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MEGAtive

Hi Lasu-san~
Mod per requested on my queue and PM

[General]
Metadate: Fine
Timing: Fine
Hitsound: Better you had the mapset Hitsounded


[NM]
Looks Good, and it nearly reach 2 star. Great Job indeed.

[HD]
00:14:775 - Felt awkward to play something like that over soft instrument. Try this. http://puu.sh/gvCFA/6b75d4e387.png
01:43:567 - I think single note would fit perfectly here.
01:44:171 - Rather than this, try http://puu.sh/gvCP8/7a18a6a844.png
01:45:178 - Single note. I think it fit well.
01:48:802 to 01:51:218 - I think Triple notes felt too much. Try use single or double notes.
02:01:084 - ^
02:05:816 - You can add more note here. Since the instrument still sounding here.

[R.Scarlet's HD+]
Good Job, Rube~

[AILK's MX]
00:02:997 - You can add note here.
00:04:608 - ^
00:06:722 - Extend the LN to 00:08:332
00:06:923 - Add a note here. In the previous pattern you add a note here.
00:07:124 (7124|1) - I suggest you to change the LN into a normal note.
00:07:326 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:527 (7527|0) - Delete the LN. It felt unecessary placed there.
00:07:728 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:930 (7930|2) - Delete the LN. Felt awkward there....
00:08:131 - Add note here. Previous pattern uses a note too.
00:08:332 - If you take my mod so far, you can use triple notes. LN is up to you.
00:09:440 - You can add note on 2. But first, you should move 00:09:339 (9339|1) to 3 or 4.
00:11:051 - You can add note on 1.
00:13:165 to 00:13:769 - What's with the LN ended at 1/8? I know you're trying to follow the Kick distort, but the distort ended on 00:13:366. Extend the LN to there, or simply change the LNs to normal notes.
00:13:869 - Add note here. There's a sound you can follow here.
00:13:970 to 00:14:071 - No, the right snapping is 1/8.
00:14:272 - Now, back with 1/4 snapping. Add note here. There's clearly a sound here.
00:21:822 - Delete a note. It didn't fit for 2 note since it only has a hihat (Or if you did a vocal mapping But that's discouraged).
00:22:225 - Delete 2 notes. It only has a hihat. Even a Vocal Mapping shouldn't grant a triple notes.
00:22:426 to 00:22:628 - Delete one note each triplets. Just two note is fitting for a kick.
00:35:010 to 00:35:614 - What's with the 1/4 stairs? Better you delete those 1/4, did 00:35:111 to 00:35:312 just like the pattern before, and add double notes on 00:35:514
00:35:916 to 00:36:520 - Um, you use the LN for the vocal, am I correct? Then your snapping isn't right. Those vocal started and ended on white and red lines.
00:37:527 to 00:38:131 - ^
00:41:151 - Suggest you delete the LN, and Add Double note here.
00:41:353 to 00:41:755 - 1/4 isn't right. Delete the one on blue lines, and make the Red line into Double.
00:41:755 to 00:41:856 - The correct snap is 1/8. Fix it.
00:47:796 to 00:47:896 - The snap is 1/8. Better fix it.
00:55:849 and next if you met one again - LN release and a started vocal don't sync so well. In fact, it would make player felt uneasy. Better you start an LN every a vocal starts.
01:15:178 to 01:15:581 - The pattern felt bland and didn't sync so well. How about this? http://puu.sh/gvC1H/892abda5cc.png
01:28:869 to 01:30:077 - Why the pattern like this? Better you change the doubles to singles.
01:37:527 (97527|1) - The LN ends on 01:37:930 and Delete 01:37:728 (97728|2).
01:50:413 - ^
02:02:695 to the end of LN - The notes in the center didn't fit well. Delete them, or refer to Rube's HD+ for a good base.

Yeah, moimoi~
Good Luck for Ranked owo
Shooting a star~
Topic Starter
-LASU-

MEGAtive wrote:


Hi Lasu-san~
Mod per requested on my queue and PM

[General]
Metadate: Fine
Timing: Fine
Hitsound: Better you had the mapset Hitsounded

[NM]
Looks Good, and it nearly reach 2 star. Great Job indeed.

[HD]
00:14:775 - Felt awkward to play something like that over soft instrument. Try this. http://puu.sh/gvCFA/6b75d4e387.png
01:43:567 - I think single note would fit perfectly here.
01:44:171 - Rather than this, try http://puu.sh/gvCP8/7a18a6a844.png
01:45:178 - Single note. I think it fit well.
01:48:802 to 01:51:218 - I think Triple notes felt too much. Try use single or double notes.
02:01:084 - ^
02:05:816 - You can add more note here. Since the instrument still sounding here.

Yeah, moimoi~
Good Luck for Ranked owo
Shooting a star~
mod thx ;)
LNP-
=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


• 01:32:494 - add note 3
• 01:43:769 - add note 4 for cymbal
• 01:45:379 - add note 3
• 01:51:822 - add note 1
• 01:53:433 - add note 4
• 00:42:963 - ~ 00:43:769 - , 00:44:574 - ~ 00:45:379 - i don't understand, why 1/4 ?
• 01:23:232 - ~ 01:24:037 - , 01:24:843 - ~ 01:25:648 - ^same
• 00:42:661 (42661|2) - delete, no sound
• 00:44:272 (44272|2) - ^
• 01:15:681 (75681|2) - ^
• 02:01:084 - ~ 02:01:889 - you can make 1/4 if you follow bass sound
• 00:14:020 - add note (1/8)
• 00:14:272 - add note
• 00:28:517 - add note (1/8)
• 00:28:970 (28970|1) - delete, no sound
• 00:35:312 - & 00:35:514 - add note for bass
• 00:41:353 (41353|0,41453|1,41554|2,41655|3) - stairs is not fit with the sound, my suggest


• 00:41:806 - add note (1/8)
• 00:42:057 (42057|3) - move to 2
• 00:51:822 - ~ 00:53:232 - change like this


• 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 - i think, it is overmap, why put 3 or 4 note ? i don't hear loud sound :(
• 01:08:785 - add note (1/8)
• 01:15:228 - ^
• 01:37:326 - ~ 01:38:534 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:44:222 - add note (1/8)
• 01:50:212 - ~ 01:51:420 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:57:108 - add note (1/8
• 01:57:561 (117561|1) - delete, no sound

good luck :D
RuberusuScarlet

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


Topic Starter
-LASU-

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


NM
• 01:32:494 - add note 3 no thanks(not follow sound)
• 01:43:769 - add note 4 for cymbal ^
• 01:45:379 - add note 3 ^
• 01:51:822 - add note 1 ^
• 01:53:433 - add note 4 ^

HD
• 00:42:963 - ~ 00:43:769 - , 00:44:574 - ~ 00:45:379 - i don't understand, why 1/4 ?
• 01:23:232 - ~ 01:24:037 - , 01:24:843 - ~ 01:25:648 - ^same
Because NM,HD difficulty difference not spread
good luck :D
mod thx ;)
RuberusuScarlet

-LASU- wrote:

PiraTom wrote:

最初に、NMとHDの難易度が大きく離れすぎているのではないかと思います。
NMはとても簡単すぎて、HDが難しすぎるのが原因だと思われます。
現在のNMをEZとして新しくNMを作るか、HDを大きく易化させるかをするべきでしょう。
最近のRanked,Qualifiedの譜面を観てみると、そんなに難易度差が開いてるとは思いません。(NM,HD差が1.00超えてるのもあります。)
差がギリ1.00(ingame)以下なので、大丈夫かと思います
確かに難易度の差は大きいのですが基準?としてはSD差1.5ぐらいまでとされてます(BPMやキー数によって更に大きく離れてしまうものもありますが)
AILK

Verniy_Chan wrote:

4K = |1|2|3|4|


00:02:997 add note stair sound?
00:04:608 ^
done.
and 00:01:890 to 00:05:111 repattern.


00:07:326 add note
00:07:527 (7527|2) - move to 00:07:326
00:07:728 and 00:08:131 add note.
00:07:930 (7930|3) - move 2


00:16:386 add note high pitch + Kiai
add note 2.

00:35:312 add note follow beat sound like 00:34:910
00:35:514 ^
done.

00:47:393 add note? beat sound?
done.(repattern)

00:47:896 - 00:48:098 it will be nice if you make stair patter this
Sorry. This sound is match, stair pattern can not make.

00:56:655 add note + Kiai
add note 3

01:15:178 (75178|1,75279|0) Ctrl + G
done.
and 01:14:574 to 01:14:977 repattern.


01:20:816 add note for beat sound?
add note 2,3.
01:21:218 add note 3.


01:29:876 try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2867966
done.(but from 01:29:675 )

01:59:473 add note?
No thanks.

02:05:816 ^
done.

Good~
[/notice]
huehue~ I like this song (。♥‿♥。)

Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ

PiraTom wrote:

まず、全体で曲を聴いてノートを置いていない箇所が非常に多すぎます。
サビの部分等、譜面の再構成を提案します。

00:13:165 (13165|0,13366|1,13567|2,13769|3) - 何の音を拾っているのですか?小さすぎるLongNoteはUnranked対象です。
00:13:165 to 00:14:171 repattern.

00:22:829 - ノートを一つ追加してください。
done.

00:28:970 (28970|1) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

00:51:822 ~ 00:53:232 曲を聴いて再配置してください。
done.

00:55:849 - ボーカル音としてLongNoteを置いてください(00:56:252まで)
00:56:252 - ^(00:56:655まで)
done.

01:01:889 (61889|1,61889|2,62091|1,62292|3,62292|0,62494|2,62494|3)
01:02:695 ~ 01:03:098までの部分を強調するためにノートを減らしましょう。
01:50:212 (110212|1,110212|2,110413|1,110413|0,110614|3,110614|0,110816|2,110816|3) -
ここも同様です。
done.

01:30:883 (90883|2) - LongNoteとして取れる音がありません、削除するかノートに変えてください。
音自体はあるので、LNの長さを変更。
01:32:091 - ボーカル音としてLongNoteを置いてください(01:32:494まで
一例を挙げておきます。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2868416
done.

01:36:923 (96923|3) - ノートに置き換えてください。
done.

01:44:675 (104675|2) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

01:56:252 - ドラム音でノートを一つか二つ追加してください。
done.

01:57:561 (117561|1) - No Soundです、削除してください。
done.

Rankedには非常に遠い譜面だと感じましたが、これからも頑張ってください。
GOOD LUCK

Brian_Ex wrote:


4K = |1|2|3|4|


from 01:25:648 - to 01:27:259 - i suggest you add SV in here, like ruberusu did

01:32:091 - add SV x2 then at 01:32:192 - add SV x0,10 and feel the difference =w=)b
umm.... I was consideration of SV. :shock:
But, many people hate it. :(
I want to add When also there is a demand from other people. :idea:


Lovely streams again <3
thanks ;)

MEGAtive wrote:

[AILK's MX]
00:02:997 - You can add note here.
00:04:608 - ^
done.

00:06:722 - Extend the LN to 00:08:332
done.

00:06:923 - Add a note here. In the previous pattern you add a note here.
no thanks.

00:07:124 (7124|1) - I suggest you to change the LN into a normal note.
00:07:326 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:527 (7527|0) - Delete the LN. It felt unecessary placed there.
00:07:728 - Add note here. The previous pattern uses that.
00:07:930 (7930|2) - Delete the LN. Felt awkward there....
00:08:131 - Add note here. Previous pattern uses a note too.
all done.

00:08:332 - If you take my mod so far, you can use triple notes. LN is up to you.
done.

00:09:440 - You can add note on 2. But first, you should move 00:09:339 (9339|1) to 3 or 4.
00:11:051 - You can add note on 1.
done.

00:13:165 to 00:13:769 - What's with the LN ended at 1/8? I know you're trying to follow the Kick distort, but the distort ended on 00:13:366. Extend the LN to there, or simply change the LNs to normal notes.
00:13:869 - Add note here. There's a sound you can follow here.
00:13:970 to 00:14:071 - No, the right snapping is 1/8.
00:14:272 - Now, back with 1/4 snapping. Add note here. There's clearly a sound here.
all done.

00:21:822 - Delete a note. It didn't fit for 2 note since it only has a hihat (Or if you did a vocal mapping But that's discouraged).
00:22:225 - Delete 2 notes. It only has a hihat. Even a Vocal Mapping shouldn't grant a triple notes.
00:22:426 to 00:22:628 - Delete one note each triplets. Just two note is fitting for a kick.
done.

00:35:010 to 00:35:614 - What's with the 1/4 stairs? Better you delete those 1/4, did 00:35:111 to 00:35:312 just like the pattern before, and add double notes on 00:35:514
done.

00:35:916 to 00:36:520 - Um, you use the LN for the vocal, am I correct? Then your snapping isn't right. Those vocal started and ended on white and red lines.
00:37:527 to 00:38:131 - ^
This LN is no vocal. piano? Synthesizer? sound.
And I'm sorry difficult to understand picking up a lot of sound. :|


00:41:151 - Suggest you delete the LN, and Add Double note here.
done.

00:41:353 to 00:41:755 - 1/4 isn't right. Delete the one on blue lines, and make the Red line into Double.
00:41:755 to 00:41:856 - The correct snap is 1/8. Fix it.
00:47:796 to 00:47:896 - The snap is 1/8. Better fix it.
done.

00:55:849 and next if you met one again - LN release and a started vocal don't sync so well. In fact, it would make player felt uneasy. Better you start an LN every a vocal starts.
done.

01:15:178 to 01:15:581 - The pattern felt bland and didn't sync so well. How about this? http://puu.sh/gvC1H/892abda5cc.png
done.

01:28:869 to 01:30:077 - Why the pattern like this? Better you change the doubles to singles.
Fix. Please point out if there is yet problem.

01:37:527 (97527|1) - The LN ends on 01:37:930 and Delete 01:37:728 (97728|2).
01:50:413 - ^
done.

02:02:695 to the end of LN - The notes in the center didn't fit well. Delete them, or refer to Rube's HD+ for a good base.
done.

LNP- wrote:

=w=)/

My Column :
1|2|3|4


• 00:14:020 - add note (1/8)
• 00:14:272 - add note
• 00:28:517 - add note (1/8)
• 00:28:970 (28970|1) - delete, no sound
• 00:35:312 - & 00:35:514 - add note for bass
• 00:41:353 (41353|0,41453|1,41554|2,41655|3) - stairs is not fit with the sound, my suggest


• 00:41:806 - add note (1/8)
• 00:42:057 (42057|3) - move to 2
• 00:51:822 - ~ 00:53:232 - change like this


• 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 - i think, it is overmap, why put 3 or 4 note ? i don't hear loud sound :(
• 01:08:785 - add note (1/8)
• 01:15:228 - ^
• 01:37:326 - ~ 01:38:534 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:44:222 - add note (1/8)
• 01:50:212 - ~ 01:51:420 - same as 01:01:889 - ~ 01:03:098 -
• 01:57:108 - add note (1/8
• 01:57:561 (117561|1) - delete, no sound
all done.

good luck :D
Everyone modding thanks! :)
Kawawa
HAI '- ^
col 1/2/3/4
too late.. these days lazy. sorry .-.
1. about "audio preview point set" ▷ u consider change move to "00:55:849 - "
beacuse of the voice part of the song starts from here, I would recommend this place.

2. *if do not hit-sounding map, i can not say the exact opinions about problem.

3. i cosndier mapper style, and suggestion. :3

4. again. my col 1/2/3/4
All the pitches can not be expressed exact
BUT, Possible must be correctly(If you do not use a mirror pattern)
△00:02:494 (2494|1,2695|1,2896|2,2997|3,3299|2,3500|0) - = 00:04:104 (4104|1,4306|1,4507|3,4608|2,4910|1,5111|0) - same pitch.
for example, u can this(this is just example )▽

^if use mirror pattern. or dont use mirror pattern, just u can same pitch pattern.
so, i suggest u this part rearrange
01:10:145 (70145|0,70346|0,70547|2,70648|3,70950|0,71151|1,71755|0,71957|0,72158|2,72259|1,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) - ^same.

00:07:124 (7124|2,7326|0) - move one right
^consider the following pitch and conflict this 00:06:118 (6118|2,6520|0) -
00:08:332 (8332|2) - move to 4

01:13:064 (73064|3,73366|2) - Ctrl + G pitch relevance
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3) - move to
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3,4507|2,4608|1,4910|0,5111|2) - also, u consider arrange

00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2,13366|1,13567|3,13769|1,13869|2,13970|1,14071|0,14171|1,14272|2) - suggestion ▽

^ for example 00:13:869 - this streaming is dont need.

00:15:581 - one note remove. and 00:15:983 - add one note
^ 00:15:983 - crash, 00:15:581 - and no bass

00:40:145 (40145|2) - delete
00:43:769 (43769|3) - move to 1

00:47:192 - delete one and 00:47:393 - add one ^^^same reason.

00:59:071 (59071|1,59272|0) - Ctrl + G for note shape
01:01:386 (61386|3) - move to 2 and 01:01:487 (61487|0) - move to 4
01:09:339 (69339|3,69541|2) - Ctrl + G

01:15:178 (75178|0,75178|3,75279|2,75379|3,75480|0,75581|1,75581|3) - suggestion ▽
00:09:541 (9541|1,9742|0) - Ctrl + G. note relevance. like this 00:10:950 (10950|2,11051|1,11151|0) -
00:11:856 (11856|0) - move to 3? or 00:11:856 (11856|0,11957|1) - move right one
00:14:373 - add at 1. < if u add, can to be more better smooth play..

SV 00:29:272 - x0.9? intend?
^ i do not recommend this. consider delete this.
this is same streaming. so SV is not suited


00:42:057 (42057|2,42158|1) - Ctrl + G for shape. just suggstion.

00:55:044 - this SV, I think this is ok. but i suggestion x0.7
^SV 0.9 and 1.0, there is no difference

01:05:715 (65715|0,65816|1,65916|2) - move right one

01:09:541 - and 01:14:373 - i suggest u. consider once again. about this SV
01:57:863 - ^same


i think this part should same chord
01:44:171 (104171|3,104222|2,104272|1,104373|0,104473|2,104574|1,104574|3) -
01:50:614 (110614|0,110665|1,110715|2,110816|0,110816|3,110916|2,111017|1,111017|3) -
01:57:057 (117057|3,117108|2,117158|1,117259|0,117359|1,117460|0,117460|2) -
△ therefore conclusion is 01:44:373 - add at one note OR 01:50:816 - add one remove
00:14:071 (14071|0) - delete or? If you are using two chord here, I suggest this. ▽

^13:970 ~ 14:171

00:44:272 (44272|3,44373|1) - Ctrl + G?, just suggestion. for note shape
00:58:366 (58366|0,58467|1) - Ctrl+ G
01:10:547 (70547|2,70648|1) - Ctrl + H
RuberusuScarlet

KawaEE wrote:

Topic Starter
-LASU-

KawaEE wrote:

HAI '- ^ Hi Kawa san
col 1/2/3/4
too late.. these days lazy. sorry .-. 신경 안 쓰셔도 돼요
1. about "audio preview point set" ▷ u consider change move to "00:55:849 - "
beacuse of the voice part of the song starts from here, I would recommend this place. preview point set all diff change

2. *if do not hit-sounding map, i can not say the exact opinions about problem. Sorry I will add later hitsound

3. i cosndier mapper style, and suggestion. :3

4. again. my col 1/2/3/4
NM
All the pitches can not be expressed exact
BUT, Possible must be correctly(If you do not use a mirror pattern)
△00:02:494 (2494|1,2695|1,2896|2,2997|3,3299|2,3500|0) - = 00:04:104 (4104|1,4306|1,4507|3,4608|2,4910|1,5111|0) - same pitch.
for example, u can this(this is just example )▽

^if use mirror pattern. or dont use mirror pattern, just u can same pitch pattern.
so, i suggest u this part rearrange
01:10:145 (70145|0,70346|0,70547|2,70648|3,70950|0,71151|1,71755|0,71957|0,72158|2,72259|1,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) - ^same.

00:07:124 (7124|2,7326|0) - move one right
^consider the following pitch and conflict this 00:06:118 (6118|2,6520|0) -
00:08:332 (8332|2) - move to 4

01:13:064 (73064|3,73366|2) - Ctrl + G pitch relevance
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3) - move to
pattern change & move done
HD
00:02:695 (2695|2) - move to 2 move
00:03:299 (3299|1,3500|2) - Ctrl + H ok
00:04:104 (4104|2,4306|3,4507|2,4608|1,4910|0,5111|2) - also, u consider arrange repattern

00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2,13366|1,13567|3,13769|1,13869|2,13970|1,14071|0,14171|1,14272|2) - suggestion ▽

^ for example 00:13:869 - this streaming is dont need.
no thanks
00:15:581 - one note remove. and 00:15:581 -add one note
^ 00:15:983 - crash, 00:15:581 - and no bass
remove and added
00:40:145 (40145|2) - delete delete
00:43:769 (43769|3) - move to 1 move

00:47:192 - delete one and 00:47:393 - add one ^^^same reason.
done
00:59:071 (59071|1,59272|0) - Ctrl + G for note shape ok
01:01:386 (61386|3) - move to 2 and 01:01:487 (61487|0) - move to 4 move
01:09:339 (69339|3,69541|2) - Ctrl + G ok

01:15:178 (75178|0,75178|3,75279|2,75379|3,75480|0,75581|1,75581|3) - suggestion ▽
no thanks
nice mod~ mod thx(^ω^)
Kruzon


Hi, my 4K column format is as usual: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

HD

Suggestion:
00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2) - I think you can put 1 more note here on 4, signifying ending of the starting part. Granted, if you agreed then you may move
00:12:963 (12963|3) - to 2

00:43:970 (43970|2) - Add note to 3
00:44:373 (44373|2) - Add note to 3
00:54:641 (54641|0) - deserve 1 more note
01:08:735 (68735|1,68735|0,68836|2) - I think 1/8 snap divisor fit wells here, perhaps re-pattern
01:11:151 (71151|3) - move to 1, i suggest to not overused jack notes but instead follow this sequence 01:12:561 (72561|2,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) -

01:24:037 (84037|0) - Add note to 2 and 01:24:440 (84440|1) - move to 3
01:32:091 (92091|2) - Add single note to 3 because 01:31:285 (91285|2,91688|0,91688|3,91688|1,92091|2) - notes should represents vocal: ku-ra-e
01:32:494 (92494|2,92594|1) - Press Ctrl + H

01:34:205 (94205|0) - move to 2, better flow in my opinion
01:34:910 (94910|3,95111|3,95312|3,95514|3) - excessive jacks, add more variety to pattern- How about:
01:35:111 (95111|3) - move to 1
01:35:514 (95514|3) - move to 3, repeat sequences 01:35:514 (95514|2,95614|1,95916|2,96017|1,96319|2,96420|1) -

01:45:379 (105379|1,105379|3,105379|0) - has the loudest sound: Vocal + Drum + loud chime, i recommend you should put 4 notes on this line, and
01:45:480 (105480|2,105581|1) - you may delete them

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Ruberusu's HD+

00:02:896 (2896|2,3098|1) - this feels kinda off, 00:03:098 (3098|1) - should be on the blue line 00:02:997 (2997|1) -
00:04:708 (4708|2) - the same for this, move to blue line

00:16:185 (16185|3) - this has no meaning at all, I'm aware you need it for the LN patterning though.. And also 00:15:983 (15983|0) - has poor notes
base despite the loudness- at least 2 notes should be added here.
So my recommendation is: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885400

00:17:494 (17494|0,17594|1,17594|2,17695|0,17796|3,17896|1,17997|0,17997|2,18098|1) - Feels kinda randomly plotted, the vibe doesn't match with the song. I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885415 Also, inputting ascending dual notes gives meaning to the current part of the song
00:17:192 (17192|0,17192|1,17594|1,17594|2,17997|3,17997|2) -

00:18:400 (18400|3) - move to 1 for better flow
00:18:500 (18500|0) - move to 4
00:19:205 (19205|0) - suggest move to 3 and 00:19:306 (19306|2) - move to 2 for pattern

00:22:426 (22426|0,22628|0,22829|0) - This is correct and fitting with the current part of the song, but this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) - is definitely not. try to listen deeply and see why i said so- In any case, I think you should re-arrange this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) -
My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885455

* On the side note, this 00:23:836 (23836|1) - should be moved to 1 for flow and pattern repetition 00:23:232 (23232|3,23433|3,23836|0,24037|0) -

00:42:561 (42561|1,42762|1) - feels awkward, how about Ctrl + H this 00:42:762 (42762|1,42863|2) -
00:48:198 (48198|1,48400|1,48601|1) - omega good job
00:59:775 (59775|2) - move to 4 more comfortable + chain patterns 00:59:272 (59272|0,59473|0,59574|3,59775|3,59876|0,60077|0) -

01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - something feels wrong here owo i think this jack notes 01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - should
start on the red line 01:00:883 (60883|0) - for fitting along the vocal sound ku-ka-ko. (This will break pattern, so If you decided to change it, then I leave re-patterning in your hands)

01:04:708 (64708|1,64708|0) - Add 1 more note, considerably louder sound here

- Mod Ends -


Good luck with your map c:
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Kruzon wrote:



Hi, my 4K column format is as usual: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

HD

Suggestion:
00:13:165 (13165|0,13165|2) - I think you can put 1 more note here on 4, signifying ending of the starting part. Granted, if you agreed then you may move
00:12:963 (12963|3) - to 2
repattern
00:43:970 (43970|2) - Add note to 3 no thanks
00:44:373 (44373|2) - Add note to 3 ^
00:54:641 (54641|0) - deserve 1 more note ^
01:08:735 (68735|1,68735|0,68836|2) - I think 1/8 snap divisor fit wells here, perhaps re-pattern I know 1/8 but it's too hard I have been unified in 1/4
01:11:151 (71151|3) - move to 1, i suggest to not overused jack notes but instead follow this sequence 01:12:561 (72561|2,72561|3,72762|0,72762|1) -
keep
01:24:037 (84037|0) - Add note to 2 and 01:24:440 (84440|1) - move to 3 ^
01:32:091 (92091|2) - Add single note to 3 because 01:31:285 (91285|2,91688|0,91688|3,91688|1,92091|2) - notes should represents vocal: ku-ra-e
add note 3
01:32:494 (92494|2,92594|1) - Press Ctrl + H

01:34:205 (94205|0) - move to 2, better flow in my opinion hand balance
01:34:910 (94910|3,95111|3,95312|3,95514|3) - excessive jacks, add more variety to pattern- How about:
01:35:111 (95111|3) - move to 1
01:35:514 (95514|3) - move to 3, repeat sequences 01:35:514 (95514|2,95614|1,95916|2,96017|1,96319|2,96420|1) -

01:45:379 (105379|1,105379|3,105379|0) - has the loudest sound: Vocal + Drum + loud chime, i recommend you should put 4 notes on this line, and
01:45:480 (105480|2,105581|1) - you may delete them keep

- Mod Ends -


Good luck with your map c:
mod thx ;)
RuberusuScarlet

Kruzon wrote:


Ruberusu's HD+

00:02:896 (2896|2,3098|1) - this feels kinda off, 00:03:098 (3098|1) - should be on the blue line 00:02:997 (2997|1) -
00:04:708 (4708|2) - the same for this, move to blue line no change. it's piano sound note

00:16:185 (16185|3) - this has no meaning at all, I'm aware you need it for the LN patterning though.. And also 00:15:983 (15983|0) - has poor notes
base despite the loudness- at least 2 notes should be added here.
So my recommendation is: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885400 fixed

00:17:494 (17494|0,17594|1,17594|2,17695|0,17796|3,17896|1,17997|0,17997|2,18098|1) - Feels kinda randomly plotted, the vibe doesn't match with the song. I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885415 Also, inputting ascending dual notes gives meaning to the current part of the song
00:17:192 (17192|0,17192|1,17594|1,17594|2,17997|3,17997|2) - fixed

00:18:400 (18400|3) - move to 1 for better flow fixed
00:18:500 (18500|0) - move to 4 fixed
00:19:205 (19205|0) - suggest move to 3 and 00:19:306 (19306|2) - move to 2 for pattern fixed

00:22:426 (22426|0,22628|0,22829|0) - This is correct and fitting with the current part of the song, but this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) - is definitely not. try to listen deeply and see why i said so- In any case, I think you should re-arrange this 00:23:232 (23232|0,23433|0,23634|0) -
My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2885455 fixed

* On the side note, this 00:23:836 (23836|1) - should be moved to 1 for flow and pattern repetition 00:23:232 (23232|3,23433|3,23836|0,24037|0) - fixed

00:42:561 (42561|1,42762|1) - feels awkward, how about Ctrl + H this 00:42:762 (42762|1,42863|2) - fixed
00:48:198 (48198|1,48400|1,48601|1) - omega good job >w<
00:59:775 (59775|2) - move to 4 more comfortable + chain patterns 00:59:272 (59272|0,59473|0,59574|3,59775|3,59876|0,60077|0) - fixed

01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - something feels wrong here owo i think this jack notes 01:01:084 (61084|0,61285|0,61487|0) - should
start on the red line 01:00:883 (60883|0) - for fitting along the vocal sound ku-ka-ko. (This will break pattern, so If you decided to change it, then I leave re-patterning in your hands) no change

01:04:708 (64708|1,64708|0) - Add 1 more note, considerably louder sound here add 4
mod thanks ~
Aeven
Modのやりかたわかりますぇん!( ´◔ ‸◔`)
プレーしてみて気になったところだけ書いてます('、3_ヽ)_

02:04:608と02:05:816にノート1個ずつ置いていいかも?
01:21:621 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2890888 こんな配置はどうでしょう。曲は1/8だけど1/4で置いてあったので修正してみてはどうでしょうか。個人的にはここは1/8で取ったほうが好きです :)
02:04:608 ノート1個追加

Ranked待ってます(ง ˙ω˙)วGL
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Aeven wrote:

Modのやりかたわかりますぇん!( ´◔ ‸◔`)
プレーしてみて気になったところだけ書いてます('、3_ヽ)_

02:04:608と02:05:816にノート1個ずつ置いていいかも?
両方とも追加しました。

Ranked待ってます(ง ˙ω˙)วGL
modどうもでした(^ω^)
momogon3
NM

00:14:775 (14775|1) -
00:15:983 (15983|2) - ここでLNを切ったほうが曲的にいいかなと思います!

00:37:124 (37124|3) - これがLNなら
00:38:735 (38735|3) - これもLNにしたほうがわかりやすいかも!

HD

01:44:574 (104574|0) - ここだけ単発なのが変だと思うので1個たして同時押しにしたほうが綺麗かな
Topic Starter
-LASU-

momogon3 wrote:

NM
00:14:775 (14775|1) -
00:15:983 (15983|2) - ここでLNを切ったほうが曲的にいいかなと思います!
00:37:124 (37124|3) - これがLNなら
00:38:735 (38735|3) - これもLNにしたほうがわかりやすいかも!
all done
HD
01:44:574 (104574|0) - ここだけ単発なのが変だと思うので1個たして同時押しにしたほうが綺麗かな ここらへん再配置しました。
mod thx! ;)
AILK

KawaEE wrote:

00:14:071 (14071|0) - delete or? If you are using two chord here, I suggest this. ▽

^13:970 ~ 14:171
fix.

00:44:272 (44272|3,44373|1) - Ctrl + G?, just suggestion. for note shape
done.

00:58:366 (58366|0,58467|1) - Ctrl+ G
done.

01:10:547 (70547|2,70648|1) - Ctrl + H
done.

Aeven wrote:

01:21:621 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2890888 こんな配置はどうでしょう。曲は1/8だけど1/4で置いてあったので修正してみてはどうでしょうか。個人的にはここは1/8で取ったほうが好きです :)
done.
その手前も修正した為、提案とは若干配置変わってます。


02:04:608 ノート1個追加
done.
00:22:225 (22225|0) - LN -> normal note.
00:42:158 to 00:47:622 fix.
00:49:406 to 00:50:212 and, 00:51:017 to 00:53:232 fix.
01:19:205 to 01:21:420 fix.


Thankyou all :)
x M e l
Hi Lasu :D mod for req via pm

columns: 1|2|3|4

I recommend don't follow vocal so much, follow the rythm is better
00:22:628 - delete one note
01:01:048 (61084|1) - move to 4
01:02:896 - delete one note
don't put doubles where aren't stronger sounds
00:55:044 - why two lns?
01:41:755 - add note?
00:47:896 (47896|2) - move to 4 for balance
01:49:406 - add note
01:51:420 - why triple?

that's all :D nice map, good luck
Topic Starter
-LASU-

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi Lasu :D mod for req via pm Hi

columns: 1|2|3|4

I recommend don't follow vocal so much, follow the rythm is better
00:22:628 - delete one note 00:21:621 - 00:22:628 - melody+vocal note
01:01:048 (61084|1) - move to 4 move
01:02:896 - delete one note same
don't put doubles where aren't stronger sounds
00:55:044 - why two lns? delete LN 1 notes
01:41:755 - add note? no thanks

that's all :D nice map, good luck
mod thx~
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