1. Hard (4,65 stars, 158 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 253 notes)
3. Normal (3,06 stars, 99 notes)

[DBF] wrote:

[Normal]
00:14:423 (3) - finish. OK~
00:23:572 (4) - remove whistle and add clap. OK~
00:56:736 (5) - left 1, use grid lvl 3. OK~
01:13:317 (1) - finish. OK~
01:18:463 (3) - ^ in end. OK~
[Hard]
all fine.
[Insane]
all fine.. no.. that awesome~ ~

i really like your skin and map, that awesome, and i think you can faster do it ranked, good luck..

Vikon wrote:

[General]
01:13:127 why you use red timing section here? It's so that the first beat stays at the longest white line.. ;w; Deleted the green one.
1) If you think the timing is off after that time... you can keep it, but delete the green timing section at the same time.
2) If not, delete it and resnap all notes

The map can be better if using symmetric and more rounded sliders.(still, The straight slider are fine)

[Normal]
00:31:958 (2) make it symmetric? Symmetric with.... what? ^^;

[Hard]
01:03:407 (x) add a note here? OK~

[Insane]
00:53:877 (x) add a note here? I think this is fine without one. ^^;

Good map, Star~

quintessence wrote:

Nice map!
The skin is great,too. Thanks~ ^^
[Normal]
1:13:127(2) finish. (Here is finish in Insane difficulty.) OK~

[Hard]
1:13:127(3) finish. (Here is finish in Insane difficulty.) OK~

[Insane]
0:42:918(x) add a note. (Suggestion) OK~
0:43:108(x) add a note. (Suggestion) OK~

☆Star

Leorda wrote:

HEI

[Skin]
1) Your skin is waaay too cut off the glow. You have to remake the skin with no-glow, otherwise, it would be bad looking
Example hit300g at slideshow

Oh shi--- Damn, why haven't I noticed that earlier. ;_; I promise I'll fix them, but right now I don't have time to do that.


2) Your spinner-circle is too confusing for me, because there is no dot in the middle of the spinner, so you have to make a dot in the middle of the spinner Added circle there~

[Normal]
00:14:042 (x) - Add note here?? OK~
00:15:567 (x) - ^
00:34:245 (3) - New combo OK~
00:40:345 (3) - ^
01:00:548 (6) - Make symetric?? OK~
01:13:317 (1) - Cut short this spinner to previous white tick (but the long vocal end at 01:15:795) and silence at the end is better OK~
01:25:325 (1) - Make parallel? Parallel with.. what? ;_;
01:25:897 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:047 (4) - Move 1 grid up? OK~
00:24:716 (8) - This object makes me confusing because of this placement, can you find another placement?? Better?
00:25:097 (10) - New combo?? OK~
01:13:317 (1) - Cut short this spinner to previous white tick (but the long vocal end at 01:15:795) and silence at the end is better OK~

[Insane]
Fine~

I love this skin! BTW, what the name of font is that? Thanks~ The font used in scrore-points is called DFMaruGothic-SU and the other one used in everywhere else is DFGMaruGothic-SU.. It was a big font pack with lot's of japanese fonts but I don't remember where I donwloaded it. ;_;
Good song
STAR

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~All Diffs~
Storyboard:
- Max size for Storyboard items is 800x600. Please resize "sb.png". Resized~

~Normal~
00:16:711 (3,4) - Copypaste (1,2) and make a horizontal flip (yay symmetry <3) OK~
01:16:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This whole part sounds a bit weird, and probably it is because of the blank space and the first slider starting in a weird beat. If you make the spinner 1/1 shorter and move these objects (or at least the first slider) 2 white ticks earlier it sounds better, at least for me. You can always ignore this though xP Better now? ;3;

~Hard~
00:43:394 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - <33333 XD ~
00:54:068 (3) - I'd make this part of the slowdown section too, it makes the change a bit sudden and unexpected =x OK~

~Insane~
00:54:068 (3) - Same as in Hard, though this one doesn't seem that sudden... I decided to leave it like that. =w=

Ahh I love this song x3 and the map is really nice, great job!! ^w^ *star*

frost-b-spec wrote:

i watched #modReqs :)
great map~

[Kiai]
0:31:19 ~ 0:31:38 - delete Bubububut... I don't want to. ;_;
0:55:59 ~ 1:13:12 - start 0:55:21 I think it's much better when it starts at the 1st beat.

star

Garven wrote:

[General]
00:18:998 (7) - Maybe from here during this part of the song switch to soft hit sounds, then go back to normal when you do that quick kiai fountain? Ohh, sure thing~

[Skin]
hit300g and hit300k need to be within 256x256, I believe.
Fits rather well! Resized. ;w;

[Normal]
A little difficult for the easiest diff in the set, but it's less than 3 stars. Good 'nuff. :D
00:14:042 (3) - [Nazi] Maybe move this up two grids to line up with the 1 slider before it? OK~
00:15:567 (6) - ^
01:11:984 (1,2) - Maybe reform these so they don't end up semi-overlapping where the 2 and 4 used to be? OK~
Eh, just suggestions here. Good map.

[Hard]
00:13:852 (3) - Maybe move the end point so it's not slightly overlapping the previous slider? OK~
00:15:376 (3) - ^
00:22:047 (4) - Maybe do a copy/paste of the 3 slider *control H, then R) before it to make it symmetrical? That would also make the start of 00:22:810 (5) not overlap a little, though the end point still does. I'm not sure if I fully understood, I also replaced the (5) now, is it better? ;w;
01:18:273 (4) - Maybe set this up so it's not touching where the (2) was? OK~

[Insane]
This is nice 'n fun.
The combo changes are a little weird musically, but it's hard to keep it consistent with what you were doing visually. I'll just leave it. OK~ ^^;

1. light color NOTE+KIAI+light color BG and this makes some people give up retrying after they missed one note and just remove this beatmap.
2. my suggestion is: SB Effort is enough and just remove the KIAI time
3. press F4-->StoryBoarding-->Misc.Toggles-->Display epilepsy warning

1. 01:13:127 (T) - use a green line instead of a red one

1. 00:21:285 (3,4) - make the end of (4) cover (3), you may use shift button to do tiny change.
2. same time issue in Normal

1. 01:25:325 (1,2,3) - put them further
2. same time issue in Normal

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. light color NOTE+KIAI+light color BG and this makes some people give up retrying after they missed one note and just remove this beatmap.
2. my suggestion is: SB Effort is enough and just remove the KIAI time
3. press F4-->StoryBoarding-->Misc.Toggles-->Display epilepsy warning

Awwww. ;_; Well, I changed the kiai to star fountains, would that be better now? I also don't think that the sb is enough to epilepsy warning... But if someone other also says about it, I'll add it.


[Normal]:

1. 01:13:127 (T) - use a green line instead of a red one

OK to all~

[Hard]:

1. 00:21:285 (3,4) - make the end of (4) cover (3), you may use shift button to do tiny change.
2. same time issue in Normal

[Insane]:

1. 01:25:325 (1,2,3) - put them further OK~ OK~
2. same time issue in Normal

I just modded in Chinese for this map and before I click 'submit' I found my mistake orz. Awww. ;w;

Very nice song and mapset, star~

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello Lanttu.

Nice song,cute skin,I like it.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Fine.

[Insane]
00:20:522 (2) - Move 1 grid up to allign with the (1) slider. OK~
00:50:827 (2) - Move 1 grid up? OK~
01:00:739 (3) - Oh,well,almost perfect,but maybe allign a little better? OK~

Wow,I'm surprised.This map rocks,so go go for ranked! Star~

• • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:15:224 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:414

• • 01:15:605 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:796

xxheroxx wrote:

[Normal]

• • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders OK~
  • 01:15:224 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:414 OK~

[Hard]

• • 01:15:605 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:796 OK~

fartownik wrote:

[Normal]

01:21:893 (3) - Unsnapped object. Fixed~


[Hard]

01:21:321 (2,3) - Unsnapped objects. Fixed~


You did awesome job here. Apart from those unsnapped notes (which are not a really huge issue), everything looks perfect - SB, skins, note placement, hitsounds. I just love it.

Teara wrote:

Hi!

I cant find any problems

Star for a very good beatmap set

Sallad4ever wrote:

Very Cute

[General]
- Hmm... I find this comboburst with 1x1 size, is this a miss or it's because I didn't do any re-download? It's so that there's no comboburst in this map. ^^

[Normal]
00:53:305 (1) - I really think you should start this slider, right when the "Hu~" start ( in 00:52:543 ). This is up to you because by doing this AImod will make this as hard criteria I decided to leave it like this if AImod says it's hard..
01:24:562 (4) - allign with 01:23:800 (3) end ( up 2 grid in lv3 grid), if you do this don't forget to move the later notes too OK~

[Hard]
00:40:345 (5) - move 1 grid up and 1 grid left OK~
01:09:887 (7) - whistle in the end also if you aim for symmetry.... OK~
01:23:610 (x) - I've kinda expecting a note here, add one? It's blank on purpose.
01:24:373 (x) - ^ Added one here~

[Insane]
Combo mod OK to all~

I really wish I can make a cute skin like you
I'll promise I'll shoot you a pink star, no... I want to give you a pink star Aww, thanks~ ;o;

~STAR

kino77 wrote:

Cute song&map~

[General]
Preview time 00:55:211 ? OK~

[Normal]
01:15:414 - Don't slience this slider > < just remove this timing section? OK~ ^^;

[Hard]
OAD lv.6 or 7?
01:09:887 (7) - Remove clap? OK~
01:15:414 - Don't slience this slider > < just remove this timing section? OK~ ^^;

[Insane]
00:27:765 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why no clap round here? It's on purpose, i think it sounds nice. :3

I love ths skin and SB~ Thank you~ >u<
Double star~wuuuuuu~

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Autostar for skin + SB~ ~ ^^

Normal
01:11:984(1) - If you consider the comboburst's order that you used on the rest of the song, here should have no New Combo. Fixed~
01:26:468(3) - I can't stop thinking that the song is not ending well. If think that you should make a 1/2 speed (or not) slider here and extend it until 01:27:232, making the song end better~ Ohh, I like this idea~ Done. ^^

Hard
00:17:473(7) - New Combo here would be fine, considering the Combo style that you used on the rest of the song. OK~
01:02:835(3) - There should be a New Combo here~ OK~
01:05:885(5) - ^
01:08:934(5) - ^
01:26:468(3) - Same as Normal. OK~

Insane
00:31:005(3,4,1) - It's visualy not really cool and mayeb be a bit boring make the player play only 2 notes of a single triple-stream (Imagining the playing this on Tag mode). So I think it's better make the New Combo on the (3) and take it off from the (1). Fixed~
01:02:835(5) - New Combo here would be fine~ OK~
01:26:469?[on the other diffs, it was 468! I don't get it...](3) - Same as Normal / Hard. lol I don't get it either, fixed~

Nice map~

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Normal]
Nice

[Hard]
Nice

[Insane]
00:12:422 (7) - Remove whistle, that sound better I think OK~
00:14:805 (3) - Add whistle at the begin OK~
00:15:376 (6,8) - Add Whistle OK~
00:16:711 (4) - Remove Whistle and add a whistle at the end of 00:16:139 (3) and at the begin of 00:17:473 (2) OK~
00:18:521 (7) - Remove Whistle OK~
00:24:525 (1) - Add clap OK~
01:13:127 (7) - Remove that circle and put 01:13:317 (1) 1/2 earlier and reduce 01:13:317 (1) by 1/2. If you do that, add note to 01:15:986 (x) and 01:16:177 (x) I really want to keep (7) there. ;_;

Good Job :3
Star~

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- I used +9 on the offset, might just be me. I don't see so big difference so I left it like that..

Normal:

00:19:760 – Shouldn’t it be soft hitsounds here like the other diffs? =S Oops~ =x=;;

Hard:

00:19:379 (2,1,2,3) – Keep the clap pattern here imo. OK~
00:22:047 (4) – New combo here? OK~

Insane:

00:19:188 (2,1,2,3) – Imo it might sound better to keep the clap pattern by clapping the slider ends. OK~
00:22:047 (4) – New combo? OK~
00:27:765 (9) – Clap the start? OK~
00:44:728 (4) – Imo it looks better to start a new combo here and remove the new combo on 00:44:919 (1) OK~
00:46:253 (4) - ^ same thing with 00:46:444 (1) – OK~

Minor suggestions, nice mapset

lovhin456 wrote:

Normal;
- 01:13:318 >> silence the end of the spinner ??

Hard;
- 00:44:919 >> end at 00:45:300
- 00:46:444 >> end at 00:46:825
- 01:16:749 >> move to 01:16:939 and end at 01:17:320

Yes 7ms is hard to notice

Zekira wrote:

Yes 7ms is hard to notice

Well it's a good thing he changed it because I can definitely notice it ._.