DJ YOSHITAKA feat. G.S.C. license - NIJIIRO · forum

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-18T19:43:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, May 24, 2010 at 1:22:02 PM

Artist: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. G.S.C. license
Title: NIJIIRO
Source: Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA 2
Tags: DiamondCrash Alace
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3998kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Alazy (4.86 stars, 326 notes)
DC's Normal+ (4.35 stars, 112 notes)
Easy (2.92 stars, 88 notes)
Hard (4.97 stars, 241 notes)

Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. G.S.C. license - NIJIIRO
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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thank you ztrot

Last edited by ouranhshc 2010-05-24T18:23:04+00:00, edited 36 times in total.

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-04-18T22:11:40+00:00

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[Easy+] Just call it Normal, Easy+, Normal+, Hard-... all those are silly if u ask me, or come up with your own difficulty names
01:18:012 (3,1,2,3) - Confusing for newbies, if you want this Easy to be good enough for newbies, maybe you should redesign this in a different way, for example instead of cluttering the repetitive sliders try spacing them out more?, or maybe extend the sliders instead of making them repeat?, or you could als just use hit circles.
01:26:262 (1) - And this is the screw you over of this, regardless if it's an easy or not, you cant see this slider correctly due to combo bursts and sliders dissapearing making it unrankable. You could instead delete 01:24:762 (1,2,1) - and use a spinner instead
Overall: try to not clutter your sliders too much and can pass as an easy

[Hard]
Looks fine, but 01:23:262 (1) - Bothers me, not sure if it counts as combo burst hiding slider repeat considering it's pretty much visible with that combo burst

That's about it, feel free to ask me for remod when u fix the stuff, Good Luck!~

simplistiC

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simplistiC 2010-04-19T02:29:15+00:00

Offset: 766

[Hard]
00:20:262 (x) - I really think you should start on this tick instead of on a red tick.
00:26:262 (x) - ^ (And other similar areas. This is just a suggestion and I think it would play better IMO)
01:27:762 (1) - Just a suggestion. Make note a spinner and have it end at 01:29:266

[Easy]
01:26:262 (1) - Take off 1 or 2 repeats and make a spinner just like Hard.

Tatsuo

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Tatsuo 2010-04-21T01:04:45+00:00

I'll just leave this here...

Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. G.S.C. license - Nijiiro (ouranhshc) [Tatsuo's Trance].osu

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-22T01:39:59+00:00

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:
I'll just leave this here...

im not really liking this diff

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-04-22T01:44:18+00:00

Holy shit, about time someone mapped this. This is actualy the first song I ever made for taiko O_o. Of corse it's shit, made like 6 months ago.
Good luck with this.
Star

Alace

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Alace 2010-04-22T15:59:23+00:00

finish

Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. G.S.C. license - Nijiiro (ouranhshc) [Alazy].osu

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-04-22T16:15:24+00:00

i like sensei's diffi

f0012979

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f0012979 2010-04-22T16:26:05+00:00

Star

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-04-23T03:33:39+00:00

Yey ヾ(´￢｀)ﾉ

Wojjan

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Wojjan 2010-04-24T23:30:33+00:00

Modded DC's normal in IRC. Can't say I like the other diffs, so no star for you.

Sallad4ever

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Sallad4ever 2010-04-25T10:31:47+00:00

Nice song too bad it's short
I can't find anything major

[General]
- No hit0 ?
- Because of the BG combo color 3 and 4 can be similar especially when in the upper part of it

[Easy]
Fun

[DC's Normal]
00:40:512 ~ 00:45:387 why empty? seriously you should map it

[Alazy]
The jumps are wow
- Add a 1 or1.5 sc lead in
- lower hit circle size by 1 tick, this will strangely increase the star rating but it'll be more fun ( I assume this is insane diff )

[Hard]
00:38:828 (6) - new lyric so, NC then remove NC on 00:39:016 (1)

Wow great map Hard and Alazy is my fave diff here
Good luck n have a Double Star~

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-04-25T22:57:22+00:00

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[Easy]
00:31:891 (4) - Out of bounds

[DC's Normal]
00:43:350 - Add a break?

[Alazy]
Fine

[Hard]
Fine

Ok, very few issues that can easily be solved +Star

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-04-26T02:11:06+00:00

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me

Let's go!!

~Easy~
00:22:516 (5,6) - I don't think newbies would like so much those 1/2's... and you have a lot around the map :/.
00:37:516 (1,2) - ^. Delete one repeat of (1)?
00:48:016 (5,1) - ^. Delete one repeat of (5)?
01:12:016 (2,1) - ^. Maybe delete (1)?
01:13:516 (3,1) - ^. Maybe delete (1)?
01:16:516 (3,1) - ^. Maybe delete (1)?
01:18:016 (3,1,2) - Even worse... ;__;

~DC's Normal~
00:39:012 (6) - Make it 1/4 longer
01:15:949 (1) - Fix spacing,

~Alazy~
- Increase circle size ;___;

00:25:891 (4) - New Combo.

~Hard~
00:40:516 (4) - Flip Horizontally.
01:22:703 (6,7,8) - Could you move these away from the center? (7) makes the repeat arrow of 01:23:266 (1) be a bit hidden

Nice map!! Though I find Alazy harder than Hard, maybe because of the circle size...
*star*

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-04-26T16:13:38+00:00

[hard]
0:34:516 (5) spacing? (can be ignored)
0:36:016 (2) down 1 grid?

[Alazy]
~~0:34:703 (3) down 1 grid?~~

So pure >A<

[Normal]
1:08:262 (1) left 1 grid (symmetry)
~~Suggestion: It's already 4.2x stars, so why not add some notes and raise OA and HP drain to make it as a hard?~~

[Easy] Good

star~

alvisto

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alvisto 2010-04-26T17:12:51+00:00

Bad Egg Alace.

Star.

P.S. : The colour of the hitcircle blends with the BG for me. Very painful to see. xD

Lunah_old

Lunah_old 2010-04-26T22:02:45+00:00

Hi

Easy
It's fine ~

Normal
01:08:824 (3) - Fix spacing

Alazy
Hitsounds (?)
00:25:891 (4,5,6) - Don't like this confusing, seem a triple

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-26T23:10:36+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[hard]
0:34:516 (5) spacing? (can be ignored) no
0:36:016 (2) down 1 grid? no

[Alazy]
~~0:34:703 (3) down 1 grid?~~

So pure >A<

[Normal]
1:08:262 (1) left 1 grid (symmetry) fixed
~~Suggestion: It's already 4.2x stars, so why not add some notes and raise OA and HP drain to make it as a hard?~~

[Easy] Good

star~

Arusha Shuna

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Arusha Shuna 2010-04-27T09:41:45+00:00

Request Accepted

nothing to see here, i only found some spacing errors, but that's not important. None will care anyways :/

Great mapset!
STAR!!

Garven

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Garven 2010-04-27T11:42:55+00:00

[Easy]
01:11:266 (1) - I'd set this up like the rest of this section and make it a beat at the end of where the slider is now.
01:22:516 (2,3) - Line these up together

[DC's Normal]
All is fine, though it'd be nice to have a spinner somewhere to have some score variance.

[Alazy]
Almost zero hit sounds makes me D:. D: At least add claps in on the big drum hits in the song or something.
00:27:953 (1) - Move this beat to 00:27:859
01:18:391 (6,7,1) - Spacing

[Hard]
01:26:266 (1) - This was kind of an anti-climactic stack.

Shulin

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Shulin 2010-04-27T23:30:36+00:00

General:

-- I didn't get a hitcircle when I downloaded, was I supposed to get one?

Easy:

01:27:766 (1) - Silence.

DC's Normal:

-- Different offset to the others.
-- + 1 overall difficulty imo, doesn't affect star rating.
-- Add a spinner.

00:35:547 (3,4,5) - I thought this was somewhat awkward to play.
01:12:953 (1,2) - Clap. Following previous pattern.
01:27:016 (5) - The claps sound bad imo.

Alazy:

-- + 1 circle size. I didn't like the map with small circles, +1 and I thought it was really good

Hard:

-- I think you should map the beginning since this is supposed to be the hardest diff?

01:27:766 (1) - Silence the end.

Good, Hard was my favorite

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-28T01:56:38+00:00

Shulin wrote:
General:

-- I didn't get a hitcircle when I downloaded, was I supposed to get one?

Easy:

01:27:766 (1) - Silence.done

DC's Normal:

-- Different offset to the others.
-- + 1 overall difficulty imo, doesn't affect star rating.done
-- Add a spinner.

00:35:547 (3,4,5) - I thought this was somewhat awkward to play.ill let DC handle that
01:12:953 (1,2) - Clap. Following previous pattern. ^
01:27:016 (5) - The claps sound bad imo. ^

Alazy:

-- + 1 circle size. I didn't like the map with small circles, +1 and I thought it was really good done

Hard:

-- I think you should map the beginning since this is supposed to be the hardest diff? done

01:27:766 (1) - Silence the end. done

Good, Hard was my favorite

Last edited by ouranhshc 2010-04-28T02:59:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Alace

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Alace 2010-04-28T02:57:02+00:00

color setting XD
About hitsounds
i am trying my best to let it sound good
don`t ask me adding clap finish or blablabla

Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. G.S.C. license - Nijiiro (ouranhshc) [Alazy].osu

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-04-28T15:20:55+00:00

Howdy!

[General]
1) Source : Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA 2
2) Add "konami" and "ddr" in tags, since this game from konami
3) How about set the preview point at 00:45:391?

[Skin]
1) The hit0.png is missing
2) I think this skin from ztrot's skin, are u already to give permission to him?

[Easy]
00:24:297 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?

[DC's Normal]
00:40:797 (x) - You have to map this break

[Alazy]
How about rename this diff to Aliki's Hard, lol
00:30:766 (1,1,1,1) - This is a combo spammer, remove this new combo

Not bad
STAR

Alace

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Alace 2010-04-28T17:54:12+00:00

about my combo
No

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-28T21:04:13+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Howdy!

[General]
1) Source : Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA 2 done
2) Add "konami" and "ddr" in tags, since this game from konami nahi
3) How about set the preview point at 00:45:391?nah

[Skin]
1) The hit0.png is missingdone
2) I think this skin from ztrot's skin, are u already to give permission to him?i already got permission from ztrot.

[Easy]
00:24:297 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? no

[DC's Normal]
00:40:797 (x) - You have to map this break DC said no

[Alazy]
How about rename this diff to Aliki's Hard, lol
00:30:766 (1,1,1,1) - This is a combo spammer, remove this new combo

Not bad
STAR

Hikato

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Hikato 2010-04-28T21:33:54+00:00

[Easy]
00:57:391 (2) - Whistle.
01:20:828 (6) - 1/2 forward shorten to end at same point.

[DC's Normal]
00:33:203 (3) - hm should the be on the next blue or is it me?
00:38:828 (1) - New combo
00:40:891 (x) - Beat
00:41:078 (x) - Slider
00:41:641 (x) - Spinner: 00:42:766 - end here.
01:12:953 (1,2) - Claps?

[Alazy]
00:54:766 (7) - Move away from 5 a little.

[Hard]
01:26:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - orz.

Only a quick look.

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-04-28T21:43:21+00:00

Hikato wrote:
[DC's Normal]
00:33:203 (3) - hm should the be on the next blue or is it me? Just you.
00:38:828 (1) - New combo Yeah.
00:40:891 (x) - Beat
00:41:078 (x) - Slider Done something.
00:41:641 (x) - Spinner: 00:42:766 - end here. Lolno
01:12:953 (1,2) - Claps? OK.

Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. G.S.C. license - Nijiiro (ouranhshc) [DC's Normal].osu

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2010-04-29T08:05:15+00:00

~Easy~
01:06:766 (1) - remove new combo (optional)

~DC's Normal~
Fine.

~Alazy~
Fine.

~Hard~
Add more hitsounds on first part.
00:36:016 (3) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)

+Star

Gens

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Gens 2010-05-01T01:38:01+00:00

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dance_Danc ... _2_game%29

Something about the artist seemed fishy to me though I don't know :L
Also told you in IRC.

[DC's Normal]
Kind of hard for a normal in my opinion...

~ ~ ~

Well umm... that's all. Be sure to check out this.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-05-01T02:55:07+00:00

[Easy]:

00:37:516 (1) - add a back, maybe
00:45:016 (2,1) - two hidden note in [Easy]?
01:19:516 (2) - another hidden, consider to remove it and add a back to (1)?

[DC's Normal]:

fine to me

[Alazy]:

awesome XD

[Hard]:

this diff has a higher star rating than Alace's, but lower score. Although star rating is foolish but I've no idea weather this matter or not.
00:06:766 (T) - a note here?

my queue is for maps have less than 15+SP

Although I can still mod your map, but I can't do much help :3

anyway, I hope this post can really help your map.

star~

Sekuyi

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Sekuyi 2010-05-02T13:29:11+00:00

As for easy, DC's normal and Hard I can't find a thing :s

[Alazy] - love this diff!
- 00:37:328 to 00:38:266 ~ spacing

All maps are already pretty good!

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2010-05-09T22:06:11+00:00

Yo

Blue = Design/Minor issues. You do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = Moderate issues. It would be best if you change these.
Red = Major issues. You need to change these

Timing looks good
Maybe "DC" should go in the tags too?

[EASY]

Looks good

[DC'S NORMAL]

Pretty hard for a Normal, but it isn't too bad, and its fun, so I can't argue.

[ALAZY]

Seems fine. Im not keen on the patterns like the ones at 00:45:766 (1,2,3,4). the other odd spacing patterns that you used worked fine enough, but those ones didn't make much sense to me. Theres nothing I haven't seen before in ranked maps, so I guess I can let it slide.

[HARD]

Very nice

Nice, fun map. Can't go wrong with that

Starred

Sleep Powder

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Sleep Powder 2010-05-21T02:06:53+00:00

Alazy

00:25:891 (4,5,6) - Could be confused with a triple ( plus the spacing doesn't seem to be like that anywhere else but there)

Could also use more hitsounds

Starr'd

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-05-22T05:02:55+00:00

General:
- Kiai Time from 00:45:766 to:

01:09:016 for Easy
01:08:828 for DC's Normal
01:09:766 for Alazy
01:08:828 for Hard

Rename DC's Normal to DC's Normal+.

I don't like how Alazy's Difficulty rating is lower than Hard's, despite the Max Score being higher. Do something about this.

Gens

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Gens 2010-05-24T18:27:14+00:00

Bubbs.

Larto

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Larto 2010-05-24T21:55:37+00:00

Rubs.

Cyril Scarlet