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qoot8123
updated~
JUDYDANNY
Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Timing]
  1. 00:17:404 – add a redline?
    - I guess Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.
  2. 01:04:287 – same as above.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:52:846 – move to 00:52:287 - ? - It works better to vocal smoother.
  2. 01:30:799 – move to 01:30:241 -? - Same as above.
  3. 01:09:590 – move to 01:09:311 - ?
    - we can lisnted on 01:09:310 – cymbals that sounds noisy , and on 01:09:311 - , we can also hear the guitar.
    I guess 1:09:590 01:09:310 – this note is more playable for Kantan players.
  4. 01:11:822 – move to 01:11:543 – ?
    - same as above.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:37:497 – remove?
    - 01:35:543 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) – felt a bit long.
[Nardo’s Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:613 – consider to add d for the spread between to M>>Oni. It also works well.
[m1ng’s Oni]
  1. 01:07:148 – remove ? be a consistency with 01:04:846 (4,5) -.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:40:914 - move to 01:40:939 – (1/12) ?
    -It sounds early. About Ishida diff, he put on 01:40:939 –. It sounds better.
  2. Last x4.00 is no problem to me. Checked HD and HR.
[Ishida]
  • finishers lol
  1. 00:44:194 – add finisher? Same as 00:53:125 -.
  2. 01:03:729 – remove the finisher?
    - It sounds no crash and early to follow.
  3. 01:11:543 – remove finisher?
    - It bit a cool down and calm part and Guitar still sounds well, same as 01:09:311 -.
  4. 01:10:427 – remove finisher?
    - make a emphasized to 01:12:659 – distortion accent?
  5. 01:13:497 – change to d ?
    - any sounds not up.
  6. 01:15:729 - d, and 01:16:008 - k?
    - same as above and 01:16:008 – snare sounds it fits better.
  7. from 01:22:148 – to 01:23:264 - , how about the turn down hitsounds volume … about 40~50%?
    – 01:22:148 - It sounds noisy to usual D finisher.
  8. 01:33:311 (944) – remove the finisher?
    -Just my opinon, plays a bit over power imo.
ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"?
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Timing]
  1. 00:17:404 – add a redline?
    - I guess Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.
  2. 01:04:287 – same as above.
[Nardo’s Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:613 – consider to add d for the spread between to M>>Oni. It also works well. fixed
ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"?
Thanks for your mod JuDa~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/iUeui.rar
Topic Starter
qoot8123

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Timing]
  1. 00:17:404 – add a redline? added
    - I guess Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.
  2. 01:04:287 – same as above.^
[notice][Kantan]
  1. 00:52:846 – move to 00:52:287 - ? - It works better to vocal smoother. here I prefer to follow drum's roll on 00:52:845 -
  2. 01:30:799 – move to 01:30:241 -? - Same as above. ^
  3. 01:09:590 – move to 01:09:311 - ? here I want to follow the guitar's accent and make 3/1 +1/1 pattern on 01:08:753 (92,93,94,95) - (similar with 3/2 +1/2 pattern)
    - we can lisnted on 01:09:310 – cymbals that sounds noisy , and on 01:09:311 - , we can also hear the guitar.
    I guess 1:09:590 01:09:310 – this note is more playable for Kantan players.
  4. 01:11:822 – move to 01:11:543 – ? ^
    - same as above.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:37:497 – remove?
    - 01:35:543 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) – felt a bit long. indeed, but i feel the song itself is pretty continuous and kantan also contains continuous pattern (2/1+1/1), and doesn't give any 4/1 break, muzu also same as well
[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:40:914 - move to 01:40:939 – (1/12) ?
    -It sounds early. About Ishida diff, he put on 01:40:939 –. It sounds better. moved :3
  2. Last x4.00 is no problem to me. Checked HD and HR.
ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"? yea, added
thanks for mod!
wait for ming and ishida's reply :)
mingmichael
thanks for the mods~ ;3 i just added a note on 01:04:914 - instead of deleting 01:07:147 -

m1ng's Oni
Topic Starter
qoot8123
updated~
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Ishida]
  • finishers lol
  1. 00:44:194 – add finisher? Same as 00:53:125 -. ok :3
  2. 01:03:729 – remove the finisher? ok :3
    - It sounds no crash and early to follow.
  3. 01:11:543 – remove finisher? ok ~
    - It bit a cool down and calm part and Guitar still sounds well, same as 01:09:311 -.
  4. 01:10:427 – remove finisher? ok ~
    - make a emphasized to 01:12:659 – distortion accent?
  5. 01:13:497 – change to d ? ok ~
    - any sounds not up.
  6. 01:15:729 - d, and 01:16:008 - k? no ;w;
    - same as above and 01:16:008 – snare sounds it fits better.
  7. from 01:22:148 – to 01:23:264 - , how about the turn down hitsounds volume … about 40~50%? ok :D
    – 01:22:148 - It sounds noisy to usual D finisher.
  8. 01:33:311 (944) – remove the finisher? no ;w;
    -Just my opinon, plays a bit over power imo.
[/notice]
ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"?
Topic Starter
qoot8123
update~ :)
JUDYDANNY
.3.
@Kantan :arrow: 00:42:520 - added don by creator. It's also better to me.
@Muzukashii :arrow: 00:52:008 - make a easier for a spread between toMuzukashii. Oni .
@Ishda's Inner Oni :arrow: Talked with Ishida about the some worong replied, and I agreed his thinking.

Okay, looks fine to me. Nice overall :D
Good Luck for Rank ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
qoot8123
thanks ! :D
JUDYDANNY
/me baka. bakaJuda comes.

Bubbled!
Nwolf
that ninja note <.<
unpredictable that it appears, with no connection to the song AND it's snapped on such a baka tick that counting 1-2-3-4 wouldn't help either

why is it still there
DakeDekaane
hi qoot.

[General]
  1. Shouldn't first kiai end in 01:04:287 - ?
  2. You may want to adjust the HP setting for Futsuu and Kantan at least.
[ Kantan]
  1. 01:23:263 (112) - Shouldn't this slider end in 01:24:100 - and have a note in 01:24:380 - like in the first kiai? Plays much better by having a sure hit.
    I liked a lot this Kantan, breaks didn't feel forced at all, and mantained a fair density and pattern complexity according to the song.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 01:23:263 (202) - Same as Kantan.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:263 - The pattern here is weak compared to what the song offers. I know you want to not make the difficulty too hard, but this section would benefit with a few more notes to give a nice emphasis to the drums here. Alternatively, a note in 01:24:240 - would be enough.
[ Oni]

  • Nice.
[ Inner Oni (qoot)]
  1. 01:18:519 (753) - Any reason you're not skipping this note like in previous patterns, I think you should remove this as music doesn't seem to change here.
  2. 01:19:356 (760,761) - Should be d k for consistency with previous patterns, too.
  3. 01:20:752 (769,770) - By removing these notes you keep said consistency and give more emphasis to the true beats in the music (and plays better, imo).
  4. 01:30:519 - Not using 1/6 here?
[ Inner Oni (Ishida)]
  • I'll try as much as possible to keep the 999 combo, I can't promise it.
  1. 00:28:007 (274,275) - We have notes here, but not in 00:19:078 - . I really feel this should be consistent. If you remove the notes here, you could add them in 00:55:287 - , where the pause isn't really fitting considering you had no break in the previous similar section, also this break kind of breaks the flow.
  2. 00:45:938 (468) - This note sounds better being in 00:45:799 - , the 1/2 break in 00:45:869 - is more fitting for vocals, imo.
  3. 00:48:031 (490) - This note should be removed, stream feels better beginning in 00:48:101 -
  4. 01:02:055 - Similar case here, this beat would feel better if is being hit than a break due its intensity.
  5. 01:03:938 (663,664) - These notes here takes out the emphasis of the strong beats in 01:03:728 (661,662) - , I'd suggest to remove them, a pause here would be really fitting to achieve said emphasis.
  6. 01:08:193 - Maybe it's not that clear for me as it seems you are following the guitar, but no 1/6 usage here?
  7. 01:18:380 - 01:19:496 - 01:20:612 - Any reason for the missing 1/6 patterns you used before for this sound? This inconsistency feels really odd.
  8. 01:23:263 - The colour changes in this stream aren't that fitting with the song, which changes in even patterns. I'd recommend to change the stream to kkkdkkddkkkkddddd, and probably remove 01:23:333 (832) - to follow better the music.
  9. 01:26:124 (866,868) - The song doesn't really support a stream here, as music keeps the same intensity, nor drumroll in the music. Remove both highlighted notes.
  10. 01:30:519 (918,922) - I highly recommend to change the colour of these notes, as I explained in the first stream suggestions, the colour change on blue ticks doesn't fit the song nicely.
  11. 01:26:124 (866,868) - Not using 1/6 here?
    The difficulty has some inconsistencies here and there, but I guess that's the mapping style, so just pointed the more awkward ones.
The ninja note in both Inner Oni took me by surprise, but I think it fits due the "bang" at the end. Such way to kill FCs.
Shohei Ohtani
F I N A L L Y
Nardoxyribonucleic

DakeDekaane wrote:

hi qoot.

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:263 - The pattern here is weak compared to what the song offers. I know you want to not make the difficulty too hard, but this section would benefit with a few more notes to give a nice emphasis to the drums here. Alternatively, a note in 01:24:240 - would be enough. Fixed the latter.
Thanks for the mod Dake~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/mHwZ1.zip
mingmichael

Reditum wrote:

F I N A L L Y
Topic Starter
qoot8123
@dake
inner oni :
01:18:519 (753) - i see, but i want to make a bit different with former part , also the break on 01:17:682 - ~01:18:100 - is also different with former pattern.

01:20:752 (769,770) - i don't want to remove these notes, i would like make the notes' density higher gradually with 01:13:217 - ~ 01:17:682 -

01:30:519 - that 1/6 seems not really clear,so i just follow the previous pattern on 00:52:427 (516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526) -

hp setting and kiai time are fixed and read through nwolf's comment, i decide remove the last ninjia note.

thanks :3

and waiting for ishida's reply
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-

DakeDekaane wrote:

hi qoot.

[ Inner Oni (Ishida)]
[list]I'll try as much as possible to keep the 999 combo, I can't promise it.
[*]00:28:007 (274,275) - We have notes here, but not in 00:19:078 - . I really feel this should be consistent. If you remove the notes here, you could add them in 00:55:287 - , where the pause isn't really fitting considering you had no break in the previous similar section, also this break kind of breaks the flow. Fixed ><
[*]00:45:938 (468) - This note sounds better being in 00:45:799 - , the 1/2 break in 00:45:869 - is more fitting for vocals, imo.
[*]00:48:031 (490) - This note should be removed, stream feels better beginning in 00:48:101 -
[*]01:02:055 - Similar case here, this beat would feel better if is being hit than a break due its intensity. Fixed ~
[*]01:03:938 (663,664) - These notes here takes out the emphasis of the strong beats in 01:03:728 (661,662) - , I'd suggest to remove them, a pause here would be really fitting to achieve said emphasis. ok :3
[*]01:08:193 - Maybe it's not that clear for me as it seems you are following the guitar, but no 1/6 usage here? I'm following drum actually ;w;
[*]01:18:380 - 01:19:496 - 01:20:612 - Any reason for the missing 1/6 patterns you used before for this sound? This inconsistency feels really odd. Because I thought the part is more calm than the former >< still fixed
[*]01:23:263 - The colour changes in this stream aren't that fitting with the song, which changes in even patterns. I'd recommend to change the stream to kkkdkkddkkkkddddd, and probably remove 01:23:333 (832) - to follow better the music. Fixed
[*]01:26:124 (866,868) - The song doesn't really support a stream here, as music keeps the same intensity, nor drumroll in the music. Remove both highlighted notes. ok ><
[*]01:30:519 (918,922) - I highly recommend to change the colour of these notes, as I explained in the first stream suggestions, the colour change on blue ticks doesn't fit the song nicely. Fixed ~
[*]01:26:124 (866,868) - Not using 1/6 here?
Topic Starter
qoot8123
updated~
DakeDekaane
Quick recheck for Ishida's diff:
01:26:333 (873,874,875,876,877,878) - I did a mistake in my post above. 1/4 should be used here. ;_;

Some ideas to go for the 999 original combo:
00:34:077 (335) - This note could be removed to begin the stream at the same time as in the music.
00:51:379 (526) - This note could be removed, so each stream covers a different vocal.
01:20:263 (814) - You are using just triples for other similar parts in the music, so this note could be removed too, to keep the consistency.

Edit: 01:40:938 (1003) - This could fit better as a big kat, in my opinion. Also consider 3x for the speed of this one? (It'd be a bit more friendly)

That'd be all.
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-

DakeDekaane wrote:

Quick recheck for Ishida's diff:
01:26:333 (873,874,875,876,877,878) - I did a mistake in my post above. 1/4 should be used here. ;_; ok xD

Some ideas to go for the 999 original combo:
00:34:077 (335) - This note could be removed to begin the stream at the same time as in the music. I still want to remain this one ><" sorry
00:51:379 (526) - This note could be removed, so each stream covers a different vocal. fixed the whole stream ><
01:20:263 (814) - You are using just triples for other similar parts in the music, so this note could be removed too, to keep the consistency.

Edit: 01:40:938 (1003) - This could fit better as a big kat, in my opinion. Also consider 3x for the speed of this one? (It'd be a bit more friendly) Ok :3

That'd be all.
Topic Starter
qoot8123
updated~
DakeDekaane
Looks good.

Qualified!
Topic Starter
qoot8123
thanks! :)
OzzyOzrock
o_o wow old bubble LMAO
Charlotte
Gratz~ :)
-byakuya-
最後真的 笑了xd
Dino99
恭喜~ ;)
JUDYDANNY
Congratz! ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
-Sh1n1-
Gratz qoot-senpai :33
Surono
Ming!1! and dem Ishida.. `_L`

"dubzsh" gratz sir
Nwolf
wait why does Ishida's diff still have the ninja
Arrival
why tf would you rank a ninja note x4 SV at the very end of the map................. jesus
Nofool
git gud
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