1. Dream (1.67 stars, 163 notes)
2. Nightmare (4.73 stars, 376 notes)

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  F,0,0,261,1,0
  F,0,261,522,0

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Xgor wrote:

[Hitsounds]
The soft-hitfinish is quite loud compared to the rest and that's kinda annoying.
I suggest you tune it down a bit.
Otherwise great! The finish hitsound was a direct copy of the one from the template, so I thought it was fine. Lowered the volume, anyway.

[Storyboard]
The Foreground red.png has a massive clutter of unnecessary fade keyframes around 03:09:494. Remove them. Holy crap, I didn't realize that. What happened to that, anyway? A glitch that I didn't get? Thanks for the catch, though.


[Dream]
03:00:103 (1) - (suggestion) I kinda expected this to more centered (maybe to her heart pendant instead) I was aiming for her head... Now that I said it, it does seem awkward.

[Nightmare]
00:40:755 to 00:55:363 is a bit cruel due to the pretty high HP drain. (For me atleast ) I see. I'll change the single-note combos into sliders instead. Maybe that'll work?
02:06:842 (2) - (suggestion) Add circle here
02:07:363 - ^
02:07:885 - ^Unlike the earlier suggestion, the duration doesn't span for too long, and the sliders already make up for it.
02:14:928 (8) - I think it's a good idea to flip this slider horizontally as (6) is covering it 100% so it's pretty hard see if it's a slider or a circle :/ Fixed.
03:00:103 (1) - Same as in Dream (It no mayor problem but think but it looks pretty odd, especially if you playing without the video) ^ [Dream]

Great map, a difficulty between Dream and Nightmare feels almost necessary though so please make one. I do have problems trying to make a difficulty between Dream and Nightmare. Maybe someone could make one for me, if they want?

Krisom wrote:

Modding~

General-
Maybe add a silent sliderslide? No can do. At least, I can't find a sound file that fits in there.

Dream-
01:35:015 (1) - /nazi/ not symmetryc, maybe move the 5th control point one grid right and then the middle control point some pixels down (with grid snap off)? It should look like this Done.
Nothing to mod here, it's great

Nightmare-
Awesome

Seriously, this is pure awesome~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore

~All Diffs~
- Delete this file: "The IDOLM@STER - relations ~ Nightmare PV Remix~ (vytalibus).osb". You already have the .osb with the new name of the map so this one is unnecessary. Remember to Full Submit the map after doing this.
- Maybe add an epilepsy warning? The flashes aren't so strong, but they're strobing for the whole map so imo it's better to have the warning...
- Add "The IDOLM@STER" To Source?
Everything above done.

~Dream~
- Not a big deal, but I would decrease the HP Drain one or two ticks. The map is easy enough, but imo the drain it's a bit too harsh for newbie players I'd agree.

~Nightmare~
02:04:233 (1) - Flip horizontally? It doesn't really matter if it's flipped or not. The long sliders are more to cause some kind of drag along that particular part.

Pretty nice map, I love the symmetry <3. I miss a medium difficulty though, the difference between easy and hard is a bit big, but besides that, the map is awesome, good job!!
*star*
Trust me, I've tried to make a medium difficulty, but it's so hard to do so without compromising one of the current difficulties. Besides, what would I name it?

EDIT: Fixed thread title.

jericho2442 wrote:

well do what beuchi said about the pointless extra osb xD
i also think this really needs another diff.

i will add this though, is the SB really needed? the video suits this song great and to me the SB just got in the way of the video :X
The SB is only in the Fail section, so it doesn't really appear all the time. It adds some sort of omen in gameplay.

you need a video offset of -200 ....wow this video is wierd, it seems to randomly go out of sync xD
After some tests, I found that the current offset of 0 is much better synced.

[Dream]
as beuchi said again, huuuuuuge drain for a easy, please lower it :/
See above.

01:29:276 (5) - this needs a Whistle hitsound to follow your hitsound pattern
Done.

[Nightmare]
(suggestion) 00:18:581 (8,9) - this spacing feels right to play, but i thought i would let you kno that it does break your spacing i find moving (9) out better, but thats TOTALLY opinion and im not saying to change it unless you really think this plays better since the way it is plays great too, check pic to see what i mean

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I've tweaked the pattern a bit so it looks more symmetrical and beautiful.

02:36:320 (8,9,10) - same as above
See above.

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these maps are great very fun and you 100% get my star

mekadon wrote:

Is the artist Koji Nakagawa or the other way around? :3
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