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Hatsune Miku - Beware of Mikumiku Bacteria

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Krisom
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 26 de mayo de 2010 at 14:43:59

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Beware of Mikumiku Bacteria
Source: Hayaya-P
Tags: Project Diva Vocaloid caution kin ni gochuui Dusty
BPM: 184
Filesize: 4252kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (1,58 stars, 191 notes)
  2. Dusty's Infection (4,68 stars, 319 notes)
  3. Non-Stop (4,82 stars, 501 notes)
  4. Normal (3,74 stars, 291 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Beware of Mikumiku Bacteria
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Enjoy!
-Some skin elements were taken from safe_osu's Hatsune Miku song, Dear Cocoa Girls, check it out, it's a great map!-
Disclaimer: Getting infected with the MikuMiku Virus throught your headphones or your computer screen may occur while playing this beatmap, do it at your own risk.
Spceial thanks to Dusty, wich got infected just for the sake of creating a diff.
Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[General]
I see a .osb file but i dont see a storyboard.Delete .osb file and full submit.
Inconsistent mapping, make sure all your diffs are about the same in length
03:12:706 Add another timing section before this one in case the note is hit earlier You should also end that kiai time
Kiai times in general feel odd to me

[Beginner]
No problems found

[Normal]
No problems found

[Non-Stop]
No problems found

Ehh well those problems arent that hard to fix anyways, +Star
Topic Starter
Krisom

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
I see a .osb file but i dont see a storyboard.Delete .osb file and full submit. Done
Inconsistent mapping, make sure all your diffs are about the same in length I think it should be better now...
03:12:706 Add another timing section before this one in case the note is hit earlier DoneYou should also end that kiai time Done
Kiai times in general feel odd to me Yeah, I started 'em with the chorus lyrics and not with the chorus beat. I think it should be fix'd now.

Thanks!
Leorda
BIVUENDO!!!!!

[General]
1) The 1st & 4th Combo Color looks similar, find another one?
2) The 2nd & 3rd Combo Color looks similar, find another one?
3) The source must Vocaloid2, because Hatsune Miku release with Vocaloid2

[File]
FIND THE BETTER BG!!!!!!!!!

[Timing]
Check my offset and BPM sometimes not right
BPM : 184,00
Offset : 1.305

[Beginner]
01:04:871 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:11:723 (3) - Why this sound is soft??
02:34:225 (2) - New combo?

[Normal]
00:07:802 (10) - New combo?
00:35:358 (1,2,3,4) - I think this object doesn't fit to the rhythm/vocal
01:45:797 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Non-stop]
00:02:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you find the other placement? It's boring
00:13:019 (10) - New combo
00:18:237 (10) - ^
00:23:455 (10) - ^
00:28:673 (10) - ^

02:06:995 (10) - Allign with 8 from left?
03:12:706 (15) - New combo

Not bad
STAR
Topic Starter
Krisom

Leorda wrote:

BIVUENDO!!!!!

[General]
1) The 1st & 4th Combo Color looks similar, find another one?There? If it is not enough difference yet, please tell me.
2) The 2nd & 3rd Combo Color looks similar, find another one?^
3) The source must Vocaloid2, because Hatsune Miku release with Vocaloid2Done

[File]
FIND THE BETTER BG!!!!!!!!!Done

[Timing]
Check my offset and BPM sometimes not right
BPM : 184,00
Offset : 1.305
It sounds better than mine anyway, so I'll be using this one, thanks!

[Beginner]
01:04:871 (1) - Remove new combo?Not changed
02:11:723 (3) - Why this sound is soft??I tought it sounded nice =(... ...changed. Even though I still feel that there should bea hitsound there, I'm just not sure which one
02:34:225 (2) - New combo?Done

[Normal]
00:07:802 (10) - New combo?Done
00:35:358 (1,2,3,4) - I think this object doesn't fit to the rhythm/vocalDone, and removed new combo
01:45:797 (1,2,3,4) - ^^

[Non-stop]
00:02:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you find the other placement? It's boringIt should be better now, I guess
00:13:019 (10) - New combo
00:18:237 (10) - ^
00:23:455 (10) - ^
00:28:673 (10) - ^
Changed all of the above and their similars.
02:06:995 (10) - Allign with 8 from left?If I alling that, the placement of 02:07:484 (1) should be modified, and I'd rather that one to stay there...
03:12:706 (15) - New comboDone

Not bad
STAR
Thanks a lot!
wmfchris
[non-stop]
0:05:218 (3,4,6) Make a rectangle, (3) left 2 grid, (4) right 2 grid, 6 right 2 grid? (grid lv 3)
0:31:794 (4) right 1 grid
2:02:283 (1) down 1 grid

[normal]
0:41:739 (2) spacing, left 2 grid

spacing is nice <3
star~
Topic Starter
Krisom

wmfchris wrote:

[non-stop]
0:05:218 (3,4,6) Make a rectangle, (3) left 2 grid, (4) right 2 grid, 6 right 2 grid? (grid lv 3)Done, thanks ^^
0:31:794 (4) right 1 gridIs it ok now?
2:02:283 (1) down 1 grid I think it should be ok now

[normal]
0:41:739 (2) spacing, left 2 gridDone

spacing is nice <3
star~
Thanks ^^!
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

nope, no flaws :)

Great mapset! decent placement though :/
wish i can kudosu star it now :(

STAR!!

EDIT : also, yeah, .osb. try to keep an eye for it before submitting (this also annoys me, big time) to prevent the unused .osb file from being submitted. delete the file, full submit
Topic Starter
Krisom

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Great mapset! decent placement though :/
wish i can kudosu star it now :(

STAR!!
Thank you ^^!

Arusha Shuna wrote:

EDIT : also, yeah, .osb. try to keep an eye for it before submitting (this also annoys me, big time) to prevent the unused .osb file from being submitted. delete the file, full submit
I'll try this again, if it works, you deserve kudosu for getting that annoying .osb file out of my map <_<!!!
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

sorry for delay.

[General]
use more hitsounds plz...
in general, i feel your hitsounds volume is a bit louder compared to the music, can you fix them?
add vocaloid to "tags" (then when people search "vocaloid" they can find your song, now they can't.)

[Beginner]
slider tick rate: 2
00:41:739 (1) - 00:57:391 (1) - copy&paste for losers imo, it's 15s+.
01:52:174 (1) - 02:07:826 (1) - ^. i know it's boring to map a easy diff so long, but... you know that.
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you can make them symmetrical. an example:

02:33:328 - you forgot the kiai on this timing section= =

[Normal]
00:02:609 (1,2,3,4) - after several retries i still can't handle the beat here, and i think it's too hard to read at first play. (maybe, not fit the music well)
00:10:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - in patterns like this, maybe you can try to use some sliders instead of the many many circles, that will make your map more fun. suggestion.
01:02:283 - add a note?
01:20:218 (5) - put this note 1/2 later.
02:33:328 - you forgot the kiai on this timing section= =

[Non-Stop]
HP Drain Rate -1/-2
try to use more jumps.
00:09:131 (6) - did you really try... after this note, even player all 300 notes before, they will lose half HP, then any mistake will lead to fail.
01:11:087 - add a spinner?
02:33:328 - you forgot the kiai on this timing section= =
Topic Starter
Krisom

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

sorry for delay.

[General]
use more hitsounds plz...Pending (means I'll do it later, it takes some time)EDIT:Done
in general, i feel your hitsounds volume is a bit louder compared to the music, can you fix them?Done
add vocaloid to "tags" (then when people search "vocaloid" they can find your song, now they can't.)Done

[Beginner]
slider tick rate: 2 I'm not that sure, it sounds better, but more than 500 max combo for an easy diff? Changed anyway
00:41:739 (1) - 00:57:391 (1) - copy&paste for losers imo, it's 15s+.I changed it a little bit, if more changes are needed, please tell me =_=
01:52:174 (1) - 02:07:826 (1) - ^. i know it's boring to map a easy diff so long, but... you know that.Same as above
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you can make them symmetrical. an example:Done, thanks
02:33:328 - you forgot the kiai on this timing section= =I didn't, I just removed it from there so a fountain would appear at 02:33:913, I did shorten the gap between kiai times in all diffs though

[Normal]
00:02:609 (1,2,3,4) - after several retries i still can't handle the beat here, and i think it's too hard to read at first play. (maybe, not fit the music well)Changed
00:10:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - in patterns like this, maybe you can try to use some sliders instead of the many many circles, that will make your map more fun. suggestion.PendingEDIT:Done
01:02:283 - add a note?Done, thanks
01:20:218 (5) - put this note 1/2 later. =/ I'm not sure
02:33:328 - you forgot the kiai on this timing section= =Explained avobe

[Non-Stop]
HP Drain Rate -1/-2Done
try to use more jumps.PendingEDIT:Added some
00:09:131 (6) - did you really try... after this note, even player all 300 notes before, they will lose half HP, then any mistake will lead to fail.Added new combos
01:11:087 - add a spinner?Done
02:33:328 - you forgot the kiai on this timing section= =Explained above
I'll modify pending changes within this week, Thanks for pointing all that out, if something needs more changes, please tell me ^^
Astom
wenaz :3

[General]
-Utiliza mas hitsounds xD nose algunos claps, whistle... se escucha muy plano con solo normal/soft hitsounds y uno q otro finish.

Emm eso x3

StaR
Topic Starter
Krisom

Astom wrote:

wenaz :3

[General]
-Utiliza mas hitsounds xD nose algunos claps, whistle... se escucha muy plano con solo normal/soft hitsounds y uno q otro finish.

Emm eso x3

StaR
Vale, los acabo de agregar, aunque lo mas probable es que estén como las p*lotas (sobre todo en Non-Stop), soy pésimo poniendo hitsounds =_=
Derekku
[General]
*I would've just set 02:15:000 as the preview point, but starting a bit earlier works nicely too.
*Source: Hayaya-P (and delete from tags)
*Tag: Vocaloid2 (and delete from source)
*Are you sure about the title? Most places give "Caution! Miku Miku Bacteria" so I'm not sure where you get "beware of" from or doubling the name (although other songs double it like in lukaluka...)

[Beginner]
*0 Spinners?
*I'd like to see larger circles :V
00:19:565 (4) - I think it'd sound much better to end this with a finish than with a clap.
00:35:870 (6,1) - Avoid covering up the repeat of a slider like this
01:30:000 (4) - finish instead of clap please :S
01:46:304 (7,1) - covering up repeat (again)

[Normal]
*0 Spinners?
00:19:402 (4) - finish the end of this please
00:31:794 (2,3) - Perhaps turn this into a slider to show that an offbeat pattern is being used?
00:33:098 (5,1) - ^ Then, the next couple of times will be easy to follow :P
01:29:837 (4) - finish the end of this please
*I would've liked to seen more sliders used for offbeats than for just visual effects. Also, less claps and more finishes. Overall: Not bad, though. :U

[Non-Stop]
*I'd like to see more done with the beginning than just single beats spaced far apart :(
01:11:087 (1) - Silence using the soft sampleset so that there's not a "pop" sound
02:13:261 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unexpected and doesn't seem to match up to the music. I recommend just changing this :/
02:24:131 (1) - silence with soft
02:42:391 (1) - ^
*I wish that there were more sliders... The chorus sections were the most fun because it wasn't just circlecirclecirclecirclecirclecirclecirclecirclecircle x.x;;

Not bad~
Topic Starter
Krisom

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*I would've just set 02:15:000 as the preview point, but starting a bit earlier works nicely too.;)
*Source: Hayaya-P (and delete from tags)Huh? Shouldn't "Vocaloid" be the source, as said here..., or at least that's what I understand, I'd like for someone to confirm that
*Tag: Vocaloid2 (and delete from source)
*Are you sure about the title? Most places give "Caution! Miku Miku Bacteria" so I'm not sure where you get "beware of" from or doubling the name (although other songs double it like in lukaluka...)Youtube, I mean, I've also seen it like "Caution! Miku Miku Bacteria♪, but the Project Diva videos that I've seen are translated as "Beware of Mikumiku Bacteria ♪"

[Beginner]
*0 Spinners?Yup :U
*I'd like to see larger circles :VHmmm...
00:19:565 (4) - I think it'd sound much better to end this with a finish than with a clap. Done
00:35:870 (6,1) - Avoid covering up the repeat of a slider like thisChanged
01:30:000 (4) - finish instead of clap please :SDone
01:46:304 (7,1) - covering up repeat (again)Changed

[Normal]
*0 Spinners?Yup :U, I may add some like in Non Stop if requested :/
00:19:402 (4) - finish the end of this pleaseDone
00:31:794 (2,3) - Perhaps turn this into a slider to show that an offbeat pattern is being used? ^^"Ok
00:33:098 (5,1) - ^ Then, the next couple of times will be easy to follow :P Agreed =P
01:29:837 (4) - finish the end of this pleaseDone
*I would've liked to seen more sliders used for offbeats than for just visual effects. Also, less claps and more finishes. Overall: Not bad, though. :U I'll change some circles in the chorus section, I hope it's ok

[Non-Stop]
*I'd like to see more done with the beginning than just single beats spaced far apart :( D= Im not good at creating intros, I'll think on something else when I modify Non-Stop more deeply
01:11:087 (1) - Silence using the soft sampleset so that there's not a "pop" soundDone
02:13:261 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unexpected and doesn't seem to match up to the musicThe drums solo. I recommend just changing this :/I'll w8 for a second opinion on this one, sorry -_-
02:24:131 (1) - silence with softDone
02:42:391 (1) - ^Done
*I wish that there were more sliders... The chorus sections were the most fun because it wasn't just circlecirclecirclecirclecirclecirclecirclecirclecircle x.x;;
=_= sorry, I know I don't use a lot of sliders, I'll try to add more during this weekEDIT:Done


Not bad~
Reminder: Not to abuse hitcircles
Thanks ^^!
Derekku
Just responding to stuff so obv. no kudos x-x

@Source: Usually, most people add the song creator as the source for Vocaloid songs and just add Vocaloid (or 2) to tags. It's just preference, I guess.

@Title: Ahh, Project Diva, I see.

@Drum Solo: I deleted the beats and listened, and it still didn't seem to match up to what you had (so it sounded a bit off when listening). :S

Good luck! :B
Sallad4ever
Halo Krisom
Sorry for the delay

[General]
- I see the osb is gone now :D
- Increase the OD & HP for Beginner & Normal +1 ?
- Combo color 2 & 3 can be similar and kiai time make it worse, try replace 3 in to 4 combo color or 2 into 1 combo color

[Beginner]
- Decrease the slider tick to 1, 2 is too many it'll sound weird :o
- I also think that you should decrease circle size to the biggest
01:50:870 (x) - add a circle?
02:20:870 (1,2) - add finish on both of the repeat arrow
02:23:478 (3) - add finish at the end
02:39:131 (1,2) - add finish on both of the repeat arrow
02:41:739 (3) - add finish at the end
Combo mod
SPOILER
02:34:239 (2) - NC (new combo)
02:44:022 (4) - NC then remove NC on 02:44:348 (1)

[Normal]

00:03:913 (3) - delete this and put the slider in 00:04:076 (4) in it's place, don't forget to put it's end in 00:04:891
00:14:185 (4) - add finish at the end
02:12:065 (5) - it's better to put it beside the slider
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:05:218 (5) - NC
00:33:098 (1) - remove NC
00:35:218 (6) - NC
01:04:239 (5) - ^
02:17:283 (5) - ^
02:27:718 (4) - ^
02:35:544 (5) - ^
02:45:978 (4) - ^
01:14:674 (5) - ^

[Non-stop]
Ah now I know why is it Non-stop, no time to break :o
Decrease the circle and OD by 1? This will help reduce the max score
Uhmm..the intro is a little lacking, probably make it like hard with a little different pattern?
02:13:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - are you sure about this? I agree with Derekku_Chan this is off
My suggestion ( it's ok to ignore if you don't like it)
SPOILER
Start from 02:12:391 and end at 02:15:000 (9)
02:12:391 (x) - add circle
02:12:554 (x) - ^
02:12:718 (x) - ^
02:13:044 (x) - add slider until 02:13:207
02:13:370 (x) - add slider until 02:13:533
02:13:859 (x) - add a repeat slider until 02:14:022
02:14:185 (x) - add slider until 02:14:348
02:14:674 (x) - add circle
02:15:000 (x) - ^
Here's the pic

and don't forget to add hitsound to spice it up ;)
A funny song :)
Nice map and good luck
Star~
Topic Starter
Krisom

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Krisom
Sorry for the delay

[General]
- I see the osb is gone now :D YAY!
- Increase the OD & HP for Beginner & Normal +1 ? Increased it on easy
- Combo color 2 & 3 can be similar and kiai time make it worse, try replace 3 in to 4 combo color or 2 into 1 combo color

[Beginner]
- Decrease the slider tick to 1, 2 is too many it'll sound weird :o Ok
- I also think that you should decrease circle size to the biggest Agreed
01:50:870 (x) - add a circle?=/ I'll think 'bout it
02:20:870 (1,2) - add finish on both of the repeat arrow Done
02:23:478 (3) - add finish at the endDone
02:39:131 (1,2) - add finish on both of the repeat arrow Done
02:41:739 (3) - add finish at the endDone

Combo mod
SPOILER
02:34:239 (2) - NC (new combo) Done
02:44:022 (4) - NC then remove NC on 02:44:348 (1)Done

[Normal]

00:03:913 (3) - delete this and put the slider in 00:04:076 (4) in it's place, don't forget to put it's end in 00:04:891Done
00:14:185 (4) - add finish at the end Done
02:12:065 (5) - it's better to put it beside the slider Done
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:05:218 (5) - NC Done
00:33:098 (1) - remove NC Done
00:35:218 (6) - NC Done
01:04:239 (5) - ^ Done
02:17:283 (5) - ^ Done
02:27:718 (4) - ^ Done
02:35:544 (5) - ^ Done
02:45:978 (4) - ^ Done
01:14:674 (5) - ^ Done

[Non-stop]
Ah now I know why is it Non-stop, no time to break :o ;D
Decrease the circle and OD by 1? This will help reduce the max score Just reduced the OD
Uhmm..the intro is a little lacking, probably make it like hard with a little different pattern?X_x Ill try
02:13:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - are you sure about this? I agree with Derekku_Chan this is off Ok, looks like I'll have to part with it
My suggestion ( it's ok to ignore if you don't like it)
SPOILER
Start from 02:12:391 and end at 02:15:000 (9)
02:12:391 (x) - add circle
02:12:554 (x) - ^
02:12:718 (x) - ^
02:13:044 (x) - add slider until 02:13:207
02:13:370 (x) - add slider until 02:13:533
02:13:859 (x) - add a repeat slider until 02:14:022
02:14:185 (x) - add slider until 02:14:348
02:14:674 (x) - add circle
02:15:000 (x) - ^
Here's the pic

and don't forget to add hitsound to spice it up ;)
I followed your suggestion, but didn't add the hitcircle at 02:15:000, thanks ^^
A funny song :)
Nice map and good luck
Star~
Thank you =w="!
Kecco
•Non-stop•
Since in the first part the player loses about half HP Bar, I prefer to make the first hitcircles alwasy new combo :
00:03:913 (2) - New combo.
00:06:522 (2) - ^
00:09:131 (2) - ^

To solve this problem without putting new combo I suggest to place between the notes a pause...

Good map
Star
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. light color BG + light color circle + KIAI is really mad, especially in [Non-Stop].
  2. did you changed offset after setting the green lines? then you should do the same to the greenlines imo.
  3. copy and paste too much just makes a map not that fun
  4. find the volume varies around x0s. maybe you can make them like 70,80,90 in notepad. like this:
[Beginner]:
  1. 00:34:89 (T) - add a circle?
  2. try to end this diff like this:
[Normal]:
  1. 00:14:185 (4) - remove finish and add clap
  2. 01:20:054 (5,6) - replace them with 2 sliders that 1/8 beat long.
  3. end this diff like what I said in [Beginner?], that depend on your choice :)
[Non-Stop]:
  1. 00:02:609 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - try to remap this part and then make HP drain +1
  2. 00:29:837 (5) - finish and no whistle
  3. this diff is technically well made :3
Sweet song have my star XD
Topic Starter
Krisom

Kecco wrote:

•Non-stop•
Since in the first part the player loses about half HP Bar, I prefer to make the first hitcircles alwasy new combo :
00:03:913 (2) - New combo.
00:06:522 (2) - ^
00:09:131 (2) - ^

To solve this problem without putting new combo I suggest to place between the notes a pause...

Good map
Star
Thanks, but I just remaped that part ^^!

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. light color BG + light color circle + KIAI is really mad, especially in [Non-Stop]. It's just that light colors just match this song, I can't think on any other BG, nor darker colors <_<
  2. did you changed offset after setting the green lines? then you should do the same to the greenlines imo.Done
  3. copy and paste too much just makes a map not that fun :o ... :( I know, I'm sorry
  4. find the volume varies around x0s. maybe you can make them like 70,80,90 in notepad. like this:
<_< how do I do that?

[Beginner]:
  1. 00:34:89 (T) - add a circle? =/
  2. try to end this diff like this:
I think that a 2000 spinner is way too hard for an Easy Diff =S, so I started that spinner earlier.

[Normal]:
  1. 00:14:185 (4) - remove finish and add clap Done
  2. 01:20:054 (5,6) - replace them with 2 sliders that 1/8 beat long. Done
  3. end this diff like what I said in [Beginner?], that depend on your choice :)I like this one as it is =/, thanks ^^


[Non-Stop]:
  1. 00:02:609 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - try to remap this part and then make HP drain +1 Done
  2. 00:29:837 (5) - finish and no whistle Done
  3. this diff is technically well made :3 Meaning that it's not fun D=, well, at least it's well made...
Sweet song have my star XD
Thanks

I finally remapped that damn Non-Stop intro, but somehow, I think I did it wrong =D, I may also have to remap the " ♪ Miau Maiu Maiu, Pu pu pu pu, puu ♪", it looks like they are boring :o
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Ok.

[Beginner]
00:07:826 (1,2) - Replace this two with a slider, which starts at 00:07:826, repeats at 00:08:968 and finish at 00:10:109.
01:07:826 (1,2) - A grid to the left.
01:56:087 (2) - ^.
02:06:522 (2) - ^.
02:12:595 - You don't need this break time.
02:31:304 (1) - Let the slider repeats here.
02:49:565 (1) - ^.

[Normal]
00:17:445 (5) - Offscreen.
01:53:478 (4) - The repeat in this slider is hidden, it could be a problem, just to advice.
02:03:913 (4) - ^.

[Non-Stop]
01:00:978 (4,5) - Offscreen.
02:03:587 (3) - ^.

that's all! how cutie song <3
Topic Starter
Krisom

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Ok.

[Beginner]
00:07:826 (1,2) - Replace this two with a slider, which starts at 00:07:826, repeats at 00:08:968 and finish at 00:10:109. Thanks, but I like it as it is ^^
01:07:826 (1,2) - A grid to the left. =S It's distance snapped alredy
01:56:087 (2) - ^. Thanks
02:06:522 (2) - ^. Done
02:12:595 - You don't need this break time. I don't D:?
02:31:304 (1) - Let the slider repeats here. I think it sounds nice, but thanks :D
02:49:565 (1) - ^. ^

[Normal]
00:17:445 (5) - Offscreen. Fix'd
01:53:478 (4) - The repeat in this slider is hidden, it could be a problem, just to advice. =/ I know, but the slider can be seen since 01:53:315, I think that's enough time to react, but if someone else points this, I'll change it
02:03:913 (4) - ^. ^

[Non-Stop]
01:00:978 (4,5) - Offscreen.Fix'd
02:03:587 (3) - ^.Fix'd

that's all! how cutie song <3
Thank you ^^!
TheVileOne
Beginner

00:14:348 (4) - This slider seems to follow the vocals more than anything and the vocal note starts on the previous red tick
00:19:565 (4) - ^ Same
00:46:957 (1) - This slider is lopsided. even out the move points like in the screenshot and then rotate counterclockwise until the bottom points are on the same plane, then shift right until the note is centered in between the arch.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8907

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are off sync. Move 1 here 01:00:489 - Move 2 where 1 was. Move 3 here 01:01:468 - and 4 where where 3 was. Make sure you distance snap the notes to make up for the change.

01:24:783 (4) - again with the odd vocal note.

01:30:000 (4) - ^ Same

02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad use of vocal notes. Use the similar beat underneath them instead.


03:06:522 (4) - Again start on the red tick.

Normal

00:31:794 (2) - This does not match that vocal if that was your idea. There is a sound more fitting to it on the previous white tick.Either move it back to that point or change this note. It doesn't belong here.

00:38:968 (2) - Distance snap this at 0.8 and shift 00:39:131 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - all of these over by 1, because the current angle looks awful.You don't want to piss off hatsune miku fans.

01:48:750 (3) - This note doesn't seem to belong here. It sounds like it's a place for a slider, but instead there's this oddly placed note.

NonStop

01:04:402 (3) - Move this down 1 unit

01:04:891 (6) - Move this left 1 unit

01:32:546 - Add a note?

01:33:673 - Add a note?

01:37:753 - Add a note?

01:38:886 - Add a note?

01:58:370 (3) - I'm not comfortable with this note so far off the grid.

02:19:810 - Add a note?
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Beginner]
fine

[Normal]
01:21:685 - add note
01:26:902 - △

[Non-Stop]
fine

good map
Topic Starter
Krisom

dksslqj wrote:

[Beginner]
fine

[Normal]
01:21:685 - add note I don't know how you convinced me of that <_<.... Done
01:26:902 - △ Done

[Non-Stop]
fine

good map
Thanks ^^!


TheVileOne wrote:

Beginner

00:14:348 (4) - This slider seems to follow the vocals more than anything and the vocal note starts on the previous red tick Yes and no. I'm using the vocals as a following point in this difficulty, but I'm not following them strictly. That being the case, I would not put a 1/2 slider in this song as it's meant to be for beginners.
00:19:565 (4) - ^ Same ^ Same
00:46:957 (1) - This slider is lopsided. even out the move points like in the screenshot and then rotate counterclockwise until the bottom points are on the same plane, then shift right until the note is centered in between the arch. Fix'd, I guess, I did not understood completely what you said <_<

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8907

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are off sync. Move 1 here 01:00:489 - Move 2 where 1 was. Move 3 here 01:01:468 - and 4 where where 3 was. Make sure you distance snap the notes to make up for the change. Again, I'm not using 1/2 notes on a beginner diff.

01:24:783 (4) - again with the odd vocal note. Same^

01:30:000 (4) - ^ Same ^Same

02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad use of vocal notes. Use the similar beat underneath them instead. I was not even using the vocal notes there D:


03:06:522 (4) - Again start on the red tick. Explained above

Normal

00:31:794 (2) - This does not match that vocal if that was your idea. There is a sound more fitting to it on the previous white tick.Either move it back to that point or change this note. It doesn't belong here. Not done =/

00:38:968 (2) - Distance snap this at 0.8 and shift 00:39:131 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - all of these over by 1, because the current angle looks awful.You don't want to piss off hatsune miku fans. Fix'd

01:48:750 (3) - This note doesn't seem to belong here. It sounds like it's a place for a slider, but instead there's this oddly placed note. It follows the same structure as 00:31:304 (1,2,3,4)

NonStop

01:04:402 (3) - Move this down 1 unit Not done

01:04:891 (6) - Move this left 1 unit Not done

01:32:546 - Add a note? Are you sure you gave me the correct time? I cannot find a grid wich has thatn time. It's 1.32.527 (the 1/4th blue line closer to ir) and 1.32.568 (the 1/8 th yellow line closer to it)

01:33:673 - Add a note? Same as above

01:37:753 - Add a note? Same as above

01:38:886 - Add a note? Not done

01:58:370 (3) - I'm not comfortable with this note so far off the grid. Well, it's visible while playing, so it should not be a mayor problem, I may fix it if someone else points that out too.

02:19:810 - Add a note? Not done =/
Thank you
TheVileOne

Krisom wrote:

dksslqj wrote:

[Beginner]
fine

[Normal]
01:21:685 - add note I don't know how you convinced me of that <_<.... Done
01:26:902 - △ Done

[Non-Stop]
fine

good map
Thanks ^^!


TheVileOne wrote:

Beginner

00:14:348 (4) - This slider seems to follow the vocals more than anything and the vocal note starts on the previous red tick Yes and no. I'm using the vocals as a following point in this difficulty, but I'm not following them strictly. That being the case, I would not put a 1/2 slider in this song as it's meant to be for beginners.
00:19:565 (4) - ^ Same ^ Same
00:46:957 (1) - This slider is lopsided. even out the move points like in the screenshot and then rotate counterclockwise until the bottom points are on the same plane, then shift right until the note is centered in between the arch. Fix'd, I guess, I did not understood completely what you said <_<

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8907

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are off sync. Move 1 here 01:00:489 - Move 2 where 1 was. Move 3 here 01:01:468 - and 4 where where 3 was. Make sure you distance snap the notes to make up for the change. Again, I'm not using 1/2 notes on a beginner diff.

01:24:783 (4) - again with the odd vocal note. Same^

01:30:000 (4) - ^ Same ^Same

02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad use of vocal notes. Use the similar beat underneath them instead. I was not even using the vocal notes there D:


03:06:522 (4) - Again start on the red tick. Explained above

Normal

00:31:794 (2) - This does not match that vocal if that was your idea. There is a sound more fitting to it on the previous white tick.Either move it back to that point or change this note. It doesn't belong here. Not done =/

00:38:968 (2) - Distance snap this at 0.8 and shift 00:39:131 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - all of these over by 1, because the current angle looks awful.You don't want to piss off hatsune miku fans. Fix'd

01:48:750 (3) - This note doesn't seem to belong here. It sounds like it's a place for a slider, but instead there's this oddly placed note. It follows the same structure as 00:31:304 (1,2,3,4)

NonStop

01:04:402 (3) - Move this down 1 unit Not done

01:04:891 (6) - Move this left 1 unit Not done

01:32:546 - Add a note? Are you sure you gave me the correct time? I cannot find a grid wich has thatn time. It's 1.32.527 (the 1/4th blue line closer to ir) and 1.32.568 (the 1/8 th yellow line closer to it)

01:33:673 - Add a note? Same as above

01:37:753 - Add a note? Same as above

01:38:886 - Add a note? Not done

01:58:370 (3) - I'm not comfortable with this note so far off the grid. Well, it's visible while playing, so it should not be a mayor problem, I may fix it if someone else points that out too.

02:19:810 - Add a note? Not done =/
Thank you

It has 1/8th snap on. Sorry. when I said add a note there, I meant put a note on those blue ticks following those slidsers
sliders. Have them end right on the ends of the sliders.

Specifically in these places.

01:32:061 -
01:33:669 -
01:38:886 -
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

Beginner:

00:05:544 (2,4) - If you're aiming for a beginner diff, delete these two notes.
00:05:870 (2) - Clap this if you consider ^
00:10:761 (2,5,2) - Delete these notes... ( for the same reason as the previous one )
00:15:978 (2,5,2) - ^
00:34:239 (2,5) - ^
00:39:457 (2,4,6) - ^
01:03:913 (4,2) - ^
01:14:348 (4,2) - ^
01:22:500 (4,2) - ^
01:22:500 (4,2) - ^
01:26:413 (2,5) - ^
01:44:674 (2,4,6) - ^
01:49:891 (2,4) - ^
01:51:196 (5) - If you consider ^, move this 1 beat back.
02:11:413 (2,4) - Delete.
02:16:957 (4,2) - ^
02:27:391 (4,2) - ^
02:35:218 (3,2) - ^
02:44:022 (1) - ^
02:44:348 (2) - Add new combo here if you consider ^
02:45:652 (5) - Delete.
03:02:935 (2,5,2) - ^
03:08:152 (2,5,2) - ^
Normal:

01:53:478 (4) - You're overlapping it with (2), move it to another place.
02:03:913 (4) - ^
Oh well, folder looks clean. Star. :3
Topic Starter
Krisom

Fuuko wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

Beginner:

00:05:544 (2,4) - If you're aiming for a beginner diff, delete these two notes.
Done
00:05:870 (2) - Clap this if you consider ^ Done
00:10:761 (2,5,2) - Delete these notes... ( for the same reason as the previous one ) Partially done
00:15:978 (2,5,2) - ^ Partially done
00:34:239 (2,5) - ^ Not Done
00:39:457 (2,4,6) - ^ Partially done
01:03:913 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
01:14:348 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
01:22:500 (4,2) - ^ Partially done
01:26:413 (2,5) - ^ Partially done
01:44:674 (2,4,6) - ^ Partially done
01:49:891 (2,4) - ^ Partially done
01:51:196 (5) - If you consider ^, move this 1 beat back. Partially done
02:11:413 (2,4) - Delete. Not Done
02:16:957 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
02:27:391 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
02:35:218 (3,2) - ^ Not Done
02:44:022 (1) - ^ Not Done
02:45:652 (5) - Delete. Not Done
03:02:935 (2,5,2) - ^ Partially done
03:08:152 (2,5,2) - ^ Partially done
I did not modify chorus sections, as I think they're all right as they are. I did remove some of the notes you suggested, though. If the changes look like lacking consistency/plain awfull, someone tell me please D:!

Normal:

01:53:478 (4) - You're overlapping it with (2), move it to another place. Done
02:03:913 (4) - ^ Done
Oh well, folder looks clean. Star. :3[/color]Thanks ^^!
KIA
[Beginner]
nice
nazi:
00:46:957 (1) - make this slider symmetrical
01:18:261 (1) - ^
01:52:174 (1) - ^
02:02:609 (1) - ^
just make first and copy paste to others XD
[Normal]
00:36:848 - add note or make 1/2 slider here
00:38:152 - ^
00:49:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is this fit the song?
01:43:370 - add note or 1/2 slider
01:48:587 - ^
02:33:261 - add note!!!
02:51:359 (1) - make this as 1/2 slider

D: It seems like you taunt people with non rhythmic beats/missed beats.
Sry, but I can't clearly read this diff even in 3rd and 4th times.

[Non-stop]
niiiice :D

Star!

P.S. nyan-nyan nyan-nyan nyanyanyanyanya pu pu pu pu pu :33333333333
Topic Starter
Krisom

KIA wrote:

[Beginner]
nice
nazi:
00:46:957 (1) - make this slider symmetrical I have a hard time making symmetrical sliders =_=. It should be better now.
01:18:261 (1) - ^
01:52:174 (1) - ^
02:02:609 (1) - ^
just make first and copy paste to others XD Done XD!

[Normal]
00:36:848 - add note or make 1/2 slider here Slider =3
00:38:152 - ^ Done
00:49:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is this fit the song? I think it does D: Well, fix'd anyway
01:43:370 - add note or 1/2 slider Note
01:48:587 - ^ Note
02:33:261 - add note!!! Huh? But it follows the lyrics
02:51:359 (1) - make this as 1/2 slider Done

D: It seems like you taunt people with non rhythmic beats/missed beats.
Sry, but I can't clearly read this diff even in 3rd and 4th times. =_= Now the Normal diff is 3.76 stars D:! Fix'd =D

[Non-stop]
niiiice :D

Star!

P.S. nyan-nyan nyan-nyan nyanyanyanyanya pu pu pu pu pu :33333333333
nyan-nyan nyan-nyan nyanyanyanyanya pu pu pu pu pu >w<
Thank you ^^!
banvi
Hello.
I love VOCALOID and this song. :D
You're familiar with Vocaloid. :oops:

Thismap is nice! :)

star~☆
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Beginner]

  • • 03:10:435 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these circles. Also, start this spinner 03:11:739 (1) here 03:10:435 and end it here 03:12:718
[Normal]

  • • 01:11:413 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:12:065 (x) - ^
    • 02:24:457 (x) - ^
    • 02:25:109 (x) - ^
    • 02:42:718 (x) - ^
    • 02:43:370 (x) - ^

[Non-Stop]


  • • HP Drain Rate: 7
    • 01:11:902 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:12:065
Topic Starter
Krisom

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Beginner]

  • • 03:10:435 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these circles. Also, start this spinner 03:11:739 (1) here 03:10:435 and end it here 03:12:718Done
[Normal]

  • • 01:11:413 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:12:065 (x) - ^
    • 02:24:457 (x) - ^
    • 02:25:109 (x) - ^
    • 02:42:718 (x) - ^
    • 02:43:370 (x) - ^

    Not Done

[Non-Stop]


  • • HP Drain Rate: 7 Done
    • 01:11:902 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:12:065Done(And their smilars)
Thanks!
Shulin
Easy:

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing rhythm. ~ Consider break/spinner here.
01:01:304 (x) - Note. (Following later pattern)
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing rhythm. ~ Consider break/spinner here.

Normal:

-- Overall Difficulty +1 or +2

00:08:478 (x) - Note.
00:09:783 (x) - ^
00:33:098 (4) - Remove clap from start. (Add to end?)
00:55:924 (x) - Note
01:11:413 (9,10) - Rhythm is confusing here imo (it's not really following anything...) Maybe delete this and have a small break?
02:06:359 (x) - Note
03:11:250 (x) - ^

Low overall difficulty made it confusing to play at times.

Non-Stop:

02:00:815 (3,4,5) - Ugly overlap with the previous slider, moving it away would make it look nicer ^_^
02:25:761 (x) - Add note.
02:49:239 (1,1,1) - Not symmetrical.
03:06:359 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical, it's really noticeable in game.

STAR
Topic Starter
Krisom

Shulin wrote:

Easy:

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing rhythm. ~ Consider break/spinner here. =S Not done
01:01:304 (x) - Note. (Following later pattern) =/
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing rhythm. ~ Consider break/spinner here. =/

Normal:

-- Overall Difficulty +1 or +2 Done

00:08:478 (x) - Note. Not done
00:09:783 (x) - ^
00:33:098 (4) - Remove clap from start. (Add to end?) Done
00:55:924 (x) - Note Not done, changed the pattern anyway
01:11:413 (9,10) - Rhythm is confusing here imo (it's not really following anything...) Maybe delete this and have a small break? =_= nice catch, I knew I was doing something wrong when I ran trugh xxheroxx's mod, I did not notice that I had saved his changes on normal, though....
02:06:359 (x) - Note Not done, changed the pattern
03:11:250 (x) - ^ Not done

Low overall difficulty made it confusing to play at times. Yeah, but everytime I change this diff, it starts looking more and more like a Hard :/

Non-Stop:

02:00:815 (3,4,5) - Ugly overlap with the previous slider, moving it away would make it look nicer ^_^ True
02:25:761 (x) - Add note. Not done =/
02:49:239 (1,1,1) - Not symmetrical. I'll try to fix this -_-
03:06:359 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical, it's really noticeable in game. I suppose I'm not good a creating pretty sliders, but I think I did my best at fixing this...

STAR
Thanks ^^!
Shinxyn
Hey, I remember this song from Diva Project :D
mmm, I would prefer maybe .5 or 1s lead in time
Add "caution" to tags? Since it seems like the alternate name to this song... and maybe add the jap name too (add "kin ni gochuui"?)

Beginner-
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - I found this part quite... uncomfortable to play, just cuz vocal is in the way... it would sound right on 1/2, but then would probably feel worse... D: cover up with slider? XD (using 1/2, following vocal)
03:06:522 (3) - stick with the whistle hitsounds... replace that clap at the end with whistle please
03:10:435 (1) - have the ending at lower volume?
Quite Fair, the pace changes a bit after 1min, but still Easy

Normal-
00:31:794 (2,4) - why don't these start this on 1/1 (the vocal), mainly cuz I was expecting it to partially follow vocal (like before the break(
00:38:152 (5,1) - mmm, make this sound like 00:36:848 (2,3)? (remove clap from end of 5, and add to 1... then remove new combo from 1 and add two next note?)
00:51:522 (3) - I was expecting to hear this (the clap-finish) again somewhere... but didn't... remove? or add somewhere else in map?
02:49:565 (2,4) - clap on 2 and start of 4... then finish on end of 4?
03:12:718 (1) - make this note quieter please~
Not bad, though it shifts to music in some odd times (those 1/2 sliders with finish hitsounds), but it plays fine

Non-Stop- Yay, no breaks, I mean, who needs em? :D
01:17:446 (11) - ? why the whistle...?
02:44:348 (4) - clap at end of this slider? (just to keep the claps going)
03:12:718 (1) - same as other two diffs :<
ehhh why silence the spinner ends? D: D:
Pretty good, too bad its 184bpm ;-;

Not bad of a mapset... sliders could look better though.... no big deal
Why isn't is "MikuMiku"... (capital second M)? Oh well...
Topic Starter
Krisom

Shinxyn wrote:

Hey, I remember this song from Diva Project :D Yeah! I played that in a friend's psp and I was like "I has to map this o_o"

mmm, I would prefer maybe .5 or 1s lead in time .5 lead in time added
Add "caution" to tags? Since it seems like the alternate name to this song... and maybe add the jap name too (add "kin ni gochuui"?) Right ^^! Silly me...

Beginner-
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - I found this part quite... uncomfortable to play, just cuz vocal is in the way... it would sound right on 1/2, but then would probably feel worse... D: cover up with slider? XD (using 1/2, following vocal) I think I'm just unable to part with that :'(...
03:06:522 (3) - stick with the whistle hitsounds... replace that clap at the end with whistle please Done
03:10:435 (1) - have the ending at lower volume? Done
Quite Fair, the pace changes a bit after 1min, but still Easy

Normal-
00:31:794 (2,4) - why don't these start this on 1/1 (the vocal), mainly cuz I was expecting it to partially follow vocal (like before the break( I don't know, but I changed it anyway <_<
00:38:152 (5,1) - mmm, make this sound like 00:36:848 (2,3)? (remove clap from end of 5, and add to 1... then remove new combo from 1 and add two next note?) Done
00:51:522 (3) - I was expecting to hear this (the clap-finish) again somewhere... but didn't... remove? or add somewhere else in map? Added at 02:00:326. Thanks
02:49:565 (2,4) - clap on 2 and start of 4... then finish on end of 4? Done
03:12:718 (1) - make this note quieter please~ Done
Not bad, though it shifts to music in some odd times (those 1/2 sliders with finish hitsounds), but it plays fine

Non-Stop- Yay, no breaks, I mean, who needs em? :D Not us B)
01:17:446 (11) - ? why the whistle...? Dunno, as miku sings a high note I though a whistle would fit there <_<... ...removed
02:44:348 (4) - clap at end of this slider? (just to keep the claps going) Ok
03:12:718 (1) - same as other two diffs :< I just want to blow you minds ears... ...done
ehhh why silence the spinner ends? D: D: ..it sound better that way?
Pretty good, too bad its 184bpm ;-;

Not bad of a mapset... sliders could look better though.... no big deal
Why isn't is "MikuMiku"... (capital second M)? Oh well... Because the second "miku" is not as important as the first miku (?)
Thank you Shinxyn-sama
Eirene
mikumiku *.*
why always miku ? *.*
next time, map luka instead, please :3

[Non-Stop & Beginner] :
nothing to say

[Normal] :
00:56:739 (6) - remove clap
01:17:935 (1,3) - clap ?

sorry for the delay, star :3
DJPop
Almost of sliders look a bit weird...

~Beginner~
00:14:348 (3) - make it more symmetry
00:19:565 (3) - ^
00:52:174 (1) - ^
00:57:391 (1) - ^
01:24:783 (4) - ^
01:30:000 (3) - ^
01:57:391 (1) - ^
02:07:826 (1) - ^
02:19:565 (5) - ^
02:23:478 (3) - ^
02:30:000 (5) - ^
02:37:826 (5) - ^
02:46:957 (2) - ^
03:06:522 (3) - ^

~Normal~
Fine.

~Non-Stop~
00:19:402 (5) - make it more symmetry
00:24:620 (5) - ^
00:29:837 (5) - ^
00:33:424 (1,2) - try making more smoothly
01:19:076 (5) - move 1/2 right
01:24:620 (5) - make it more symmetry
01:29:837 (5) - ^
01:40:272 (5) - looks weird
02:50:381 (2) - move 1/2 right


+Star
Topic Starter
Krisom

Eirene wrote:

mikumiku *.*
why always miku ? *.*
next time, map luka instead, please :3
Next time I'm planning to map gumi. Both luka & miku get too much attention. Anyway, that's the next time I'm mapping a vocaloid song, I'm not planning to map vocaloid next time

[Non-Stop & Beginner] :
nothing to say

[Normal] :
00:56:739 (6) - remove clap Not done
01:17:935 (1,3) - clap ? Right, done (also changed his similar at 02:30:978 and at 02:49:239 )


sorry for the delay, star :3
Thank you ^^!

DJPop wrote:

Almost of sliders look a bit weird... I'm just not good a creating beautiful stuff :o

~Beginner~
...Did all those changes. I'm just not sure how pretty they may look now :'(

~Normal~
Fine.

~Non-Stop~
00:19:402 (5) - make it more symmetry Done (and it's similar)
00:24:620 (5) - ^ =/ I feel that this one does not need fixing, Anyway, if someone else points it out, I will
00:29:837 (5) - ^ ^
00:33:424 (1,2) - try making more smoothly Done
01:19:076 (5) - move 1/2 right Somehow, I feel that both positions are allright. =/ I suppose I'll change this
01:24:620 (5) - make it more symmetry
01:29:837 (5) - ^ Both done
01:40:272 (5) - looks weird I think it should look better now
02:50:381 (2) - move 1/2 right Same as his similar

Thank you for your mod ^^!

+Star
I suppose that training brings prettier sliders ^^"
AdRon Zh3Ro
Lets begin...
[*]You can change
[>>]You need to change

Non-stop
>>55:598 This patter is very confusing, and is very anoying.

Well, good map.(I HATE HATSUNE MIKO GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!)

:P
Topic Starter
Krisom

adron zhero wrote:

Lets begin...
[*]You can change
[>>]You need to change

Non-stop
>>55:598 This patter is very confusing, and is very anoying. It's following the lyrics, and the spacing is confusing, but yeah, that's the point.

Well, good map.(I HATE HATSUNE MIKO GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!)

:P
Done on obligation, huh XD?

Thanks for looking at it ;)
DaRRi
Suggestions only



Beginner

00:06:522 (3) - 1/4 shorter?
01:06:522 (5) - ^
01:07:500 - circle
01:16:957 (5) - shorter
01:17:935 - circle
02:19:565 (5) - shorter
02:20:544 - circle
02:30:000 (5) - shorter
02:30:978 - circle
02:37:826 (5) - shorter
02:38:804 - circle


Normal

nice


Non-Stop

00:29:837 (5) - 3/2 shorter (start and end on red ticks) and repeat 3 times
00:41:250 - circle
00:46:141 (8) - make this a 1/1 long slider end on 00:46:468
00:51:359 (7) - ^
00:56:576 (10) - ^
01:01:631 (7) - ^
01:19:565 - circle
02:14:674 (8) - make this a 1/1 long slider end on 02:15:000 and move this to the right side of the previous slider
Topic Starter
Krisom

DaRRi MIx wrote:

Suggestions only



Beginner
Sorry, I did not apply any of those suggestions :'(


Normal

nice

Non-Stop

00:41:250 - circle Done (and it's similar)
02:14:674 (8) - make this a 1/1 long slider end on 02:15:000 and move this to the right side of the previous sliderDone too)
Thanks you for the mod and the stars =w=, tyvm!

On a side important note. I've added a skin, most of it's elements being taken from safe_osu's "Dear Cocoa Girls" skin (The combo hits and the lighting), the others (the hitcircle, the hitcircleoverlay and the follow point) being made. I need opinions, I like how it feels, but I need feedback D:
LKs
Beginner

[02:33:750] why not kiai this section?

Normal

[01:09:131] Ugly, try other shape?

Non-Stop

[00:46:957] ~ [00:51:359] can you do here part a Flip Horizontally ? for better play feeling

good map , star
Topic Starter
Krisom

LKs wrote:

Beginner

[02:33:750] why not kiai this section?
So that there is a fountain at 02:33:913.

Normal

[01:09:131] Ugly, try other shape? True, thanks

Non-Stop

[00:46:957] ~ [00:51:359] can you do here part a Flip Horizontally ? for better play feeling Ok ^^, there are a new type of sliders.

good map , star
Thank you.
Curisu
Star~
valuable_old
^^
anonymous_old
Skin
The hit circle has a black fuzzy border around the white due to interpolation. Fix it. It's ugly.

Easy
Saw play time and raged.

Played a bit and it looks okay for a harder Easy.

Normal
Only played half of it; too long and boring. x_x

Overlaps used here are lame.

Non-Stop
11m? Seriously?

Rename to Insane, maybe?

Nothing wrong with it other than the score being too high, IMO.

I'll star anyway because shitties love ranking easy 11m maps.
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