:225 - one object below slider end. Creates beat and a nice jump

00:42:747 (3) - Make it shorter and let it repeat once.

00:45:682 - would be nice if there was an object which connects both sliders.

00:47:530 (7) - shorten - ends on white tick

00:48:182 - 00:48:399 - two circles before the slider to give it rhythm

00:51:769 - object maybe?

00:52:747 (1,2,3) - let it start at 00:52:530 and make the slider repeat

00:55:138 (10,1,2,3) - First the triplet with the slider, then slider repeat

00:58:834 (9) - make the slider longer (til white tick) --> Change SV?

01:04:704 (2) - let triple start here and stack the circle and slider below it. Create a jumping part by 01:05:356 (5) under 01:05:791 (1) and 01:05:573 (6) under 01:04:921 (4)

01:11:225 - triple, single, slider

01:15:356 - delete the triple, make it a slider with repeat

01:16:008 - triple. Stack under 01:16:225 (1)

Sample of modded Lunatic

MangakaMoka wrote:

Some more generals that I didnt notice before (sry >.<)
1. missing tags (insert pls):
Fuujinroku Mountain of Faith The Gensokyo The Gods Loved kamasetora Even the Blossoming Flowers Will Eventually Scatter Reitaisai SP2 Nitori Kawashiro

MangakaMoka wrote:

Some tips

MOD - Lunatic

!!!SUGGESTIONS IN MATTER OF PATTERN/RHYTHM !!!

Ill attach an osu data as a re-work to give u a preview of the modded map (wont fix the hitsounds though)

00:07:095 (5) - move the slider by moving the slider points. Will look like this:

first one: x = 396, y = 144
second one: x = 352, y = 112
third one: x = 304, y = 108 I cant really get what u mean by this one? is it the slider not blanket enough or what? at least tell me the reason plz

00:11:878 (1,2) - move to x = 156, y = 268 for flow from (2) to (3) Fixed but with different style

00:21:334 - Add a circle and use it with 00:21:225 (2) to make it a triple with the slider. Fixed

00:23:834 (2) - 00:24:051 (3) - take these two together as a triple instead of 00:24:051 (3,4,5) Fixed

00:27:747 (1,2,3,4) - Renew the square (Crtl+D) - Distance snap: 1,1x, Offset angle: 5°
Then move the whole square so that the first square corner has the coordinates x = 76, y = 272 Make it a square but a little different style

00:30:138 (5) - let the new combo start on this slider and remove it on 00:30:573 (1) Fixed

00:35:356 (4,5,6,1) - Rhythmic idea: Switch rhythm pattern: first the single circle, then the triplets Nope..will leave it like that..

00:36:986 - insert object for rhythm fixed

00:37:095 (6) - Make this slider longer so the start, return and end point land on a white tick (and remove 00:37:964 (7)) fixed

00:41:225 - one object below slider end. Creates beat and a nice jump fixed

00:42:747 (3) - Make it shorter and let it repeat once. nope

00:45:682 - would be nice if there was an object which connects both sliders. fixed

00:47:530 (7) - shorten - ends on white tick fixed

00:48:182 - 00:48:399 - two circles before the slider to give it rhythm added a circle only..It feels better that way

00:51:769 - object maybe? fixed

00:52:747 (1,2,3) - let it start at 00:52:530 and make the slider repeat fixed

00:55:138 (10,1,2,3) - First the triplet with the slider, then slider repeat nope..but I have change something here

00:58:834 (9) - make the slider longer (til white tick) --> Change SV? fixed

01:04:704 (2) - let triple start here and stack the circle and slider below it. Create a jumping part by 01:05:356 (5) under 01:05:791 (1) and 01:05:573 (6) under 01:04:921 (4) fixed a little thing here..the triplets..

01:11:225 - triple, single, slider fixed

01:15:356 - delete the triple, make it a slider with repeat fixed

01:16:008 - triple. Stack under 01:16:225 (1) fixed

Sample of modded Lunatic

game rock wrote:

Hi, from Game's Queue~

Sorry for the delay..

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Kantan]

00:54:051 - Change to k for dk kd. Fixed
01:14:051 - Change to d for the pattern.Sure!
01:15:356 - Change to K for the rhythm in this part. Sure!
01:16:660 - Change to k and here 01:17:095 - Change to d. Sure!

[Muzukashii]

00:24:486 - Change to k and here 00:24:921 - Change to D. Sure!
00:34:269 - Change to k and here 00:34:486 - Change to d. Sure!
00:34:812 - Change to k. Sure!
00:35:356 - Change to k for the pattern en this part. No, Fixed Already
01:15:356 - Chnage to D for the big song in this part. Sure!
01:26:660 - Change to D. Sure!
01:27:530 - Change to K. Sure!



Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has helped you :3 Good Luck~
Thank you for your support~

-N a n a k o- wrote:

this insane 0.0

game rock wrote:

[Intelli's Futsuu]

00:02:747 - The Slider end here. lol this was a bug XD never noticed
00:47:964 - Change to k. Sure
00:51:008 - Change to d. Sure
01:01:443 - Change to D. Sure
01:11:878 - Change to k is better. Listening to the background, this makes sense.

IntelliTroodon wrote:

http://gyazo.com/12d3b3b5e9b1d091e66429e736c8b8c4

HUEHUEHUEHUEHUE

Genocide wrote:

on tag: The memories of phantasm. please fix that what i bold it.

here is my simple mod >_>
Taikos are still need more mods.

[General]
Your dimension BG is 736x421, it should be 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1336x768 for rankable BG

[Muzukashii]
00:33:182 (5) - move to 00:33:073 (5) - consistent with 00:34:812 (10) - Fixed!
00:35:791 (13,14) - unnecessary dons. delete both. Fixed!
00:41:878 (24) - delete and 00:41:660 (23) - move this to 00:41:769 (23) - . Fixed!
00:47:095 (36,40) - delete. give more break please... Fixed!
00:47:530 (37) - remove finish. Fixed!
00:49:704 (42,45) - delete break plss. Fixed!
00:53:182 (48,49) - delete. 00:52:747 (47) - is loud already. Fixed!

ok i stop modding for muzu. Thanks <3
and pls take a note muzu is need more breaks. Okay ~ Fixed!

[Futsuu and kantan]
ok, this futsuu is very very seriously mods.
i can't handle this because ...... {insert by yourself} How about Kantan = =||

food luck pphecy (G)Food Luck = =
dont ha me

1. Beatmap's background quality is low, I recommend to search better one.

1. I recommend highly to use smaller grips: grip lvl 3-4, to look map more smooth.
2. Use Beat Snap Divisor in 1/4, hard diff needs to be more rhythmical than Normal/Easy.
3. 00:01:443 (1) - delete this slider and add 00:01:443 - here circle, and start slider at 00:01:878 - and end it at 00:02:312 - .
4. 00:04:921 (1,2) - jump could be smaller, like 00:05:138 (2) - could be at x320 y48
5. 00:06:225 (4,5,6,7) - what about make these square?
6. 00:07:530 (1,2) - same as above about jump ^, make it smaller
7. 00:11:008 (2) - delete curve point at x-16 y160
8. 00:12:095 (3) - move to x144 y48 to same distant both ways
9. 00:13:617 (6) - useless curve point in slider's end, delete those
10. 00:13:617 - I recommend to delete timing point here, cause this doesn't need to be quieter
11. 00:14:921 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - keep same distant between all these notes, there is no need to jump more than in others
12. 00:23:834 (3) - for better flow, move to x0 y192
13. 00:34:921 (4,5,6) - There is no need to change distant here, when 00:32:312 (1,2,3) - have smaller.
14. 00:52:964 (2) - why this is so close to 00:52:095 (1) - than 00:53:182 (3) - ? No need to change distant
15. 00:52:964 (2,3,4,5) - enlarge this part, distant is here little bad and it's hard to understand
16. 00:54:269 (7,1) - enlarge distant between these notes to make it more readable
17. 00:55:138 (2,3) - there is something wrong with rhythm. If you don't hear the rhythm right, change playback to 25% - 50%
18. 00:57:530 (6) - this rhythm doesn't fit here. try this: http://puu.sh/gSTa6/7194647687.jpg
19. 00:59:704 (1,2) - Distant between these is tooooo big for hard.
20. Chorus's readable is bad. Think more about distants, and don't change them unexpectedly. Here is examples, where you should improve distant:
    01:01:008 (1,2,3) - ,
    compare 01:02:747 (4,5,6) - to 01:03:182 (6,7) - ,
    compare 01:04:486 (1,2) - to 01:04:921 (3,4) - ,
    compare 01:11:660 (4,5) - to 01:12:747 (7,8) - ,
    compare 01:15:138 (4,5) - to 01:16:878 (4,5) - ,
    compare 01:18:399 (1,2) - to 01:19:051 (2,3) - ,
    compare 01:24:704 (5,1) - to 01:25:791 (3,4) - ,
    compare 01:26:008 (4,5) - to 01:26:660 (5,6) - .
    ^ These are places that you should fix.
21. 01:06:878 (7) - x3 reverse slider aren't expected usually, I recommend cut it from 01:07:312 - and add circle at 01:07:530 -
22. 01:11:443 (3,5) - stack
23. 01:13:617 (9) - enlarge distant between this and 01:12:964 (8) -
24. 01:20:138 (4) - enlarge distant to prev note
25. 01:27:530 (1) - end spinner at 01:33:508 -

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
M4M as we talked

[General]

1. Beatmap's background quality is low, I recommend to search better one.

[Hard]

1. I recommend highly to use smaller grips: grip lvl 3-4, to look map more smooth.
2. Use Beat Snap Divisor in 1/4, hard diff needs to be more rhythmical than Normal/Easy.
3. 00:01:443 (1) - delete this slider and add 00:01:443 - here circle, and start slider at 00:01:878 - and end it at 00:02:312 - . Sure
4. 00:04:921 (1,2) - jump could be smaller, like 00:05:138 (2) - could be at x320 y48 Fixed with a little bit change
5. 00:06:225 (4,5,6,7) - what about make these square? No. It's okay for me
6. 00:07:530 (1,2) - same as above about jump ^, make it smaller Fixed
7. 00:11:008 (2) - delete curve point at x-16 y160 Sure
8. 00:12:095 (3) - move to x144 y48 to same distant both ways Sure
9. 00:13:617 (6) - useless curve point in slider's end, delete those Sure
10. 00:13:617 - I recommend to delete timing point here, cause this doesn't need to be quieter Sure
11. 00:14:921 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - keep same distant between all these notes, there is no need to jump more than in others Sure
12. 00:23:834 (3) - for better flow, move to x0 y192 Sure
13. 00:34:921 (4,5,6) - There is no need to change distant here, when 00:32:312 (1,2,3) - have smaller. Sure
14. 00:52:964 (2) - why this is so close to 00:52:095 (1) - than 00:53:182 (3) - ? No need to change distant Sure
15. 00:52:964 (2,3,4,5) - enlarge this part, distant is here little bad and it's hard to understand Sure
16. 00:54:269 (7,1) - enlarge distant between these notes to make it more readable Sure
17. 00:55:138 (2,3) - there is something wrong with rhythm. If you don't hear the rhythm right, change playback to 25% - 50% Sure
18. 00:57:530 (6) - this rhythm doesn't fit here. try this: http://puu.sh/gSTa6/7194647687.jpg Sure
19. 00:59:704 (1,2) - Distant between these is tooooo big for hard. Sure
20. Chorus's readable is bad. Think more about distants, and don't change them unexpectedly. Here is examples, where you should Sureimprove distant:
    01:01:008 (1,2,3) - ,
    compare 01:02:747 (4,5,6) - to 01:03:182 (6,7) - ,
    compare 01:04:486 (1,2) - to 01:04:921 (3,4) - ,
    compare 01:11:660 (4,5) - to 01:12:747 (7,8) - ,
    compare 01:15:138 (4,5) - to 01:16:878 (4,5) - ,
    compare 01:18:399 (1,2) - to 01:19:051 (2,3) - ,
    compare 01:24:704 (5,1) - to 01:25:791 (3,4) - ,
    compare 01:26:008 (4,5) - to 01:26:660 (5,6) - .
    ^ These are places that you should fix.
    ^ All fixed!
21. 01:06:878 (7) - x3 reverse slider aren't expected usually, I recommend cut it from 01:07:312 - and add circle at 01:07:530 - Sure
22. 01:11:443 (3,5) - stack Sure
23. 01:13:617 (9) - enlarge distant between this and 01:12:964 (8) - Sure
24. 01:20:138 (4) - enlarge distant to prev note Sure
25. 01:27:530 (1) - end spinner at 01:33:508 - No. 597 instead

I hope this helps you! Good luck

blueloniess wrote:

哟，我用中文来摸图了！如果你看不懂得话我就立马换成英语！
hi coming to modding your map!:) if you can't understand chinese ,i will change it into english
一下是我个人观点！
THESE are my PERSONAL opinion

hard

强烈建议使用1/4拍
建议你把开头换成这样，这样的话更加符合音乐的节奏
00:02:965 - 00:03:399 - 这里缺音符！建议在这里放个这样的折返！
00:14:052 - 这里放个滑条不更好吗？滑条一直拖到“Na~~”的尾音处结束
00:09:269 (4) - 这个滑条往前一下更好
00:11:008 (2) - 这个也是，往前一下更好
00:10:138 - 这里放个折返这样更符合音乐
00:14:921 (11) - NC
00:31:443 (6,7,8) - 前面一直是1/2的这里突然一个1/4，显得特别突兀！
00:44:051 (4) - 这里改成一个滑条，把“直”拖完，然后00:44:486 (5) - 这个滑条向后移动一下
00:45:791 (1,2,3) - 这里也是，突然一个 1/4也是很突兀
00:51:008 - 这里掉了一个？
00:54:269 (7) - 这个改成折返更好
00:57:530 (6) - 这个滑条后移到这里00:57:964
00:57:095 (5) - 然后把这个做成这样的折返，感觉这样更好
01:00:356 (3) - 这个滑条长了
01:08:617 (5) - NC
01:08:617 (5) - 你在这里突然少了一个音符又会觉得很别扭
01:20:573 - 这里放个长滑条
01:32:312 - 为什么转盘在这里就结束了？歌曲没有完啊，01:33:617 - 这里结束不是更好吗？
00:16:225 (4) - NC
00:16:660 (7) - NC
00:31:443 (6) - NC
01:10:356 - 这里掉了一个？
01:11:225 - ↑
01:11:443 (3) - NC
基本没有什么大问题了把。。。除了开头那块我还是觉得有点别扭，因为你多少还是有点没有跟着词或者曲走。。。其他的话，个别地方总觉得少了个音，比如00:07:965 (3,4) - 这两个滑条就很别扭了00:11:008 (6) - 还有这个。00:14:052 (1) - 这个就不错00:42:530 - 这里总感觉少了个音。。。其他的我就不一一指出了，毕竟不算是很大的问题。希望你能够重新考虑一下，这样做是否有趣.....
基本上全改~ 增加了音效.

NM

00:30:573 - 这个break time 太长啦
00:31:878 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这里希望你能够重新考虑一下...
00:34:486 - 00:44:921 - - 这个很棒
00:55:791 (5) - NC Fixed with different way
01:18:399 (3) - NC
01:19:269 (6) - NC
00:06:008 - 这里又感觉缺了一个
00:55:791 (5) - NC
00:57:964 (3) - 建议折返
音效没有做吗？还是说声音太小了？整个歌我几乎没有听到什么音效，希望改进
基本没问题啦
基本上全改~ 增加了音效.

EZ

00:13:617 (1) - 滑条建议后移
00:13:182 (2) - 这个建议做成滑条把“哈”拖完 X
00:34:051 - 少了一个？
00:40:138 (1) - 这里需要折返吗？
01:06:660 (4,5,6) - 这里需要这么多的长滑条吗？ Changed with different way
音效也是，整体几乎没有什么音效。。。希望可以改进
00:01:443 (1) - 这里滑条建议改成这样：更加符合这个音乐是不是？
后面也还有一些类似这样的问题，还是希望你能够重新考虑一下为什么要这样做，这样做是不是会让这个图变得有趣

基本上全改~ 增加了音效.

大问题不算很多吧，但是音效方面需要下功夫。
祝早日rank！ 谢谢你~
剩下的我明天会继续摸的，感觉你在做这个图的时候有点随心，一会儿跟跟着歌词做一会儿又跟着背景音乐做。强烈建议你全部跟跟着歌词做！这样的图的话整体感觉很别扭，打起来的时候也不是很舒服。建议你切换到1/4拍后把一些地方重做！或者全部跟着歌词做！
这些都是我的个人观点，希望你不要介意额。。。。

Prophecy wrote:

blueloniess wrote:

哟，我用中文来摸图了！如果你看不懂得话我就立马换成英语！
hi coming to modding your map!:) if you can't understand chinese ,i will change it into english
一下是我个人观点！
THESE are my PERSONAL opinion

hard

强烈建议使用1/4拍
建议你把开头换成这样，这样的话更加符合音乐的节奏
00:02:965 - 00:03:399 - 这里缺音符！建议在这里放个这样的折返！
00:14:052 - 这里放个滑条不更好吗？滑条一直拖到“Na~~”的尾音处结束
00:09:269 (4) - 这个滑条往前一下更好
00:11:008 (2) - 这个也是，往前一下更好
00:10:138 - 这里放个折返这样更符合音乐
00:14:921 (11) - NC
00:31:443 (6,7,8) - 前面一直是1/2的这里突然一个1/4，显得特别突兀！
00:44:051 (4) - 这里改成一个滑条，把“直”拖完，然后00:44:486 (5) - 这个滑条向后移动一下
00:45:791 (1,2,3) - 这里也是，突然一个 1/4也是很突兀
00:51:008 - 这里掉了一个？
00:54:269 (7) - 这个改成折返更好
00:57:530 (6) - 这个滑条后移到这里00:57:964
00:57:095 (5) - 然后把这个做成这样的折返，感觉这样更好
01:00:356 (3) - 这个滑条长了
01:08:617 (5) - NC
01:08:617 (5) - 你在这里突然少了一个音符又会觉得很别扭
01:20:573 - 这里放个长滑条
01:32:312 - 为什么转盘在这里就结束了？歌曲没有完啊，01:33:617 - 这里结束不是更好吗？
00:16:225 (4) - NC
00:16:660 (7) - NC
00:31:443 (6) - NC
01:10:356 - 这里掉了一个？
01:11:225 - ↑
01:11:443 (3) - NC
基本没有什么大问题了把。。。除了开头那块我还是觉得有点别扭，因为你多少还是有点没有跟着词或者曲走。。。其他的话，个别地方总觉得少了个音，比如00:07:965 (3,4) - 这两个滑条就很别扭了00:11:008 (6) - 还有这个。00:14:052 (1) - 这个就不错00:42:530 - 这里总感觉少了个音。。。其他的我就不一一指出了，毕竟不算是很大的问题。希望你能够重新考虑一下，这样做是否有趣.....
基本上全改~ 增加了音效.

NM

00:30:573 - 这个break time 太长啦
00:31:878 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这里希望你能够重新考虑一下...
00:34:486 - 00:44:921 - - 这个很棒
00:55:791 (5) - NC Fixed with different way
01:18:399 (3) - NC
01:19:269 (6) - NC
00:06:008 - 这里又感觉缺了一个
00:55:791 (5) - NC
00:57:964 (3) - 建议折返
音效没有做吗？还是说声音太小了？整个歌我几乎没有听到什么音效，希望改进
基本没问题啦
基本上全改~ 增加了音效.

EZ

00:13:617 (1) - 滑条建议后移
00:13:182 (2) - 这个建议做成滑条把“哈”拖完 X
00:34:051 - 少了一个？
00:40:138 (1) - 这里需要折返吗？
01:06:660 (4,5,6) - 这里需要这么多的长滑条吗？ Changed with different way
音效也是，整体几乎没有什么音效。。。希望可以改进
00:01:443 (1) - 这里滑条建议改成这样：更加符合这个音乐是不是？
后面也还有一些类似这样的问题，还是希望你能够重新考虑一下为什么要这样做，这样做是不是会让这个图变得有趣

基本上全改~ 增加了音效.

大问题不算很多吧，但是音效方面需要下功夫。
祝早日rank！ 谢谢你~
剩下的我明天会继续摸的，感觉你在做这个图的时候有点随心，一会儿跟跟着歌词做一会儿又跟着背景音乐做。强烈建议你全部跟跟着歌词做！这样的图的话整体感觉很别扭，打起来的时候也不是很舒服。建议你切换到1/4拍后把一些地方重做！或者全部跟着歌词做！
这些都是我的个人观点，希望你不要介意额。。。。

Thanks you for your modding <3
Awesome Modding~ Good Luck for BN ~

sheela901 wrote:

Walao's Lunatic

1. 00:07:095 (5) - Try to go with a slight curve that points to the right. The current doesn't go well with the flow. Fixed
2. 00:08:834 (4) - This type of curve are seen in old beatmaps. Consider making another simple curve. I think its ok here, because i try to blanket it. but if too many modders point out this problem..i will try to change it xD
3. 00:27:095 (5) - You might bring this down because it passes the playfield. Fixed
4. 00:39:704 (3) - I'd rotate this to the left in order to get 00:39:704 (3,4) a symmetric pattern: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:47:530 (1) - I don't see why you would reduce the slider velocity for this slider. There's nothing in the music that marks any slow beats or rhythms. Go for the usually slider velocity. Fixed
6. 01:04:921 (4,5) - Add more distance between them because it makes an uncomfortable play. There's also 01:23:182 (8,1) .

Fixed
I suggest you used a pattern for the new combo, that puts a new combo on each big downbeat. So please review your difficulty and keep the new combo constant.

sheela901 wrote:

Hey Prophecy!

General

1. The background needs to be changed, due to low quality and incorrect dimensions. I would go for this image, but if you have another background, then you can use it.
   
   SPOILER

   
   You might also change the colors.
2. The correct metadata is this:
   
   1. Title: 色は匂へど 散りぬるを(OPver.)
   2. Romanised Title: 色は匂へど 散りぬるを(OPver.)
   It's based on this thread.
3. Check the tags in WE's Taiko Oni. It forgot a bunch of word.
4. You can remove the character - in the tags, since the person cannot for something that's less than three characters.
5. Remove any duplicate tags: the ; of.
6. In some difficulties, the green point on 00:01:443 isn't snapped properly.

Easy

1. 00:01:443 (1) - I suggest you move it to the big downbeat (00:01:878 - ), because the first beat starts there, and not on the vocal.
2. 00:03:617 (3) - Rotate this to the right, so around 33°, to avoid overlap.
3. 00:04:921 (4,1) - Check your distance carefully. There's also 00:07:095 (3,1) - 00:10:138 (3,4) - and vice versa. Please check through your difficulty to see distance error while using the distance snap tool.
4. 00:13:182 (2,1) - The spinner should start on 00:14:052 and the circle can be a 1/1 slider. The spinner starting at the downbeat sounds better. Also, I would end the spinner on 00:17:530 and you can commence the break on 00:17:965 . It just sounds better to me.
5. 00:34:921 (5) - Because of this long slider, it skips strong beats, like the downbeat. I suggest you use this rhythm:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:38:834 (5,1) - Switch the new combo pattern, so the slider (5) should have the new combo, since it's on the downbeat.
7. 00:40:138 (1) - Like I said earlier with the long slider, it skips some good beats. I suggest you try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:42:312 (2,3,4,5) - This feels too much for an Easy to me. Try starting a 1/1 repeat slider on 00:42:312 .
9. 00:50:573 (6) - Same thing as 00:40:138 (1) .
10. 00:53:617 (3) - Avoid the overlap pattern so it doesn't bring obscurity to the players. Please move this and 00:52:747 (1,2) so it doesn't get overlap.
11. 00:55:356 (5,1) - Please check the distance with caution.
12. 01:01:008 (1,2) - Switch the new combo. There's also 01:21:878 (1,2) .
13. 01:02:747 (3) - Same thing as the other similar suggestions. Starting from 01:01:443 to 01:06:225 -, the rhythm should be like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:07:964 (4) to 01:15:356 - The rhythm doesn't sound great, so I suggest you try this rhythm:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:17:965 (4,5) - I have said a lot of rhythm changes, so try to change this rhythm. I would usually go add the circle and the head of the slider on the big downbeat.
16. 01:27:095 (3) - I'd remove the repeat, because the beat on 01:27:964 doesn't feel important. So you can move the spinner to that tick.

The difficulty needs more improvements in rhythms and distances. Otherwise, the patterns could be polished a bit.

Normal

1. Please check your distance and your new combo pattern through the difficulty. Some are inconsistent and / or off.
2. 00:08:834 (6,1) - Switch the new combo.
3. 00:10:138 (3) - Like in Easy, you might try to add an object on the big downbeat.
4. 00:14:052 (1) - Like in Easy, the spinner could end a beat early.
5. 00:33:182 (1) - Remove the new combo.
6. 00:41:443 (1,2,3,4) - This is unrankable. Please fix it immediately.
7. 00:46:225 (2,3) - Inconsistency to the distance.
8. 00:54:052 (3) - I'd put this circle on the other side, like x:234 y:273, so you could avoid the overlap. You must also do something to 00:54:486 (4,5,6,7) .
9. 00:57:964 (3) - Rotate this to the little to avoid the touch. There's also 01:13:617 (5) .
10. 01:01:443 (3) - This note needs a new combo.

Hard

1. 00:03:617 (3,1) - Add more distance between them to avoid "anti-jump", because the players might get confused.
2. 00:05:138 (2) - Avoid the overlap pattern.
3. 00:07:965 (3) - I don't know how you got the repeat to go up, but it must go down, because after the repeat, the slider ball goes down. Please re-make / make a new slider.
4. 00:15:791 (1,2,3) - 00:16:225 (4,5,6) - I'd turn them into repeat sliders, so it doesn't get too hard. There's also 00:31:443 (6,7,8) .
5. 00:22:747 (1,2) - Because the distance between them looks similar to 00:21:443 (7,8) -, you need to make the distance higher. There's also 00:23:182 (2,3,4) that the distance should be consistent.
6. 00:31:443 (6,7,8) - The distance must be reduced, because it's too big.
7. 00:44:051 (4,1) - Make the distance greater.
8. 00:45:791 to 00:52:747 - Please use a constant distance between the objects, although you can make little jumps, but it has to make sense.
9. 01:07:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Having a circle rhythm consecutive is too much for Hard. I suggest you use sliders.

I might not list everything because I want to resume a bit.

Use a constant distance by using the distance snap tool because it won't confuse the players when they play, else they would fail. You can make little jumps, but that depends where, because you may add a jump when there's a strong beat, but you can't do jumps to beats that doesn't fit. The jumps are usually used on big downbeats, because this is where the strong beats usually land.

If you have any questions, don't hesitate for asking them.

blueloniess wrote:

walao

00:06:225 (1,2,3,4) - make this square jumps bigger
00:08:182 (1,2,3) - make the jumps bigger
00:19:704 (5,6) - why suddenly a jump? just copy this:00:18:834 (3,4) -
00:24:051 (4,5,6,7) - make it bigger
00:36:008 (1,2,3,4) - ↑
00:49:704 (4) - NC
00:49:704 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - make it bigger !it's hard to read !
01:01:008 (1,2,3) - here need big jumps like this
01:09:486 (1,2,3,4) - make it bigger !it's hard to read or put it like this
01:10:356 (1,2,3,4) - ↑
01:12:530 (1,2,3,4) - ↑
01:17:421 (8,2) - stack ?
01:21:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - big jumps or put square jumps or
01:23:399 (1,2,3,4) - ↑

01:06:660 (4,5) - why big jumps here ?

Note : Don't Bubble osu! Mode Before 15/4/2015
Reason : Storyboard is ready to apply in osu! Standard Mode.

1. 00:00:000 (0) - More hitsounds
   
   
2. 00:01:878 (1,2) - I would try to avoid having these touch (kinda towards the middle of 2)
   
   
3. 00:05:356 (1,2,3) - I would make 1 and 3 the same shape and have 1 lead into 2 better.
   
   
4. 00:10:138 (3) - It looks like the spacing changes here, randomly
   
   
5. 00:46:225 (1,2,3) - Make 1 and 3 the same shape. Kinda like http://gyazo.com/4118fd806306afb708ad3ac0ea43dd30
   
   
6. 00:52:747 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is strange in this combo. Changes between 1/2/3 and 3/4/5
   
   
7. 00:59:704 (3) - NC
   
   
8. 01:05:356 (1,2,3,4) - Move 2/3 over http://gyazo.com/4765e266d4efb3c924ab85b933fa5fed
   
   
9. 01:06:660 (4,5) - Contrary motion isn't good in an easy.
   
   
10. 01:08:399 (6) - NC
    
    
11. 01:11:443 (4) - ^
    
    
12. 01:14:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is way out there and have the sliders lead into the circles more
    
    
13. 01:19:704 (7) - NC
    
    
14. 01:20:138 (2) - Change this slider up, Maybe http://gyazo.com/ebb68000e076643efe07c74ef067d57e ? (hopefully better than that XD)
    
    
15. 01:22:312 (1,3) - These shouldn't touch

1. 00:11:878 (5) - NC
   
   
2. 00:30:138 (1) - I have mixed feelings about this, because it fits the song, but it also makes 1 really hard to hit/read.
   
   
3. 01:25:791 (6) - NC maybe?

1. 00:06:225 (4) - NC
   
   
2. 00:09:921 (6) - ^
   
   
3. 00:16:660 (1,2,3) - Turn off Distance snap and do this: http://gyazo.com/6c647a2529731ced25c2d0ee545dd0f6 or something similar
   
   
4. 00:21:660 (8) - Seems like a random jump
   
   
5. 00:35:791 (7,8) - Make these the same shape
   
   
6. 00:41:443 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change to http://gyazo.com/1dc13e04516f0ec9fe2d1f23cf5ead52
   
   
7. 01:02:530 (4) - Add a note here: http://gyazo.com/9096c62eddd212376f21deb4947df5e5
   
   
8. 01:15:356 (1) - Remove NC?

1. 00:00:000 (0) - Love it!!!!!

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Ok I'll mod std now:

Easy:

1. 00:00:000 (0) - More hitsounds #Fixed
   
   
2. 00:01:878 (1,2) - I would try to avoid having these touch (kinda towards the middle of 2) #Fixed
   
   
3. 00:05:356 (1,2,3) - I would make 1 and 3 the same shape and have 1 lead into 2 better. #Fixed
   
   
4. 00:10:138 (3) - It looks like the spacing changes here, randomly
   
   
5. 00:46:225 (1,2,3) - Make 1 and 3 the same shape. Kinda like http://gyazo.com/4118fd806306afb708ad3ac0ea43dd30 #Fixed
   
   
6. 00:52:747 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is strange in this combo. Changes between 1/2/3 and 3/4/5 #Fixed
   
   
7. 00:59:704 (3) - NC #Fixed
   
   
8. 01:05:356 (1,2,3,4) - Move 2/3 over http://gyazo.com/4765e266d4efb3c924ab85b933fa5fed #Fixed
   
   
9. 01:06:660 (4,5) - Contrary motion isn't good in an easy. #Fixed
   
   
10. 01:08:399 (6) - NC #Fixed
    
    
11. 01:11:443 (4) - ^ #Fixed
    
    
12. 01:14:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is way out there and have the sliders lead into the circles more #Fixed
    
    
13. 01:19:704 (7) - NC #Fixed
    
    
14. 01:20:138 (2) - Change this slider up, Maybe http://gyazo.com/ebb68000e076643efe07c74ef067d57e ? (hopefully better than that XD) *No
    
    
15. 01:22:312 (1,3) - These shouldn't touch #Fixed

I'm being super duper harsh because I care alot about this map XD

Normal:

1. 00:11:878 (5) - NC #Fixed
   
   
2. 00:30:138 (1) - I have mixed feelings about this, because it fits the song, but it also makes 1 really hard to hit/read. #Fixed
   
   
3. 01:25:791 (6) - NC maybe? #Fixed

Awesome Love the hitsounds on this one

Hard:

1. 00:06:225 (4) - NC #Fixed
   
   
2. 00:09:921 (6) - ^ #Fixed
   
   
3. 00:16:660 (1,2,3) - Turn off Distance snap and do this: http://gyazo.com/6c647a2529731ced25c2d0ee545dd0f6 or something similar #Fixed
   
   
4. 00:21:660 (8) - Seems like a random jump #Fixed
   
   
5. 00:35:791 (7,8) - Make these the same shape #Fixed
   
   
6. 00:41:443 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change to http://gyazo.com/1dc13e04516f0ec9fe2d1f23cf5ead52 #Fixed
   
   
7. 01:02:530 (4) - Add a note here: http://gyazo.com/9096c62eddd212376f21deb4947df5e5 #Fixed
   
   
8. 01:15:356 (1) - Remove NC? #No

Super fun to play, but there are some other NCs that could be added/removed other than what I said.


Let's get this ranked!!!

Genocide wrote:

[Intelli's Futsuu]
i just give some major problem
00:59:704 (74,75,76) - ??? costume hitsound? remove it pls It switches from soft to drum. Fixed though (soft throughout)
01:04:051 (82) - remove finish ok
01:27:638 (1) - move this 01:27:747 (1) - and dont forget to fix the tail too. ok

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Title:Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o (OP ver.)
TitleUnicode:色は匂へど 散りぬるを (OP ver.)
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Prophecy
Version:Intelli's Futsuu
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Genocide wrote:

Last recheck.

[Muzu]
00:08:834 (1,1) - remove finish, the sound aren't strong.
00:19:051 (1,1,1,1) - remove, give a break and those arent important beat.
00:27:747 (1,1) - delete break.
00:31:551 (1) - delete, break
00:52:312 (1) - delete this and 00:52:747 (1) - add finish,
01:02:095 (1,1,1,1) - remove, break and gap emphasis.
01:07:747 (1,1) - remove
01:09:269 (1,1) - remove
01:08:834 (1,1) - remove too.
01:12:964 (1) - remove this becuase this ddk
01:22:530 (1,1) - remove.
01:25:138 (1,1) - remove.

[Intelli's Futsuu]
i just give some major problem
00:59:704 (74,75,76) - ??? costume hitsound? remove it pls
01:04:051 (82) - remove finish
01:27:638 (1) - move this 01:27:747 (1) - and dont forget to fix the tail too.

[Kantan]
seems fine when i first look this.
lol

that's all

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Kaoro actually played walao's Insane on stream. He used DT and nearly fc'd 2nd try (he missed on the 2nd back and forth pattern). He said it was on the easier side but fun, so I think we're heading in the right direction!!!

Nofool wrote:

[Intelli's Futsuu]
- 00:02:747 - end the slider here ? current slider's end is not well timed. Ok
- move - 00:10:356 (13) - to - 00:10:138 - ? easier/more instinctiv to play. Ok
- move - 00:23:617 (13) - to - 00:23:834 - and del - 00:24:051 (14) - ? sound better, you di it at - 00:26:660 -, you may also remove - 00:27:747 (21) - there ? not needed. Did the first part, as well as adding a note at 00:24:921 BUT Keeping the note at 00:27:747 because the music sounds different then the prev. part so the map should be too.
- 00:52:312 (66) - remove ? to emphasize the incoming part. Ok
- 01:27:747 - start the spinner here and end it at - 01:33:617 - Uuuuuuuuhhhhhh thats how the spinner already is............
no much to say, im fine with this diff but i am not so sure about the amount of x----xx patterns used while sometimes something like x--x--x could be better. but that would kinda break the style of the diff so i won't suggest much about it.

Nofool wrote:

Hi' taiko mod as requested by Prophecy
G U C K F E N O C I D E giving me extra work
cool calm song tho'

[Collab Kantan]
- 00:14:269 - better starting the spinner here, it is currently too close to the previous note (for kantan).
- move - 00:18:399 (2) - to - 00:18:834 - and make it a d ? your current dk is kinda weird since that k fits drums but then you dodge them drums beat.
- 00:29:269 - try to add a k instead of a slider here and then put a slider from - 00:30:138 - to - 00:31:443 - instead of the second slider ? easier to read and sounds a bit better imo.
- 00:45:791 - try d d d instead of d d slider here ? and then dkd d ddk at - 00:48:399 - instead of dk slider dk ? Yeah i suggest to delete both slider and make something more simple to read, it just plays better imo, these sliders are kinda weird atm. if you do, you may also delete the d at - 00:51:443 - to prepare for the incoming denser part.
- 00:55:356 - add d ? the break sounds weird, this d fits the song and can reflect the following dkk.
- 01:33:617 -end that spinner here ?

All fixed. But something is already fixed before.
[Muzukashii]
- 00:13:834 - well since you are 100% following the vocal here, a d here could work aswell.
- 00:30:138 - that's cool but i can already see BNs telling you it is too hard etc... as you prefer but i can suggest to use a slider from - 00:30:138 - to - 00:31:660 - or keep the 2 first ddd and use a slider from - 00:31:008 - to - 00:31:660 -.
- 00:44:704 - d here, + change the following d to k ? idk you follow the vocal before again but here you dodge it.
- 00:46:986 - maybe add something here ?
- move - 00:51:443 (1) - to - 00:51:008 - ? it plays better imo.
- 01:02:312 (1) - remove ? that pattern might be too long.
- 01:13:617 (1) - ^ or change it to k ? im not so sure this note is needed.
- got an idea, try to remove - 01:22:530 (1) - and change the following d to D, also del - 01:24:704 (1) - and change the previous d to D. this part needs some finisher. also add a finisher - 01:27:089 (1) - ?
All fixed. But something is already fixed before.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _


Good luck'

neonat wrote:

Easy

Please tidy up the Easy, make it more organised, spacing is very bad.
Lacks hitsounds, please add them in
Use NC more consistently and at appropriate starts of new phrases or 4/8 beats

00:01:443 - redundant green line
00:05:356 (1) - too curved, let it interact better with the previous circle, make it look better and more structured:

SPOILER

00:07:095 (1) - ^

SPOILER

These are too close to each other:
00:01:878 (1,2)
00:07:095 (1,1)
00:13:182 (2,3)
00:32:312 (2,3)
00:34:051 (4,5)
00:34:486 (5,6)
00:37:964 (1,2,3)
00:44:921 (5,1)
00:47:529 (2,3)
00:47:964 (3,4,5)
00:50:573 (6,1)
00:52:747 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:56:660 (1,2)
00:57:965 (2,1)
01:05:356 (1,2)
01:07:964 (5,1)
01:09:704 (3,1)
01:11:878 (2,3)
01:13:182 (4,5,1,2,3)
01:16:225 (3,4,5,6)
01:19:704 (1,2)
01:20:138 (2,3,1)
01:24:052 (3,1,2)

00:10:573 (4,1) - too far apart

This isn't the only problem, the patterns are poor and the shapes are bad. Especially overlaps like 00:53:182 (2,4) - 00:55:356 (5,1) - 00:59:704 (1,2) - 01:01:443 (1,2)
You cramp everything on the top left section of the map in 01:01:443 (1,2,3) - it's very messy and bad for plays, especially with the low AR
Slider shapes like 01:09:704 (3) - 01:20:138 (2) - are poor and lazy, they are not good
No consideration for blankets as well, that can help improve structure of the map: 01:12:747 (3,4) - 01:15:791 (2,3) - 01:22:312 (1,2)
01:27:964 (1) - spinner doesn't end on anywhere appropriate, either end at 01:33:399 where the music stops or 01:30:573 where the vocals stops

Very poorly done, far from the finished product, no hitsounds except for 1 finish

Normal

Still not very good, will explain some of the issues

Use NC more consistently and at appropriate starts of new phrases or 4/8 beats

Again spacing is not consistent, this is unrankable, same as Easy, look through everything and keep them constant

Movement is too angular, just look at all the straight movement which is poor: 00:36:660 (4,5) - 00:39:269 (4,5,6) - 00:41:443 (1,2,3) - 00:47:965 (1,2,3) - 00:52:312 (6,1,2,3,4) - 00:55:791 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - 01:05:791 (3,4,5) - 01:12:747 (2,3,4,5) - 01:17:530 (1,2,3)
Also don't overlap notes like 01:05:791 (3,4,5)

Hard

Suffers the same issues, except spacing can be more relaxed here, but it shouldn't be random and at least follow some pattern and suit the music

00:39:269 (4,6) - poor placement

Please make the NC more constant and follow the phrases in the music, this helps structure and consistency
00:07:965 (1) - goes over the melody, not fitting into the song
00:49:051 (2) - slider ends on start of new phrase, slider ends basically on a critical beat which should be where an objects starts on
00:55:138 (2,3,4,5) - overuse of repeat sliders, boring pattern, not a good way of expressing the song
00:59:704 (1,2,3) - too angular
01:04:704 (2,3) - at least blanket them
01:09:486 (5,1) - overlapping isn't necessary


Hitsounding is bland and not effectively used. Only whistles found, using finishes with the cymbals should be added into the song

since the NC is poor I will just state everything:

These are the beats you SHOULD place the NC

Hard

SPOILER

00:01:878 (1) -
00:05:356 (3) -
00:07:965 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - can't even NC here, the object placement in the timeline is bad, doesn't focus on the critical beats
00:08:834
00:12:312 (3) -
00:15:791 (4) -
00:21:443 (7) -
00:24:921 (5) -
00:27:964 (1) -
00:31:878 (9) -
00:35:356 (6) -
00:38:834 (3) -
00:42:312 (3) -
00:45:791 (1) -
00:49:269
00:52:747
00:56:225
00:59:704 (1) -
01:01:443 (3) -
01:04:921 (3) -
01:08:399 (5) -
01:11:878 (1) -
01:15:356 (1) -
01:18:834
01:22:312 (1) -
01:25:791 (3) -

As you can see because of the choice of sliders, you can't properly show the rhythm

Same idea should be implemented on Normal and Easy



Really long way to go, please rework them, start by ensuring the right rhythms are used (Hard is really really empty, the gaps between some parts is just deafeningly obvious and affects rhythm/momentum in music) Use constant spacing for Normal and Easy and ensure the spacing makes sense in Hard. Add the appropriate hitsounds and make it work better with the music, it's not just something that glosses over, for the sake of having hitsounds, make it work with the music, make it amplify the music well.


Good Luck

IntelliTroodon wrote:

We need more STD mods, so if anyone is just passing through

WINK WINK

Nofool wrote:

G U C K F E N O C I D E giving me extra work

IntelliTroodon wrote:

lol I just noticed in both scenarios in the description (the part describing who did what difficulty) my name is missing an "n" XD

Backstep wrote:

Quick check as you request

EASY

00:07:095 (1) - This note.... I suggest you move your end waypoint slider to x:160 y:100 to make more blanket with (2)
00:08:399 (1) - If you fix above try spacing this note :/

NORMAL

01:05:791 (3,4,5) - Honestly I don't like this pattern you can try this pattern please ;w;

Enter here.

HARD

00:30:791 (5,6,7,8) - Try use same spacing here?

MUZUKASHII

01:05:791 (124,125,126,127,128) - Change to kkddk to follow vocal?
01:19:921 (166) - Change to k to follow vocal :3
01:23:834 (178) - Change to k for same above reason.

Good luck for bubble and sorry for my lazy mod lol

Get Slap from Prophecy 1 ea

Thanks for your little Mod

Mio_chan wrote:

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment
[Hard]
下次最好用最細個格網MAP (或者唔用), DS 有D唔係咁穩定可能你要CHECK多次
AR 用 7 或姐7.5，OD用6，因為LUNATIC OD都淨係用到7
00:04:921 (4,5,1) – 好似咁?
http://puu.sh/hSTto/43704a19de.jpg
00:21:443 (1,2) – 個jump有D多餘我覺得
00:27:530 (4,5) – DS
00:31:225 (7,1) – overlap得唔係咁好睇，唔好overlap?
00:32:312 (2,3,4) – 試下跟 VOCAL MAP? 好似00:39:269 (2,3,4) –咁
00:40:573 (5) – jump得有少少奇怪
00:52:312 (1,2) – 將個NC放去(2)，因為音樂上有明顯轉變
00:57:095 (3) – 唔好用兩個repeat…有D難玩
01:16:877 (5) – 放去 x:80 y:112? 記住改埋 (6)個位置

[Normal]
Normal對於DS既consistency要求唔低… 好似00:01:443 (1,2,3) – ,00:03:182 (1,2,3) – 00:09:921 (2,3,4) -呢D係唔可以出現既… 你自己重CHECK一次啦
同埋你的comboing有D亂，我唔知你係想跟咩加NC…想簡單既就全部長白線加，長白線係SLIDER end就下個音加，當然你可以用其他方法例如跟VOCAL，但係一跟就要成段都用同一個方法加NC
00:51:008 (5) – 整blanket?
01:05:791 (3,4,5) – Ctrl + H,再搵個岩既位放番好，會FLOW好D
01:08:182 (2,3) – 一係全stack，一係全部唔stack
01:16:660 (6) – overlap

[Easy]
Combo問題同normal一樣
DS問題都一樣，Easy基本上係一定要成個diff裡面全部DS都一樣，呢個diff既DS係1.4x – 1.6x，你要重新汁過一次SPACING (應該唔難搞，用最細個格網郁位姐)
00:40:138 (1) – 呢個slider重新MAP過，我覺得00:40:573 –同00:41:443 –應該要有野

[Muzukashii]
00:19:269 – 加 d?
00:26:660 (24,25,26,27) – 好似咁?
http://puu.sh/hSUpM/708894c84c.jpg


加油

All fixed

Thanks your mod and your Star >w<

Mio_chan wrote:

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Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
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[Walao’s Lunatic]
AR-1
Neat map, that’s why AR9 is not necessary at all imo Fixed
01:11:225 (5) – NC Fixed
Well not much to say about this diff, neat, nice Thanks
The only thing I can say is that you do not need to change SV for jump, but changing does not matter I think (not quite sure) Yeah, I will remain it, but if more modders tell me to change, i will consider about it.


加油 thanks for the mod o/

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Version:Walao's Lunatic
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251,45,54486,6,0,P|161:66|127:121,1,161.999995056153,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,150,55138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,248,55356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,248,55464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,249,55573,2,0,P|334:282|357:312,2,80.9999975280763,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,170,56225,6,0,L|149:293,2,121.499996292114,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,64,57095,2,0,L|411:64,2,121.499996292114,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,108,57964,6,0,L|184:108,1,80.9999975280763,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,196,58399,2,0,L|320:196,1,80.9999975280763,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,58834,6,0,L|203:288,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,56,59704,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,188,60138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,320,60573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,184,61008,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,61225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,68,61443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,68,61660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,61878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,184,62095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,174,62312,2,0,P|36:130|44:90,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,14,62746,2,0,P|108:26|124:66,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,163,63182,5,2,0:0:0:0:
277,211,63399,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,136,63617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,188,63834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,252,64051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,136,64269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
473,188,64486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,252,64704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,251,64812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,251,64921,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,288,65138,2,0,P|206:289|160:260,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,65573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,65791,2,0,P|120:120|144:100,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,184,66225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,181,66443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,251,66660,5,0,0:0:0:0:
279,139,66878,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,248,67095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,301,67312,2,0,P|182:264|198:220,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,64,67747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,64,67965,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,296,68182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,68399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,128,68617,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,128,68834,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,244,69052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,248,69269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,32,69486,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,264,69703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,32,69921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,264,70138,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,92,70356,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,70573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,92,70790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,71008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
134,234,71225,5,0,0:0:0:0:
134,234,71334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,234,71443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,131,71660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,131,71878,6,0,P|32:160|19:204,2,90,8|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,93,72530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
477,52,72748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,93,72965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,65,73183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
246,93,73400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,79,73617,5,0,0:0:0:0:
246,94,73834,2,0,P|229:151|243:176,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,296,74269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,296,74378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,296,74486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,216,74704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,68,74921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,296,75138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,201,75356,6,0,L|255:136,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,284,76008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,284,76117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,284,76225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,328,76443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,242,76660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,149,76878,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,262,77095,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,262,77204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,262,77312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,262,77421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,262,77530,2,0,P|154:240|134:211,2,90,0|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,52,78182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,78399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,78617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,78834,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,52,79051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,340,79269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,79486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,79595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,79704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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92,70,80356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,70,80573,6,0,P|32:135|92:224,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
6,313,81225,2,0,P|42:332|112:312,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,297,81660,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,297,82095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,136,82312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,301,82530,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,138,82747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,301,82964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,136,83182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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153,136,83617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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116,252,84269,6,0,L|216:252,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,252,84704,2,0,L|308:252,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,252,85138,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,85356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,116,85791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,85899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,86008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,84,86225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,301,86443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,40,86660,5,0,0:0:0:0:
201,40,86769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,40,86878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,40,86986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,40,87095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,215,87312,1,10,0:0:0:0:
116,253,87530,1,14,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87638,12,6,93616,0:0:0:0:

00:27:530 - d
00:31:225 (45,46) - k k
00:33:617 - d
00:46:117 (81,82) - d k
01:01:878 - k
01:06:660 - k
01:21:008 (172,173,174) - kkk
01:21:878 - d
01:24:921 - delete
01:25:138 - d
01:25:356 - d
01:26:443 - k

00:25:791 - d
00:31:008 - d
00:42:312 - d
00:45:791 - 00:47:530 - make this ? http://puu.sh/hXmnv.jpg
00:54:051 - k
01:26:878 (303,304,305) - ddk
01:24:921 (291,292,293,294) - k d d k

[R] wrote:

Suggestion

Muzukashi

00:27:530 - d
00:31:225 (45,46) - k k
00:33:617 - d
00:46:117 (81,82) - d k >>No. ddk k in 1/4 is unrankable! Fix as ddd k instead.
01:01:878 - k
01:06:660 - k
01:21:008 (172,173,174) - kkk
01:21:878 - d
01:24:921 - delete
01:25:138 - d
01:25:356 - d
01:26:443 - k

[-Deemo-] wrote:

From my modding queue:

[General]
Spinners should end at the same time throughout all difficulties

[Easy]
01:01:443 (1,2,3) - There are a couple of instances in the song where the notes touch a little bit, I think this should be fixed in order to maintain a clean looking song. For example 00:03:617 (2,3,1) - Looks very clumped up, especially because of the slow AR

[Hard]
I suggest using a slower slider velocity at 00:31:878 until 00:45:791 because this is the slower part of the song, onward from 45 seconds can be just 1x
00:59:704 ^
Slider velocity stuff may apply to other difficulties

[Insane]
Symmetrical, otherwise looks fine