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Tada Aoi - Brave Song(TV Size)
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star!鬼爷的图怎能不star~
Hard:
00:27:740 (8,9) - spacing
Normal:
overall difficulty -1
Easy:
Fine
and i wanna make a diff for u okay?
00:27:740 (8,9) - spacing
Normal:
overall difficulty -1
Easy:
Fine
and i wanna make a diff for u okay?Hi hi~
Overall:
Timing is off. I think offset 2282 is better. Consult more pro opinion if you wish
Music volume is too low. I'd recommend getting a better mp3 with higher volume.
I like the hitsounds =w=
[Easy]
very intuitive, good~
[Normal]
Hitsound toward the end of song is quite loud compared to music. I don't know if this will improve with a better mp3.
Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty is too high for a [Normal]! I'd decrease both by at most 2 notches.
[Hard]
00:31:086 (1) - IMO a bit too far from the spinner
00:28:460 (9) - spacing!
00:41:660 (1) - this combo is too long, shorten it maybe?
01:28:682 (8) - soften the volume at the end of this slider
Although mapping style is a bit... "mono", I'll give a star for solid effort.
Consider making the rhythm more fun~
Oh... maybe if you don't mind a guest diff (runs away)...
Overall:
Timing is off. I think offset 2282 is better. Consult more pro opinion if you wish
Music volume is too low. I'd recommend getting a better mp3 with higher volume.
I like the hitsounds =w=
[Easy]
very intuitive, good~
[Normal]
Hitsound toward the end of song is quite loud compared to music. I don't know if this will improve with a better mp3.
Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty is too high for a [Normal]! I'd decrease both by at most 2 notches.
[Hard]
00:31:086 (1) - IMO a bit too far from the spinner
00:28:460 (9) - spacing!
00:41:660 (1) - this combo is too long, shorten it maybe?
01:28:682 (8) - soften the volume at the end of this slider
Although mapping style is a bit... "mono", I'll give a star for solid effort.
Consider making the rhythm more fun~
Oh... maybe if you don't mind a guest diff (runs away)...
offset too late imo
-20 ? or -15 ? not sure for this
[Hard]
00:28:460 (9) - spacing is bad
00:29:900 (1) - silence this
music is soft , you putted too many objets and the 2nd part is TOO noisy .
[Normal]
overall -1 or -2
00:46:460 (1) - after this . too noisy
too many objets imo..
-20 ? or -15 ? not sure for this
[Hard]
00:28:460 (9) - spacing is bad
00:29:900 (1) - silence this
music is soft , you putted too many objets and the 2nd part is TOO noisy .
[Normal]
overall -1 or -2
00:46:460 (1) - after this . too noisy
too many objets imo..
Topic Starter
jamesleao(...)
yongtw123(...)
Sprosive(...)
yaya(...)
all fixed
offset change to 2880
yongtw123(...)
Sprosive(...)
yaya(...)
all fixed
offset change to 2880
nothing to say ,star~
+star~
=w=/
star
鬼鬼做的图不错啊~
star~ >w</
Why MV runs backward? o_O
~Easy~
Reduce HP and OD, they're too high and not fit to this song.
Volume of soft-hitsounds on the back-half part is too loud.
~Normal~
Slider Velocity is too fast imo.
00:06:120 (7) - new combo
00:13:800 (7) - ^
00:21:480 (5) - ^
~JL Style~
Silence all sliderticks.
00:16:200 - unnecessary break
00:29:400 - ^
~Hard~
Fine.
+Star
~Easy~
Reduce HP and OD, they're too high and not fit to this song.
Volume of soft-hitsounds on the back-half part is too loud.
~Normal~
Slider Velocity is too fast imo.
00:06:120 (7) - new combo
00:13:800 (7) - ^
00:21:480 (5) - ^
~JL Style~
Silence all sliderticks.
00:16:200 - unnecessary break
00:29:400 - ^
~Hard~
Fine.
+Star
Topic Starter
all fixedDJPop wrote:
Why MV runs backward? o_O
~Easy~
Reduce HP and OD, they're too high and not fit to this song.
Volume of soft-hitsounds on the back-half part is too loud.
~Normal~
Slider Velocity is too fast imo.
00:06:120 (7) - new combo
00:13:800 (7) - ^
00:21:480 (5) - ^
~JL Style~
Silence all sliderticks.
00:16:200 - unnecessary break
00:29:400 - ^
~Hard~
Fine.
+Star
people are disappearing
star
Angel Beats! 
以下全是建議而已~ 可以忽略掉的:D
[Hard]
00:19:080 (6) - 這很難看得出是slider Q_Q 我不知道這樣可不可以呢
00:21:000 (11) - 看起來有點怪, 是特別地放下一格了嗎?
00:57:000 (10,11) - 我建議把10 跟11 互換 , 按vocal 感覺上比拉vocal 好一點
01:08:751 (1) - 同樣看起來有點怪, 這次是特別地放 左上各一格了嗎?
End the kiai time
[JL]
kiai time? 為什麼其他難度有kiai 而這沒有?
[normal]
00:25:320 (1) 這段每一個note都成直線或直角, 只有這個不是..?
01:13:320 (1) ...?
01:16:200 (6) 4,5,6 成直線好像較好?
End kiai time
[easy]
End kiai time
Good 總體很不錯!
一點不足的地方是我覺得Hard 的1/4 有點太多, 用一點長音會比較好0.0"
以下全是建議而已~ 可以忽略掉的:D
[Hard]
00:19:080 (6) - 這很難看得出是slider Q_Q 我不知道這樣可不可以呢
00:21:000 (11) - 看起來有點怪, 是特別地放下一格了嗎?
00:57:000 (10,11) - 我建議把10 跟11 互換 , 按vocal 感覺上比拉vocal 好一點
01:08:751 (1) - 同樣看起來有點怪, 這次是特別地放 左上各一格了嗎?
End the kiai time
[JL]
kiai time? 為什麼其他難度有kiai 而這沒有?
[normal]
00:25:320 (1) 這段每一個note都成直線或直角, 只有這個不是..?
01:13:320 (1) ...?
01:16:200 (6) 4,5,6 成直線好像較好?
End kiai time
[easy]
End kiai time
Good
總體很不錯!一點不足的地方是我覺得Hard 的1/4 有點太多, 用一點長音會比較好0.0"
Topic Starter
aesopl19193 wrote:
Angel Beats!
以下全是建議而已~ 可以忽略掉的:D
[Hard]
00:19:080 (6) - 這很難看得出是slider Q_Q 我不知道這樣可不可以呢 （感觉还好
00:21:000 (11) - 看起來有點怪, 是特別地放下一格了嗎? （表示往上一格或下一格给我的感觉更奇怪xD
00:57:000 (10,11) - 我建議把10 跟11 互換 , 按vocal 感覺上比拉vocal 好一點 (尝试了一下,感觉现在这样放,打起来更有感觉
01:08:751 (1) - 同樣看起來有點怪, 這次是特別地放 左上各一格了嗎? （这个好象没觉得有什么问题的说~
End the kiai time
[JL]
kiai time? 為什麼其他難度有kiai 而這沒有? （added
[normal]
00:25:320 (1) 這段每一個note都成直線或直角, 只有這個不是..? (大概是为了往下堆
01:13:320 (1) ...? （？
01:16:200 (6) 4,5,6 成直線好像較好? （fixed
End kiai time
[easy]
End kiai time
Good
一點不足的地方是我覺得Hard 的1/4 有點太多, 用一點長音會比較好0.0"
[Mod Infos]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
- • Stack Laniency: 7
• Disable Countdown, since it isn't used
• Add "jamesleao" to the Tags
• Source and Tags should be the same for all difficulties
- • 00:28:440 (9) - New combo
• 01:15:240 (6) - ^
Topic Starter
xxheroxx wrote:
[Mod Infos]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
[General][Hard]
- • Stack Laniency: 7
• Disable Countdown, since it isn't used (fixed
• Add "jamesleao" to the Tags (added
• Source and Tags should be the same for all difficulties (fixed
- • 00:28:440 (9) - New combo
• 01:15:240 (6) - ^ (fixed
Eh? The video's in reverse? o-o!
Easy-
Good, though I think the volume increase could be lower (since it starts fairly calming, then gets quite loud.. I mean the soft sections)
Normal-
Fine
JL style-
the kiai time, the normal hitsounds are... so quiet... (compared to Ghost's diffs) yet somehow the finish hitsounds are so much louder (stands out a lot.. Dx), same goes for the slider ticks too
Good
Hard- I was kinda shocked to see a 5star from this map xD
01:12:840 (5) - don't think the finish goes here, would fit better on 01:13:320 (1)
01:17:160 - add finish (to start of slider)? (kinda follows the pace...)
01:22:920 (6) - ...add finish? maybe...?
01:24:840 (2) - ^
Maybe cut down on some whistles, but no biggie
Pretty good
@.@~ Good
I can listen to this in repeat for so long.... nice and peaceful (the song~)
Easy-
Good, though I think the volume increase could be lower (since it starts fairly calming, then gets quite loud.. I mean the soft sections)
Normal-
Fine
JL style-
the kiai time, the normal hitsounds are... so quiet... (compared to Ghost's diffs) yet somehow the finish hitsounds are so much louder (stands out a lot.. Dx), same goes for the slider ticks too
Good
Hard- I was kinda shocked to see a 5star from this map xD
01:12:840 (5) - don't think the finish goes here, would fit better on 01:13:320 (1)
01:17:160 - add finish (to start of slider)? (kinda follows the pace...)
01:22:920 (6) - ...add finish? maybe...?
01:24:840 (2) - ^
Maybe cut down on some whistles, but no biggie
Pretty good
@.@~ Good
I can listen to this in repeat for so long.... nice and peaceful (the song~)
:D
Topic Starter
thx~ ShinxynShinxyn wrote:
Eh? The video's in reverse? o-o!
Easy-
Good, though I think the volume increase could be lower (since it starts fairly calming, then gets quite loud.. I mean the soft sections)
Normal-
Fine
JL style-
the kiai time, the normal hitsounds are... so quiet... (compared to Ghost's diffs) yet somehow the finish hitsounds are so much louder (stands out a lot.. Dx), same goes for the slider ticks too
Good
Hard- I was kinda shocked to see a 5star from this map xD
01:12:840 (5) - don't think the finish goes here, would fit better on 01:13:320 (1) (fixed
01:17:160 - add finish (to start of slider)? (kinda follows the pace...) (it is unsuitable ,imo._.
01:22:920 (6) - ...add finish? maybe...? (it is unsuitable ,imo,but difficult to choose._.
01:24:840 (2) - ^ ((it is unsuitable ,imo._.
Maybe cut down on some whistles, but no biggie
Pretty good
@.@~ Good
I can listen to this in repeat for so long.... nice and peaceful (the song~)
I prefer MV with people are slightly appearing.
MV with people are disappearing is too sad
Just my opinion...
MV with people are disappearing is too sad
Just my opinion...
why silence the slider tick? decrease the slider tick rate also works. :/
and suggest don't place the inherited timing section on the notes
and suggest don't place the inherited timing section on the notes
Topic Starter
all fixedabalee wrote:
why silence the slider tick? decrease the slider tick rate also works. :/
and suggest don't place the inherited timing section on the notes
[Easy]
01:24:840 (5) - New combo.
[Other Stuff]
Your Stack Leniency is unrankable on [JL Style] and [Hard]. Make it the same like the other difficulties.
Delete .osb file
01:24:840 (5) - New combo.
[Other Stuff]
Your Stack Leniency is unrankable on [JL Style] and [Hard]. Make it the same like the other difficulties.
Delete .osb file
Topic Starter
Mafiamaster wrote:
[Easy]
01:24:840 (5) - New combo. fixed
[Other Stuff]
Your Stack Leniency is unrankable on [JL Style] and [Hard]. Make it the same like the other difficulties.fixed
Delete .osb file fixed
Bubbled
rebubbled.
来晚了._. 这些天太忙了 刚想说让我+个diff 结果看到泡了 Q-q
So starx3
So starx3
Topic Starter
可以考虑full ver.xierbaliti wrote:
来晚了._. 这些天太忙了 刚想说让我+个diff 结果看到泡了 Q-q
So starx3
Nice mapset!
No issues at all, so this checks out. :3
Ranked!
No issues at all, so this checks out. :3
Ranked!