Pokemon Heart Gold/Soul Silver - Biking Theme · forum

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-04-19T14:17:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, January 03, 2007 at 3:23:58 PM

Artist: Junichi Masuda
Title: Biking Theme (HG/SS)
Source: Pokemon: HeartGold/SoulSilver
Tags: Heart Soul Gold Silver Crystal Bicycle ds nintendo gamefreak game freak gameboy boy MittenMasterzz
BPM: 136.95
Filesize: 3920kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:

Blackthorn City - Taiko (5 stars, 505 notes)
Cerulean City (3.76 stars, 120 notes)
Goldenrod City (1.99 stars, 90 notes)
Victory Road (4.72 stars, 129 notes)

Download: Junichi Masuda - Biking Theme (HG/SS)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The biking theme from Heart Gold and Soul Silver.
Taiko difficulty by MMzz!

I always loved this upbeat theme. (maybe because I was so impatient and kept on using the bike)

Last edited by NoHitter 2012-03-30T17:12:09+00:00, edited 48 times in total.

Garven

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Garven 2010-04-19T14:26:17+00:00

[General]
It's less than a minute of gameplay. You can at least do without copy/paste.

[Goldenrod City]
00:30:235 (2,1) - Quite the jump for the easy map. Then again, it's since you just pasted half the map.

Rest is fine. I liked the hitsounds - nice and simplistic. Just... try to make the maps more interesting. Doing the same thing twice (even if it's just flipped) within one minute is really bleh.

MP3 with one more song repeat here. Offset will probably be different. I hope I got the repeating sections close enough to not screw with gameplay. =/

Xgor

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Xgor 2010-04-20T17:41:59+00:00

[Tags]
Add DS and Game boy to tags maybe?

[Storyboard]
All the storyboard blocks is a bit misplaced and it looks kinda ugly (especially in CTB and when you watch it in the editor)
It's pretty easy to spot that goldenrodblock4 though <.<
Also I suggest you lower the framedelay on all animations from 500 (the standard in SBE) to 100 as it look much better ^^
Animation,Fail,Centre,"SBbikedown.png",320,240,4,500,LoopForever (the bolded part is the framedelay)

[Cerulean City]
00:11:834 (4) - Move one grid left (Level 3)
01:07:913 (4) - Move one grid right (Level 3)

Well that what I found, no mayor stuff found.
It's a bit repitive but some old video game songs tend to be repetitive as they are so short.
*star*

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-04-21T12:41:14+00:00

Bah I redid the SB blocks to make them cleaner.

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-04-22T08:34:09+00:00

Lol, for a sec when I first saw the title (more specifically, "Biking Theme"), I thought it was the Diamond/Pearl/Platinum version of the bike music... This is what I get for reading too fast

Anyway, shouldn't the source be Pokemon HeartGold/SoulSilver (no spaces between Heart and Gold, and Soul and Silver)? Also, you made a typo on Silver for the tags.

★ for you~

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2010-04-24T04:04:33+00:00

<3~~~.

Yeah first mod in a while.

Just a nazi thing in Crulean mode.

Whenever you have a pattern like this, add a clap on the repeat of each slider.

Other than that, <3~.

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-04-25T14:09:10+00:00

Woop.

TheVileOne

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TheVileOne 2010-04-28T04:18:45+00:00

Goldenrod City

Try a slider tick rate of 0.80. I found that it placed the ticks in an ideal location. Not sure if you intentionally wanted the ticks where thewy are now or not. If you did change the slider tick rate, then you will probably need to add a few timing sections in to adjust the tick rate for some sliders.

00:18:187 (2,3) I feel that the spacing is off here. try moving the notes 3 units down. Move 2 three units to the left and 3 three units to the right to retain the triangular shape.

00:19:939 (2,3) Same thing. Make the triangle larger.

01:14:265(2,3) Mirror the changes mentioned above.

01:16:018(2,3) Same.

Cerulean City

00:39:873(4) Move 1 unit to the right

Victory Road

00:07:015(1) Move 1 unit down

Overall the maps are well made and fun to play. So I'll give them a star.

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-04-29T08:40:45+00:00

Err... Okay, maybe I should be more specific:

Source: Pokemon HeartGold/SoulSilver (absolutely no spacing between Heart, Gold, /, Soul, and Silver)

Also, do you really need Silver twice in tags?

Don't kudosu this post.

-Xero-

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-Xero- 2010-04-30T16:35:20+00:00

Hello,

Source: Remove Space between / and SoulSilver
Add a custom comboburst?

Easy
00:51:264 (2,3,4) - Nothing for an easy. Replace it with a short, reverse slider?

That's All.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-05-03T03:29:09+00:00

[Goldenrod City]:

circle size-1?

[Cerulean City]:

00:52:141 (4,1) - there is new combo, but still suggest making them not so close

that's what I can find, good map and star~

Garven

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Garven 2010-05-04T03:38:03+00:00

Looks much better this time around. Only a couple suggestions, really.

[General]
The hit sounds feel a little too loud to me, but it's not that horrible either. Eh.

[Goldenrod City]
00:17:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe before doing this rhythm as single beats, introduce the newbies to it with the slider patterns you use later on?

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2010-05-05T04:02:24+00:00

Golden rod city:

Too much abuse of hitsounds? Im wondering if there is any object without a hitsound at all. And btw, this abuse sounds too awful for me (the excessive amount of soft whistles already is hurting my ears) , you might want to ask for more opinions and decide to change it or not, or decrease volume to reduce the impact of the hitsounds... >_>

Cerulean city:

Same thing with the hitsounds >_>
00:23:006 (2) - Way too unexpected, and it doesnt even is snapped to any sound. The same for the rest

The rest is fine to me, didnt see any real problems in the map...

arien666

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arien666 2010-05-05T11:25:44+00:00

[Goldenrod City]
01:31:133(SB) - [Suggestion] Why bike appeared suddenly? ;_;

[Cerulean City]
00:38:997 (2,4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:42:502 (2) - How about move 1 grid right?
01:32:885(SB) - [Suggestion] Why bike appeared suddenly? ;_;

[~~DUNGEON~~ Victory Road]
00:36:368 (3,4,5) - [Suggestion] I think making PERFECT triangle seems better :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8858
00:49:074 (1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
00:51:702 (5,6,7) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right? Or, you can change like 00:36:368 (3,4,5) :3
00:56:084 (1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:32:885(SB) - [Suggestion] Why bike appeared suddenly? ;_;

Well?
Nice song imo XD
Anyway, good luck :3

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-05-05T15:03:04+00:00

Lol I love this. Star~

And if you want :3...

Download: Junichi Masuda - Biking Theme (HGSS) (NoHItter) [Taiko].osu

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-05-09T05:04:00+00:00

Very relaxing and it goes really well with the music. It was much better then I imagined

arien666

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arien666 2010-05-09T05:09:34+00:00

[Blackthorn City - Taiko]
01:13:608 - Not good x0.5 imo... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9137
[Suggestion] How about change all sliders into spin :3?

Good luck again orz

ps. Don't give this reply kudosu :3

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-05-09T23:16:45+00:00

arken1015 wrote:
[Blackthorn City - Taiko]
01:13:608 - Not good x0.5 imo... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9137
[Suggestion] How about change all sliders into spin :3?

Good luck again orz

ps. Don't give this reply kudosu :3

Okidokie captin. Changed all sliders to dendens. Made .5 section x2. is that ok? o:

Download: Junichi Masuda - Biking Theme (HGSS) (NoHItter) [Blackthorn City - Taiko].osu

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Sakura 2010-05-10T17:53:44+00:00

[Goldenrod City]
00:30:235 (2) - Maybe make this into a 1/2 stack so that it stays centered? or make it go up instead of to the left?

[Cerulean City]
Fine

[Victory Road]
Falls into a pit... WEEEEEE

[Blackthorn City - Taiko]
Idk... it feels like this beatmap has a rythm of its own instead of the song :< (Yes i did play it)

OMG... most random song to map ever... AND I LOVE IT +Star

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-05-13T09:55:27+00:00

Sakura301 wrote:
[Goldenrod City]
00:30:235 (2) - Maybe make this into a 1/2 stack so that it stays centered? or make it go up instead of to the left?

IDK, IMO too hard for a beginner

Mashley

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Mashley 2010-05-18T16:13:02+00:00

Aha those songs are always awesome

Goldenrod City
01:27:628 - Please add a note here, it's a much better ending.

Cerulean City
00:22:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's with that spacing? Make it even, silly.
00:29:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:18:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:27:628 - Please add a note here, it's a much better ending.

Victory Road
00:31:768 (2) - It doesn't look it in the editor but this note is hidden under the score thing from 00:30:454 (2) -

01:27:628 - Please add a note here, it's a much better ending.

Blackthorn City - Taiko
Fun

Mok

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Mok 2010-05-18T16:44:51+00:00

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Tags: Crystal Bicycle ds nintendo gamefreak game freak MittenMasterzz
I can see Kiai Time only on [Blackthorn City - Taiko]. Put it on others too.

[Goldenrod City]
Okay.

[Cerulean City]
00:33:740 (5,8) - Switch this two.
00:45:569 (1,3) - Aren't they cuter like this? http://i49.tinypic.com/34hwfi9.png

[Victory Road]
00:22:787 (1) - This goes offscreen on edit screen.
00:29:797 (1) - ^.

I'm not good in taiko so i can't mod the taiko one.

Star!

Kecco

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Kecco 2010-06-03T19:24:41+00:00

•Overall•
Resnap All Notes on all diffs

I didn't find anything wrong in the other diffs.

Nice map~
Funny song~
Star~

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-06-03T22:54:31+00:00

Kecco wrote:
•Overall•
Resnap All Notes on all diffs

I don't see any unsnapped notes...

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Azure_Kite 2010-06-04T09:06:58+00:00

Here's my mod~

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check This

[Goldenrod City]
00:10:958 (2,4) - Move these up a grid; They're slightly off centre from 1 and 3.

Other than that, lovely~

[Cerulean City]
00:06:138 (5,6) - I'd swap these hitsounds around, so that (5) has the finish and (6) has a whistle or clap
00:09:643 (5,6) - ^

Also fine

[Victory Road]
00:06:138 (3,4) - Same hitsound recommendation as Cerulean; finish, then clap/whistle

Problem free~

Aaaand, a Taiko diff. I'll leave that one alone.

A problem free beatmap; Have a star for your efforts.

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jericho2442 2010-06-04T10:27:39+00:00

i dont see the need for these tags (Heart Soul Gold Silver boy game freak) also cap the rest of your tags

[Goldenrod city]

(suggestion) 00:17:529 (1,1,1) - spacing of these 3 notes is not even, no need to fix, just thought i would let you kno

also i see quite alot of copy phaste in this map

[Cerulean city]

if this is meant to be a normal diff you need to fix your hard criteria problem, if its meant to be hard just leave it

[Victory Road]

first off i will comment and the amount of copy phaste seems waaay to much :/

also as with the other if this is meant to be a hard (which is what it feels like) fix your insane criteria, overwise ignore this :p
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overall very smooth maps, just abit too much copy phaste

Kecco

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Kecco 2010-06-04T16:06:29+00:00

NoHItter wrote:
Kecco wrote:
•Overall•
Resnap All Notes on all diffs
I don't see any unsnapped notes...

If you click on "Resnap All Notes" [http://up.ppy.sh/files/1-49.jpg] and then on "Exit..." [http://up.ppy.sh/files/2-22.jpg], should appear this -> http://up.ppy.sh/files/3-13.jpg on all the diffs.

I know you don't need those explicative screens but why you didn't trust me?

Also ↓
• Victory Road•
00:07:015 (1) - Last point of this slider : 1 grid right?

NotShinta

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NotShinta 2010-06-04T17:39:12+00:00

Okay

Goldenrod City
1/4. Clearly mapped to 1/2 though, so no matter.
00:11:834 (4) - Move down 1 grid

Cerulean City
00:24:539 (1) - Slight jump.
01:26:314 (2,3,4,5,6) - Technically correct, but due to stack leniency, looks messed up in game.

Victory Road
Reminds me, use 2 tick rate in other diffs again.

Oh yeah I don't mod Taiko. Fine map, starred.

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Hitoshirenu Shourai 2010-06-05T09:25:06+00:00

Everything looks great to me. Is this bubbled? No? Well, now it is. If anyone actually finds something wrong with this, feel free to pop.

Gens

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Gens 2010-06-06T20:12:02+00:00

[Goldenrod City]

00:24:101 (5,1) - A bit of a jump here...

[Cerulean City]

00:24:101 (6,1) - Unintentional jump?

And I vote for removing (HG/SS) from the title... since Source is already displayed in the listing. There are several beatmaps like this, in case you're wondering (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/8206, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/8455).

That's all.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-06-07T07:59:12+00:00

Done with Goldenrod. Not with Cerulean.

Edit: Also I've changed the source.

(Oh and I'm planning something about all regions' biking themes, so I want something to distinguish them with)

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-06-07T20:39:21+00:00

Ooh, so does that mean you're doing Sinnoh's too?

Anyway, if that's the case, you probably should keep the Pokemon <insert versions> in the title... Idk.

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Gens 2010-06-08T21:40:02+00:00