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Harbyter

Kyousuke- wrote:

Mod Request

Hi harby xd here's the mod~
Take note that my mods mostly contains suggestion~ so feel free to reject ^^


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General

  1. Uncheck the widescreen support on Harby's NM

Harby's NM

just a little check lol =w=
02:43:014 - 02:55:092 - just noticed this is same with Harby's HD lol, let's we make more easier and little different lol. suggestion~ (same with HD's suggest too lol)
  1. 02:46:131 (166131|1,166424|1) - just make it one LN in NM lol keep with two LN, felling of staccato and shield xd
  2. 02:49:248 (169248|3,169540|1) - same, make one LN on col 4, but ends at 02:49:833 - since the piano sound stars here keep ,following violin only
  3. 02:49:735 (169735|3) - this LN should start at 02:49:833 - on col 3 starts here 02:49:735 - don't let the drum confus you xD
  4. 02:52:949 (172949|1,173047|3) - delete, you only focus on piano. violin~
  5. 02:52:949 - add LN at col 1, ends 02:53:144 - here since previous suggestion rejected this too
  6. 02:54:118 (174118|1,174216|3) - delete, you only focus on piano ^
  7. 02:54:118 - add LN at col 4, ends 02:54:313 - here ^

Harby's HD

i dunno why i'm like to make long post mods
00:23:924 (23924|1,24118|2) - hmm move 1 col to right, and 00:24:313 (24313|3) - move to 2. since the pitch is quite different though this way the pr isn't good,keep
00:38:566 - add note at here (1/12 snap) at 2 for piano, you miss it D: and 00:38:534 (38534|1) - delete this, since the sound is not too dominant oh you noticed this xD fixed in 00:38:583 - 1/8 and 00:38:664 - 1/6
00:40:872 (40872|2) - move to 1, for balance? coz it's looks heavy on the right side if moved in col 1 isn't balanced, cause you have to hold the LN and hit then note with the left hand

00:43:794 (43794|3) - this LN should be end at 00:44:086 - oky
00:44:183 (44183|2,44378|1) - hmm move this 1 col to left? and 00:44:573 (44573|0) - move this to 2. coz the pitch is really different with 00:43:794 -
00:46:131 (46131|1,46131|0,46326|0,46521|2,46521|3,46521|1,46716|1) - hmm wrong pitch, make same with this 00:52:365 (52365|0,52365|3,52560|3,52755|1,52755|0,52755|2,52949|1,53144|0,53144|2,53339|2) -

00:54:605 - add note at 2 for piano, since there have a piano sound
00:55:677 (55677|1) - move to 1, and 00:55:774 - add a note at 2. there have a piano sound~ ^ not following the violin ,just drum/kick/tick
01:06:196 (66196|1,66294|0) - wrong pitch D: suggestion~
  1. 01:06:099 (66099|0,66196|1,66294|0) - switch col, 01:06:391 (66391|1) - and at 1~ just make same with the previous pattern :U ok
01:06:391 - 01:07:949 - whai same pattern lol, suggestion~
  1. 01:06:878 (66878|3) - move to 1, and 01:07:657 (67657|3) - move to 1 too, following the pitch and more balance imo. but might break your pattern stairs :U yea ,keep this pattern xD
01:09:898 - 01:10:677 - 01:11:456 - 01:13:014 - 01:13:794 - 01:16:131 - 01:16:911 - 01:17:690 - no need 3-noters imo, since this is HD diff. and the note is not suitable for jack, coz the pitch is always get higher than the 3-noters. just delete the jack notes on 3-noters~ and more comfortable to play =w= ehh keep 3 notes for the kick
  1. 01:12:235 - 01:14:573 - 01:15:352 - just like this~ no need 3-noters ^
01:18:079 (78079|2,78339|2) - eggpain lol, just 01:18:079 (78079|1,78079|2) - ctrl + h this~ oky
01:20:027 (80027|3,80125|3) - not suitable for jack, coz the pitch get lower. suggestion~
  1. 01:20:125 (80125|3) - move to 3, 01:20:222 (80222|2) - move to 1, for pitch~ reject,the current pattern for pr is more suitable
01:21:196 - hmm add a LN until 01:21:586 - here coz the long piano sound would be better? note for drum and cymbal so no LN,otherside i should put other LN for the previous triples
01:22:170 (82170|2,82268|1) - ctrl + h for pitch
01:23:144 (83144|3) - move to 3, coz 01:23:339 - this pitch is higher than before (this might break your jack pattern)
01:24:898 (84898|0) - move to 2, coz this pitch is higher than before (this might break your jack pattern) ^ breaking pattern :P
01:25:092 - 01:25:482 - suggestion~
  1. 01:25:190 (85190|0) - move to 2, 01:25:287 (85287|1) - move to 1, 01:25:385 (85385|2) - move to 2, better pattern for repeating sound =w= oky
01:30:157 - 01:31:326 - suggestion for pattern and pitch, since the pitch seems wrong http://puu.sh/gZO0q/45929f28d5.jpg mmm keep current pattern
01:58:988 (118988|1) - are this LN necessary? better to remove since there's doesn't have anything sound violin lol
01:59:962 (119962|2,120060|1,120742|1,120839|2) - ctrl + h for pitch, coz this sound 01:59:573 - is same pitch as 01:59:962 - and this sound 02:00:352 - is same pitch as 02:00:742 -

02:08:729 - 02:10:287 - same like before suggestion :U
  1. 02:09:216 (129216|3) - move to 1, 02:09:995 (129995|3) - move to 1, since the pitch is different, and more balance imo^Actually if following 100% pitch those should be all 1/4 jacks ,keep
02:10:969 (130969|2,131066|1,131261|1) - ctrl + h for pitch~ last two notes are for the tick ,check the hitsound so you can understand what are those notes
02:35:222 - 02:36:781 - http://puu.sh/gZQm3/757c5461c4.jpg recommended to change like this, for pattern and comfortability~ this broke my pattern in those section ,keep
02:49:248 - 02:50:807 - there's some errors, suggestion~ (the SS if you're confused lol) like in the NM,violin not drum
  1. 02:49:248 (169248|3,169540|1) - hmm make like this 02:46:131 (166131|1,166424|1) -
    ^ 02:49:248 (169248|3) - shorten the LN until 02:49:443 - here and 02:49:540 (169540|1) - this LN should be end at 02:49:833 - at 4 for same col and pitch
  2. 02:49:735 (169735|3) - wrong snap, should start at 02:49:833 - on col 3
  3. 02:50:417 (170417|1) - this LN should start at 02:50:612 - for piano sound
^
03:00:937 (180937|3) - delete, since you didn't put double notes on this part, like 02:57:820 - until 02:58:404 - and 03:04:053 - until 03:04:638 -
^ if done, 03:01:001 (181001|2) - move this to 4, for pitch and comfortability~ drum and kick xD

nice mapset! this reminds me with miku lol
awsome cover violin ver <33 /shoot/

ty for the mod kyousuke~

http://puu.sh/gZYri/2b19245160.rar
Kyousuke-
Lol at least it's fixed a little :U
/what am I thinking while modding that xd
Btw, i'm usually modding with 0% sample volume, i'll try to hear the hs for the future mods lol
Topic Starter
Seijiro
Updated :)

Also, thanks for the star :3
Buttercup
Hey!
It's better you put ''Lindsey Stirling'' in the artist name and delete ''cover by Lindsey Stirling'' in the title :C

Good luck with your mappu! o3o
Topic Starter
Seijiro
At first It was like you say, but after a little search it turned out that I have to put the original creator's name. Lindsey just did a remake of the song but has no real credits for it (beside doing this cover, obviously)
Hullahopp
Gotta love this map :3
And all the blankets I pointed out
And the only 3 you've actually corrected

23:56 *Hullahopp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/628637 Kurousa-P - Senbonzakura (cover by Lindsey Stirling) [Insane]]
23:56 Hullahopp: 02:06:391 (1,2,3,4) -
23:57 Hullahopp: Maybe you could do something with these
23:57 Hullahopp: But that's all
23:57 Hullahopp: lol
23:57 [-MrSergio-]: I know :/
23:57 [-MrSergio-]: I hate that part :/
23:57 [-MrSergio-]: I'll thin about it for sure
23:57 [-MrSergio-]: Actually, I already thought a lot about it
23:57 [-MrSergio-]: And I still can't make a good pattern
23:58 Hullahopp: Hmm
23:58 Hullahopp: Well, I can't suggest anything
23:58 [-MrSergio-]: Don't worry
23:58 *Hullahopp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/630747 Kurousa-P - Senbonzakura (cover by Lindsey Stirling) [Hard]]
23:59 Hullahopp: 01:09:898 (2,4) - lol, I usually try to avoid these kind of overlaps, but on second tough, it looks good xd
00:00 [-MrSergio-]: I checked with Auto and it lokks like it isn't really overlapped
00:00 [-MrSergio-]: Keep in mind this is AR8 and they vanish quite fast
00:01 [-MrSergio-]: they, I mean objects
00:01 Hullahopp: 02:44:378 (4,1,2) - I would say you should make a better blanket
00:02 Hullahopp: If I wanna be a blanket nazi
00:02 Hullahopp: (wich I am xd)
00:03 [-MrSergio-]: lol
00:03 [-MrSergio-]: I know xD
00:03 [-MrSergio-]: Fixed :3
00:03 [-MrSergio-]: But keep in mind I wasn't really after doing good blankets xD
00:04 *Hullahopp is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/649186 Kurousa-P - Senbonzakura (cover by Lindsey Stirling) [Normal]]
00:04 Hullahopp: Ahh
00:04 Hullahopp: I allready see some bad blankets, but they look good afterall
00:04 Hullahopp: Must
00:04 Hullahopp: Control
00:04 Hullahopp: Myself
00:04 [-MrSergio-]: xD
00:04 [-MrSergio-]: lol
00:04 Hullahopp: Ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh
00:04 [-MrSergio-]: Point them out, maybe I tried to do a blanket but I did it wrong
00:04 [-MrSergio-]: them*
00:05 Hullahopp: Are you sure?
00:05 Hullahopp: DO YOU really want that? XD
00:05 Hullahopp: Ok
00:05 Hullahopp: But blankets only
00:05 Hullahopp: And
00:05 *[-MrSergio-] prepares himself fro hell*
00:05 [-MrSergio-]: for*
00:06 Hullahopp: Keep in mind, you don't need to change these
00:06 Hullahopp: I'm just gonna
00:06 [-MrSergio-]: I know I know, don't worry :32
00:06 Hullahopp: Be a blanket nazi for a couple of secs
00:06 Hullahopp: 00:21:586 (2,1) -
00:07 Hullahopp: 00:32:105 (1,2) -
00:07 Hullahopp: 00:32:885 (2,3) -
00:07 Hullahopp: 00:42:235 (3,1) -
00:08 Hullahopp: 00:47:300 (2,1) -
00:08 Hullahopp: 00:47:690 (1,2) -
00:08 Hullahopp: 00:53:144 (2,1) -
00:09 Hullahopp: 00:55:092 (3,1) -
00:09 Hullahopp: xD
00:09 Hullahopp: Even the smallest ones :3
00:09 [-MrSergio-]: lol, I can't blanket 00:55:092 (3,1) - properly xD
00:09 [-MrSergio-]: lol
00:09 [-MrSergio-]: How the heck do yuo see them? xD
00:09 Hullahopp: 01:09:508 (1,2) -
00:10 [-MrSergio-]: wow, I did one of them properly xD
00:10 Hullahopp: Approach circle
00:10 [-MrSergio-]: I know, I mean, you're really picky about them xD
00:10 Hullahopp: I know :D
00:10 [-MrSergio-]: lol
00:10 Hullahopp: 01:14:573 (1,1) -
00:11 Hullahopp: 01:16:521 (2,3) - And after all of that, all in the sudden.. Perfect blanket
00:11 Hullahopp: Such amazed xD
00:11 Hullahopp: 01:20:027 (2,2) -
00:11 Hullahopp: Oh wait
00:11 Hullahopp: That's fine
00:12 [-MrSergio-]: lol
00:12 Hullahopp: 01:25:092 (1,2) - nnnaaaaaAAAAA
00:12 [-MrSergio-]: loooooooooool
00:12 Hullahopp: 01:29:768 (1,2) -
00:12 [-MrSergio-]: That wwasn;t supposed to be a blanket from the beginning xD
00:12 [-MrSergio-]: Ok, the second one was meant to be xDC
00:13 Hullahopp: It's not perfect! Dx
00:13 [-MrSergio-]: Don;'t worry, I fixed that one :3
00:14 Hullahopp: Hmm
00:14 Hullahopp: You started making perfect blankets after the last one
00:14 Hullahopp: gg
00:14 [-MrSergio-]: :OOOOOOOOOOOOO
00:15 [-MrSergio-]: lol xD
00:15 [-MrSergio-]: I did the Normal in 3 days
00:15 Hullahopp: Where's my blanket master rank
00:15 Hullahopp: Gimme that
00:15 [-MrSergio-]: Probably I was really inspired the last one :P
00:15 Hullahopp: Yup
00:15 *[-MrSergio-] gives Hulla a medal*
00:15 Hullahopp: :O
00:15 Hullahopp: It's made out of ONION
00:16 Hullahopp: Welp, that was good
00:16 [-MrSergio-]: lol
Topic Starter
Seijiro
Please, I fixed more than just 3 blankets xD b-baka :3
Bunnrei
Use 千本桜 (cover by Lindsey Stirling) as title, and 黒うさP as artist. The ones you are using now are the Romanized title and artist.

no kudos, just some quick metadata check x3~ cause I want this to be ranked~
Bara-
Random mod cuz I like the song a lot

[Normal]
00:21:586 (2,1) - Blanket needs improvement, move (1) to 204,184
00:23:144 (2,1) - Blanket these 2 better, try this
00:26:261 (2) - Goes up too high -> Hits HPbar --> Unrankable
00:32:885 (2,4) - These 2 are slightly overlapping, move (4) a bit to the right
00:34:833 (5,1) - Try to blanket them
00:47:300 (2,1) - Try to blanket them, move (1) to 320:286 for example
00:56:261 (3) - Might be too wiggly, which is unrankable, I recommend to change it, just to be on the safe side
01:21:196 (2) - Try to make the shape a little better, it seems to not end nicely
01:30:157 (2) - Try to make the slider tick exactly at the top of the slider, put the red node at around 163:47
01:32:105 (2) - Slider looks ugly, being so curvy. Try to make it more curvy with grey nodes, instead of (ugly) red ones
01:42:430 (2) - You are better off deleting this note, because this part is really calm, and the 1/2 after the 4/1 feels just overdone
01:45:547 (4) - ^^
01:52:365 (3) - You can better make this 1/1 instead of 3/2 to emphasize the strong beat
02:02:495 (2,3) - Consider making (2) grey-noded instead of red-noded to make a blanket
02:24:313 (1,2) - Try to make the red nodes be on the same place as the slider ticks, to make it emphasize the beat better
02:33:664 (1,2) - Improve blanket, make (1) a little less curvy (tilt end a little to the right) and then move (2) so it fits
02:45:742 (2,2) - This overlap looks a little ugly, move the second (2) a little to the right, so it doesn't overlap anymore
03:06:391 (1,2) - Feels weird for a normal, just make it a reverse 3/4 slider with a circle at the end

[Hard]
00:39:118 (4,5) - Blanket needs slight improvement, move (4) to 99:92
00:44:573 (2) - NC, because it is the start of the kiai, and the strong beat starts here as well
00:49:053 (6) - Move to 232:170 to improve blanket
00:50:612 (4) - Move to 80:100 to improve blanket
01:10:287 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move (4) to 337:143
01:27:625 (4,5,6) - Improve the blankets
01:55:482 (3,4) - You can try to make these 2 blanket, but it isn't neccessary considering you use the tail of (3) for other purposes
02:03:079 (3,4) - Try to blanket these 2
02:22:170 (4,5,6,1) - Feels a little overdone, maybe make it a little less strong (remove a reverse for example)
02:29:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Might be a little too hard for hard, I recommend making it 1/2 circles
02:30:547 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part has really complex timing. You mapped it well, but it's way to hard, considering most of the music is off-beat here, which make it really hard to follow. I strongly recommend making this part easier, as most people will probably break their combo here

[Insane]
00:43:794 (1) - Please change this slider. AFAIK, Wiggles like this are unrankable, and you also have a slow-down, which already happens due to the wiggles. I strongly recommend changing the shape of this
00:54:313 (2,3,4) - This plays very badly, Ctrl G (2) and make (3) 2 circles, 1/6 at 154 BPm isn't that fast :P
01:11:846 (1,2,3) - ^^, w/o the Ctrl G of (2)
01:11:066 (11) - NC, the combo starts to get really long here, and as here is a strong beat, I recommend you to change it
01:14:962 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
01:18:079 (1,2,3) - Make (2) into circles, but you will need to change this a little, so it looks nice, or it will be a strange triangle)
01:33:664 (1) - Make it curvy as well, to bland in with the previous sliders
01:48:469 (1,2,3) - These sliders look better if they have grey nodes, instead of red ones (01:51:586 (1,2) - Like these for example) They are a little overnoded now
01:56:846 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
01:58:079 (2) - ^^
02:14:378 (2) - ^^
02:17:300 (3) - ^^
02:20:612 (2) - ^^
02:28:696 - Add a note? There is a strong violin here, and it makes sense, due to previous patterns
02:44:962 (3) - Either stack this with the end of 02:43:794 (3) - or blanket it with 02:44:573 (2). It feels really random now, and it makes no sense to me
You then probably want to move 02:45:937 (2) - as well
02:49:540 (4) - Delete, this is a quiet part, so you should not want to overmap, do you?
02:50:612 (8) - Move to 208:236 for a better blanket
02:53:014 (3) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
02:54:216 - Add a note, it fits in with the strong violin
02:58:014 (2) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
03:00:937 (5) - ^^
03:04:248 (2) - ^^
03:07:170 (1) - Silence the tail maybe, it sounds really loud, but it might be unrankable, as there is no sliderslide audible. Your choice

I really like this map (so this mod is really picky)
Good luck on getting this ranked, you deserve a star as well :3
Mutual me please MrAwesomemapper
Topic Starter
Seijiro

osu_gangster wrote:

Use 千本桜 (cover by Lindsey Stirling) as title, and 黒うさP as artist. The ones you are using now are the Romanized title and artist.

no kudos, just some quick metadata check x3~ cause I want this to be ranked~
Done! :D Thanks a lot for the metadata :3

baraatje123 wrote:

Random mod cuz I like the song a lot

[Normal]
00:21:586 (2,1) - Blanket needs improvement, move (1) to 204,184 ✔ Yep
00:23:144 (2,1) - Blanket these 2 better, try this ✔ Fixed
00:26:261 (2) - Goes up too high -> Hits HPbar --> Unrankable Is it touching? o.O
00:32:885 (2,4) - These 2 are slightly overlapping, move (4) a bit to the right ✔ I had to move more than jsut tht note tho, but it's fixed now xD
00:34:833 (5,1) - Try to blanket them
00:47:300 (2,1) - Try to blanket them, move (1) to 320:286 for example
00:56:261 (3) - Might be too wiggly, which is unrankable, I recommend to change it, just to be on the safe side ✔ Removed half of those anchor points. I guess it should be safe now
01:21:196 (2) - Try to make the shape a little better, it seems to not end nicely Fixed in a different way, but fixed :3
01:30:157 (2) - Try to make the slider tick exactly at the top of the slider, put the red node at around 163:47
01:32:105 (2) - Slider looks ugly, being so curvy. Try to make it more curvy with grey nodes, instead of (ugly) red ones ✘ Sorry, but I have to disagree here because red ones give the exact feeilng I wanted to reach. It follows the violin perfectly imo
01:42:430 (2) - You are better off deleting this note, because this part is really calm, and the 1/2 after the 4/1 feels just overdone I fixed t his in my own way :3
01:45:547 (4) - ^^ ✘ It isn't really difficult to do and it would break all my pattern, so no change here o3o
01:52:365 (3) - You can better make this 1/1 instead of 3/2 to emphasize the strong beat ✘ I already have 5 objects at 1/2 from each other. What you suggest will cluster things up even more so I'll have to avoid doing this
02:02:495 (2,3) - Consider making (2) grey-noded instead of red-noded to make a blanket ✘ You can make blankets even with anchor points :3
02:24:313 (1,2) - Try to make the red nodes be on the same place as the slider ticks, to make it emphasize the beat better ✔ Ops, fixed
02:33:664 (1,2) - Improve blanket, make (1) a little less curvy (tilt end a little to the right) and then move (2) so it fits
02:45:742 (2,2) - This overlap looks a little ugly, move the second (2) a little to the right, so it doesn't overlap anymore Fixed in my own way :3
03:06:391 (1,2) - Feels weird for a normal, just make it a reverse 3/4 slider with a circle at the end ✔ Yeah. Removed (2) and added a repeat to (1). It should be fine now

[Hard]
00:39:118 (4,5) - Blanket needs slight improvement, move (4) to 99:92
00:44:573 (2) - NC, because it is the start of the kiai, and the strong beat starts here as well ✔ Hm...looks better this way, fixed
00:49:053 (6) - Move to 232:170 to improve blanket o.O
00:50:612 (4) - Move to 80:100 to improve blanket
01:10:287 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move (4) to 337:143 I moved (3) instead :3
01:27:625 (4,5,6) - Improve the blankets What? xD Probably you have to update my map because the (6) in the screen is an old one version of it xD
01:55:482 (3,4) - You can try to make these 2 blanket, but it isn't neccessary considering you use the tail of (3) for other purposes ✘ Exactly :3
02:03:079 (3,4) - Try to blanket these 2 ✔ Fixed
02:22:170 (4,5,6,1) - Feels a little overdone, maybe make it a little less strong (remove a reverse for example) ✘ lol, you didn't see this part how it was before ahahahah
02:29:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Might be a little too hard for hard, I recommend making it 1/2 circles ✘ ^ And actually this is the most energetic part of the song so why not pumping it up as bit :3
02:30:547 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part has really complex timing. You mapped it well, but it's way to hard, considering most of the music is off-beat here, which make it really hard to follow. I strongly recommend making this part easier, as most people will probably break their combo here What can I do if this part has blue polarity? xD I tried to make it as easier as possible and I ensure you that it was even messier before. I hope someone comes up with something because for now I can't think of anything else :/

[Insane]
00:43:794 (1) - Please change this slider. AFAIK, Wiggles like this are unrankable, and you also have a slow-down, which already happens due to the wiggles. I strongly recommend changing the shape of this ✘ I never heard about this and I asked a couple of BNs to check this already and they said nothing about it o.O
00:54:313 (2,3,4) - This plays very badly, Ctrl G (2) and make (3) 2 circles, 1/6 at 154 BPm isn't that fast :P I agree on those 1/6 notes, but this is kinda my special pattern so I won't change it
01:11:846 (1,2,3) - ^^, w/o the Ctrl G of (2) ✘ ^
01:11:066 (11) - NC, the combo starts to get really long here, and as here is a strong beat, I recommend you to change it ✘ I did this after another mod which explained me how combo should work properly so this is fine as it is
01:14:962 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles ✘ Placing 4 1/6 notes out of the blue here is a bit too much imo. There is a whole part before this with just jumps and it will feel weird I guess...
01:18:079 (1,2,3) - Make (2) into circles, but you will need to change this a little, so it looks nice, or it will be a strange triangle) ✔ Fixed
01:33:664 (1) - Make it curvy as well, to bland in with the previous sliders ✔ Looks nicer
01:48:469 (1,2,3) - These sliders look better if they have grey nodes, instead of red ones (01:51:586 (1,2) - Like these for example) They are a little overnoded now ✔ Indeed
01:56:846 (5) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles ✘ Same reasoning as for 01:14:962 (5) -
01:58:079 (2) - ^^
02:14:378 (2) - ^^
02:17:300 (3) - ^^
02:20:612 (2) - ^^
02:28:696 - Add a note? There is a strong violin here, and it makes sense, due to previous patterns At first I used just a similar pattern to the previous one but after a bit of thought I found another good pattern fitting your suggestion
02:44:962 (3) - Either stack this with the end of 02:43:794 (3) - or blanket it with 02:44:573 (2). It feels really random now, and it makes no sense to me
You then probably want to move 02:45:937 (2) - as well ✘ Trying to blanket this part doesn't make sense to me tho, because I tried to make a good flow to be played here
02:49:540 (4) - Delete, this is a quiet part, so you should not want to overmap, do you? ✘ There's a clear violin sound there tho, so I don't think it's overmapped at all
02:50:612 (8) - Move to 208:236 for a better blanket ✘ If I have to move this note just vertically it means that there's already a blanket which I already see clearly so I think it's a bit pointless to move it just a bit to have the same result
02:53:014 (3) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
02:54:216 - Add a note, it fits in with the strong violin ✘ I'm not following the violin here 02:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
02:58:014 (2) - Come on, be a nice guy and make this a set of circles
03:00:937 (5) - ^^
03:04:248 (2) - ^^ ✘ Same as I already explained above
03:07:170 (1) - Silence the tail maybe, it sounds really loud, but it might be unrankable, as there is no sliderslide audible. Your choice Let's use something safer like a circle :3

I really like this map (so this mod is really picky) I love picky mods >.< Thanks a lot :3
Good luck on getting this ranked, you deserve a star as well :3 >.< Arigatou~
Mutual me please MrAwesomemapper
<3
[ C r a c k ]
Hi Sergio & Harby
Modderino-desu per le o!m diffs (richiesto in chat)

General:
Click Me!
BPM: 154
Offest:? credo sia piu' preciso 933 (per il mod ho lasciato l'offset che ho trovato :3)
.mp3 file:? con 128kbps si sta tranquilli ma consiglio di utilizzare un file .mp3 con qualità di 192kbps
Sfondo: 1366x768
Difficoltà:? mancherebbe la 6K NM

Colonne: |1|2|3|4|5|6|

Harby's 6k MX

Rinominare la mappa modificando "6k" in "6K"
SPOILER
  1. 00:20:287 (20287|3) - Suggerisco di spostare la nota nella col. 3 per via del suo suono, che ha un tono minore rispetto al successivo. Dopo fare le modifiche che si vuole.
  2. 00:23:144 - parte simile a 00:21:586 - (dove in quest'ultima sono stati usati due slider) Aggiungere uno slider ?
  3. 00:57:040 - Rimuovere una nota, Non c'è un suono così forte per 4 note, essendo lo stesso suono presente a 00:57:820 -
  4. 01:15:352 (75352|1) - non trovi che il suono del violino inizi a 01:15:303 - ?
  5. 01:32:690 (92690|2) - mettere in col. 1 o 6 ? (come a 01:23:339 - )
  6. 01:36:391 - cosa ne pensi di questo ? Solo un consiglio, le note precedenti non mi piacevano molto..
  7. 01:45:644 (105644|3) - Muovere in col 5 e 01:45:742 (105742|5) - in col 4 ? Credo sia migliore
  8. 01:59:378 - Rimuovere una nota per la stessa ragione presente a 00:57:040 -
  9. 02:27:625 - La serie di note che segue dovrebbe essere nella col 3 per via delle sequenze precedenti, per esempio a 02:26:066 - le note singole sono nella col 5, la stessa col dove terminano le doppie note dietro. (Dato che non mi sembra di aver spiegato in una maniera decente, ecco una immagine delle note prese in considerazione)
  10. 02:28:599 - Di conseguenza del suggerimento di sopra credo sia opportuna modificare anche le note qua
  11. 02:43:014 - Presumo sia una zona di relax, quindi tutto ok
  12. 02:55:092 - Aggiungi una nota in col 2
    Nice job Harby, finalmente una 6K :D

Harby'4k HD

Anche qui rinominare la mappa modificando "4k" in "4K"
SPOILER
  1. 01:45:839 - non so.. questo mini-jack non mi ispira >.<
  2. 02:35:320 - ^
  3. 02:36:099 - ^
  4. 02:55:092 - Aggiungere una nota ?
    Not bad ;)

Harby's 4k NM

Anche qui rinominare la mappa modificando "4k" in "4K"
SPOILER
  1. 02:17:690 - Aggiungere gli slider come 01:15:352 -
    Poor mod-desu
Bene, questo è tutto. Spero siano di aiuto i miei suggerimenti.
Sbrigatevi a rankare questa mappa pls
Bye~ :)
Topic Starter
Seijiro

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

Hi Sergio & Harby
Modderino-desu per le o!m diffs (richiesto in chat)

General:
Click Me!
BPM: 154
Offest:? credo sia piu' preciso 933 (per il mod ho lasciato l'offset che ho trovato :3) Yes sir o7
.mp3 file:? con 128kbps si sta tranquilli ma consiglio di utilizzare un file .mp3 con qualità di 192kbps
Sfondo: 1366x768
Difficoltà:? mancherebbe la 6K NM Lavoro di Harby semmai ~ :33333333

Bene, questo è tutto. Spero siano di aiuto i miei suggerimenti.
Sbrigatevi a rankare questa mappa pls Non mi cagano ;w;
Bye~ :)
Ayachi-
Mania spread not rankable
you need another 6K diff
Topic Starter
Seijiro
Guess I'll have to make that diff then xD
Bara-
Why did he make 4K NM, 4K HD and 6K MX?
You're better off having 4K MX instead of 6K
Topic Starter
Seijiro
He was upspirited for this mapset and he went a bit ovverboard. I'll try to make him discard his 6K because I don't really want to make another diff right now xD
Harbyter

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Mania spread not rankable
you need another 6K diff

baraatje123 wrote:

Why did he make 4K NM, 4K HD and 6K MX?
You're better off having 4K MX instead of 6K

calm guys do you think that the final spread will be like this for mania?? /facepalm


i'm teaching to sergio how to make a 6k HD for this :P
Topic Starter
Seijiro
Alright.

Removed the 6K diff and the mapset should be rankable now :3
Kyuuten
p l e a s e
r a n k
i t

no one wants a loli cry, right? :C
Pappy
Metadata check

Use Lindsey Stirling as artist. Since this is cover, Kurousa-P only composed the rhytm, but the whole song is made by Lindsey Stirling.

Also title should be just "Senbonzakura" (without unicode!)

If you apply this, leave Kurousa-P in tags.
Kyuuten

osu_gangster wrote:

Use 千本桜 (cover by Lindsey Stirling) as title, and 黒うさP as artist. The ones you are using now are the Romanized title and artist.

no kudos, just some quick metadata check x3~ cause I want this to be ranked~

Pappy wrote:

Metadata check

Use Lindsey Stirling as artist. Since this is cover, Kurousa-P only composed the rhytm, but the whole song is made by Lindsey Stirling.

Also title should be just "Senbonzakura" (without unicode!)

If you apply this, leave Kurousa-P in tags.
I'M CONFUSED
Like Sergio now lolw-.
Topic Starter
Seijiro

Kama wrote:

osu_gangster wrote:

Use 千本桜 (cover by Lindsey Stirling) as title, and 黒うさP as artist. The ones you are using now are the Romanized title and artist.

no kudos, just some quick metadata check x3~ cause I want this to be ranked~

Pappy wrote:

Metadata check

Use Lindsey Stirling as artist. Since this is cover, Kurousa-P only composed the rhytm, but the whole song is made by Lindsey Stirling.

Also title should be just "Senbonzakura" (without unicode!)

If you apply this, leave Kurousa-P in tags.
I'M CONFUSED
Like Sergio now lolw-.
Actually, not anymore. After listening to the original version and not finding anything regarding this song beside Lindsey Stirling's album (which is english), I guess Pappy is right.
I'll update evrything once I get home
AirOneBlack
La 4K HD è leggermente poco leggibile secondo me, suona un po confusa e meno intuitiva delle altre mappe da 3 stelle.
Ciyus Miapah
RANK THIS PLS
PatZar
http://puu.sh/heWzI/f535404491.rar and call BNs already XD
Topic Starter
Seijiro
Updated the new diffs, added "Genocide" to tags, updated the first post with credits for Genocide's diffs

Genocide wrote:

call BNs already XD

Fort wrote:

RANK THIS PLS
I know ;w;

I'm trying to get their attention but still nothing ;w; Gonna stalk someone I guess e.e
Arcubin
can i extra?

if no than thanks :D
Topic Starter
Seijiro
Well....I've been searching for BNs for 2 weeks now so it will probably take a really looooong while before this gets ranked so you have all the time you want to make that diff, even if I think it will be really hard to make, seeing that my own Insane is almost an Extra (due to the low BPM).

Making this shorter: Go ahead xD
[-Knight-]
sergio op mapper
schwarzvgrune
OMG LOVE THIS MAP!!!RANK THIS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Rumia-
from my modding queueue sorry for being extra late ,been too busy these 2 weeks orz
[4k HD]
00:36:294 (36294|0,36391|2,36391|3) - should be 1/12 earlier
00:44:768 (44768|2) - i think the noticable violin should be here 00:44:865 -
00:46:131 (46131|0) - maybe move this to 4 so it doesnt repeat with next violin note to give the pitch feeling
00:47:885 (47885|3) - same as mention earlier , , move 1/4 up
00:49:248 (49248|3) - move to 3 for pitch
00:49:833 (49833|2) - move to 2 ^ , this should be same pitch as 00:50:027 (50027|1) -
00:51:001 (51001|0) - as mentioned earlier , move 1/4 up
00:52:365 (52365|3) - maybe move to 2 ? would give the pitch feel for 00:52:560 (52560|3) -
00:54:605 - add a note because why not :^)
00:55:677 (55677|1) - move 1/4 up
01:00:255 (60255|0,60644|3) - shouldnt be jack since it doesnt fall on same pitch
01:01:034 (61034|0,61424|3) - ^
01:02:690 (62690|2,62787|1) - ctrl+j since the pitch is rising up
01:06:391 - this part the note is correct , but the pitch gives the feeling so weird , so i suggest you to make something like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3042166
01:20:027 (80027|3,80125|3) - shouldnt be a jack here...
01:43:209 (103209|3) - move to 2 would make a nice pattern B)
02:35:222 (155222|1) - unnecessary jack..

[4k NM]
01:46:911 (106911|1,107203|1) - this pattern would probably hard for normal tho..fine for HD or higher
01:50:027 (110027|2,110320|2) - ^

[Gen's oni]
00:26:066 (39) - should be on the next blue tick ?
00:27:722 - also add a d here as well
00:29:183 (57) - also should be on next blue tick
01:09:800 (285) - i think this fit more to be here 01:09:995 -
01:10:969 (293) - here 01:10:774 -
01:11:748 (299) - how about remove clap here , and add clap on 01:12:040 (302,303) - ?
01:46:326 (500,501,502) - would be nice if you change this to d
01:49:248 (521) - maybe k here ? since the pitch is kinda high
01:51:391 - maybe add a k here as well since the violin is pretty noticable here
02:23:534 (756) - better be K here ww
02:27:235 (775) - change to d ? would be fit imo
02:43:404 (899) - should be on earlier blue tick
PatZar

Rumia- wrote:

from my modding queueue sorry for being extra late ,been too busy these 2 weeks orz

[Gen's oni]
00:26:066 (39) - should be on the next blue tick ?
00:27:722 - also add a d here as well
00:29:183 (57) - also should be on next blue tick
01:09:800 (285) - i think this fit more to be here 01:09:995 - nope, current mine is fine
01:10:969 (293) - here 01:10:774 - 01:10:677 (292) - is single dub
01:11:748 (299) - how about remove clap here , and add clap on 01:12:040 (302,303) - ? no, 01:11:943 (302,303,304) - are stable sound, and 01:11:748 (300) - i want to igve some emphasis here
01:46:326 (500,501,502) - would be nice if you change this to d yes, but i want to keep simple 1/6 stream
01:49:248 (521) - maybe k here ? since the pitch is kinda high changed to k, and delete 01:49:151 -
01:51:391 - maybe add a k here as well since the violin is pretty noticable here added kat and deleted 01:51:683 -
02:23:534 (756) - better be K here ww but the sound is similar with 02:23:339 (754) -
02:27:235 (775) - change to d ? would be fit imo
02:43:404 (899) - should be on earlier blue tick
http://puu.sh/hn3pt/46cbc88cee.rar thanks for mod , btw kasih drum dong :P
Harbyter
[quote="Rumia-"]from my modding queueue sorry for being extra late ,been too busy these 2 weeks orz
[4k HD]
00:36:294 (36294|0,36391|2,36391|3) - should be 1/12 earlier uhm.. fixed in the NM too
00:44:768 (44768|2) - i think the noticable violin should be here 00:44:865 -
00:46:131 (46131|0) - maybe move this to 4 so it doesnt repeat with next violin note to give the pitch feeling
00:47:885 (47885|3) - same as mention earlier , , move 1/4 up
00:49:248 (49248|3) - move to 3 for pitch
00:49:833 (49833|2) - move to 2 ^ , this should be same pitch as 00:50:027 (50027|1) -
00:51:001 (51001|0) - as mentioned earlier , move 1/4 up
00:52:365 (52365|3) - maybe move to 2 ? would give the pitch feel for 00:52:560 (52560|3) -
00:54:605 - add a note because why not :^)
00:55:677 (55677|1) - move 1/4 up ^all rejected, i didn't followed the violin in this section
01:00:255 (60255|0,60644|3) - shouldnt be jack since it doesnt fall on same pitch
01:01:034 (61034|0,61424|3) - ^ keep the jacks hue x.x ,but rearranged something
01:02:690 (62690|2,62787|1) - ctrl+j since the pitch is rising up ok
01:06:391 - this part the note is correct , but the pitch gives the feeling so weird , so i suggest you to make something like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3042166 oky
01:20:027 (80027|3,80125|3) - shouldnt be a jack here... keep for the sake of the pattern xD
01:43:209 (103209|3) - move to 2 would make a nice pattern B) oky
02:35:222 (155222|1) - unnecessary jack.. rearranged

[4k NM]
01:46:911 (106911|1,107203|1) - this pattern would probably hard for normal tho..fine for HD or higher
01:50:027 (110027|2,110320|2) - ^ rearranged



ty for the mod rumia :) :)


http://puu.sh/hrsTT/ade6234432.rar
Topic Starter
Seijiro
Updated all diffs ~

Added new Genocide's name among tags >.<
YonitoKun90

schwarzvgrune wrote:

OMG LOVE THIS MAP!!!RANK THIS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
agree
Sky Trias
M4M #modreqs

[General]
  1. Change 'Pink' new combo, it's conflict with your BG.
  2. add tags : 黒うさP , violin , 千本桜 , Kurousa-P , reprint ( you can find the tags on :arrow: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm25448671?ref=search_key_video )
  3. Keep Inconsistency New Combo.
[Normal]
  1. 01:14:573 (1) - remove NC
  2. 01:32:105 (2) - improve this slider maybe?
  3. 03:04:053 (1) - remove NC
  4. 01:31:326 (3,1) - swap NC
  5. 02:20:417 (1) - remove NC
  6. 02:21:975 (3,4) - Ctrl+G - same like 02:20:807 (2,1) - pattern
  7. 02:45:742 (2,1,2) - make same like 02:04:053 (1,2,1)
  8. 03:02:495 (2) - how about mirroring this? http://puu.sh/htWPw/13f197165b.jpg it's better to play and nice placing
  9. 00:39:118 (2) - x:356 , y:120 (better)
  10. 00:39:118 (2,4) - stack?
  11. 00:51:586 (3,1) - check DS over here .. and http://puu.sh/htWZu/75cd8cb703.jpg it's very weird flow on normal difficult make more smooth
  12. 01:40:677 (1,2,3) - noob think this is a stream , idk it's very hard pattern i think..
  13. 02:16:521 (3) - rotate this ? make better flow to 02:17:105 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/htXdn/cbfe814da6.jpg
  14. 02:52:365 (1,2,3,4) - make same pattern like 02:18:079 (1,2,3,4) - would be better ( also if you don't mind , mirror this part )
[Hard]
  1. Non-Downbeat Kiai Times : Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:683, ends on 02:43:014
  2. 00:34:053 (3,4) - blanked?
  3. 00:48:079 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:52:170 (5,2) - stack ?
  5. 00:53:144 (3,4,1) - another weird flow maybe this make more better http://puu.sh/htXva/88aab881b4.jpg
  6. 00:55:092 (5) - rotate -10 degree would be better
  7. 01:10:287 (3) - x:380 , y:196 better
  8. 01:09:898 (2,4) - stack ?
  9. 01:28:209 (1) - i think you overuse using red points on this slider .. ( remove first red point would be better ) http://puu.sh/htXTu/c435628e34.jpg
  10. 01:42:625 (3,4) - blanked
  11. 02:09:118 (2,3) - make same spacing like 02:08:729 (1,2)
  12. 02:16:716 (2,3) - Ctrl+G then 02:16:911 (3,4) - Ctrl+G ( would be better ) http://puu.sh/htY6Y/837adb4470.jpg same like 02:10:287 (1,2,3,4) - pattern
  13. 03:06:001 (6) - two repeated ? i think one sound's better .http://puu.sh/htYgS/afb5ae3cbd.jpg
    The pattern it's too hard , but the OD/HP/AR is too low , try raise a bit i think ..
[Insane]
  1. 00:55:774 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat) & (end)
  2. 00:43:209 (2) - Ctrl+G?
  3. 00:57:430 (3) - ^
  4. 02:05:222 (3) - ^

    Nice Pattern on here ..
    Good Job!
i hope this helping , good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Seijiro

Sky Trias wrote:

M4M #modreqs

[General]
  1. Change 'Pink' new combo, it's conflict with your BG. ✔ I made it a little more dark
  2. add tags : 黒うさP , violin , 千本桜 , Kurousa-P , reprint ( you can find the tags on :arrow: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm25448671?ref=search_key_video ) ✔ Added all those tags, thanks a lot :3
  3. Keep Inconsistency New Combo. ✘ I can't really see the inconsistency tho xD
[Normal]
  1. 01:14:573 (1) - remove NC ✘ (3) follows the violin, while (1) follows the bass so I need to make the player understand this change :3
  2. 01:32:105 (2) - improve this slider maybe? This isn't really a blanket at all and I already rejected a couple of suggestions about changing this because it gives the riught momevent :3
  3. 03:04:053 (1) - remove NC ✘ You can hear a repetitive sound on 03:01:716 (1,2,3) - and a different one on 03:04:053 (1,2) - . That's why there is a NC there
  4. 01:31:326 (3,1) - swap NC ✘ 01:31:716 - Here starts a new stanza so why should I remove the NC? xD
  5. 02:20:417 (1) - remove NC ✘ Same as for 03:04:053 (1) -
  6. 02:21:975 (3,4) - Ctrl+G - same like 02:20:807 (2,1) - pattern ✘ 02:21:196 (1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern follows and tries to replicate the violin's sound which stays the same for the first 2 notes then changes into a more grave pitch and goes up again
  7. 02:45:742 (2,1,2) - make same like 02:04:053 (1,2,1) ✘ I don't have enough space and I don't really see where is the problem. Give me reasons and I'll change it right away :3
  8. 03:02:495 (2) - how about mirroring this? http://puu.sh/htWPw/13f197165b.jpg it's better to play and nice placing ✘ I'd really like to do that, but the spacing will break up once I do that :/
  9. 00:39:118 (2) - x:356 , y:120 (better) ✔ I like it :3
  10. 00:39:118 (2,4) - stack? ✔ lol, I did that without reading this part xD Fixed
  11. 00:51:586 (3,1) - check DS over here ✔ Ooops xD .. and http://puu.sh/htWZu/75cd8cb703.jpg it's very weird flow on normal difficult make more smooth ✘ I don't think so, sorry xD
  12. 01:40:677 (1,2,3) - noob think this is a stream , idk it's very hard pattern i think.. ✔ Removed a note
  13. 02:16:521 (3) - rotate this ? make better flow to 02:17:105 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/htXdn/cbfe814da6.jpg ✔ Sure :3
  14. 02:52:365 (1,2,3,4) - make same pattern like 02:18:079 (1,2,3,4) - would be better ( also if you don't mind , mirror this part )✘ I can't. I'll break the spacing and all the following pattern :/
[Hard]
  1. Non-Downbeat Kiai Times : Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:683, ends on 02:43:014 ✔ lol, fixed :P
  2. 00:34:053 (3,4) - blanked? ✔ Fixed
  3. 00:48:079 (4,5) - ^ ✘ But it's already blanketed xD
  4. 00:52:170 (5,2) - stack ? ✔ Why not :3
  5. 00:53:144 (3,4,1) - another weird flow maybe this make more better http://puu.sh/htXva/88aab881b4.jpg ≈ Fixed in my own way xD
  6. 00:55:092 (5) - rotate -10 degree would be better ✔ Fixed :3
  7. 01:10:287 (3) - x:380 , y:196 better ✘ Nope :/
  8. 01:09:898 (2,4) - stack ? ✘ 01:10:287 (3,4) - Blanket xD
  9. 01:28:209 (1) - i think you overuse using red points on this slider .. ( remove first red point would be better ) http://puu.sh/htXTu/c435628e34.jpg ≈ Kinda fixed :3
  10. 01:42:625 (3,4) - blanked ✘ But it's already blanketed xD
  11. 02:09:118 (2,3) - make same spacing like 02:08:729 (1,2) ✔ Fixed :3
  12. 02:16:716 (2,3) - Ctrl+G then 02:16:911 (3,4) - Ctrl+G ( would be better ) http://puu.sh/htY6Y/837adb4470.jpg same like 02:10:287 (1,2,3,4) - pattern ✘ The last note breaks down the movement I wanted, so no change here :/
  13. 03:06:001 (6) - two repeated ? i think one sound's better .http://puu.sh/htYgS/afb5ae3cbd.jpg ✘ I used this slider before and I think there is no problem :3
    The pattern it's too hard , but the OD/HP/AR is too low , try raise a bit i think .. ✘ I thought a lot about my settings and they are as they are now in order to create a balanced spread
[Insane]
  1. 00:55:774 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat) & (end) ✘ Actually no, it is meant to be like that xD
  2. 00:43:209 (2) - Ctrl+G? ✘ Oval flow here, sorry xD
  3. 00:57:430 (3) - ^
  4. 02:05:222 (3) - ^ ✘ They're all fine. I guess the movement could be misleading, but I have my reasons for all of them xD

    Nice Pattern on here .. Thanks >.<
    Good Job!
i hope this helping , good luck ;)
Thanks a lot for your mod :)
EncoreW
[Insane]


00:42:625 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - May not clean enough ,it seems a little crowded

00:44:183 - I think this place shouldn't be a slider's end ,it should be a slider's start ,because a new music tone start here

00:54:313 (2,3,4) - Too far between 00:54:313 (2,3) - ,a little hard to play

00:56:456 (4,5) - Too far between these two ,and easy to make a combobreak here

01:05:612 (1,2) - So hard but this diff is only 4.5 stars ,unbelievable

01:09:118 (1) - What about ctrl+G ?Flow may a little more smooth

01:10:287 (6,11) - 01:13:404 (5) - 01:16:521 (4,7) - NC?

01:17:300 (7,8,9,10) - I think keep the same pattern like 01:16:521 (4,5,6) - is better

01:31:618 (1,1) - What about overlap them?

02:12:625 (6,9) - 02:15:742 (4) - 02:18:859 (3,5) - NC?

02:23:534 (2) - I think you should do the same things like 02:11:066 (1,1) - ,this pattern is good

02:35:222 (2,3,4,5) - Move a little lower left

02:46:131 (3,4) - A little hard to read

02:56:261 (6,11) - 02:59:378 (5) - 03:02:495 (6,11) - NC?



So noob I am D:
Fookiz
only modding standard diffs

Normal
change od = 4
and change hp drain 4/3.5
Hard
01:27:235 (3) - extend until 01:27:722
0:128:122 - add note
01:30:547 (2) - one more reverse
02:30:547 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this part may be confusing for hard players

Insane
00:56:456 (4,5) - jump is a little too big especially after a tiny pause it isn't good imo
01:27:333 (4,5,6,7,8) - this stream needs just a bit polishing
01:41:456 (1,2,3,4) - scale down a little
01:54:508 (4) - i suggest moving this either in the middle of 01:54:703 (1,2) - these two sliders x:228 y:208 and move 01:53:924 (3) - to here ish x:432 y:188
02:48:274 (3) - maybe stack on 02:49:053 (2) - ?
Topic Starter
Seijiro

tm1209 wrote:

[Insane]


00:42:625 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - May not clean enough ,it seems a little crowded ✔ It wasn't nice :/ Fixed

00:44:183 - I think this place shouldn't be a slider's end ,it should be a slider's start ,because a new music tone start here ✘ I was following the bass for the next pattern, that's why I didn't really need to enphasize the violin here. It was jsut a filler. Also, I needed (1)'s shape as it is now

00:54:313 (2,3,4) - Too far between 00:54:313 (2,3) - ,a little hard to play ✘ It is part of my favourite pattern, which I call reverse stream. Basically the stream starts from the slider's head and not from the slider's tale. I used it somewhere else in my map, so I'll keep this

00:56:456 (4,5) - Too far between these two ,and easy to make a combobreak here ✔ Moved (4) above (5)

01:05:612 (1,2) - So hard but this diff is only 4.5 stars ,unbelievable lol, I know xD It's my special ability to make crazy diffs with low star rating xD

01:09:118 (1) - What about ctrl+G ?Flow may a little more smooth ✘ Sorry, but it gives the opposite meaning of what I wanted. I tried your suggestion while I was mapping this and even if I tried placing it now it doesn't fit well imo :/

01:10:287 (6,11) - 01:13:404 (5) - 01:16:521 (4,7) - NC? ✘ I had NCs there before lol Basically, the have the same sound as the previous patterns so I should keep the current Combo

01:17:300 (7,8,9,10) - I think keep the same pattern like 01:16:521 (4,5,6) - is better ✔ Oh yeah, I like it :3

01:31:618 (1,1) - What about overlap them? ✘ They are 3 full beats apart xD Nobody wiull ever notice such things lol

02:12:625 (6,9) - 02:15:742 (4) - 02:18:859 (3,5) - NC? ✘ Same as above :3

02:23:534 (2) - I think you should do the same things like 02:11:066 (1,1) - ,this pattern is good ✔ Really nice *^*

02:35:222 (2,3,4,5) - Move a little lower left ✔ Why not :3

02:46:131 (3,4) - A little hard to read ✘ It's the same pattern used before multiple times. The player should be aware of it already xD

02:56:261 (6,11) - 02:59:378 (5) - 03:02:495 (6,11) - NC? ✘ Same as above :3



So noob I am D: Please xD You aren't at all. Some suggestions were great :3
Thanks a lot for the mod :)

Fookiezi wrote:

only modding standard diffs

Normal
change od = 4 ✘ Nope, I'm already using CS4. I don't want to make beginners rage on this (even if it's easy to play)
and change hp drain 4/3.5 ✔ Let's do 3.5 :3
Hard
01:27:235 (3) - extend until 01:27:722 ✘ I'm switching form the violin to the bass there, so no, sorry :/
01:28:122 - add note ✘ Same as above. It will also become messier and I don't want that
01:30:547 (2) - one more reverse ✘ Still following the bass. My hitsounds and also all my previous patterns follow both bass and violin xD
02:30:547 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this part may be confusing for hard players ✘ It's not my fault this map has blue polarity. I can't do anything else. There are also a lot of sliders there because I thought the same about this part, so players wil h ave to strick with it

Insane
00:56:456 (4,5) - jump is a little too big especially after a tiny pause it isn't good imo ✔ Fixed with the previous mod :3
01:27:333 (4,5,6,7,8) - this stream needs just a bit polishing ✘ What kind of polishing? xD Give me a picture of what you describe as "polished" and I'll fix it (even if my stream makes 2 good curves anyway...)
01:41:456 (1,2,3,4) - scale down a little ✘ I don't like overlaps at all, sorry xD
01:54:508 (4) - i suggest moving this either in the middle of 01:54:703 (1,2) - these two sliders x:228 y:208 and move 01:53:924 (3) - to here ish x:432 y:188 ≈ I fixed this in my own way xD
02:48:274 (3) - maybe stack on 02:49:053 (2) - ? ✘ I'm following the violin and that placement gives the right feeling of violin's scale imo
Thanks for your mod :3
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