Here's my mod

[Easy]

00:43:385 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid left?
00:47:225 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid down?
01:21:305 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid right?
01:44:825 (2) - ^
01:48:665 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid up?

[Normal]

AR -1?

[Hard]

Fine.

Star~

General
Maybe you could set the preview point at 00:57:665 instead?

Easy
Great easy.

Normal
I'm really not too sure about the sliders like 00:43:385. They sound odd.

00:34:745 (1) - Why don't you flip this vertically so it would blanket the slider like in 00:36:665 (3,4)?
00:54:905 (3,4,5) - Plays very oddly. I would suggest changing it to something like 00:56:825 (3,4).
01:56:345 (3,4,5) - ^

Hard
03:01:025 (1) - IMO this should be start 1/4 back and end at the same time. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:04:865 (2) - ^
03:08:705 (2) - IMO move this 1/4 back. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:12:545 (2) - ^

nice map

Hard

00:42:185(1) - delete note
00:57:305(7,8,9,10) - instead of these notes, i think it sounds better if it was just a 1/2 beat slider.
01:01:625(1,2,3,4) - i don't like the overlaps all that much, but it's fine
01:18:905(1,2,3,4,5) - accelerate spacing? (as in the spacing gets bigger as the pattern goes on)
01:44:345(2..etc) - start clap pattern here?

Normal

AR-1

other than that, nice.

Easy

02:14:585(3) - new combo? and remove the new combo on the next beat.

Awesome map, and awesome song.

Star Power~~~

Take my mods as suggestions. I don't think I'm experienced enough to say anything definite yet.

General
Add hitsounds to all sections in all difficulties. The beginning sections and the section after the first break sound strangely empty without hitsounds.

Normal
00:42:425 - the section starting from this time, I'm not really feeling the triplet type thing that you have. It just doesnt seem to follow any part of the song for me.
01:43:865 - same as above ^

both hard and easy seem fine to me. ^^
nice map!

hi guys thank you for your modding!

NoHItter wrote:

SPOILER

General
Maybe you could set the preview point at 00:57:665 instead?i guess it's okay...

Normal
I'm really not too sure about the sliders like 00:43:385. They sound odd.^

Hard
03:01:025 (1) - IMO this should be start 1/4 back and end at the same time. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:04:865 (2) - ^
03:08:705 (2) - IMO move this 1/4 back. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:12:545 (2) - ^well i used some unique hitsound vocal here and i think it's fine...

winber1 wrote:

SPOILER

Awesome map, and awesome song.

Star Power~~~thx!

your help is essential.
again, thx a lot!

ok first off you have completely killed this mp3 by over amplifying it ;_;


you need to find another mp3 what aint amplified like this because atm it distorts like mad and feels very bad on the ears :/

set the preview point to 00:57:785 on your maps, the current preview point is extremely bad

Easy
wow why soooo little hitsounds at the start of this map :/ feels soo empty, it needs some hitsounds here


Normal

same comment as Easy over the hitsounding, needs some at the start

01:25:625 (3,4) - the pattern of these 2 sliders give it an look of 1/2 while its really 1/1 , i found this was really not nice when playing, i advise to redo these so it makes the timing of the notes abit more clear
02:09:065 - add a note here to follow your pattern, the vocals, and to increase the flow at this part
02:47:225 (4,5) - how this does not follow the lyric even though the next time it does feels rather bad, a timing like this would play epicly


Hard
same comment as the other diff's over the hitsounds :/

00:42:185 (1) - by removing this note it makes it play and follow the music much better
01:18:425 (3) - new combo here to follow your pattern
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i found this slider pattern felt too spread out thus making it more annoying than fun to play, either make them closer or give it a different shape i advise
01:58:625 (4,5) - the jump in this stream is really really bad, you need to give all the notes in the stream the same spacing tbh, this played the worst out of all the things in the maps :/

03:01:025 (1) - ok the timing pattern here dont really suit the song, add a note at 03:00:905 and you will notice how much better that suits the song, and do that for all the times you use this same timing pattern, it may seem like a big change, but please just try it and you will notice how much better it flows

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tbh i really enjoyed these maps, and they are getting pretty much perfect, the main thing what lets them down is the lack of hitsounds at the start and the waay over amplified mp3, anyway the maps was fun, good job and for now you get my star

My mod queues (;

Easy:
00:27:545 (2) - 1 grid down (?)
00:58:265 (2) - 2 grid down (?)
01:01:625 (1,2) - 1 grid up
But its actual okay

Normal:00:54:425 (2) - 2 grid left (when you change this, then change spacing too )
00:55:265 (4) - move to 55:385
01:18:665 (x) - add a note, then is sound better
01:56:705 (4) - move to 01:56:825

Hard:
Nice
00:42:185 (1) - delete this note
01.16:505 (1) - spacing
01:20:825 (1) - delete new combo
01:27:545 (1) - respact at spacing, please
01:44:825 (3) - spacing (?)
01:48:665 (3) - ^

Ok. I like this
I love the Song too :3 Star

jericho2442 wrote:

SPOILER

ok first off you have completely killed this mp3 by over amplifying it ;_;

you need to find another mp3 what aint amplified like this because atm it distorts like mad and feels very bad on the ears :/actually i don't know what it is XD but, well, used new mp3.

set the preview point to 00:57:785 on your maps, the current preview point is extremely badokay...

Easy
wow why soooo little hitsounds at the start of this map :/ feels soo empty, it needs some hitsounds hereadded.


Normal

same comment as Easy over the hitsounding, needs some at the startadded

01:25:625 (3,4) - the pattern of these 2 sliders give it an look of 1/2 while its really 1/1 , i found this was really not nice when playing, i advise to redo these so it makes the timing of the notes abit more cleardone.
02:09:065 - add a note here to follow your pattern, the vocals, and to increase the flow at this part ^
02:47:225 (4,5) - how this does not follow the lyric even though the next time it does feels rather bad, a timing like this would play epicly^

Hard
same comment as the other diff's over the hitsounds :/added.

00:42:185 (1) - by removing this note it makes it play and follow the music much betterokay...
01:18:425 (3) - new combo here to follow your pattern^
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i found this slider pattern felt too spread out thus making it more annoying than fun to play, either make them closer or give it a different shape i advise^
01:58:625 (4,5) - the jump in this stream is really really bad, you need to give all the notes in the stream the same spacing tbh, this played the worst out of all the things in the maps :/^

03:01:025 (1) - ok the timing pattern here dont really suit the song, add a note at 03:00:905 and you will notice how much better that suits the song, and do that for all the times you use this same timing pattern, it may seem like a big change, but please just try it and you will notice how much better it flowswell that's the only thing i'm afraid i couldn't agree with you x_x i tried to add the note and i found that makes these parts too noisy. it makes me feel really bad.

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tbh i really enjoyed these maps, and they are getting pretty much perfect, the main thing what lets them down is the lack of hitsounds at the start and the waay over amplified mp3, anyway the maps was fun, good job and for now you get my star thank you.

also to Dark_Ai, thx a lot!

不太喜歡這類歌...
下次不要找我mod這種歌...

[General]
Where the Source and tag?
加個靜音slider

[Easy]
00:11:665(x)-不要偷懶,在這裏開始map.
00:27:025(1)~00:42:385(3)-都沒hitsound?
00:52:465(x)-加音.
01:22:705(4)-醜了..
01:28:945(x)-Break不適當.在人聲不分不適合break也會讓人覺得不爽.
01:46:225(x)-加音然後clap.
01:53:905(x)-^同上.
02:04:945(2)-很難看...真的.
02:15:025(1)-從這裏開始沒clap?
03:02:545(1)-不好讀對新手..
03:08:785(2.3.4)-誤導!!這種排版不適合在Easy.
03:14:065(1)-不放在(3)-的下面會更好讀.

[Normal]
AR-1!!
00:11:665(x)-不要偷懶,在這裏開始map.
00:27:025(1)~00:42:385(3)-都沒hitsound
00:28:945(4)-New combo..
00:36:625(3)-和(1)-對稱.
00:43:345(2)-很奇怪的節奏.折返不要踏在藍線上.
00:45:265(5)-^ (之後的幾個不列出來了)
00:54:865(3.4.5.1)-誤導.令人覺得混亂.在新手diff (E/N)不要做這種排版.
01:28:225(x)-加音.
01:28:945(x)-Break不適當.在人聲不分不適合break也會讓人覺得不爽.
01:54:385(4.1)-交換new combo.
01:56:305(3.4.5)-新手很難抓拍子.所以會打偏.在N不要出現這些不工整的拍子..
02:16:465(4)-這樣放不好看..
02:43:105(x)漏了clap?
03:15:265,03:15:745(6)-試試在這兩條紅線上加clap.效果不錯..

[Hard]
00:11:665(x)-不要偷懶,在這裏開始map.
00:28:945(4)-這slider重新拉下.兩邊不平衡.
00:32:785(1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9)-感覺在這裏放開spacing不好.打起來怪怪.
00:34:825(2)-珊掉?其實我覺得triplet在紅線上放會好聽一點.
00:36:745(2)-^ 同上.
00:39:265(2.3.4)-這聽起來就比較舒服...
00:56:785(3)-不好讀.
01:02:065(2)-在(2)-的尾部未重疊(1)-
01:03:025(4)-^
01:05:905(2)-這個(2)-不好看.
01:19:105(2.4.5)-(2.4)-想左/右移2格(LV3)然後(5)-刪掉.
01:25:585(6.7.8)-為了和之前協調.請縮短間距.
01:28:945(x)-Break不適當.在人聲不分不適合break也會讓人覺得不爽.
02:07:945(2)-極度不和諧.刪.
02:08:185(x)-然後在這裏加音.
02:43:105(x)漏了clap?
02:59:665(6)-New combo?
03:04:705)x)-加音.然後後面的slider換成notes.

恩mod完...
想說什麼呢?= =
恩- -你的風格不是工整形 :O
所以我可能會有很多nazi..
恩.莫怪

[Easy]
- None

[Normal]
- 1:13:345 - Insert Break Time

[Hard]
- 1:13:345 - Break time again

Nothing much is wrong, well mapped. Don't have to give kudos since I didn't add much >:
Star~

以下mod全为建议 可以参考或者忽略
[General]
TAG和source都不用加么
[Hard]
01:58:825 lol 不是一串的stream么
OD-1
Slider tick rate 2 lol 不会觉得很难受么 而且没意义。
[Normal]
Slider tick rate 2 lol 不会觉得很难受么 而且没意义。 X2
[Easy]
那个。。。。。custom override1有东西么 那你跟用N不是一样么lol


That's all.(说实话不是我喜欢的歌的类型lol
Star

okay fixed some.
拉你們來mod不喜歡的歌實在對不起
下次如果不喜歡的話直接告訴我就可以了,我不介意的
anyway, thx a lot!

我只是跟着泪包来的 :3
歌曲还OK~ＳＴＡＲ

Hihi!
(These are just my opinions; feel free to take or not)

[Easy]
Plays quite well! Good job!

Beginning section still seems lacking in hitsounds...

02:26:545 (1) - Consider mapping up to 2:27:985 and starting the spinner there!
03:02:545 (1,2) / 00:45:265 (3) - Consider making this (and similar other 'response-like' parts) with soft hitsounds or simply softer volumes? It's just something to try~

[Normal]

Same comment about hitsounds. Even small things like a finish on the start of 00:34:705 (1) would help c:

00:40:705 (1) - Possibly end spinner on the earlier white tick?
02:00:625 (4) - Move two lvl 3 grids up and right?
02:03:025 (1) - Move endpoint of slider to 'flow' into 2 better?
02:22:225 (1) - Move up to flow better from 6, or move 6's endpoint down?
02:23:185 (3) - ^
Same comment about spinner~

[Hard]
01:14:545 (1) - 01:19:825 (5) - more hitsounding? c:
Again, consider making parts like 01:50:305 (1,2,3,4) - a bit quieter?
Spinner comment~

Again, good job! *Star

NI HAO

Sorry for delay and long mod

General
* No tags?

Easy
* Approach Rate +1 would better for me
* Try avoiding the circle and slider are place in white tick, it could be boring if you do that. Try making more interesting by following the rhythm in music

00:41:425 (3) - Are you sure you using whistle+finish at tail slider? This hitsound would be hurt player ears if you using whistle+finish. Try removing whistle or finish to make better to hear
00:42:865 ~ 00:57:745 - Is that nesescary to add whistle between this time? It could be boring and hurt player's ears if you do that
01:43:825 ~ 01:59:185 - ^
02:15:505 (2) - Ugly slider

Normal
* Try combine 1 slider and circle into 1 slider. Example 01:02:065 (2,3). You could make remove the circle and add 1 repeating slider for the slider. This is will be easy for average player
* Actually, I highly doubt when I start to mod this diff ._. Don't ask why

00:30:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I am pretty not sure if this difficult for average player, since it's like a 1/2 stream for average player. Can you make a easier pattern for average player, so they can enjoy the pattern? But, I just suggestion~
00:38:785 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:385 (1) - Try avoiding this slider place on white tick after spinner end at red tick. It's too difficult for average player
00:54:865 (3,4,5) - I think this timing pattern would be tricky for average player (maybe?) Try combine this into one slider?
01:56:305 (3,4,5) - ^
02:08:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, the pattern might too hard for average player

Hard
00:56:785 (3) - New combo?
00:59:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well, I can play this jumps, but it's too difficult to play if is full screen. Can you make a jump smaller?
01:07:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:27:985 (5) - Move 1 grid up? (Nazi)
02:14:785 ~ 02:26:065 - No hitsound between this?

Orz sorry for long mod

star

有点恐怖

HI
Here is my Mod 4 Mod of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27700

[General]
Add some tags?

[Easy]
01:15:505 (2,1) - unreadble for beginner?
03:13:105 (3) - end at 03:13:825 ?

[Normal]
AR - 1
OD - 1
00:36:625 (3) - upside down?
00:42:385 (1) - too early form the spinner in Normal
00:53:905 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too mass
01:26:545 (4) - end at 01:27:265 ? If do this,you should remap 01:27:505 (5,6,7)
01:55:345 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - oops

[Hard]
It seem Hard+
00:50:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - remap as 2 hexagons?
00:56:305 (2) - end at 00:56:665 ?
01:51:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hexagons?
02:23:905 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ctrl+1 remap more like square?
02:43:105 (1) - begin at 02:43:345 and add a circle at 02:43:105 ?

Nice map
Sweet shining shooting star~~

Almost one week later
Hard
- More like an Insane really
01:01:585 (1,2,3,4) That's one ugly overlap, for (1,2) stack the slider tails and do the same for (3,4)
01:03:985 (3,4) Same

nice map

Hiya~
(抱歉，我比较习惯用英文mod >_<)

[Easy]
- Nothing here. Nice and easy. :3

[Normal]
- 00:34:705 (1,2,3,4) - Either flip 00:34:705 (1) or 00:36:625 (3) to make the two pairs of sliders symmetrical?
- 00:38:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, how about this?

- 00:40:705 (1) - End this at 00:41:905 to allow more time before the next beat?
- 00:54:865 (3,4,5) - Consider making this a repeating slider since it's a Normal.
- 01:56:305 (3,4,5) - ^


[Hard]
- 00:27:985 (2,3) - Delete 00:28:465 (3) and repeat 00:27:985 (2) once?
- 00:37:825 (5,6) - Delete 00:38:305 (6) and repeat 00:37:825 (5) once?
- 02:18:385 (1,2) - Hmm, how about this?

- 02:59:905 (1) - New combo?

很好的图，感觉上反而是我在鸡蛋里挑骨头。
若觉得我的mod没用，就不用kudosu吧。
Nice map deserving a star~

ok fixed some. thank you for your modding!
well finally i've noticed that there is a absolutely empty tags blank...but to tell the truth, i don't know what should i add into the tags.
i'm wondering if that someone could help me...

[Easy]:

1. 03:08:305 (T) - unused section
2. 01:05:425 (T) - ^
3. 02:06:865 (T) - ^
4. 02:52:945 (T) - ^

[Normal]:

1. 03:15:985 (T) - KIAI

[Hard]:

1. 00:56:785 (3) - new combo, or kind of misleading.
2. not sure about the AR, but whatever.

star~

Colin Hou wrote:

[Easy]:

1. 03:08:305 (T) - unused section
2. 01:05:425 (T) - ^
3. 02:06:865 (T) - ^
4. 02:52:945 (T) - ^

[Normal]:

1. 03:15:985 (T) - KIAI

[Hard]:

1. 00:56:785 (3) - new combo, or kind of misleading.
2. not sure about the AR, but whatever.

star~

all fixed, thanks colin.
also yay another 50 stars!!!

[General]

1. 02:14:785 ---> 02:26:305 这一段可以跟着节奏来加clap / whistle

[Easy]

1. All fine.

[Normal]

1. 01:14:545 ---> 01:19:825 跟着鼓点加soft-whistle?
2. 03:11:425 & 03:11:905 add clap (和03:07:345这个加的效果一致，而且听起来感觉还不错)

[Hard]

1. 00:40:705 (1) - 往前移1/2 beat能落在鼓点上比较迎合节奏(如果需要，也可以在这一点上简单的加个circle来凑紧节奏)
2. 01:12:625 (4) - add clap?
3. 03:04:825 (3) - 节奏有点突兀，在前面1/4拍前叠加个circle会比较好(后面的几个3/4 beat玩起来比较顺手，就是这个总感觉不舒服XD)

Nice map.
/me shoots a star.

good map and thank for your works on my map!

这首歌曲还有Korean版的，不如改歌曲名字为↓↓↓

Super Girl (Chinese ver.) 或 Super Girl (Chinese Version)

不过这个不怎么重要

Easy

nice

Normal

01:00:625(6) - 减短一个往返
01:01:105(6) - clap

其余


Hard

00:48:025(5) - 向下移动
00:56:305(2) - 换个朝向

starrr

No kds

很明显..我应该直接star这个图就可以了,图已经很完善了...

This is mod for "Super Girl(Super Junior-M) - JauiPlaY"
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General
offset = 3974
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EASY

00:40:454 (1,2) - 建议给分开，我看我同学（新手）打，遇上重叠在一起的就要出错
01:15:494 (2,1) - 分开一下吧，这样会被前面打出的300挡住不太好看出来
01:22:694 (4) - 左右两端不够平- -重新画下？（这属于nazi，不喜欢可以54之）
01:26:534 (4) - 这货在打的时候挨到HP条了，如果可以的话给往下移一点（这也是nazi）
01:46:694 (3) - new combo？
01:50:534 (3) - 同上
01:54:374 (4) - 同上
02:14:534 (3) - new combo？
02:15:014 (1) - 去掉new combo？
02:22:214 (3) - new combo？
02:22:694 (1) - 去掉new combo？
03:15:974 (3) - new combo？

做得不错
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Normal
00:28:945 (4) - new combo
00:42:385 (1) - 会不会有点出来得太快了呢
00:45:265 (5) - new combo,总感觉听起来有点怪- -
00:49:105 (5) - new combo
00:55:585 (5,1) - 重叠上吧，我感觉不好看
01:28:465 (7) - new combo
01:43:825 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:46:225 (4) - 加上clap
01:47:665 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:50:065 (4) - 加上clap
01:51:505 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:53:425 (3) - 同上
01:57:025 (5,1) - 重叠上吧，我感觉不好看
02:43:105 (1) - 多一个spinner出来，和easy不一样呢
02:56:785 (1) - 加上finish试试看，我觉得不错
03:02:545 (4) - new combo
03:06:385 (4) - new combo
03:10:225 (5) - new combo
03:14:065 (5) - new combo
03:15:985 (7) - new combo

这个也挺赞的
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Hard
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01:01:585 (1,2) - new combo,关掉GS和DS，把这俩的结尾重叠在一起比较好看
01:02:545 (3,4) - 同上
01:03:985 (3,4) - 同上
01:10:705 (4) - 这货在打的时候挨到HP条了，如果可以的话给往下移一点（这也是nazi）
02:12:625 (1) - 没有完全重叠好，仔细看看
02:43:105 (1) - 多一个spinner出来，和easy不一样呢
02:59:905 (7) - new combo

说实话这个HARD不够难啊！
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总体来说非常不错！STAR~！
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EasyModder Beta2
Program By Weiren

=。= 趁还能给星的时候给个好了...

okay~修改了一些地方并且更正了名字 補充了tags
感謝gdeath,TTTTTTTTTTTT和Weiren的mod以及炮姐,wa747wzp和犀利哥Selee的star~
謝謝你們的支持!

S4S XD.....

Can't quite stand the song, sorry. Just ran a real quick look through the maps...

[General]
Why so much normal-whistle D: it doesn't fit the song imo...... well whatever, I don't like this song anyway.

[Hard]
00:34:465 (9) - move to 00:34:585
00:44:785 - add note here
00:48:625 - ^
00:52:465 - ^
00:56:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this looks quite bad imo
02:49:105 (1,2,3,4) - hide the ends of 3,4 properly under the starts of 1,2
02:51:985 (3) - hide the end of 3 properly under 2
03:14:785 (6) - move to 03:14:905

[Normal]
00:54:865 (3,4,5) - why would you do this to me ;_; delete 4 please, it doesn't fit the song.
01:55:345 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern look like random to me. also delete 4 please, ^

[Easy]
I think it's fine...

/me stars

可怜我没KDS不然给你砸粉的

forgive my poor English.So,I will use Chinese....
so,I've no mod experience....you don't need to think about too much.

自我吐槽:都是些可以无视的建议
don't forget my Mod~

okay fixed some.
9你的mod真的很不錯...真的
但是有一些地方改起來會非常非常麻煩...而那些也并不是一定要改的
所以很抱歉那些我就留著沒改了!(逃

Normal
00:42:385 (1) - too soon after spinner
01:54:385 (4) - hitburst from (3) partially covers the repeat of (4). I think this should be fine though, so you don't have to change it

oops i forgot, sry.

ouranhshc wrote:

Normal
00:42:385 (1) - too soon after spinnerguess it's fine since the spinner is easy to complete.
01:54:385 (4) - hitburst from (3) partially covers the repeat of (4). I think this should be fine though, so you don't have to change itso i do not change.

thx!

Should be ranked ^.^

Hi~

~General~
- Not saying you should change anything, but playing from the easiest diff to the hardest, [Hard] felt really fast compared to [Normal]. It might be because the AR difference is a bit high (5 - 8) or it might just be me...

~Easy~
01:15:505 (2,1) - Nice symmetry, though the overlap looks a bit ugly ;~;

~Normal~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?
01:54:385 (4) - You should move this slider away, the repeat arrow is almost hidden (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87574) and I don't like it being in a Normal :/
02:12:145 (3) - I'd move this one away too, but I'll leave this one to you since it's not as bad.
03:15:025 (6) - ^ (you love to do this, don'tchu x3)

~Hard~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?

Fun~ :3 *star*

all fixed. thx a lot!

Awesome

BUBBLED!!

thanks a lot Beuchi-chan!

OK Fine.

Gratz

Congra~

基片鸭神mapper膜拜中0.0

grats~~~

谢谢abalee以及各位的支持!
thanks to abalee and all you guys!

说我是神mapper的以后不给mod(炸