1. Easy (2.22 stars, 222 notes)
2. iNiS980 (4.74 stars, 361 notes)
3. Insane (4.97 stars, 483 notes)
4. Normal (3.53 stars, 269 notes)

Garven wrote:

[General]
02:55:149 - This feels like a weird spot to start kiai considering the music and the mid-spinner thing. Second time this was suggested. You guys win
Think you can find a better bg? It gets really artefacty when it's stretched out so much. :/ I could look around. I found it in lazy-mode, and it looked pretty nice on 800x600.

[Easy]
00:52:649 (1,2,3,4) - These felt really linear compared to most of the rest of the map considering how the vocals are phrased. Gave it some curve
Compare the new combo use at 01:06:316 (1) and 01:08:983 (1). Whichever way is fine, but try to keep it the same.
02:47:649 (1) - ^

[Normal]
Niiice.

[Insane]
02:22:816 - Ugh, you lose 1/3 of your health for getting all 300s during this slow section. Meh, it is an Insane, I guess.
Good fun, even if I suck and die early on. It is a pretty suckish part of the map I'd just rather not have a 30 second break, so I had to do something with it.

Nice set of maps. Call me back when you get the hard posted, if you want. Though at this rate, I'll probably just say, "great!"

Shinde wrote:

iNiS
00:16:316 (1,2,3,4) - Some notes were pretty close to the edge. ...really? You're seriously saying that this is bad?
Kiai continues to end. I thought you were supposed to turn it off, but I honestly don't remember anymore. I also thought the difference in Kiai was a bit odd, just because m980 used it only for the final chorus in one big block, whereas Rolled did for the chorus 3 times in a just slightly shorter period. The edge notes and kiai are mostly just observations and personal preferences. I do things my way for my own maps/difficulties.
03:10:151 (3) - Single unsnapped note~ Ok you got me here. (even though it's only... 2ms)

Shinde wrote:

General
BG's just a little meh due to upscale. Delete osb. Add m980 to tags on all diffs. osb deleted, m980 added. I really like the color scheme of the background and stuff. In the process of looking for another one though

Easy
Feels pretty close in difficulty to Normal.:|
02:45:649 (1,2,3) - Spacing. oh wow oops
00:53:649 (4) - Start Kiai on white tick? (All diffs -iNiS) Oops. thanks

Normal
Es muy bien.

Insane
I don't really care for the giant circle-high velocity style. 2.20 at 180 BPM is kinda crazy for me. Despite the high velocity, I'd say consider -1 Circle Size, I don't think it'll affect play, circles pretty big as-is. It's weird. I don't really like how it looks cosmetically with -1 circle size. I definitely won't make this size a regular thing, just experimental. For this map it'll stay though.

Star like whoa~

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Mod4mod

Easy
00:12:983 (3) - this one spacing looks strange, 1 grid right? move 1 and 2 one grid left. same thing, but keeps the alignment with the previous combo.
01:36:316 (1) - again, strange placement, i grid left okay
02:01:983 (4,5,6) - 1 grid right okay
Normal
found some nazis, but not important since they're pretty readable
maybe too many finish hitsounds in the beginning of the map? remoe some it's more or less the same amount of finish on each difficulty. Some just have more notes than others
iNiS980
03:12:316 (1) - set kiai time end point after this spinner?
since this is authentic style, i can't mod much...
Insane
02:23:483 (4) - strange spacing, player might miss (5) after they hit this note oh wow that spacing is pretty bad. thanks for noticing

sorry that's all i can found :'(
STAR!

Xgor wrote:

[Background]
The background has some ugly proportions (And giving of black borders) , I suggest you crop it to 444x333. Could somebody provide a screenshot of how this looks on higher resolutions? I like the color scheme of it and I want to see what I could correct to make it better

[Easy]
01:52:316 (4) - Move down one grid and one grid to the left (Level 3), I think it's look better then imo. okay
01:56:316 (1) - Maybe move up one grin and maybe straighten it? woops. Was supposed to be straight
02:42:316 (1) - Clap instead of whistle here? alright
03:00:316 (1) - Same as 01:56:316 (1) k

[Normal]
Slider velocity felt a bit too fast imo I already had somebody say that it played similarly to easy. I want to keep it a bit higher on the difficulty scale

01:26:983 (4) - Move forward 1/2 on the time line? ew. that was really half-assed of me. fixed
01:29:649 (4) - (Suggestion) move up 3 grids (Level 3) wasn't really going for symmetry here
02:03:649 (2) - Can you please move this down 2 grids, stuff overlapping with the HP bar is ugly and even if it is allowed okay
02:38:649 (1) - (Suggestion) Move this 1/1 backwards and add a clap, I think it's better that way. Okay. Switched some other hitsounds around too
03:08:816 (2) - I thought this was 1/2 earlier than it was when I played it, the current one works too but I think 1/2 earlier is better It fits better with 03:09:649 (1,2,3,4) if I leave it as-is

[Insane]
00:12:649 (3) - Move this up a grid or two, the square looks slightly deformed right now 1'd
00:54:816 (5) - Move this up and left some grids? Don't really see the point
03:17:649 (1) - Bleh, overlapping with the HP bar fixed


Ok, I know I posted a lot of stuff but this is solid and great.
*star*

Xgor wrote:

[iNiS980]
(I didn't mention anything overlapping with the HP bar because you hate when somebody points that out and loves to use it.)

Why not use the custom combo colours? (I know it's authentic but still :/ ) Eh no

01:30:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole pattern looks kinda squashed right now! I suggest you move the whole pattern down some grids then move (2) 2-3 grids up and (6) 2-3 grids down (Level 3) No
02:37:649 (1) - Slightly offscreen in one part :/ Moved both sliders in by 1 grid each.
02:44:316 (5) - Move two grids to the right? (Level 3) I like to have reasons for suggestions. This change wouldn't be doing much, now would it?

tmokb93 wrote:

[m980]
Check all map spacing.
00:16:316 (1,3,4) - Offscreen. No it isn't
00:26:649 (1) - Spacing. It's not anti-intuitive
00:54:483 (4,5,6,1) - Offscreen. No it isn't
00:57:149 (4,5,6,7) - ^. ^
01:00:316 (5) - ^. ^
01:10:982 (4) - ^. ^
01:53:150 (4) - Again for those combo after this xD ^