oh! I got a mistakes....
sorry


Though URL is opened and DL was done

DownLoad cannot be done.
The cause is not understood.
When mp3 can be put on here, it is glad
sorry XD

Forums says file is too big, thats why I uploaded it on 2shared :3
//Edit: Ok, I see. 2shared sux. Trying to upload it somewhere else

thanks XD

Here you go^^ http://www.mediafire.com/?ljdmyyzgzin

sorry XD

thanks!!!



mp3 changed redownload plz

offset -15~25?
tagにtouhouはいらないです
Gojyo-kai White Magic c77 をtagに入れておいてください

fixed~

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Offset: 760 (resnap all notes)
  • You should cut the mp3

[Easy]

• • 00:23:728 (green timing section) - Volume: 7

fixed~

~Easy~
Fine.

~Hard~
Fine.

~Lunatic~
03:36:906 (1) - move 1/4 right


+Star

fixed~

hi~
Only suggestions

[Hard]
-Add a slider in 00:01:617 to 00:01:788 with 3 repetitions

[Lunatic]
-reduce distance between 03:44:620 (3) and 03:44:791 (4) or increases distance between 03:44:448 (2) and 03:44:620 (3), new combo in 03:44:620 and reduce distance between 03:44:620 and 03:44:791

Star~

fixed~

meiko nakamura as artist, instead of sync arts? and put sync arts under "tags" looks better..

but you already know that..

ah... The meaning was not able to be understood.
It's my study shortage...
sorry

ahh... I think that what you say is this thing.

Title Name in [Meiko Nakamura]
add tags in SYNC.ART'S .

These were executed.
Therefore, a different answer might be done. If possible, please point it out again.

For a wrong answer
If possible, please point it out again.

Sorry for the delay ;_;

Easy:

00:02:131 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - All normal hitsounds sounds odd imo.
00:32:299 (1) - Start this spinner earlier (00:31:956) so it's Easy?
00:54:582 (2) - Clap?

Hard:

01:06:323 (2) - Delete?
01:14:123 (3) - This looks a bit odd, maybe move it a little?
03:42:734 (1) - Add finish.

Lunatic:

-- 16 million score is quite high, maybe try to reduce it a little.

00:41:555 (9,10,11) - Left 1 square if this pattern was supposed to be symmetrical.
01:16:865 (1,2) - Huge jump o_o
02:07:259 (5,1,2,3) - Spacing? =S
03:40:334 (2,3,4,5) - These jumps are a little confusing. Maybe swap 3 and 4, or reduce the jump a little?

Fun maps, Star.

fixed~

KONNICHIHA!

[Easy]
00:13:444 (2) - New combo?
00:31:956 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short?
00:37:441 (2) - Move forward to red tick? It's sound like a object are following vocal
00:41:898 (7) - New combo?
00:42:926 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:47:040 (3) - New combo?
00:49:097 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:55:268 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short?
01:27:492 (4,5) - The....whistle....looks awful.....
01:32:635 (B) - The breaks are too long, OMG
02:01:431 (3) - New combo please, since the combo are too long~
02:06:574 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond pattern?
02:12:402 (5) - Add a finish?
02:14:801 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short?
02:52:511 (B) - The breaks are too long, OMG
03:19:594 (5) - New combo please, since the combo are too long~

[Hard]
00:18:586 (5) - New combo?
00:19:272 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:42:755 (x) - Add note?
01:18:922 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend?
01:32:635 (B) - The breaks are too long, OMG
02:52:511 (B) - ^
03:33:307 (6) - New combo?

[Lunatic]
00:08:473 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:08:987 (2) - New combo?
00:09:844 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:10:358 (2) - New combo?
01:32:635 (B) - The breaks are too long, OMG
02:52:511 (B) - ^

Good song
STAR

fixed.

umm..b

good job!
nice map!

Some Suggestions~~

[All Diff]
1.緑の線は全てのタイム線と合わせてください
2.最初の音量はちょっと低くしてください
3.whitleを使うのがちょっと変かな
[Easy]
00:03:502 (1) - remove whitle
00:04:873 (3) - ^
00:05:559 (1) - ^
00:08:987 (3) - ^
00:10:358 (5) - ^
00:11:730 (1) - ^
00:25:100 (2) - sliderの末はCLAPを使えてください

[Hard]
00:08:130 (5) - Remove whitle?
00:09:501 (5) - ^
00:09:844 (6) - ^
00:10:187 (1) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:06:759 (4) - Remove whitle?
00:07:616 (3) - ^
00:08:130 (7) - ^
00:08:473 (8) - ^
00:08:987 (1) - ^
00:09:501 (3) - ^
00:10:873 (1) - ^
00:11:215 (3) - ^
00:12:244 (4,5) - ^

nice map star! :3

fixed~

Kiai以外の緑の線は音量を変えた時に、譜面の手前で使ってます

Frill wrote:

fixed~

Kiai以外の緑の線は音量を変えた時に、譜面の手前で使ってます

[Easy]
00:07:616 (1) - remove whistle

[Hard]
00:08:473 (5) - remove whistle
00:10:873 (3) - ^
00:11:215 (4) - ^

sorry,my miss this OTL

XD

Hello.
Thismap is very nice~
modしてみましたが違うと思ったらスルーしてください
nice jump map! star~

banvi wrote:

00:26:299 (7,8) suddenly jump...

lol
this is hard

fixed~

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
you need sth between the 1.45 stars & 4.88 stars gap, no doubt...

[Easy]
00:26:814 (3,4) - tiny spacing problem.
00:46:011 (2) - remove sliderwhistle.
02:11:373 (4,5,1) - tiny spacing problem.
02:23:372 (1) - remove sliderwhistle.
02:25:771 (1) - ^
03:22:336 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing.
03:37:763 (6,7,8) - ^
03:44:620 (3) - remove sliderwhistle.
03:48:391 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:42:583 (3,4,5) - nazi spacing.
00:45:154 (4) - remove sliderwhistle.
00:47:554 (2) - ^
01:25:093 (2) - ^
03:28:850 (3,4,5) - nazi spacing.

[Insane]
need more hitsounds at the front.
01:01:953 (5) - use a circle on 01:02:038 instead.
01:02:467 (2) - remove sliderwhistle.
02:23:372 (1) - ^
03:18:223 (2) - ^

Fixed.

nazi spacing.

nazi spacing...?
Sorry,It is my study shortage. XD

What meaning is it?

•Overall•
-Timing : 758 ~ Resnap all notes on all diffs.

•Lunatic•
00:00:760 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 2 grids right?
00:03:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2 grids down and 1 right?
00:48:068 (1) - 1 grid left?
02:11:030 (6) - New combo.
02:36:227 (4) - Distance error.
02:48:226 (4) - 2 grids right?
02:48:397 (5) - 2 grids up?

•Hard•
00:42:755 (4) - 1 grid down?
00:55:268 (2,3) - Distance error.

•Easy•
00:20:986 (5,6) - Make symmetrical this way http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11577
00:38:127 (1) - New combo.
01:07:952 (1) - This circle is too far from the grid-centre since the spinner is previous. Anyway, you don't have to fix it.

Touhou~
D:~
Nice map~
Star~

Fixed.

nazi spacing is sth that you should fix like 1 grid up, make the notes symmetrical or etc....

i say "nazi spacing" when your notes have different spacing while with same beats= = (usually mean 1 or 2 grid, otherwise i'll say spacing)

Sorry for the wait
is it just me or the singer really resemble yellow zebra's vocalist?

[General]
Could you please do something about the break between 01:32:290 (1) ~ 01:55:944 (1) and 02:52:166 (1) ~ 03:14:107 (1)? It's too long

[Easy]
00:05:557 (1) - make this the same length as 00:02:129 (1) then add a circle in 00:07:614 (2)
00:37:268 (2) - the only note with 172 ms apart from the previous note, I suggest you to delete this
02:14:714 (1) - move this spinner to 02:14:971 and shorten it to 02:17:542 then add a circle on 02:14:799

Timing section mod:

[Hard]
00:43:096 (6) - change into slider that goes until 00:43:438 then add a circle in 00:43:610 (easiest way is to ctrl+r this 00:43:096 (6,7) )
01:10:692 (3) - it'll be cool if you can add more finish like this ^o^
01:23:548 (3,4) - reverse these (ctrl+r)
02:02:629 (5,1) - ^
03:28:848 (3,4) - ^

Timing section mod:
Umm I guess I'll stop here, I making this too long for you
Anyway the timing sections I suggest so that there aren't any missound, because this song have high BPM it's better to the put timing section 1/2 beat before the notes
Good Luck
Star

Niiiice map~!

[Easy]
00:26:812 (3,4) - 1 grid up?
00:55:266 (1) - Don't slienced it > <

[Hard]
00:23:726 (1) ~ 00:26:126 (3) - Why no clap round here?
02:14:457 (1) - Don't slienced it > <

[Lunatic]
00:59:379 - Add note?
01:01:779 - ^
03:15:135 - ^

Star~!

nice map~!!

nice

need to check 仲村 芽衣子

Well then,Frill.

[Easy]
00:01:786 (2) - Adding finish?
00:02:129 (1) - Well,this part hasn't got any hitsounds.And the volume is a bit loud for me.So think about reducing volume.Also,I'd suggest to add some hitsounds:
00:02:815 - 00:04:186 - 00:05:558 and like this.Well,I've used claps,but you can choose something other,or maybe make custom hitsounds,but well,anyway,it's up to you then.
01:10:700 (1) - A bit rough.Add Whistle + Finish.
02:09:329 (1) - 1 grid left.
02:10:015 (2) - Stack it with 02:07:272 (2).
02:10:700 (3) - Stack it with 02:07:958 (3).
02:24:758 (2) - Fix distance.Unsnapped.
02:30:243 (1) - Finish + Whistle.
03:07:272 (6) - Well,not much,but feels like unsnapped as well.
03:38:472 (8) - Fix distance.

[Hard]
Nothing wrong with it,just...
03:16:872 (2) - New combo here?

[Lunatic]
00:41:215 (7,8,9~) - Probably make a triangle form here? 3 left and 2 up then.
01:17:215 (2) - A bit unexpected jump.
Other is pretty awesome.

I like it.Good luck to you,have a star~

This is pretty good
Vocalist as artist.. hmm..? oh w/e, you have the rest of the info in tags, so okay~
First kiai made no sense, remove imo

Easy-
00:31:958 (1) - would think finish would fit better than whistle... but okay..
00:55:272 (1) - maybe end this a beat earlier (to match guitar) or a beat later (to match vocal)? (if you do change, remember to adjust the hitsound..?)
01:03:843 (1) - maybe end this 2 beats (white ticks) earlier?
02:50:472 (1) - whistle doesn't fit here well imo, maybe use finish (at quieter volume) or just leave blank? :x
03:38:129 (7,8) - slight nazi, these two are closer than 6-7 and 8-1 ._.;
03:41:215 (3) - ... align with 5? (grid snap on y-axis)
Good~

Hard-
00:09:843 (6) - add whistle to match last combo? or nah
00:10:872 (3) - if you DO add to ^, this maybe remove from this..?
00:32:300 (1) - same as Easy (different start for spinner though)
00:48:586 (6) - remove the whistle sliderslide here please, I heard it and found it odd
00:55:615 (1) - same comment/suggestion as Easy
02:49:100 (1) - ^ (though the start time for the spinner is different)
03:15:500 (1,2) - hmm, remove new combo from 1 and add new combo to 2, makes more sense (vocal and pattern wise)
Great~

Lunatic- 18mil is totally pushing it, I'd say you'd have to push this diff for Approval :( or lower one of the settings, like hp drain~) for the score to jump to 14mil... which I'd allow...)
00:32:300 (1) - same as Hard
01:01:957 (5,6) - the slower sliders are follow vocal, and I assume this part should follow vocal too... remove these two notes and add a note to the 1/4 between here?
01:29:043 (8) - add whistle to end of this slider? (comparing to 02:48:758 (7))
01:47:215 (4) - might as well continue the clap pace and add clap to end? I guess
03:06:415 (1) - I like how 01:46:529 (2,3,4,1) plays more (I assume they can sound similar, that's just me though)
03:17:729 (5) - same as 01:01:957 (the vocal is on 1/4)
Great~

Hmm, atm, please lower Lunatic's score, if not, then I can only give you a bubble of approval instead of rank (though I dunno how the partial approval thing works)
But yea, in other words, I'm willing to bubble this :P

Thank you Shinxyn~
Lunatic have score 18m.. umm..hp drain is move 1down nice suggestions. okay fixed. It did not notice.. Lol
if you message, my read Neatly complete was fixed.

O-o~ silly translator

anyways, Lunatic is down in points, so bubble for rank :D

Offset -10ms ?
All good for me

EDIT:rebubble

nice song XD
-dark white- ver in <Rainbow Face> is better I think
maybe I will map it?

little advices:
artist should be SYNC.ART'S and u can add vocal Meiko Nakamura into tags
in tags,gojyo kai should be gojou kai

nice map.!
star~

ganbare! :3

star~

nice~

Ranked @_@

おめでと～

おめでと～ XD

Nice job

all > thank you >_<