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Kajiura Yuki - Will

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HoLoDrEaM
8 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HoLoDrEaM
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 15, 2010 at 9:40:14 AM

Artist: Kajiura Yuki
Title: Will
Source: Pandora Hearts
Tags: Preview OST
BPM: 170
Filesize: 6461kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.38 stars, 121 notes)
  2. Hard (4.85 stars, 266 notes)
  3. Normal (3.76 stars, 168 notes)
Download: Kajiura Yuki - Will
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by HoLoDrEaM , edited 14 times in total.
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
move the timing section to 395ms

<Normal>
Isn't it a bit too hard for normal? :/ Better name this "Normal+" and remap a normal.

01:54:748 (2,1,2) - why do the clap hitsounds on these notes different from the others

<Hard>
pretty good :P
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

I know what this maps is wip, still I go to suggest some things :3
[General]
-Delete Kajiura Yuki - Will (HoLoDrEaM).osb and full submit
-Offset 20.177 (remember resnap circles if u use Timing Setup Panel for it)
-U need a diff with less of 3,5 stars

[Hard]
-About streams, well maybe they don't fit the song perfectly, however I don't see problems with them =/

Nice song ~ and good luck :3
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) the osu rating of [Normal] is 3.76 , you need a difficulty under 3 to get ranked, you can decrease the difficulty on Normal or make an [Easy]
2) 02:16:01 useless timing section?

[Normal]
01:10:630 (1) 1 grid up
01:33:571 (2) 2 grids down?
01:40:630 (1) 1 grid left?

[Hard]
cannot find any problems, but I think the 1/8 combos are strange.

Star~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Yo

[General]
Delete "Anime" in tags, since that word in Genre when BAT ranked this map

[Normal]
00:31:453 (4) - New combo??
00:32:512 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:36:748 (6) - New combo?
00:39:218 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:39:571 (2)?
01:23:336 (3) - Add whistle here? The hitsound pattern like clap, whistle, clap whistle
01:40:630 (1) - Clap at start & end, whistle at repeating slider?
01:54:042 (6) - Move 3 grid left?
02:04:630 (5) - New combo?
02:12:748 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short?

[Hard]
00:28:453 (8) - New combo??
00:36:395 (7) - ^
01:46:983 (10) - ^
02:04:453 (8) - ^

Good song
STAR
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
Offset : 20.195 ~ Resnap All Notes
Remove the .osb and full submit
•Hard•
00:38:159 (7) - 1 grid left?

•Normal•
HP DR and OD -1

•Easy•
OD: - 2
Slider velocity : 0.90?
HP DR : -2

Star~
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Kajiura Yuki - Will (HoLoDrEaM).osb this file is still there @_@ make sure you've removed it and full submit again.
[Easy]:
  1. 00:39:571 (1) - move the 2nd way point 1 grid right
  2. 02:12:748 (1) - end it at 02:15:571
[Normal]:
  1. 02:12:395 (1) - cancel new combo
  2. 02:12:748 (1) - end it at 02:15:571
[Hard]:
  1. 02:12:748 (1) - try to follow the music this part. or end it at 02:15:571
尝试更多跟音乐下note会更好点 现在有点像节拍器的感觉 lol (刚发现你会中文耶...)
ekopret8ks
ekopret8ks
star
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
8-)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~

[General]
offset:440 plz resnap note and timing section.
The modding is after the offset changing,so plz change the offset than read the mod :D

[All diff]
Hitsound to quite try turn volume up like:
Start ~ break - Volume 90%
Break ~ end(besides spin) - Volume 70%

[Easy]
01:03:263 (2) - Somthing worry this slider,see the reverse arrow?

Combo mod
SPOILER
00:28:675 (4) - New combo?
00:30:087 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:675 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
01:06:792 (1,2) - ^
01:09:616 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:36:440 (4) - New combo?
01:37:851 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:44:204 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
01:48:440 (7,1) - ^
01:53:381 (4) - New combo?
01:54:792 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
02:01:498 (1,2) - ^
02:07:145 (1,2) - ^
02:10:322 (6,1) - ^
02:12:440 (1) - Remove new combo?
[Normal]
01:41:028 - Remove clap?

Combo mod
SPOILER
00:28:675 (4) - New combo?
00:29:734 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:675 (1) - ^
01:05:381 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
01:08:204 (4) - New combo?
01:09:263 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:16:322 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
01:24:792 (1,2) - ^
01:33:263 (1,2) - ^
01:36:440 (5) - New combo?
01:37:498 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:39:263 (6) - New combo?
01:40:675 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:44:204 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
01:47:381 (6) - New combo?
01:48:792 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:53:381 (5) - New combo?
01:54:440 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:55:851 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
02:01:498 (1,2) - ^
02:07:145 (1,2) - ^
02:10:322 (5,1) - ^
[Hard]
01:14:557 (5) - Add clap at the beginning and end?
01:27:969 (1) - Add clap here and 01:28:675 ?
01:33:616 (3) - Add clap here and 01:34:322 ?
02:11:381 (5) - Remove finish?

Good~Star~
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
I personally don't like the clap being added in the notes that in the long white tick.
and I suggest that not use two or more hitsound in one note(e.g. 02:11:381 (5,6) - in hard).
Hmm.. looks like not a mod post :|
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello~><

General
I don't have hitsound sense. But I think this use too many whistle & clap.
You should reduce it a bit.
Easy
00:25:851 (1) adjust the middle of the slider and make it more symmetrical?
01:23:734 (3,4,5) 1 grid up?(grid lv3)
01:33:616 (1) adjust the middle of the slider and make it more symmetrical?
01:40:675 (3) 1 grid up?
Normal
00:24:439 (3,1) spacing is too far for normal. (3) use Reverse Selection ?
01:27:969 (1) adjust the middle of the slider and make it more symmetrical?
Hard
01:05:381 (5) 1 grid down&1 grid left?
01:08:028 (6,7,8) 1 grid down?
01:18:087 (6,7,8) 1 grid left?
01:52:851 (6,7,8,9,10) 2 grid left&1 grid up?
01:57:969 (7) 1 grid up?
02:00:087 (6,7) 1 grid right?
02:02:910 (5) ^
02:03:087 (6,7) 1 grid down?

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Source: Pandora Hearts. Add OST into tags
    • Offset: 430 (resnap all notes)
    • Add kiai
[Easy]

  • • 00:39:263 (3,1,2) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
    • 02:12:792 (1) - Start this spinner here 02:13:145 and end it here 02:15:969
[Normal]

  • • 02:12:792 (1) - Start this spinner here 02:13:145 and end it here 02:15:969

[Hard]

  • • 00:32:459 (2) - Delete this circle
    • 01:09:341 (2) - ^
    • 01:09:518 (4) - ^
    • 01:40:224 (2) - ^
    • 01:44:282 (2) - ^
    • 01:44:459 (4) - ^
    • 01:54:341 (1) - ^
    • 01:54:518 (3) - ^
    • 01:54:694 (5) - Move 1/4 later
    • 02:12:792 (1) - Start this spinner here 02:13:145 and end it here 02:15:969
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Easy]

Good !

[Normal]

Great !

[Hard]

- 00:56:557(x) : Add circle ?
- 00:59:381(x) : ^
- 01:02:204(x) : ^


Okay, that's it.
Pretty map !
Get my star !
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
hi,

[easy]
01:14:557 (3) - imo, you should drop 2 repeats and extend 2 ticks
01:29:381 (2,3) - line up with (1)'s end?
01:42:087 (1) - drop 2 repeats and extend 2 ticks , imo again
02:07:498 (1) - ^

just those suggestions, nice map
Neethime
168 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
[General]
You may make more various beats in Easy/Normal, follow music more, too regular beats may sound and play boring.
Try it in your next map,I believe you can do better~

[Easy]
00:24:087 - remove whistle
00:27:969 - ^
00:31:851 - ^
00:36:440 (3) - whistle
01:37:145 (2) - remove whistle

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:33:616 (3) - whistle
01:39:263 (8) - new combo

Nice map~ +Star
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

[Easy]
01:37:851 (3) - move 1 grid left...just so its matched
01:58:489 (1) - move 2 grids left, and 2 grids down (just 2 down left diagonally...so it alligns with the slider)
Then resnap the notes that follow

Thats all... :P

~STAR
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
EDIT:Offset -8ms and resnap all notes for all diffs
call me back if you fix something
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
claps are not pn the right place XD
I take an exaple from hard
00:54:784 (4) - clap on the start of slider
00:56:196 (6) - clap
follow the clap of music anyway

EDIT:that`s what i am talking about
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Good.

Ranked~
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