1. Hard (3.41 stars, 322 notes)
2. Insane (4.84 stars, 544 notes)
3. Normal (2.15 stars, 255 notes)

Alace wrote:

hey
this map is pretty nice
i will wait for your normal diff

kioukiou wrote:

N 跟 H 開頭的第一條紅線跟綠線重疊了，把重疊的綠線刪掉

中間第二條紅線如果是多放的也刪掉吧

Preview point也設定一下吧，挑一個最喜歡的部份做為試聽

Editor介面最上面 timing > Set current position as preveiw point，設定完記得save

很棒的map >w</

star.

kioukiou wrote:

Edit :

[Normal]

02:42:910 (9,1) - spinner 跟 slider尾重疊了，在同一個tick上有兩個不同的物件是不被允許的
03:51:695 (1,1) - ^同上

[Hard]

02:42:910 (9,1) - 同[Normal]
03:51:481 (9,1) - ^同上

James wrote:

hard:
03:49:767 (7,8) - i dont think this is allowed. and this 04:36:910 (2,3)
- slidertick soft or normal sounds good with this, especially tick 1 and with sliders like 03:51:481 (9) scratch this, i think it has sliderticks but the volume is really low
- tone down your finish sounds, some are not placed properly
- better if you remove all jumps and placed more simpler patterns..
- love patterns like this 04:06:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10)

tq04t46 wrote:

;)

Licnect wrote:

Alace 老師推薦的都很棒
☆~

dvorak wrote:

good map and song

Source: Mainichi Suki Site
add Tag: Kotoko Sirius
Vocal: MOMO

Kotoko= Lyrics , Vocal MOMO , song/arrange Nakatsubo Atsuhiko ( was in I've till 2005 )
Ending Theme of old game from Sirius.

kioukiou wrote:

Modded again.

[Hard]

04:01:017 (6) - 從藍色tick提前放到白色tick上


別忘了如果map完成的話 記得上傳到pending裡

加油

Alace wrote:

Hey
<Storyboard>
I suggest move your SB to the first breal time, i am sure that people will skip the beginning XD
Also, can you delete the useless .osb and full upload again (your SB codes are already in the .osu file )

<Normal>
use slidertick 1
00:48:696 (4) - this doesn`t sound so good, suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15431
01:29:410 (5) - ^ think about a new one by yourself XD
02:51:481 (3) - ^
02:37:767 (5) - I think 01:15:481 (2) sounds better than this
04:29:624 (1) - it doesn`t sound good too
04:43:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this part is really too hard in a normal diff XD

<Hard>
00:45:910 (7) - remove the sliderwhistle hitsounds
00:51:695 (5) - ^
02:08:195 (5) - ^
04:36:910 (2) - ^

Really love this song and mapset

Alace wrote:

I guess normal is a little hard for new players and it`s 3.37 star now
It`s stupid to change something to fit 3.25 star rule, so 2 choices

1.make an easy

2.fix some parts in normal
01:27:910 (1,2,3) - a long slider here http://puu.sh/2X4
03:08:838 (4,5,6,7) - full divisors may help http://puu.sh/2X5
04:43:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe use 1/1 divisors here only and a long slider XD

star rating will be 3.25- if you fix those stuffs, but it is REALLY STUPID to fix a map for star rating, personally i prefer making an easy
Take your time, i will follow this map until ranked

vivicat wrote:

wow~I've momo ~<3

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
01:02:624 (3) - move down a bit
01:24:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a bit hard for new players
01:31:338 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this spacing change may too hard
02:41:195 (1,2,3) - ^

<Normal>
04:45:910 (7,8) - a bit hidden

I suggest that rename Easy --->Normal Normal --->Hard Hard --->Insane
because your easy and normal are really hard for easy and normal wwwww (but they sound great)

Justin Bieber wrote:

Quick question.

Does J-Pop need to be in the tags? When the song gets ranked, a BAT adds Genre: Pop Language: Japanese, so the tag is kinda unneccesary.

Although, I dunno~.

Also, Momo is the artist, he shouldn't be in the tags. Plus, I dunno what the "I've" is in there for~.

Takuma wrote:

Normal suggestions.

02:06:909 (4) - sorry to nazi, but just in case, move a bit closer to (3).
03:07:338 (1) - spacing is a bit difficult.. move closer or at least stack with 03:06:481 (3).

I'll rank if you fix this, just remember to contact if you do.

Takuma wrote:

MOMO <3

Bubbled for Mety!

Alace wrote:

yeah
It`s a long way
finally you made it

ccbp wrote:

this is absolutely a good map, james style.
just keep your style and don't let it be affected by the marking score, that does not explain anything.
good luck in your mapping career, looking forward to your next piece.