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Fire EX. - Shattered Dreams [Taiko]

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qoot8123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月2日 at 上午 08:55:17

Artist: Fire EX.
Title: Shattered Dreams
Tags: 再會!青春 Goodbye! You!th Nardoxyribonucleic mingmichael -[ ix ishida xi ]-
BPM: 215
Filesize: 3391kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.21 stars, 249 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (5.61 stars, 945 notes)
  3. Ishida's Inner Oni (5.69 stars, 999 notes)
  4. Kantan (1.47 stars, 140 notes)
  5. m1ng's Oni (3.87 stars, 593 notes)
  6. Nardo's Muzukashii (3.23 stars, 448 notes)
Download: Fire EX. - Shattered Dreams
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Lyrics
甘有聽到怪手的聲 那是在拆咱的厝
甘有聽到咱的夢 破碎的聲
甘有看到子彈的影 那是要取阮性命
這個所在已經沒希望 核電廠趕快爆炸

眼前是絕望的寒冬 我已經沒半項 破碎的夢 畫面漸漸無聲
絕望的寒冬 我已經沒半項 破碎的夢 甘說你攏沒感覺

我只是想要保護屬於我的東西(絕望的寒冬 我已經沒半項)
我只是想要一點尊嚴和權利而已(破碎的夢 畫面漸漸無聲)
我只是想要抱著希望過生活(絕望的寒冬 我已經沒半項)
我只是想要自由地說一句話(破碎的夢)
Spy

qoot8123 wrote:

ㄍㄋㄋ
Nardoxyribonucleic
稍微改了一下, 感覺好像順一些

http://puu.sh/imbWv.rar
BlackHairEND
Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;


[General Setting]
  1. Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, )
[Kantan]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:03:171 - add d This part ( 01:03:729 (86,87) - ) is better flow, here (01:03:171 - ) felt better place is good.
[Futsuu]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:50:753 - 00:59:683 - add d  Roll sound of the drum was heard the sound of the back.
    I felt that it is good if you put the d in this two parts.
[Nardo's Muzukashii]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:23:543 - add d We will see that put to match the lyrics. But, then you have the sound of the drum, I thought want excitement and because it is before the rust.
  2. 01:23:683 - add d same as above
  3. 01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - this part (01:32:194 - ) is the strong sound of cymbals. It would end up destroying the unity, but better here has felt good.
  4. 01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - same as above
[ming's Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:17:194 - add k  High sound is heard from behind.
  2. 01:32:194 - add k  Since there is a large cymbal sound, I felt Notes want.

[Inner Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. No problem :3
[ishida's Inner Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:58:846 (610,611,612,613) - change to ddk  1/6 sound of I felt not reached
  2. 01:03:869 (664) - change k Sound of cymbals I felt strong.
good luck :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

BlackHairEND wrote:

Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;


[General Setting]
  1. Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, )
[Nardo's Muzukashii]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:23:543 - add d We will see that put to match the lyrics. But, then you have the sound of the drum, I thought want excitement and because it is before the rust. fixed
  2. 01:23:683 - add d same as above ^
  3. 01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - this part (01:32:194 - ) is the strong sound of cymbals. It would end up destroying the unity, but better here has felt good. No change because of the presence of snare at 01:32:334 -
  4. 01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - same as above ^
good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/ivKsZ.rar
Topic Starter
qoot8123

BlackHairEND wrote:

Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;


[General Setting]
  1. Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, )
[Kantan]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 01:03:171 - add d This part ( 01:03:729 (86,87) - ) is better flow, here (01:03:171 - ) felt better place is good. i think this note is optional, and i also want to make some bigger break, so i will consider this one
[Futsuu]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:50:753 - 00:59:683 - add d  Roll sound of the drum was heard the sound of the back.
    I felt that it is good if you put the d in this two parts.
    because 1/2 is a bit hard for futsuu with 210 bpm, so keep this


good luck :)
thanks !
mingmichael
BlackHairEND
Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;


[General Setting]
  1. Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, ) i think qoot could change it for me :P
[ming's Oni]


  • <<Mapping>>
  1. 00:17:194 - add k  High sound is heard from behind. i keep mine with a 1/2 notes there. actually it's a nice idea for adding a note there, but i prefer with the easy one :P
  2. 01:32:194 - add k  Since there is a large cymbal sound, I felt Notes want. [color=#8000FF]nice catch, but accidentally i didn't try to put it, since the patterns are changed and it becomes a bit soft with some 3/2 breaks (from 01:31:078 - ~ 01:35:543 -)[/color]

good luck :)
thanks for the mods :3 but sorry no changes ><
S a n d

Taiko mod request from: qoot8123
Request Type: PM Request
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: m1ng's Oni, Inner Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*



- 01:35:543 ~ 01:38:892 - Why not have kiai here?


- 00:00:799 - Add d here? There's sound there.
- 00:03:032 - ^
- 00:22:148 - Change to k?
- 00:31:218 - Add d here? There's sound there.
- 00:33:450 - ^
- 00:34:148 and 00:34:427 - Change to k?
- 00:37:008 - Change to d?
- 00:38:892 (3,4) - Move to 00:38:683 to fit the song?
- 01:07:636 - Change the slider to something else? It is weird to have unfitting slider and only one throughout the entire map.
- 01:40:846 - I think it will be fine to add a big note like Inners too. Just that it doesn't have to be invisible note, normal sv would be fine.


(Shit, I can't find anything)
- 00:33:032 - Change to d?
- 00:50:683 (198,199,200) - Ctrl+G? A.k.a kddkd.
- 01:08:753 - D?


- 00:22:985 ~ 00:23:543 - Would be better like this?
- 00:27:590 - Change to ddk?
- 00:28:985 - Change to k? and also 00:29:125 Change to d?
- 00:32:822 - Change to d or remove?
- 00:56:055 - Change to ddkkdkd?
- 00:58:846 - Change from (dddk) -> ddk? It's weird to have a random 1/6 popping out of nowhere lol.
- 01:03:729 - Big notes aren't allowed to be in the end of 1/4 stream. Unless it's color was changed such as ddK or kkD, but ddD or kkK won't be rankable.

ㄍㄋㄋ Good luck ranking it :D~
Topic Starter
qoot8123

S a n d wrote:


Taiko mod request from: qoot8123
Request Type: PM Request
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: m1ng's Oni, Inner Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*



- 01:35:543 ~ 01:38:892 - Why not have kiai here? 因為那裏感覺不是很長,再放Kiai感覺會有點不協調




(Shit, I can't find anything)
- 00:33:032 - Change to d? 因為這個位置吉他有用重音,所以我用不同顏色的note來做強調
- 00:50:683 (198,199,200) - Ctrl+G? A.k.a kddkd. 這裡的kkddd是用來銜接後面的ddd(00:51:311 (505,506,507) - )
- 01:08:753 - D? 我覺得d就夠了,大圓感覺不是說很必要,而且d的音色也是偏重的,所以這個先保留



ㄍㄋㄋ Good luck ranking it :D~
thanks for mod! and updated ishida's diff
Yuzeyun
very quick question, is the metadata made of official translations?
Nardoxyribonucleic

_Gezo_ wrote:

very quick question, is the metadata made of official translations?
I think so.
Topic Starter
qoot8123

_Gezo_ wrote:

very quick question, is the metadata made of official translations?
yes, this is song's list in album
Nofool
Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed

[Kantan]
OD 3 ?

[Futsuu]
OD 4 ?
- 01:33:311 (229) - that d usually is at - 01:33:590 - ? example : - 00:55:636 (133) -, i can see a little difference with that last part on the vocal tho.
- 01:37:497 (243) - could be removed, just for a little break.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
- 00:13:915 (50) - remove ? not really needed.
- 00:23:683 - what about kd k instead of kdkd here ? that last note as k fits well the vocal imo.
- 01:13:776 - try dk ddkd instead of dkdd kd ? fits better guitar's melody. Also move - 01:16:287 (280) - to - 01:16:566 - and move - 01:18:520 (291) - to - 01:18:799 -.
- move - 01:32:055 (358) - to - 01:32:194 - as k (and maybe del next k) ? u usually follow the vocal at these parts.

[m1ng's Oni]
HP 5 ?
- 00:36:659 (2) - remove ? not really needed.
- 00:38:892 - what about k d ddd kkk d d instead of ddd d kkk k d d here ? plays better imo and can reflect - 00:36:939 -.

[Inner Oni]
OD 5 HP 6 ?

[Ishida's Inner Oni]
OD 6 HP 6 ?
y u Whistle ;_;
- delete 00:04:287 (24,25,26) - + add d at - 00:04:427 - ? calm part = more break.
- 00:24:659 (235) - D ? - 00:23:962 (229,230) - d K - 00:24:520 (234,235) - k D sounds cool.
- 00:25:776 (249) - d ?
- 00:51:450 (529) - k ?
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
- 00:13:915 (50) - remove ? not really needed. fixed
- 00:23:683 - what about kd k instead of kdkd here ? that last note as k fits well the vocal imo. fixed
- 01:13:776 - try dk ddkd instead of dkdd kd ? fits better guitar's melody. Also move - 01:16:287 (280) - to - 01:16:566 - and move - 01:18:520 (291) - to - 01:18:799 -. no change since the patterns here are drum-oriented.
- move - 01:32:055 (358) - to - 01:32:194 - as k (and maybe del next k) ? u usually follow the vocal at these parts. fixed, and did the same thing on the note at 01:34:287 - as well.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Thanks for your mod Nofool~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/iEIyR.rar
Topic Starter
qoot8123

Nofool wrote:

Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed

[Kantan]
OD 3 ?

[Futsuu]
OD 4 ?
- 01:33:311 (229) - that d usually is at - 01:33:590 - ? example : - 00:55:636 (133) -, i can see a little difference with that last part on the vocal tho. here has a drum sound, so i don't want to ignore it.
- 01:37:497 (243) - could be removed, just for a little break. hmmm, you are right, but it is a bit weird to make a break on this part.

[Inner Oni]
OD 5 HP 6 ?

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
thanks for mod! :)
mingmichael
S a n d

- 00:00:799 - Add d here? There's sound there. i decided not to give a note there and just give a 2/1 break in the beginning of the part
- 00:03:032 - ^ ^
- 00:22:148 - Change to k? just wanna to keep the constant vocals with the dons 00:22:148 (2,3) -
- 00:31:218 - Add d here? There's sound there. i didn't try to follow all the sounds in this song since we have a Inner diff which is higher than oni. so i just tried to map the easier oni by not follow whole of the sounds, like 00:31:218 -
- 00:33:450 - ^ ^
- 00:34:148 and 00:34:427 - Change to k? keep mine with the monotonous don patterns
- 00:37:008 - Change to d? ^
- 00:38:892 (3,4) - Move to 00:38:683 to fit the song? literally the drums come out 00:38:892 -
- 01:07:636 - Change the slider to something else? It is weird to have unfitting slider and only one throughout the entire map. nopenope, it fits really well with the song when the drum rolls come out there and it's not a good decision to use the notes because it will give a long stream there
- 01:40:846 - I think it will be fine to add a big note like Inners too. Just that it doesn't have to be invisible note, normal sv would be fine. nope, it's just for the inner one, not for my oni

Nofool
Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed


[m1ng's Oni]
HP 5 ?
- 00:36:659 (2) - remove ? not really needed. yap it is. removed~
- 00:38:892 - what about k d ddd kkk d d instead of ddd d kkk k d d here ? plays better imo and can reflect - 00:36:939 -. owh nice idea here. changed

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
thanks for the mods guys~
m1ng's Oni
Jerry
Taiko mod as requested via in-game PM

Sorry for the severe lateness of my mod!

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:42:520 (47) - Move this note over to 00:41:404 - so that you have a consistent o o o rhythm with 00:38:613 (42,43,44) - and 00:36:380 (39,40,41) -

  2. 01:09:590 (94) - Follow the guitar for this note and move this to 01:09:729 -? The beat sounds more solid imo (But if this is too hard for Kantan, then you can just ignore this suggestion)

  3. 01:11:822 (97) - ^ Same, try moving to 01:11:962 -?

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:57:032 (137) - Move this back to 00:56:892 - so that it follows the vocals more accurately? You mapped the notes at 00:55:636 (133,134,135,136) - to the vocals, so I think you should do the same for this note.

  • [Nardo's Muzukashii]
  1. 01:25:497 (321,322,323,324) - These 1/2 double note patterns kinda makes the flow of this part feel very rigid in my opinion. I recommend changing it to something similar to what you did after this part at around 01:28:287 -. Try moving 01:25:636 (322) - over to 01:25:776 -, and then moving the two kats at 01:25:915 (323,324) over to 01:26:055 -

    :idea: And I also suggest you do the same to a similar part at the first kiai before this, at 00:47:543 (135,136,137,138) -.

Sorry for the short mod but that's all I could find.
ming's Oni and Inner Oni are brilliantly mapped, can't find anything wrong with them.
I initially had a few points for Ishida's Inner Oni diff, but then I decided to retract my suggestions because alot of the points will largely impact the style that Ishida was going for, and I do not want to ruin that mapping style of his(or her, idk LOL).
Good luck and here's some stars ~
Nardoxyribonucleic

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod as requested via in-game PM

Sorry for the severe lateness of my mod!

  • [Nardo's Muzukashii]
  1. 01:25:497 (321,322,323,324) - These 1/2 double note patterns kinda makes the flow of this part feel very rigid in my opinion. I recommend changing it to something similar to what you did after this part at around 01:28:287 -. Try moving 01:25:636 (322) - over to 01:25:776 -, and then moving the two kats at 01:25:915 (323,324) over to 01:26:055 - fixed

    :idea: And I also suggest you do the same to a similar part at the first kiai before this, at 00:47:543 (135,136,137,138) -. No change for this since this would result in a deviation of vocal mapping.

Sorry for the short mod but that's all I could find.
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/iNGt5.rar
Topic Starter
qoot8123

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod as requested via in-game PM

Sorry for the severe lateness of my mod!

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:42:520 (47) - Move this note over to 00:41:404 - so that you have a consistent o o o rhythm with 00:38:613 (42,43,44) - and 00:36:380 (39,40,41) -

  2. 01:09:590 (94) - Follow the guitar for this note and move this to 01:09:729 -? The beat sounds more solid imo (But if this is too hard for Kantan, then you can just ignore this suggestion) here also has drum sound, so let me consider it

  3. 01:11:822 (97) - ^ Same, try moving to 01:11:962 -?

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:57:032 (137) - Move this back to 00:56:892 - so that it follows the vocals more accurately? You mapped the notes at 00:55:636 (133,134,135,136) - to the vocals, so I think you should do the same for this note.
hmmm...you are right, but i feel it would be a bit strange for me, so keep this



Sorry for the short mod but that's all I could find.
ming's Oni and Inner Oni are brilliantly mapped, can't find anything wrong with them.
I initially had a few points for Ishida's Inner Oni diff, but then I decided to retract my suggestions because alot of the points will largely impact the style that Ishida was going for, and I do not want to ruin that mapping style of his(or her, idk LOL).
Good luck and here's some stars ~
thanks for mod and star! :)
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-

Nofool wrote:

[Ishida's Inner Oni]
OD 6 HP 6 ? Ok
y u Whistle ;_;
- delete 00:04:287 (24,25,26) - + add d at - 00:04:427 - ? calm part = more break. no TwT
- 00:24:659 (235) - D ? - 00:23:962 (229,230) - d K - 00:24:520 (234,235) - k D sounds cool. you're right ><
- 00:25:776 (249) - d ? I followed the drum ;w;
- 00:51:450 (529) - k ? ok :3
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
Thank you for modding ><
Topic Starter
qoot8123
updated~
JUDYDANNY
Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Timing]
  1. 00:17:404 – add a redline?
    - I guess Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.
  2. 01:04:287 – same as above.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:52:846 – move to 00:52:287 - ? - It works better to vocal smoother.
  2. 01:30:799 – move to 01:30:241 -? - Same as above.
  3. 01:09:590 – move to 01:09:311 - ?
    - we can lisnted on 01:09:310 – cymbals that sounds noisy , and on 01:09:311 - , we can also hear the guitar.
    I guess 1:09:590 01:09:310 – this note is more playable for Kantan players.
  4. 01:11:822 – move to 01:11:543 – ?
    - same as above.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:37:497 – remove?
    - 01:35:543 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) – felt a bit long.
[Nardo’s Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:613 – consider to add d for the spread between to M>>Oni. It also works well.
[m1ng’s Oni]
  1. 01:07:148 – remove ? be a consistency with 01:04:846 (4,5) -.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:40:914 - move to 01:40:939 – (1/12) ?
    -It sounds early. About Ishida diff, he put on 01:40:939 –. It sounds better.
  2. Last x4.00 is no problem to me. Checked HD and HR.
[Ishida]
  • finishers lol
  1. 00:44:194 – add finisher? Same as 00:53:125 -.
  2. 01:03:729 – remove the finisher?
    - It sounds no crash and early to follow.
  3. 01:11:543 – remove finisher?
    - It bit a cool down and calm part and Guitar still sounds well, same as 01:09:311 -.
  4. 01:10:427 – remove finisher?
    - make a emphasized to 01:12:659 – distortion accent?
  5. 01:13:497 – change to d ?
    - any sounds not up.
  6. 01:15:729 - d, and 01:16:008 - k?
    - same as above and 01:16:008 – snare sounds it fits better.
  7. from 01:22:148 – to 01:23:264 - , how about the turn down hitsounds volume … about 40~50%?
    – 01:22:148 - It sounds noisy to usual D finisher.
  8. 01:33:311 (944) – remove the finisher?
    -Just my opinon, plays a bit over power imo.
ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"?
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Timing]
  1. 00:17:404 – add a redline?
    - I guess Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.
  2. 01:04:287 – same as above.
[Nardo’s Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:613 – consider to add d for the spread between to M>>Oni. It also works well. fixed
ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"?
Thanks for your mod JuDa~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/iUeui.rar
Topic Starter
qoot8123

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Timing]
  1. 00:17:404 – add a redline? added
    - I guess Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.
  2. 01:04:287 – same as above.^
[notice][Kantan]
  1. 00:52:846 – move to 00:52:287 - ? - It works better to vocal smoother. here I prefer to follow drum's roll on 00:52:845 -
  2. 01:30:799 – move to 01:30:241 -? - Same as above. ^
  3. 01:09:590 – move to 01:09:311 - ? here I want to follow the guitar's accent and make 3/1 +1/1 pattern on 01:08:753 (92,93,94,95) - (similar with 3/2 +1/2 pattern)
    - we can lisnted on 01:09:310 – cymbals that sounds noisy , and on 01:09:311 - , we can also hear the guitar.
    I guess 1:09:590 01:09:310 – this note is more playable for Kantan players.
  4. 01:11:822 – move to 01:11:543 – ? ^
    - same as above.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:37:497 – remove?
    - 01:35:543 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) – felt a bit long. indeed, but i feel the song itself is pretty continuous and kantan also contains continuous pattern (2/1+1/1), and doesn't give any 4/1 break, muzu also same as well
[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:40:914 - move to 01:40:939 – (1/12) ?
    -It sounds early. About Ishida diff, he put on 01:40:939 –. It sounds better. moved :3
  2. Last x4.00 is no problem to me. Checked HD and HR.
ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"? yea, added
thanks for mod!
wait for ming and ishida's reply :)
mingmichael
thanks for the mods~ ;3 i just added a note on 01:04:914 - instead of deleting 01:07:147 -

m1ng's Oni
Topic Starter
qoot8123
updated~
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi :D Here's a mod via PM req, this is high priority requested, yeap.

[Ishida]
  • finishers lol
  1. 00:44:194 – add finisher? Same as 00:53:125 -. ok :3
  2. 01:03:729 – remove the finisher? ok :3
    - It sounds no crash and early to follow.
  3. 01:11:543 – remove finisher? ok ~
    - It bit a cool down and calm part and Guitar still sounds well, same as 01:09:311 -.
  4. 01:10:427 – remove finisher? ok ~
    - make a emphasized to 01:12:659 – distortion accent?
  5. 01:13:497 – change to d ? ok ~
    - any sounds not up.
  6. 01:15:729 - d, and 01:16:008 - k? no ;w;
    - same as above and 01:16:008 – snare sounds it fits better.
  7. from 01:22:148 – to 01:23:264 - , how about the turn down hitsounds volume … about 40~50%? ok :D
    – 01:22:148 - It sounds noisy to usual D finisher.
  8. 01:33:311 (944) – remove the finisher? no ;w;
    -Just my opinon, plays a bit over power imo.
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EDT2 : about the tags. "Goodbye! You!th" is uneeded cuz of you added "再會!青春"?
Topic Starter
qoot8123
update~ :)
JUDYDANNY
.3.
@Kantan :arrow: 00:42:520 - added don by creator. It's also better to me.
@Muzukashii :arrow: 00:52:008 - make a easier for a spread between toMuzukashii. Oni .
@Ishda's Inner Oni :arrow: Talked with Ishida about the some worong replied, and I agreed his thinking.

Okay, looks fine to me. Nice overall :D
Good Luck for Rank ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"

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Topic Starter
qoot8123
thanks ! :D
JUDYDANNY
/me baka. bakaJuda comes.

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Nwolf
that ninja note <.<
unpredictable that it appears, with no connection to the song AND it's snapped on such a baka tick that counting 1-2-3-4 wouldn't help either

why is it still there
DakeDekaane
hi qoot.

[General]
  1. Shouldn't first kiai end in 01:04:287 - ?
  2. You may want to adjust the HP setting for Futsuu and Kantan at least.
[ Kantan]
  1. 01:23:263 (112) - Shouldn't this slider end in 01:24:100 - and have a note in 01:24:380 - like in the first kiai? Plays much better by having a sure hit.
    I liked a lot this Kantan, breaks didn't feel forced at all, and mantained a fair density and pattern complexity according to the song.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 01:23:263 (202) - Same as Kantan.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:263 - The pattern here is weak compared to what the song offers. I know you want to not make the difficulty too hard, but this section would benefit with a few more notes to give a nice emphasis to the drums here. Alternatively, a note in 01:24:240 - would be enough.
[ Oni]

  • Nice.
[ Inner Oni (qoot)]
  1. 01:18:519 (753) - Any reason you're not skipping this note like in previous patterns, I think you should remove this as music doesn't seem to change here.
  2. 01:19:356 (760,761) - Should be d k for consistency with previous patterns, too.
  3. 01:20:752 (769,770) - By removing these notes you keep said consistency and give more emphasis to the true beats in the music (and plays better, imo).
  4. 01:30:519 - Not using 1/6 here?
[ Inner Oni (Ishida)]
  • I'll try as much as possible to keep the 999 combo, I can't promise it.
  1. 00:28:007 (274,275) - We have notes here, but not in 00:19:078 - . I really feel this should be consistent. If you remove the notes here, you could add them in 00:55:287 - , where the pause isn't really fitting considering you had no break in the previous similar section, also this break kind of breaks the flow.
  2. 00:45:938 (468) - This note sounds better being in 00:45:799 - , the 1/2 break in 00:45:869 - is more fitting for vocals, imo.
  3. 00:48:031 (490) - This note should be removed, stream feels better beginning in 00:48:101 -
  4. 01:02:055 - Similar case here, this beat would feel better if is being hit than a break due its intensity.
  5. 01:03:938 (663,664) - These notes here takes out the emphasis of the strong beats in 01:03:728 (661,662) - , I'd suggest to remove them, a pause here would be really fitting to achieve said emphasis.
  6. 01:08:193 - Maybe it's not that clear for me as it seems you are following the guitar, but no 1/6 usage here?
  7. 01:18:380 - 01:19:496 - 01:20:612 - Any reason for the missing 1/6 patterns you used before for this sound? This inconsistency feels really odd.
  8. 01:23:263 - The colour changes in this stream aren't that fitting with the song, which changes in even patterns. I'd recommend to change the stream to kkkdkkddkkkkddddd, and probably remove 01:23:333 (832) - to follow better the music.
  9. 01:26:124 (866,868) - The song doesn't really support a stream here, as music keeps the same intensity, nor drumroll in the music. Remove both highlighted notes.
  10. 01:30:519 (918,922) - I highly recommend to change the colour of these notes, as I explained in the first stream suggestions, the colour change on blue ticks doesn't fit the song nicely.
  11. 01:26:124 (866,868) - Not using 1/6 here?
    The difficulty has some inconsistencies here and there, but I guess that's the mapping style, so just pointed the more awkward ones.
The ninja note in both Inner Oni took me by surprise, but I think it fits due the "bang" at the end. Such way to kill FCs.
Shohei Ohtani
F I N A L L Y
Nardoxyribonucleic

DakeDekaane wrote:

hi qoot.

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:23:263 - The pattern here is weak compared to what the song offers. I know you want to not make the difficulty too hard, but this section would benefit with a few more notes to give a nice emphasis to the drums here. Alternatively, a note in 01:24:240 - would be enough. Fixed the latter.
Thanks for the mod Dake~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/mHwZ1.zip
mingmichael

Reditum wrote:

F I N A L L Y
Topic Starter
qoot8123
@dake
inner oni :
01:18:519 (753) - i see, but i want to make a bit different with former part , also the break on 01:17:682 - ~01:18:100 - is also different with former pattern.

01:20:752 (769,770) - i don't want to remove these notes, i would like make the notes' density higher gradually with 01:13:217 - ~ 01:17:682 -

01:30:519 - that 1/6 seems not really clear,so i just follow the previous pattern on 00:52:427 (516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526) -

hp setting and kiai time are fixed and read through nwolf's comment, i decide remove the last ninjia note.

thanks :3

and waiting for ishida's reply
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-

DakeDekaane wrote:

hi qoot.

[ Inner Oni (Ishida)]
[list]I'll try as much as possible to keep the 999 combo, I can't promise it.
[*]00:28:007 (274,275) - We have notes here, but not in 00:19:078 - . I really feel this should be consistent. If you remove the notes here, you could add them in 00:55:287 - , where the pause isn't really fitting considering you had no break in the previous similar section, also this break kind of breaks the flow. Fixed ><
[*]00:45:938 (468) - This note sounds better being in 00:45:799 - , the 1/2 break in 00:45:869 - is more fitting for vocals, imo.
[*]00:48:031 (490) - This note should be removed, stream feels better beginning in 00:48:101 -
[*]01:02:055 - Similar case here, this beat would feel better if is being hit than a break due its intensity. Fixed ~
[*]01:03:938 (663,664) - These notes here takes out the emphasis of the strong beats in 01:03:728 (661,662) - , I'd suggest to remove them, a pause here would be really fitting to achieve said emphasis. ok :3
[*]01:08:193 - Maybe it's not that clear for me as it seems you are following the guitar, but no 1/6 usage here? I'm following drum actually ;w;
[*]01:18:380 - 01:19:496 - 01:20:612 - Any reason for the missing 1/6 patterns you used before for this sound? This inconsistency feels really odd. Because I thought the part is more calm than the former >< still fixed
[*]01:23:263 - The colour changes in this stream aren't that fitting with the song, which changes in even patterns. I'd recommend to change the stream to kkkdkkddkkkkddddd, and probably remove 01:23:333 (832) - to follow better the music. Fixed
[*]01:26:124 (866,868) - The song doesn't really support a stream here, as music keeps the same intensity, nor drumroll in the music. Remove both highlighted notes. ok ><
[*]01:30:519 (918,922) - I highly recommend to change the colour of these notes, as I explained in the first stream suggestions, the colour change on blue ticks doesn't fit the song nicely. Fixed ~
[*]01:26:124 (866,868) - Not using 1/6 here?
Topic Starter
qoot8123
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