Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Krisom
Sorry for the delay

[General]
- I see the osb is gone now YAY!
- Increase the OD & HP for Beginner & Normal +1 ? Increased it on easy
- Combo color 2 & 3 can be similar and kiai time make it worse, try replace 3 in to 4 combo color or 2 into 1 combo color

[Beginner]
- Decrease the slider tick to 1, 2 is too many it'll sound weird Ok
- I also think that you should decrease circle size to the biggest Agreed
01:50:870 (x) - add a circle?=/ I'll think 'bout it
02:20:870 (1,2) - add finish on both of the repeat arrow Done
02:23:478 (3) - add finish at the endDone
02:39:131 (1,2) - add finish on both of the repeat arrow Done
02:41:739 (3) - add finish at the endDone

Combo mod

SPOILER

02:34:239 (2) - NC (new combo) Done
02:44:022 (4) - NC then remove NC on 02:44:348 (1)Done

[Normal]
00:03:913 (3) - delete this and put the slider in 00:04:076 (4) in it's place, don't forget to put it's end in 00:04:891Done
00:14:185 (4) - add finish at the end Done
02:12:065 (5) - it's better to put it beside the slider Done
Combo mod

SPOILER

00:05:218 (5) - NC Done
00:33:098 (1) - remove NC Done
00:35:218 (6) - NC Done
01:04:239 (5) - ^ Done
02:17:283 (5) - ^ Done
02:27:718 (4) - ^ Done
02:35:544 (5) - ^ Done
02:45:978 (4) - ^ Done
01:14:674 (5) - ^ Done

[Non-stop]
Ah now I know why is it Non-stop, no time to break ;D
Decrease the circle and OD by 1? This will help reduce the max score Just reduced the OD
Uhmm..the intro is a little lacking, probably make it like hard with a little different pattern?X_x Ill try
02:13:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - are you sure about this? I agree with Derekku_Chan this is off Ok, looks like I'll have to part with it
My suggestion ( it's ok to ignore if you don't like it)

SPOILER

Start from 02:12:391 and end at 02:15:000 (9)
02:12:391 (x) - add circle
02:12:554 (x) - ^
02:12:718 (x) - ^
02:13:044 (x) - add slider until 02:13:207
02:13:370 (x) - add slider until 02:13:533
02:13:859 (x) - add a repeat slider until 02:14:022
02:14:185 (x) - add slider until 02:14:348
02:14:674 (x) - add circle
02:15:000 (x) - ^
Here's the pic

and don't forget to add hitsound to spice it up

I followed your suggestion, but didn't add the hitcircle at 02:15:000, thanks ^^
A funny song
Nice map and good luck
Star~

1. light color BG + light color circle + KIAI is really mad, especially in [Non-Stop].
2. did you changed offset after setting the green lines? then you should do the same to the greenlines imo.
3. copy and paste too much just makes a map not that fun
4. find the volume varies around x0s. maybe you can make them like 70,80,90 in notepad. like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:34:89 (T) - add a circle?
2. try to end this diff like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:14:185 (4) - remove finish and add clap
2. 01:20:054 (5,6) - replace them with 2 sliders that 1/8 beat long.
3. end this diff like what I said in [Beginner?], that depend on your choice

1. 00:02:609 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - try to remap this part and then make HP drain +1
2. 00:29:837 (5) - finish and no whistle
3. this diff is technically well made :3

Kecco wrote:

•Non-stop•
Since in the first part the player loses about half HP Bar, I prefer to make the first hitcircles alwasy new combo :
00:03:913 (2) - New combo.
00:06:522 (2) - ^
00:09:131 (2) - ^

To solve this problem without putting new combo I suggest to place between the notes a pause...

Good map
Star

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. light color BG + light color circle + KIAI is really mad, especially in [Non-Stop]. It's just that light colors just match this song, I can't think on any other BG, nor darker colors <_<
2. did you changed offset after setting the green lines? then you should do the same to the greenlines imo.Done
3. copy and paste too much just makes a map not that fun ... I know, I'm sorry
4. find the volume varies around x0s. maybe you can make them like 70,80,90 in notepad. like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

<_< how do I do that?

[Beginner]:

1. 00:34:89 (T) - add a circle? =/
2. try to end this diff like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

I think that a 2000 spinner is way too hard for an Easy Diff =S, so I started that spinner earlier.

[Normal]:

1. 00:14:185 (4) - remove finish and add clap Done
2. 01:20:054 (5,6) - replace them with 2 sliders that 1/8 beat long. Done
3. end this diff like what I said in [Beginner?], that depend on your choice I like this one as it is =/, thanks ^^

[Non-Stop]:

1. 00:02:609 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - try to remap this part and then make HP drain +1 Done
2. 00:29:837 (5) - finish and no whistle Done
3. this diff is technically well made :3 Meaning that it's not fun D=, well, at least it's well made...

Sweet song have my star XD

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Ok.

[Beginner]
00:07:826 (1,2) - Replace this two with a slider, which starts at 00:07:826, repeats at 00:08:968 and finish at 00:10:109. Thanks, but I like it as it is ^^
01:07:826 (1,2) - A grid to the left. =S It's distance snapped alredy
01:56:087 (2) - ^. Thanks
02:06:522 (2) - ^. Done
02:12:595 - You don't need this break time. I don't D:?
02:31:304 (1) - Let the slider repeats here. I think it sounds nice, but thanks
02:49:565 (1) - ^. ^

[Normal]
00:17:445 (5) - Offscreen. Fix'd
01:53:478 (4) - The repeat in this slider is hidden, it could be a problem, just to advice. =/ I know, but the slider can be seen since 01:53:315, I think that's enough time to react, but if someone else points this, I'll change it
02:03:913 (4) - ^. ^

[Non-Stop]
01:00:978 (4,5) - Offscreen.Fix'd
02:03:587 (3) - ^.Fix'd

that's all! how cutie song <3

dksslqj wrote:

[Beginner]
fine

[Normal]
01:21:685 - add note I don't know how you convinced me of that <_<.... Done
01:26:902 - △ Done

[Non-Stop]
fine

good map

TheVileOne wrote:

Beginner

00:14:348 (4) - This slider seems to follow the vocals more than anything and the vocal note starts on the previous red tick Yes and no. I'm using the vocals as a following point in this difficulty, but I'm not following them strictly. That being the case, I would not put a 1/2 slider in this song as it's meant to be for beginners.
00:19:565 (4) - ^ Same ^ Same
00:46:957 (1) - This slider is lopsided. even out the move points like in the screenshot and then rotate counterclockwise until the bottom points are on the same plane, then shift right until the note is centered in between the arch. Fix'd, I guess, I did not understood completely what you said <_<

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8907

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are off sync. Move 1 here 01:00:489 - Move 2 where 1 was. Move 3 here 01:01:468 - and 4 where where 3 was. Make sure you distance snap the notes to make up for the change. Again, I'm not using 1/2 notes on a beginner diff.

01:24:783 (4) - again with the odd vocal note. Same^

01:30:000 (4) - ^ Same ^Same

02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad use of vocal notes. Use the similar beat underneath them instead. I was not even using the vocal notes there D:


03:06:522 (4) - Again start on the red tick. Explained above

Normal

00:31:794 (2) - This does not match that vocal if that was your idea. There is a sound more fitting to it on the previous white tick.Either move it back to that point or change this note. It doesn't belong here. Not done =/

00:38:968 (2) - Distance snap this at 0.8 and shift 00:39:131 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - all of these over by 1, because the current angle looks awful.You don't want to piss off hatsune miku fans. Fix'd

01:48:750 (3) - This note doesn't seem to belong here. It sounds like it's a place for a slider, but instead there's this oddly placed note. It follows the same structure as 00:31:304 (1,2,3,4)

NonStop

01:04:402 (3) - Move this down 1 unit Not done

01:04:891 (6) - Move this left 1 unit Not done

01:32:546 - Add a note? Are you sure you gave me the correct time? I cannot find a grid wich has thatn time. It's 1.32.527 (the 1/4th blue line closer to ir) and 1.32.568 (the 1/8 th yellow line closer to it)

01:33:673 - Add a note? Same as above

01:37:753 - Add a note? Same as above

01:38:886 - Add a note? Not done

01:58:370 (3) - I'm not comfortable with this note so far off the grid. Well, it's visible while playing, so it should not be a mayor problem, I may fix it if someone else points that out too.

02:19:810 - Add a note? Not done =/

Krisom wrote:

dksslqj wrote:

[Beginner]
fine

[Normal]
01:21:685 - add note I don't know how you convinced me of that <_<.... Done
01:26:902 - △ Done

[Non-Stop]
fine

good map

Thanks ^^!

TheVileOne wrote:

Beginner

00:14:348 (4) - This slider seems to follow the vocals more than anything and the vocal note starts on the previous red tick Yes and no. I'm using the vocals as a following point in this difficulty, but I'm not following them strictly. That being the case, I would not put a 1/2 slider in this song as it's meant to be for beginners.
00:19:565 (4) - ^ Same ^ Same
00:46:957 (1) - This slider is lopsided. even out the move points like in the screenshot and then rotate counterclockwise until the bottom points are on the same plane, then shift right until the note is centered in between the arch. Fix'd, I guess, I did not understood completely what you said <_<

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8907

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are off sync. Move 1 here 01:00:489 - Move 2 where 1 was. Move 3 here 01:01:468 - and 4 where where 3 was. Make sure you distance snap the notes to make up for the change. Again, I'm not using 1/2 notes on a beginner diff.

01:24:783 (4) - again with the odd vocal note. Same^

01:30:000 (4) - ^ Same ^Same

02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad use of vocal notes. Use the similar beat underneath them instead. I was not even using the vocal notes there D:


03:06:522 (4) - Again start on the red tick. Explained above

Normal

00:31:794 (2) - This does not match that vocal if that was your idea. There is a sound more fitting to it on the previous white tick.Either move it back to that point or change this note. It doesn't belong here. Not done =/

00:38:968 (2) - Distance snap this at 0.8 and shift 00:39:131 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2) - all of these over by 1, because the current angle looks awful.You don't want to piss off hatsune miku fans. Fix'd

01:48:750 (3) - This note doesn't seem to belong here. It sounds like it's a place for a slider, but instead there's this oddly placed note. It follows the same structure as 00:31:304 (1,2,3,4)

NonStop

01:04:402 (3) - Move this down 1 unit Not done

01:04:891 (6) - Move this left 1 unit Not done

01:32:546 - Add a note? Are you sure you gave me the correct time? I cannot find a grid wich has thatn time. It's 1.32.527 (the 1/4th blue line closer to ir) and 1.32.568 (the 1/8 th yellow line closer to it)

01:33:673 - Add a note? Same as above

01:37:753 - Add a note? Same as above

01:38:886 - Add a note? Not done

01:58:370 (3) - I'm not comfortable with this note so far off the grid. Well, it's visible while playing, so it should not be a mayor problem, I may fix it if someone else points that out too.

02:19:810 - Add a note? Not done =/

Thank you

Beginner:

00:05:544 (2,4) - If you're aiming for a beginner diff, delete these two notes.
00:05:870 (2) - Clap this if you consider ^
00:10:761 (2,5,2) - Delete these notes... ( for the same reason as the previous one )
00:15:978 (2,5,2) - ^
00:34:239 (2,5) - ^
00:39:457 (2,4,6) - ^
01:03:913 (4,2) - ^
01:14:348 (4,2) - ^
01:22:500 (4,2) - ^
01:22:500 (4,2) - ^
01:26:413 (2,5) - ^
01:44:674 (2,4,6) - ^
01:49:891 (2,4) - ^
01:51:196 (5) - If you consider ^, move this 1 beat back.
02:11:413 (2,4) - Delete.
02:16:957 (4,2) - ^
02:27:391 (4,2) - ^
02:35:218 (3,2) - ^
02:44:022 (1) - ^
02:44:348 (2) - Add new combo here if you consider ^
02:45:652 (5) - Delete.
03:02:935 (2,5,2) - ^
03:08:152 (2,5,2) - ^

Normal:

01:53:478 (4) - You're overlapping it with (2), move it to another place.
02:03:913 (4) - ^

Fuuko wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

Beginner:

00:05:544 (2,4) - If you're aiming for a beginner diff, delete these two notes.

Done
00:05:870 (2) - Clap this if you consider ^ Done
00:10:761 (2,5,2) - Delete these notes... ( for the same reason as the previous one ) Partially done
00:15:978 (2,5,2) - ^ Partially done
00:34:239 (2,5) - ^ Not Done
00:39:457 (2,4,6) - ^ Partially done
01:03:913 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
01:14:348 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
01:22:500 (4,2) - ^ Partially done
01:26:413 (2,5) - ^ Partially done
01:44:674 (2,4,6) - ^ Partially done
01:49:891 (2,4) - ^ Partially done
01:51:196 (5) - If you consider ^, move this 1 beat back. Partially done
02:11:413 (2,4) - Delete. Not Done
02:16:957 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
02:27:391 (4,2) - ^ Not Done
02:35:218 (3,2) - ^ Not Done
02:44:022 (1) - ^ Not Done
02:45:652 (5) - Delete. Not Done
03:02:935 (2,5,2) - ^ Partially done
03:08:152 (2,5,2) - ^ Partially done

Normal:

01:53:478 (4) - You're overlapping it with (2), move it to another place. Done
02:03:913 (4) - ^ Done

KIA wrote:

[Beginner]
nice
nazi:
00:46:957 (1) - make this slider symmetrical I have a hard time making symmetrical sliders =_=. It should be better now.
01:18:261 (1) - ^
01:52:174 (1) - ^
02:02:609 (1) - ^
just make first and copy paste to others XD Done XD!

[Normal]
00:36:848 - add note or make 1/2 slider here Slider =3
00:38:152 - ^ Done
00:49:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is this fit the song? I think it does D: Well, fix'd anyway
01:43:370 - add note or 1/2 slider Note
01:48:587 - ^ Note
02:33:261 - add note!!! Huh? But it follows the lyrics
02:51:359 (1) - make this as 1/2 slider Done

D: It seems like you taunt people with non rhythmic beats/missed beats.
Sry, but I can't clearly read this diff even in 3rd and 4th times. =_= Now the Normal diff is 3.76 stars D:! Fix'd =D

[Non-stop]
niiiice

Star!

P.S. nyan-nyan nyan-nyan nyanyanyanyanya pu pu pu pu pu :33333333333
nyan-nyan nyan-nyan nyanyanyanyanya pu pu pu pu pu >w<

• • 03:10:435 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these circles. Also, start this spinner 03:11:739 (1) here 03:10:435 and end it here 03:12:718

• • 01:11:413 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:12:065 (x) - ^
  • 02:24:457 (x) - ^
  • 02:25:109 (x) - ^
  • 02:42:718 (x) - ^
  • 02:43:370 (x) - ^

• • HP Drain Rate: 7
  • 01:11:902 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:12:065

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Beginner]

• • 03:10:435 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these circles. Also, start this spinner 03:11:739 (1) here 03:10:435 and end it here 03:12:718Done

[Normal]

• • 01:11:413 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:12:065 (x) - ^
  • 02:24:457 (x) - ^
  • 02:25:109 (x) - ^
  • 02:42:718 (x) - ^
  • 02:43:370 (x) - ^
  Not Done

[Non-Stop]

• • HP Drain Rate: 7 Done
  • 01:11:902 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:12:065Done(And their smilars)

Shulin wrote:

Easy:

01:00:652 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing rhythm. ~ Consider break/spinner here. =S Not done
01:01:304 (x) - Note. (Following later pattern) =/
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing rhythm. ~ Consider break/spinner here. =/

Normal:

-- Overall Difficulty +1 or +2 Done

00:08:478 (x) - Note. Not done
00:09:783 (x) - ^
00:33:098 (4) - Remove clap from start. (Add to end?) Done
00:55:924 (x) - Note Not done, changed the pattern anyway
01:11:413 (9,10) - Rhythm is confusing here imo (it's not really following anything...) Maybe delete this and have a small break? =_= nice catch, I knew I was doing something wrong when I ran trugh xxheroxx's mod, I did not notice that I had saved his changes on normal, though....
02:06:359 (x) - Note Not done, changed the pattern
03:11:250 (x) - ^ Not done

Low overall difficulty made it confusing to play at times. Yeah, but everytime I change this diff, it starts looking more and more like a Hard :/

Non-Stop:

02:00:815 (3,4,5) - Ugly overlap with the previous slider, moving it away would make it look nicer ^_^ True
02:25:761 (x) - Add note. Not done =/
02:49:239 (1,1,1) - Not symmetrical. I'll try to fix this -_-
03:06:359 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical, it's really noticeable in game. I suppose I'm not good a creating pretty sliders, but I think I did my best at fixing this...

STAR

Shinxyn wrote:

Hey, I remember this song from Diva Project Yeah! I played that in a friend's psp and I was like "I has to map this o_o"

mmm, I would prefer maybe .5 or 1s lead in time .5 lead in time added
Add "caution" to tags? Since it seems like the alternate name to this song... and maybe add the jap name too (add "kin ni gochuui"?) Right ^^! Silly me...

Beginner-
02:11:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - I found this part quite... uncomfortable to play, just cuz vocal is in the way... it would sound right on 1/2, but then would probably feel worse... D: cover up with slider? XD (using 1/2, following vocal) I think I'm just unable to part with that :'(...
03:06:522 (3) - stick with the whistle hitsounds... replace that clap at the end with whistle please Done
03:10:435 (1) - have the ending at lower volume? Done
Quite Fair, the pace changes a bit after 1min, but still Easy

Normal-
00:31:794 (2,4) - why don't these start this on 1/1 (the vocal), mainly cuz I was expecting it to partially follow vocal (like before the break( I don't know, but I changed it anyway <_<
00:38:152 (5,1) - mmm, make this sound like 00:36:848 (2,3)? (remove clap from end of 5, and add to 1... then remove new combo from 1 and add two next note?) Done
00:51:522 (3) - I was expecting to hear this (the clap-finish) again somewhere... but didn't... remove? or add somewhere else in map? Added at 02:00:326. Thanks
02:49:565 (2,4) - clap on 2 and start of 4... then finish on end of 4? Done
03:12:718 (1) - make this note quieter please~ Done
Not bad, though it shifts to music in some odd times (those 1/2 sliders with finish hitsounds), but it plays fine

Non-Stop- Yay, no breaks, I mean, who needs em? Not us B)
01:17:446 (11) - ? why the whistle...? Dunno, as miku sings a high note I though a whistle would fit there <_<... ...removed
02:44:348 (4) - clap at end of this slider? (just to keep the claps going) Ok
03:12:718 (1) - same as other two diffs :< I just want to blow you minds ears... ...done
ehhh why silence the spinner ends? D: D: ..it sound better that way?
Pretty good, too bad its 184bpm ;-;

Not bad of a mapset... sliders could look better though.... no big deal
Why isn't is "MikuMiku"... (capital second M)? Oh well... Because the second "miku" is not as important as the first miku (?)

Eirene wrote:

mikumiku *.*
why always miku ? *.*
next time, map luka instead, please :3
Next time I'm planning to map gumi. Both luka & miku get too much attention. Anyway, that's the next time I'm mapping a vocaloid song, I'm not planning to map vocaloid next time

[Non-Stop & Beginner] :
nothing to say

[Normal] :
00:56:739 (6) - remove clap Not done
01:17:935 (1,3) - clap ? Right, done (also changed his similar at 02:30:978 and at 02:49:239 )


sorry for the delay, star :3
Thank you ^^!

DJPop wrote:

Almost of sliders look a bit weird... I'm just not good a creating beautiful stuff

~Beginner~
...Did all those changes. I'm just not sure how pretty they may look now :'(

~Normal~
Fine.

~Non-Stop~
00:19:402 (5) - make it more symmetry Done (and it's similar)
00:24:620 (5) - ^ =/ I feel that this one does not need fixing, Anyway, if someone else points it out, I will
00:29:837 (5) - ^ ^
00:33:424 (1,2) - try making more smoothly Done
01:19:076 (5) - move 1/2 right Somehow, I feel that both positions are allright. =/ I suppose I'll change this
01:24:620 (5) - make it more symmetry
01:29:837 (5) - ^ Both done
01:40:272 (5) - looks weird I think it should look better now
02:50:381 (2) - move 1/2 right Same as his similar

Thank you for your mod ^^!

+Star

adron zhero wrote:

Lets begin...
[*]You can change
[>>]You need to change

Non-stop
>>55:598 This patter is very confusing, and is very anoying. It's following the lyrics, and the spacing is confusing, but yeah, that's the point.

Well, good map.(I HATE HATSUNE MIKO GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!)

DaRRi MIx wrote:

Suggestions only



Beginner
Sorry, I did not apply any of those suggestions :'(


Normal

nice

Non-Stop

00:41:250 - circle Done (and it's similar)
02:14:674 (8) - make this a 1/1 long slider end on 02:15:000 and move this to the right side of the previous sliderDone too)

LKs wrote:

Beginner

[02:33:750] why not kiai this section?
So that there is a fountain at 02:33:913.

Normal

[01:09:131] Ugly, try other shape? True, thanks

Non-Stop

[00:46:957] ~ [00:51:359] can you do here part a Flip Horizontally ? for better play feeling Ok ^^, there are a new type of sliders.

good map , star

strager wrote:

Skin
The hit circle has a black fuzzy border around the white due to interpolation. Fix it. It's ugly. A black fuzzy border? You mean the hitcircle or the hitcircleoverlay?

Easy
Saw play time and raged. It's bettet than mapping it halfway

Played a bit and it looks okay for a harder Easy.

Normal
Only played half of it; too long and boring. x_x Again, it's better than mapping it only halfway. Why is it boring?

Overlaps used here are lame. Wich ones?

Non-Stop
11m? Seriously? Can't do much about it. Reducing the OD makes it fell weird, and reducing the HPDrain rate makes it too easy. Increasing the hitcircle size makes it look ugly :/

Rename to Insane, maybe? I don't think so, the point of this difficulty is not having breaks, and I would not consider it an insane (nor a hard <_<)

Nothing wrong with it other than the score being too high, IMO.

I'll star anyway because shitties love ranking easy 11m maps. Well, not every map has to be streamstreamstreamstreamjumpjumpjumpstreamstreamstreamjumpstream

CracK wrote:

Non-Stop:
...

Other diffs seem to be fine
As you see these are just minor mistakes, good map. Star ☆

Dusty wrote:

3:12 of a bubbly Miku song D: It wont be the last you see from her! MWAHAHAHAHA!

[Beginner]
OK :D if a little boxish and repetitive D:

[Normal]
The sliderwhistles got annoying after a while, the rest is fine though. I like how they sound in this diff, but looks like most ppl don't, sooo I suppose I'll just remove 'em <_<>_>

[Nonstop]
Well, why don't you add breaks and rename it Hard or Insane? o_o; D: I like this! (I hope BATs do too, though...)
the map is fine, though. :D

*

arken1015 wrote:

[General]
As I know, 'Hayaya-P' is NOT source but artist, why don't you move this on Tag? ([Suggestion] Also, you can make artist as 'Hayaya-P feat. Hatsune Miku) Until now, I've had my doubts on "wich should the source, artist and tags" be, I'll just follow what "Yes" didi with "Nekomimi Switch" and "Shinxyn" did with "Umarote Lovers", as I think the artist is a better source than "Vocaloid" or the disc the song comes into.

[Beginner]
00:41:739 (1) - [Suggestion] How about move a little right to move 2nd tick on center line? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10300 Done, Oh, and you recived a message from youngdow <_<
02:02:609 (1) - Same as 00:41:739 (1) but left.
02:19:239 (4) - [Suggestion] How about align with 02:18:587 (3)? Right
02:29:674 (4) - ^ but 02:29:022 (3) ^

[Normal]
00:51:522 (3) - [Suggestion] How about stack on 00:49:891 (1) without moving timing ;_;? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10301 <orz =/
02:52:500 (2,3) - [Suggestion] Worried about being covered with slider ;_; Done

[Non-Stop]
Renaming to [Insane] seems good imo ;_; I will under the request of a BAT, I really don't want to change the name being the intresting thing 'bout this one the fact that it does not has breaks
00:03:913 (2) - [Suggestion] How about align with 00:02:609 (1)? You make my life harder <_<... ...thanks, done XD!
01:09:620 (9) - Err? Perfectly stack on 01:09:457 (8) plz ;_; ^^ Thanks
02:08:804 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down? (Grid level = 3) It won't be distance snapped... ...I did it anyways, I mean, it's just a grid for the sake of symmetry <_<
02:49:891 (1) - How about move 1 grid left? (Grid level = 3) It true that it's not pretty like that, I don't want to move it, though... I changed the previous pattern to make it look better.
03:04:565 (3,4) - Make symmetric plz ;_; it, it isn't alredy <_<? I suppose I moved 'em just one hair to the left, bu I don't see much changes...
03:06:359 (5) - ^ I can't sense any un-symmetry here <_<, sorry
03:09:782 (3,4) - ^ For the sake of distance snapping, I'm leaving this like that



Seems good song :3
Anyway, good luck.

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply... Why not? I won't give you kudosu if you ask me to, but I really want to know why would I not give you kudosu, you gave me some usefull suggestions.

animask wrote:

Beginner

01:16:957 (5) - Whistle slide doesn't fit here Yeah, but removing the sliderwhistle wihout taking the whistles from the beginning and the end makes it feel empty, so i won't remove this, Thanks ^^!
02:37:826 (5) - ^


Nothing much wrong here~

Krisom wrote:

arken1015 wrote:

[General]
As I know, 'Hayaya-P' is NOT source but artist, why don't you move this on Tag? ([Suggestion] Also, you can make artist as 'Hayaya-P feat. Hatsune Miku) Until now, I've had my doubts on "wich should the source, artist and tags" be, I'll just follow what "Yes" didi with "Nekomimi Switch" and "Shinxyn" did with "Umarote Lovers", as I think the artist is a better source than "Vocaloid" or the disc the song comes into.

[Beginner]
00:41:739 (1) - [Suggestion] How about move a little right to move 2nd tick on center line? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10300 Done, Oh, and you recived a message from youngdow <_<
02:02:609 (1) - Same as 00:41:739 (1) but left.
02:19:239 (4) - [Suggestion] How about align with 02:18:587 (3)? Right
02:29:674 (4) - ^ but 02:29:022 (3) ^

[Normal]
00:51:522 (3) - [Suggestion] How about stack on 00:49:891 (1) without moving timing ;_;? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10301 <orz =/
02:52:500 (2,3) - [Suggestion] Worried about being covered with slider ;_; Done

[Non-Stop]
Renaming to [Insane] seems good imo ;_; I will under the request of a BAT, I really don't want to change the name being the intresting thing 'bout this one the fact that it does not has breaks
00:03:913 (2) - [Suggestion] How about align with 00:02:609 (1)? You make my life harder <_<... ...thanks, done XD!
01:09:620 (9) - Err? Perfectly stack on 01:09:457 (8) plz ;_; ^^ Thanks
02:08:804 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down? (Grid level = 3) It won't be distance snapped... ...I did it anyways, I mean, it's just a grid for the sake of symmetry <_<
02:49:891 (1) - How about move 1 grid left? (Grid level = 3) It true that it's not pretty like that, I don't want to move it, though... I changed the previous pattern to make it look better.
03:04:565 (3,4) - Make symmetric plz ;_; it, it isn't alredy <_<? I suppose I moved 'em just one hair to the left, bu I don't see much changes...
03:06:359 (5) - ^ I can't sense any un-symmetry here <_<, sorry
03:09:782 (3,4) - ^ For the sake of distance snapping, I'm leaving this like that



Seems good song :3
Anyway, good luck.

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply... Why not? I won't give you kudosu if you ask me to, but I really want to know why would I not give you kudosu, you gave me some usefull suggestions.

1. Tags are slightly different on each difficulty, which can bring problems to the tagging... make them the same?
2. IMO "Sad" and "Worst" must be changed to something else; they don't quite fit. Maybe "Bad" and "Worse"?
3. I think you must add an approach circle (even if it's the default one)...
4. Personally, I'd like to hear more finish hitsounds.

1. The OD change from [Easy] is not much; it would be better if you raised the OD by one (IMO).

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. Tags are slightly different on each difficulty, which can bring problems to the tagging... make them the same? Thanks for noticing that <_<
2. IMO "Sad" and "Worst" must be changed to something else; they don't quite fit. Maybe "Bad" and "Worse"? Well, i did not made the skin, I borrowed it, but It mimmics "Project Diva's" combobursts
3. I think you must add an approach circle (even if it's the default one)... I suppose that's better :3
4. Personally, I'd like to hear more finish hitsounds. I don't know where more finishes may fit, sorry, I'm not a fan of the finish hitsound D:

[Normal]

1. The OD change from [Easy] is not much; it would be better if you raised the OD by one (IMO).

I kept it D:, sorry.

[Non-stop]

02:39:620 (5,7) - These sliders can be done better, they're ugly (no offense). Dont worry, they are ugly, fix'd
02:49:239 (1,1,1) - Are the new combos necessary? Ummm <_<>_>, yes ((Maybe?))

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Nice.

Dusty wrote:

mm. :<