Gordon123 wrote:

ia prishel shatat' tvoi truba
[General]

• 
  я не согласен с цветом первого комбо,ибо там же как на бг "кровавый(ёбта)волк" так вот ,я предлагаю его изменить > [img]http://puu.sh/ieqBK/f09019bfd2.png
  Окей, сделаю[/img]

[Easy]

• 
  01:41:610 (2) - это,тут всё норм,но чутка подогни его ещё,ибо знаешь как спускаешься по склону,таки это тоже сделай(так же)
  (всё что мне не понравилось^_а так ты +просил изи мод_а так бы я изи разобрал к херам ) Вроде как подогнал

[Normal]

• 
  01:25:738 (5) - а тут то ,совсем другое звучит ,я предлагаю сделать воть так > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3218322 Тут я пытался следовать вокалу, так что пока оставлю
  01:30:447 (3) - выгни его вот так(там же звук,как на спуске с горы) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3218324 ага
  02:05:680 (1) - ну я хз,удара то нет как нет? Есть же

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вроде всё норм! держи звезду!
Good Luck

Sgord1 wrote:

Feed me - новый псевдоним Spor'a (как Stan SB и Fox Stevenson, например), а Darkside - напрвление в dnb а, понятно

Вперед, на ранк!

Fort wrote:

hi there
put "dark" on tags, because i hear this song like dark drum and bass okay

Insane:
01:08:471 (1,2,3) - this is your first 3/4 pattern at sound like that, so please reduce distance to make this notes more clearly visible for first time playing fixed
01:22:424 (1,2,3) - i feel this flow a bit messy but dunno, up to you no changes
01:41:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this stream pattern shape more curved, like an circle (lol i cant explain this i hope you get it) fixed
01:48:064 (2,3,1) - this spacing is... made it bigger
02:02:017- hope you didnt miss this part (yeah i know this) nope, it's my choice to miss beat
03:20:331 (1) - wrong snapped problem (yeah vocal sound on 03:20:273 - so dunno if you follow instrument but it too low sound) hmm, will think about it

ok good

edit: why you put that purple on combo colour?? change to darker yellow or anything else okay

andrei7 wrote:

Приветики.
Я не моддер. Но для галочки - можно.
Бг не очень. Ну я вообще хз что с бг делать
Следи за тем, что скопировал. Да, знаю, потом ещё немного перемапаю скорее

Инсейн:
часть до 00:22:424 (1) - (да и вся в целом до брейка) заметно сложнее 01:51:726 (1) - 01:07:075 (1) - этой.
01:55:912 (1,2,3) -
04:23:820 (1,2,3) - (и раньше было что-то): Попытался сделать меньше

SPOILER

02:55:564 (6,7) - их чуть подальше друг от друга. ага

Хард:
01:30:447 (1) - лучше продлить до 01:31:668 (2) - , чтобы лучше читалось ага
01:41:610 (3) - По-ровнее, пожалуйста. Например, так. И да, ^ ага Но форму я не хочу менять

SPOILER

01:45:622 (4,5,6) - Да, много чего можно сделать лучше. Если хочешь, могу стать наци и выписать все бланкеты, оверлапы и другую фигню. Но это никому не нужно, наверное. паттерн сдвинул
03:27:134 (2,3) - не, слишком. сделай сёркл - слайдер. (Относится ли это к полярности? да, наверное) окей, сделал

SPOILER

слайдер с поворотами на 3\4 лучше отражает такой звук. Имеется в виду именно звук, если есть ударные в это время - понятно. эмм, привякзу бы

Адванцед
мда, сильно твои представления о сложности отличаются от моих. благо, звёзды есть, спасибо тому.
01:30:447 (3) - я настаиваю. Могу попытаться поподробнее объяснить, почему это прям так не читается и почему я всегда получаю сотку на сёркле после. Да, лучше объяснить
02:15:971 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - ой-ой-ой, как некрасиво. эээх, попытался сделать немного иначе. Не могу я в адвансед, всё-таки

Нормал
01:30:447 (3) - ну это же бееее Ну блин, не знаю я как ещё делать, фантазии нет. По-другому сделал немного
01:41:610 (3) - господи ^
они у тебя все весьма плохо выглядят.

кд можешь не давать.

HolyNightmare wrote:

I tried my best to mod ok ;w;

dont mind that order~

HardI really really like that patterns for example
01:33:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
they suit really well :3

oh and maybe set ar to 8. Is kinda better to play for me personally,, maybe you think same :3 will think about it

Fix that overlap maybe,, looks kinda weird to me 01:37:773 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/if2EX/e3239b943b.jpg okay

Insane
Nothing really found D:
But is very very fun to play,,, really nice flow :3 <3


Advanced

everything seems fine to me~

NormalWhy ever the game thinks its an Hard,lol.

Maybe let the slider come first,,, 01:55:389 (3,4) -
I think its easier to read then. yeah, your true

02:06:029 (2,3,4) - ^
02:11:610 (2,3,4) - ^

Easy
Seems everything ok


Hope i could help you at least a little bit.
Really like the map and the song.
Shooted a star :3

And GOOD LUCK with rank

Streliteela wrote:

Hi yooooo~~:3
Ahh this map is really great ! I can hardly find something in ez/nm/ad/hd, so I just mod the Insane diff, sorry for that
[Insane]

1. 00:20:244 (3,4,5) - flow is a little bit strange in this part, consider to move 00:20:680 (5) - to x188|y160 so that to make 3's tail, 4, and 5's head in a straight line. okay
2. 00:40:912 (2) - move this note to x439|y338; As 00:40:564 (1,2,3) - have the similar rhythm, no reason to make 00:40:564 (1,2) - further imo. okay
3. 00:43:180 (6) - stack it to 00:42:657 (3) - or move it to x366|y66 ? sry, but it's my lovely cycle jump pattern
4. 00:59:488 (4) - move to x130|y275, make 00:59:226 (3,4) - similar to 00:58:703 (1,2) - oh, okay
5. 01:12:133 (4) - stack it to the tail of 01:11:785 (3) - ? Just like 01:08:994 (3,4) - hmm, I think not
6. 01:25:215 (1) - move to x185|y215 to make 01:23:645 (6,1) - a blanket (just personal preferance _(:з」∠)_ lol, okay
7. 01:30:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (Personal opinion, FYI) As there's a obvious accent in 01:31:843 (9) - , why not try to separate 01:31:843 (9) - from other notes? See the image below:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   sry, but it's could be hard to jump in 1/4 after tiny stream
8. 01:43:005 (9) - ^ ^
9. 02:02:017 - add note? no, I think not
10. 02:09:866 (1,2,3) - ahh this pattern looks really strange XDD Try this maybe?
    
    SPOILER

    
    changed, but another way
11. 03:25:739 (3) - move to x315|y16 okay
12. 04:10:390 (3) - move to x89|y278 okay
13. 04:23:820 (1,2,3) - similar above (02:09:866 (1,2,3) - ) here, I think it's okay

Nice map! Good luck for rank~
Star!

Pjecoo wrote:

hi.

Easy:
• 02:16:494 - I really miss a note here. Please add one here. okaaay

Normal:
• 02:21:029 (4,5) - What about this? It fits better imo.
• 02:33:064 (5,6) - Same ^
• 04:35:854 (7,8) - ^
• 04:47:017 (6,7) - ^ changed all ^
• 03:00:099 (4,3) - Stack? hmm, i think not

Advanced:
• 01:37:773 (1,5) - Stack these two? hmm, okay
• 04:15:971 (7,3) - ^ but here not c:
• 04:18:238 (6,7) - Fix blanket. fixed

Other diffs seems fine.
Sorry for poor mod, but i didn't find any other issues in your mapset. This is really good beatmap.
Good Luck!

BoatKrab wrote:

Hi! :3
Notice: Sorry! I can't mod Easy Normal Advance because it's better for mod :3

[Hard]
01:54:517 (1,3) - Blanket? fixed
03:48:064 (3,4,5,6,1) - Why you does not make like this? rly, why not

03:59:750 (5,1) - Blanket? fixed
03:58:355 (3,1) - Make it stack noooo

[Insane]
00:17:889 (5) - Make it stack with 00:15:796 (2) -
00:16:494 (6) - Make it stack with 00:14:924 (4) -
00:27:657 (8) - Make it stack with 00:25:825 (3) -
00:31:145 (2) - Make it stack with 00:29:401 (1) -
02:11:785 (3) - Make it stack with 02:10:128 (2) -
02:16:145 (4) - Make it stack with 02:14:750 (4) -
04:30:099 (4) - Make it stack with 04:28:704 (4) - it's does'nt matter to stack it, because player'll don't remember where was previous object

^ Whyyy FUUUUUU :v

Good luck ._____________.

Sieg wrote:

софт хитнормал не сто миллисекунд, остальное нормально не чекал
поправь и я забаблю, а еще бы не помешал сорс с метадатой, но можно и без него

извини за задержку, не мог раньше никак

Inyuschan wrote:

gosh this is so long

[Easy]

1. 00:13:703 - missing note here? o: yeah, fixed
2. 00:55:912 (1,3,1,3) - they sound weird because if you listen carefully the end of sliders doesn't follow the music correctly, idk if you can do another stuff I just replace it to double 3/1 sliders, sounds better imo

[Normal]

1. 01:54:168 (6,4) - some patterns like these makes me think this diff is actually dense when personally these notes are dispensable, with this stuff Normal becomes harder at least for me :< check this stuff in whole map if you can because it doesn't happen only in kiai, I'd say the same for this 02:29:750 (5,6,7) - :<
   Make normal diff easier than it was, now there is no long combo starins, patterns are better

maybe Advanced should be Hard and Hard should be Light Insane o: okay

well poke me back and we'll see

Quality Assurance Team wrote:

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

Combo Colors

• 
  Your current combo color(s) blend in with the background, especially the red and therefore can be hard to see for players.

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,128
Combo2 : 255,66,66
Combo3 : 255,168,125
Combo4 : 226,235,167