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Lily Allen - 22

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RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 04 July 2010 at 17:22:48

Artist: Lily Allen
Title: 22
BPM: 131
Filesize: 4710kb
Play Time: 02:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.95 stars, 142 notes)
  2. Hard (4.82 stars, 299 notes)
  3. Normal (4.07 stars, 225 notes)
Download: Lily Allen - 22
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It's sad but it's true

NOBODY STAR IF THIS GETS RANKED AT 22 PRIORITY IT'D BE THE BEST THING EVER
Last edited by RandomJibberish , edited 16 times in total.
NotShinta
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Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Doesn't seem to have a preview point, if it does and I can't be bothered to check it's rubbish
The storyboarding really doesn't seem necessary, especially when it's not following anything. Which is half the time. Also combined with the BG it's funny
Kiai please

Easy
The stacks are easy but not typically easy difficulty w/e

Normal
Fell asleep no problems

Hard
01:01:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Sounds pretty good but ew

Might consider a guest diff but probably shouldn't for the safety of the map did I say that before
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain
General;
Preview points.

Normal;
02:16:148 (1,2) - Dat spacing.

Hard;
01:01:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - <3
02:28:972 (2) - 1/3 earlier.
Krisom
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Krisom
HiHi!! Lovin' this :3

->General
02:38:133 Fells like an odd place to start the spinner. Why don't you start it at 02:42:255 ?

IAmNotShinta wrote:

The storyboarding really doesn't seem necessary, especially when it's not following anything. Which is half the time. Also combined with the BG it's funny

->Normal:
Just hitsound modding, fell free to use it or not, but look at them please ^^
SPOILER
00:20:575 (4) - Remove the clap from the end?
00:23:018 (1) - Add a clap
00:38:896 (4) - Remove the clap from the ending?
00:39:812 (5) - ^?
00:41:797 (2) - Remove the clap?
00:43:629 (2) - ^?
00:47:751 (4) - Add a clap at the start?
00:56:911 (3) - Add a clap
00:57:217 (4) - Remove the clap
01:33:095 (2) - ^
01:33:553 (3) - Add a clap
01:34:927 (2) - Remove the clap
01:35:385 (3) - Add a clap
01:36:759 (2) - Remove the clap
01:37:217 (3) - Add a clap
01:37:522 (4) - Remove the clap from the ending?
01:38:438 (5) - ^?
01:40:423 (2) - Remove the clap?
01:42:255 (2) - ^?
01:46:377 (4) - Add a clap at the start?
01:55:537 (3) - Add a clap
01:55:843 (4) - Remove the clap
02:31:721 (4) - ^
02:32:179 (5) - Add a clap
02:34:927 (4) - ^
02:35:843 (6) - ^
Also
02:24:698 (3) - Ends a bit weird :/
Nice ^^!


->Hard
Same as above, just some hitsound modding.
SPOILER
00:34:469 (2) - Remove clap?
00:36:301 (2) - ^?
00:38:133 (8) - ^?
00:41:797 (2) - ^?
00:48:667 (2) - Add a clap at the start, remove it from the end.
00:49:125 (3) - Remove the clap
00:49:583 (4) - Add a clap at the start
00:50:499 (6) - Add a clap
00:52:789 (4) - Remove clap?
00:55:537 (1) - Add a clap at the end
00:56:453 (3) - Remove clap
01:01:033 (4,10) - Add claps?
01:16:606 (7) - Remove the clap from the start
01:25:308 (3) - Add a clap
01:25:766 (5) - Remove clap
01:33:095 (2) - ^?
01:34:927 (2) - ^?
01:36:759 (8) - ^?
01:40:423 (2) - ^?
01:47:293 (2) - Add a clap at the start, remove it from the end.
01:47:751 (3) - Remove the clap
01:48:209 (4) - Add a clap at the start
01:49:125 (6) - Add a clap
01:51:415 (4) - Remove clap?
01:54:163 (1) - Add a clap at the end
01:55:079 (3) - Remove clap
01:55:079 (4,10) - Add claps?
02:20:728 (7) - Remove clap?
02:31:263 (2) - ^?
02:32:179 (6) - ^?
02:31:721 (4) - ^?
02:32:026 (5) - ^
02:32:179 (6) - Add clap
02:32:484 (1) - Remove the clap at the end
02:33:095 (2) - Add a clap here
02:33:400 (4) - Remove the clap at the end
02:34:011 (5) - Add a clap
02:35:385 (4) - Remove clap?
Love it ^^!!

*
Natteke
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Natteke
Sakura
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Sakura
[Easy]
00:19:812 (1) - Overlapping with health bar

[Normal]
01:30:804 (4) - Overlapping with health bar

[Hard]
Preview point not set.

Nice map
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
[Hard]
Awsum.
01:13:858 (1,3) - suddenly doesn't fit the rest of map D:
01:30:651 (x) - add note here?
02:26:530 (6) - this looks somehow awkward :(
02:33:247 (3) - remove this?

[Normal]
00:16:911 (5) - 1/3 later, 1/3 shorter, add another note at 00:16:911?
00:20:575 (4,5) - the other kind of sliders is much better :(
00:47:751 (4) - 1/3 longer or add note at 00:48:209?
00:49:888 (5,6) - ^ these two sounds really awful.
01:41:186 (4,4) - awkward :(
01:46:377 (4) - see 00:47:751.
01:48:514 (5,6) - ^

[Easy]
02:21:492 (4,5) - 1/3 later?
Quite tricky, but nice.
Mashley
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Joined September 2008
Mashley
The finish trigger loops a little too... big. Make it smaller.
01:17:522 - Why the break? o.o

Easy
01:30:346 (3,4) - Align with 01:28:514 (1,2) -

Normal
02:35:385 (5) - Feels empty, stick a clap on it

Hard
00:16:911 (6) - Nazi but I don't like the way this overlaps with the previous notes, move it down.
00:20:957 (4,5,6) - These are off, move 4 and 6 forward onto 1/3 ticks and restructure the pattern.
00:47:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something about this pattern is really, really confusing. Honestly I think you should put something easier to read in. Either have a pattern that's all a stream or not at all.
01:45:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:39:354 (5,6) - More nazage, move down a grid to fit with the pattern.

Nice and bouncy 1/3 :)
[DBF]
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Joined January 2009
[DBF]
[Easy]

01:01:033 (1) - down 2, use grid lvl 3.
01:02:866 (3) - finish.
01:59:659 (1) - right 2, use grid lvl 3.
02:01:492 (3) - left 2, use grid lvl 3.
02:00:575 (2) - down 1.

[Normal]

00:26:224 - add bit with finish.
01:02:866 (7) - finish.
01:39:507 (6) - add bit with finish.

[Hard]

00:26:224 (9) - add bit with finish (yeah, song dont have finish moment, but that looking good in play).
01:02:713 (12) - finish.

all fine. star~
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Powerdrone
EASY:

00:50:346 (5,1) - Sounds fine in the editor, but it kind of bugs me a little... If you moved them to start at 00:50:041 (5,1) and removed 00:49:812 (4) then to me it feels better cause it follows the beat of the song. Might just be me though. If you do this you'll need to add a hit circle to 00:51:873. Don't forget to fix it in the other chorus parts.

NORMAL:

It sounds fine to me, I think...

HARD:

01:01:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Love this combo, but the triangles are lopsided? I dunno, it's not particularly important whether they're straight up and down or not lol.

02:35:232 (3,4,5,6) - I found it a little hard to read, but it's interesting. Probably fine to leave it how it is...


So yep. I'm terrible at modding <3

Have a star!
Gens
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Gens
The storyboard has some white pixels somewhere inside the numbers... it is pretty noticeable, just so you know.
And... is it just me or some beats sound a bit late?

Pretty awesome map. Call me back whenever you're ready with this.
Garven
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Garven
I'm here as per your request, though I wanna do a quickie mod too. :P

Break placement is kinda weird. I guess it's mostly that the first one is so soon into the song, but eh, it still works.

[Hard]
02:21:034 (8,9) - These are sticking into the health bar a little
02:21:492 (1,2) - Remove whistle from slider slide

Your tilde sliders are hot. Love it!
Gens
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Gens
Bubbled!
Larto
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Larto
Hard:
00:42:560 (5,6,7) - I'm a bit worried that this spacing will trip up players. It didn't trip up me though, so I guess it _can_ stay if you're absolutely sure of it.
00:49:583 (4) - Wouldn't hurt anyone if you lengthened that slider to end on the 1/3 tick
01:16:606 (7) - UGLY TILDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
01:41:186 (5,6,7) - I'm a bit worried that this spacing will trip up players. It didn't trip up me though, so I guess it _can_ stay if you're absolutely sure of it.
01:48:209 (4) - Wouldn't hurt anyone if you lengthened that slider to end on the 1/3 tick

Normal:
00:51:644 (7) - should be on the next 1/3 tick
00:58:972 (7) - This one too, perhaps. Not entirely sure, but it's likely to play better when it's on the next 1/3 tick.
01:57:598 (7) - ^
02:17:369 (4) - Make it start on the next 1/3 tick with the same ending point?
02:19:201 (4) - ^

Easy:
00:51:720 (6,1) - spaciiiiiiiiiiing?
01:32:179 - Put a note here?
01:50:346 (6,1) - spaciiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing?

EDIT: Rebubbled.
Gens
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Gens
Hmm... try -10 on the map? Sorry, I recently fixed my UO so the offset I gave you is wrong, I suppose. :p

No kudosu for this.
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Okie Dokie~
Larto
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Larto
I'm glad that it's true, how Gens and me say, this mod is already over.
There's nothing to do and there's nothing to change
Until the rank of your dream comes along, picks you up, and gets this map out of pending,
I'm just gonna bubble this, what do you say?
Gens
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Gens
And no one else checked this?! Man.
Mismagius
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Mismagius
Yay, this got ranked with +22 priority.
Powerdrone
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Joined October 2009
Powerdrone
Epiiiiiiiiiiic =P
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
YAY GENS I LOVE YOU

LARTO TOO

22 PRIORITY FTW
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