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[AkinoYui]
so ~i star it!
- S
:) 师傅加油
clong

Clement wrote:

^^~~
star
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494046008
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xBubu
moded in-game ;)


great song ! star :D
Kensei Akio
fancy map~
Yakumo-Yukari
star
bakabaka
STAR~~
SamiPale
来骗kudosu了

[General]
Easy,Normal,Hard的offset是708但是guest diff的offset是13566,rank标准是所有难度的第一个offset要相同 0.0
设置PreviewTime
Tags上的clement删去,其实我觉得rin跟len也可以删
我不肯定你上传的osz文件里面有什么东西...之前下的时候有很多多余的文件..如果有什么不需要的图片跟文件就删掉然后再full sub一次(因为我渣网不能再下一次...
comboburst文件不能大于500px,之前下的有个大于500px了

[Easy]
KIAI?
00:39:708(1) - 这个slider意义不明,既不跟歌声又不跟音乐也不跟节拍器 0.0
00:56:422(1) - note离spinner中心太远了,新手很难按的
01:07:993(7) - 后面的这片空白很卧槽,填了他吧
01:16:136(4) - newcombo
01:19:136(1) - 删去这个circle
01:38:850(4) - 后面的空白填了
01:41:422(6) - 玩家按了6个note就可以休息了╮(╯_╰)╭这不叫Easy这叫作者偷懒
01:55:136(5) - 这次才5个,作者越来越懒了╮(╯_╰)╭
02:04:136(7) - 作者受到了激励,这次放多了两个note╮(╯_╰)╭
02:20:422(6) - 你不觉得这里开始break很古怪么 0.0
02:31:565(2) - 建议newcombo
02:34:993(5) - newcombo
02:46:565(4) - 怎么后面又是卧槽的空白...
02:56:422(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ?????
03:03:279(1) - 移下点,接近中心
03:11:850(1,2,3,4,5) - 玩家等这么久就为了转一个圈跟按4个circle lolllllll

[Normal]
01:24:493(5,6) - 本身一直没有跟着歌声放note,这里突然跟歌声放note给人的感觉很古怪
01:44:422(1) - 为什么不从01:43:565开始呢?
01:50:422(3) - 这样几个note就又break了?
02:06:708(1) - note离spinner中心太远了,新手很难按的
02:25:136(1) - ^
02:38:422(1) - 在KIAI中break?太浪费了 0.0
02:52:136(9) - newcombo
02:55:136(14) - 又是卧槽的空白,填了吧
02:58:993(2) - 建议newcombo
03:13:565(x) - 加一个finish circle?

只有零零星星的hitsound,加也加全点吧

[Hard]
4.10的Hard 很符合标准
HP槽的设定调得比Normal还低?No ~_~ 顺便连Overall Difficulty也加点吧
00:21:279(3) - 这里newcombo,代替前面的
00:23:636(1) - 取消newcombo
01:21:065(6) - 建议newcombo
02:04:136(x) - 从这里开始做成跟01:12:922(1,2,3,4,5,6,7)一样
02:07:993(6) - 建议newcombo
02:55:565(2) - 这里newcombo代替前面的
02:57:708(1) - 意义不明的spinner,建议删去换成note吧

[Clare no yume]
不会mod触图╮(╯_╰)╭
00:41:851(1) - 跟前面(1)(2)的间距差不多,有点confused,这只是建议
03:15:280(1,2,3) - 意义不明的结束,第三个note怎么3个点都踩着弱拍?这不像是意味着结束的note D:

风格很像LKs


done~
need more mods ;_;
Selee
骗KUDOSU+1
ARTIST换成Rin & Len Kagamine如何

TAG里的rin len butterfly clement NoriP H-boy都重复了 取消吧.我的建议是加入butterfly on your right shoulder和Asami Shimoda

Easy: KIAI? +1 其他的楼上都指出来了
NORMAL:
0:33:066(1) 延长1/2拍?
2:42:708(2) 考虑下位置? 感觉意义不大..
2:44:422(1) 距离?
Hard:
我这种渣技术挑不出来了 =。= 就是后期时候注意下美观好了
Clare no yume:
我表示很恐怖...我开EASY无法PASS..好吧 其实是我太沙包了..

1:15:923(7) 这个...都1/4拍了 就别跳了吧
2:45:065(7) ^

好多星星 泪目
Pokie
wtf ;_;
soulfear
star :)
Clare
恩 不錯!star
修改後的難度 下載後覆蓋在上傳一次

Download: Kagamine Rin and Len - Migikata no Chou (Clement) [Clare no yume].osu
lzy
star :D
rustbell
=w=
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电脑抽了。。回复半天要
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XD
[Ghost]
Nagato Yuki_old
star
str007
star~~
Furudo_Erika_old
star~
_lolipop
:P
banvi
Clare no yume ;)
00:14:423 (4) new combo
00:17:851 (6) down 1 grid and left 1 grid
00:29:636 (6) new combo
00:45:066 (1) down 1 grid
00:46:886 (8,9,10) up 1 grid
00:48:173 (2,3) left 1 grid
01:00:494 (8,9,10) up 1 grid
01:01:887 (2,3) right 1 grid
01:17:637 (6) up 2 grid and right 2 grid
02:14:423 (3) up 1 grid
02:17:316 (2,3) left 1 grid
02:19:779 (6) down 1 grid
02:28:137 (3) up 1 grid
02:31:029 (2,3) right 1 grid
02:44:744 (6,7,8,1) left 1 grid
02:46:780 (6) up 2 grid and left 2 grid
02:57:066 (10) left 1 grid and down 1 grid

and add Vocaloid in Tags.
Thismap is nice :)
Babble
:)
Shinxyn
:o my mp3 is already cut fyi
not fond of remaps, but I can't stop you

Wow, definitely "first map" material
Set Preview point
Remove .osb file

Okay, I'm trying to follow some kinda of clap pattern you place, and I think its lacking/missing some claps in most places...
Easy-Normal-Hard: (I kinda go lazy after Easy D:)
SPOILER
Easy-
00:22:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ... shift this back a whole white tick?
00:39:279 - follow the slow pace, add a note
00:40:136 (1) - if you do add a note ^, remove new combo
00:46:137 (5) - clap?
00:47:850 (8) - clap at start of slider, and finish at end?
00:54:280 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - listen to the music, you can hear a slight clap like sound, try to match that in your hitsounds (these claps are on the "wrong" white tick then (ahhh... look at Clare's diff, that one is following what I mean))
01:00:280 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - claps O__O
01:12:279 - add a note with clap? maybe..
01:12:922 (3) - shift back by 1/2 (keep the white tick pace)
01:20:423 (3) - clap~?
01:23:851 (3) - ^
01:29:850 - add note with finish? to start break better
01:41:423 (8) - odd place to start a break... v.v map a bit more?
01:57:279 - add note with finish as well
02:03:280 (7,8) - add finish to end of 7 and new combo 8 please?
Claps completely die out after that o_o then there are whistles.... which don't really follow much of a pace..
03:03:279 - map this break please
03:19:565 - add final note here :O
Double check the spacing/distance snap, some notes... are messy -.-

Normal-
00:14:208 (2) - @.@ slider length and timing makes little sense! make the slider 1/2 long (no repeat and add notes to 00:14:850 and 00:15:279!)
00:38:851 (1,3,5) - claps!!
00:45:066 (1) - reduce by one repeat
00:55:994 (1) - ... I say start claps here till the break x.x (follow a 1/1 pace if you must)
01:11:851 (4,6) - ...? theses claps start from nowhere, and they sound like they're on the wrong white ticks too - -;
01:19:137 (8) - ?! whistle? whyyy?
01:53:529 - odd break... err.. map this section?
02:11:423 (1) - add claps starting here... and keep going (use 1/1 pace if you must)
03:07:993 - add note?!
03:14:850 (5) - .... yea.. remove this clap
03:19:565 - same as Easy, add last note here with finish

Hard- This diff's hitsounds... sound a bit interesting, its not too bad, and sounds a bit creative
Overall difficulty +1 or +2!!
00:25:137 (1) - add clap?
00:26:851 (6,7) - clap on 6 and clap on end of 7~ see how that sounds
00:43:994 (6) - clap at end~
01:15:280 (5) - add one repeat
02:04:136 - add note or... increase that slider's repeat to here
02:10:137 (5) - end with whistle instead of clap (since this combo uses whistles instead)
03:09:493 (6) - increase or decrease a repeat for this please
03:13:566 (1) - why does this end differently compared to Normal and Easy?
H-boy's- Add a space between "H-boy's Insane"
00:21:280 (6) - ..end this on the white tick?
00:34:565 (4) - ? hmm whistle sounds.. odd.. remove or add another whistle hitsound to end of slider...?
02:03:708 - add note with clap?
Hmm... the hitsounds... aren't bad, but... just not very constant... and... lacking cuz its not :( add more hitsounds in a constant or creative pace please?
It plays... okay

Clare- that was fun o.o
01:51:280 (4) - this kinda gets blocked by 01:50:423... just pointing out
This one is good, kinda spaced out but thats what makes its fun
Could fix the stacks a bit though

Clement, follow Clare's simple hitsound pattern if you need to!
Enough stars, needs a lot more mods though :|
@.@ since I already mapped this, I have my own imagine of how it looks, so I might have been a bit... hard on this v.v

v.v no star yet
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orioncomet
[General] - If you don't mind
- Add a Preview Point
- Delete .osb file and then full submit again

[Easy]
- Just one thing about hitsound.. They're too loud ;w;
- Silder velocity too fast for an Easy, imo.. but fine maybe.. I understand that You can dies If you change the Silder velocity.. // I meant You need to remap this diff.. for not make your Easy to be overlapping So try + OD 1 or 2 ok I saw that Your Normal already at 3 on OD
01:54:280 (6) - new combo? sorry but This combo a bit too long tho

[Normal]
- Just one thing about hitsound.. They're too loud ;w;
00:45:066 (1) - remove 1 repeat sound better, imo (so last of this silder will be at 00:45:279)
00:52:136 (8) - new combo? sorry but This combo a bit too long tho
00:58:994 (6) - ^
01:52:993 (5) - +1 repeat sound better, imo (so last of this silder will be at white tick (01:53:422))
02:27:708 (7) - new combo?

[Hard]
- Just one thing about hitsound.. They're too loud ;w;
- +1 or 2 OD?
01:15:280 (5) - +1 repeat sound better, imo (so last of this silder will be at 01:15:922)
02:04:136 - add note here Or +2 repeat of 02:03:280 (3)
03:19:565 - add note and sound finish? just want to make this diff end the same with Easy and Normal ^^

[H-boy's Insane]
- This diff need to use the same offser with other diff, Because When I try change offset on this diff to same way with other diffs and then there have some notes that aren't snapped, So please use 708 as offset and Resnap all note
- Delete Audio lead-in ?
- Add some combocolour?

[Clare no yume]
- Just one thing about hitsound.. They're too loud ;w;
- Already modded at IRC ~ only one thing from my opinion.
22:15 <orioncomet> : I a bit don't like this note 01:56:423 (10) - Orz
03:12:066 (1) - end at 03:16:993 sound better, imo, and use soft hitsound :3

Star ^^
Axey
8-)
Astom
[General]
-222.jpeg and 3313586fce94e0f480cb4a22.jpeg, resize to 800x600 or 1024x768, and if u can rename them (others BGs too)
-Set preview point in all u diff (Timing -> Set Current Position ...)
-Use same kiai time in u diff (Easy, Normal and Hard), guest diff can be different

[H-boy's Insane]
-Jumps are rly big, if u make it with Timing x2 and distance snap they are more small, for example (still it's only a commentary):
-Fix offset

Star~
subarasikibuta
:)
cloness
hard
02:47:100 (5,4) - 這個是什麼東西._.
感覺很好好的說~
abalee
Clare:
02:16:994 (1,2,3) - decrease the volume on these notes like before(00:47:851 (1,2,3) - ) should be better.

Hard:
delete the useless inherited timing section.
01:15:280 (5,1) - Spacing or a jump?
01:36:280 (3) - hit300/hit100 will block the reverse arrow in 01:36:708 (1) - . move it.
02:03:280 (3,4) - Spacing
02:04:350 (5,1) - ^
02:14:207 (1,2) - ^
02:57:279 (1,2) - ^
03:06:708 (2,3) - ^

normal:
00:45:066 (1) - extend to 00:45:279 or delete it and place a circle in 00:45:279 (x) - should be better.
03:14:422 (5,6) - Spacing

Easy:
01:24:280 (4,1,2) - try not to use hidden notes (that means, circle under slider) in easy.
03:03:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing? too close.
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko
01:15:280 (5,1) - Spacing or a jump?

jump
Snowy Dream
Star~
TerisKey
:)
Shinxyn
Still need more mods! >.<

Know what... turn on grid snap and respace -everything-, I see quite a lot of odd/inconsistent spacing... (for Easy/Normal/Hard)
Hitsounds still need work ;-;

Just quick note placement mod...
Hard-
00:14:208 (3) - -2 repeats??
00:47:850 (7) - +1 repeat
02:45:279 - add note?
02:53:422 (4) - move this to 02:53:850? or keep it and add note to 02:53:850 anyways?

I'm okay with the guest diffs for now, but yours (repeat) needs more modssssss ><!
abalee
H-boy:
Two object aren't snapped.
02:31:566 (1) - I think it is a bit sudden. IMO delete it, or use a 0.5x BPM slider from 02:30:708 (5) - to 02:31:566

Clare:
03:12:066 (1) - silence this spinner should be better.

Hard:
02:57:279 (1,2) - Spacing. move 02:57:279 (1) - a bit upward should works.

Normal:
03:14:422 (5,6) - Spacing. Move them apart.
xierbaliti
-Clare no yume-
01:30:065 (1,2,3,4) - 我感觉这样放比较好._.


-Hard-
00:28:029 - Kiai从00:28:136开始吧
01:14:273 - Kiai从01:16:136开始比较好
01:34:350 (4) - 结束到后面红线比较好
02:27:279 (4) - 往右1格和上面的对齐?
02:41:788 - 同前面,Kiai从02:45:279开始

-H-boy-
00:31:565 (1) - 我感觉把这个拿远一些比较好._.和前面(1)(2)的间距一样 后面还有许多这样的地方 本人感觉是拿远较好._. (其实不算什么错误
01:09:065 - 这里总觉得少了点啥 放个circle比较好吧

*star*
abalee
Checked. bubbled.
deepsea
[Normal]
00:40:13(1)(1)
A note right after a short spinner is too eggpain for a newer

[Hard]
No problem.

[H-boy's Insane]
Well made. I like this.

[Clare no yume]
Ahhhhh eggpain jumps.
But yeah, insane is insane. :/

Decide change and change, or decide not, then contact me.


EDIT:Rebubbled.
Mafiamaster
IRC modded
SPOILER
19:40 <Mafiamaster> : add the same custom color combos in [h-boy's insane] as the other difficulties
19:41 <Mafiamaster> : and take away lead in time from h-boy's
19:42 <Mafiamaster> : [Normal]: 02:42:708 (2) - Make this a little more visible by moving it up a little bit. Like in http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13039

Edit: Ranked!
Krisom
Uhhh, why is the "comboburst-1" cut on the top? Is really annoying when it pops out while playing <_<
abalee
Report that the H-boy's difficulty is missed. Need to confirm about it.
RemmyX25
Download should be fixed? no it isnt, but im too tired to figure it out right now. ill look at it tomorrow.
Andrea
Why there are 5 background on the folder and only 4 are used? @_@
RemmyX25
Okay NOW it should be all fixed.
soulfear
唔,第一张MAP,恭喜. :)
Derekku
Setting online offset to +10.
Heskit_old
Love it <3
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