Thank you rocket <3HappyRocket88 wrote:
Nhawak's Easy
- 00:55:854 What about adding a break here to give emphasizes of the upcoming notes? the break would be too short, I don't like it t-t
- 01:29:362 (1,1) You should give at least three white ticks of difference for players recover of this spinner. It doesn't hurt anyone if you make that spinners ends here 01:31:468 okok
- 01:54:625 (1) This slider doesn't play bad, I think you can make a neater slider that provides a better flow from the beginning till end. For example. currently seems fine
- 01:58:134 (3) NC here to have consistency with the NC combing pattern you manage. done
- 02:56:380 (2,1) The current two sliders flow good, but I think you're forcing the player to move the cursor into a non-perceptive flow. I highly suggest to do Ctrl + H in the slider two to improve the flow a bit. It would look like this. fixed
- 03:16:731 (4) The current circle with (4) breaks the NC combing you managed in the previous section. I know you wanted to emphasize the lyrics with this pattern, but players might get confuse because you didn't make long combos in the map. So it would be better if you set NC over this object to keep consistency. done
- 04:10:152 Remove this unnecessary green line. removed
I know this diff plays nice. But I think there are some sliders that make very weird flow that might confuse players because of the sliders' end suggest that the next note will be next to it, but you place it somewhere else. It would be great if you consider improving a bit the flow
of some of these sliders:
- 03:20:239 (1,2) In this case, doing Ctrl+ H over the slider (1) would make this slider flowed better. done
- 03:21:643 (2,1) Here doing Ctrl + G would make that this pattern was more intuitive. This slider's end 03:21:643 (2) suggest that the next flow could be above, but you're forcing players to go down following a very stuck flow. done
- 03:25:854 (1,2) Same here. Despite these two sliders don't flow bad, I think making something like this would make a better flow. done
- 03:31:468 (1,2) Symmetrically talking, the two sliders are neat. But they would be more perceptive if you had tried something like this. done
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