StarForYou wrote:

God map
Star~
Always draw my water

[Easy]
00:53:518 (1,2) - Why not http://puu.sh/gFkb1/12a29fd199.jpg You know this is a easy diff
01:06:669 (1,2) - ^
01:12:217 (4) - Suggest using 1/1 http://puu.sh/gFkeL/d68177acf3.jpg
01:16:532 (1,2,3) - Try try http://puu.sh/gFkio/3f2fda4454.jpg

[Normal]
SV seems .. too low .-.
00:06:669 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - So strange and extremely hard to follow the rhythm Try http://puu.sh/gFktx/417360e502.jpg I just changed it from last mod D:
00:34:820 Add a note pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehifghjiofghjfghfglhfjgiokhjdifophj added
00:38:107 ^added
01:18:998 (4,1) - Maybe change them to a slider because their da~~~~ sound is still continuing so thats why a note in 01:19:820 (1) -

Tried my best ;_;

Prophecy wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:943 - I think that it is so strange for that. I think there is no problem o3o
00:19:306 - Why not use 1/4 Slider instead of? nah becuase I am following vocal

[Assassination]
00:30:505 - Spinner Stop here instead. I think it is better to have time for recovery
00:45:299 - I don't suggest that 5 Notes in 1 Place = = ok :33

[Overall]
Awesome Map. Support with no star<3
Go for Rank~

WildOne94 wrote:

Hey there
Here from "Wild and Hyper's NM/M4M Queue [STD|CTB]" from your request.
As you also requested i will only do Hard and Assassination.

General
The colour of green in the combo colours seems weird as it does not contain and green in the background. Suggest something else like white, light pink or black.
You miss a bit of music at the end which would be nice to hear mapped. Imo the mapping does not end till the music is at an end >w<. Should end at 01:26:395 - .
Not too essential but custom hitsounds would go nicely with this beatmap.

Hard

00:03:382 (1) - i was thinking this could be a bit more of a creative first slider. Maybe some how like the tentacles owo? e.g.(this was taken in Assassination by mistake though) [/color]


00:09:957 (1) - blanket this into the previous slider 00:09:546 (4) - keep
00:11:601 (1) - to fix overlap ctrl + h this.(same with 00:12:423 (2) - so it has a nice pattern then) yea nice

(adjust (3) too so it looks like a triangle shape space between 00:12:423 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/gFpO9/0e96bde1b4.jpg)

00:14:888 (2,3) - bend the 2nd points of these sliders a bit more to make the curve a bit more noticeable (just a little) fixed
00:19:203 - this song maps from vocals to drums all the time. and you miss quite a noticeable drum sound here. try change to one of these sliders.
others mentioned this so, fixed

00:20:025 - ^
00:22:183 (2) - possible add note here between the 2 sliders nah the current one look fine
00:26:806 (1) - same as 00:14:888 - fixed
00:27:217 (2) - Extend point 2 down more and point 3 up more for more of a wave fixed
00:32:149 (1) - pull end back to white tick and add note where the end previously was current one match vocal
00:35:436 (1) - the anchor here does not really go with the vocal. a curve with one point in the middle only would be better keep .-.
00:40:984 (4) - Move to x:70 y:124 (but maybe reduce the distance of (4) and (5) so it's closer to (3) it will break the consistant
01:01:224 (4) - add circle note here but theres already a note .-.
01:04:512 (4) - ^
01:06:669 (1) - reduce slider by 1 tick and make into a reverse. Sounds better with vocal 1/2 is okay
01:15:196 (2) - add circle note (for more of a climax) same theres already a note .-.
01:18:724 (2,3) - it be nice if these were jumps
01:18:998 (3) - This would sound much better as a long slider. and you could also add symmetry along with 01:18:176 (1) -
01:19:820 (1) - add finish

Assassination

00:03:382 (1) - as in Hard
00:06:258 (3,4,5,6) - this stack seems a bit too much. try spread out instead it should be fine since it is the beginning of the music
00:10:573 (3) - This might be a tricky suggestion to arrange but it would look better if this had a reverse on it
00:21:464 (1,2) - same with the curves again. extend out a tinchy bit fixed
00:24:957 (4) - shorten slider to the white tick and add 2 circle notes on the next to ticks nice :33
00:27:217 (2) - for this slider you can remove point 3 and drag point 2 up too make it look smoother and go along more with the holded vocals (maybe move point 5 left a bit too to cover that anchor corner)
00:32:149 (1) - drag this sliders end back to the white tick on the timeline. sounds better (move 2, 3 back if you do and add a note at 00:33:176 -) this is following the vocal,so no change
00:32:149 (1,2) - possible blanket too?nop :/
00:38:416 - drum sound here. add note (i recommend a small stream)keep i think
00:42:217 (1) - reduce end to white tick and add a circle note at 00:42:628 - this is following vocal o3o
00:50:642 (2,3) - make (2) a copy of (3) cause they look different with the curves (i sure do notice good curves ) fixed a bit
00:54:649 - this sounds nicer here keep


01:04:717 (5) - add circle note here
01:14:888 - around here should have that long slider feel again. try change it up a bit


01:19:820 (1) - add finish

Well i hope this helped it's a great looking beatmap.
Any questions ask me in pm or leave a message in my inbox
Best of luck ouo/

Gaia wrote:

Kayano x Nagisa Best OTP!!

=w=

22:08 Gaia: OKOKOK
22:11 Chaoslitz: ?
22:11 Chaoslitz: lolol
22:11 Gaia: =w=
22:11 Gaia: how much time till u gtg?
22:11 Chaoslitz: half an hr
22:11 Gaia: orz
22:11 Chaoslitz: it should be enough?
22:11 Chaoslitz: nop? pwp
22:12 Gaia: ok
22:12 Gaia: lets see
22:12 Gaia: np me pls
22:12 Chaoslitz: :34
22:12 *Chaoslitz is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/610295 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron]
22:12 Gaia: gg why do i have to redl lol
22:12 Gaia: o3o
22:13 Chaoslitz: title o3o
22:13 Chaoslitz: METDATA =w=
22:13 Gaia: =3333=
22:13 Gaia: i swear if metadata dq's this
22:13 Gaia: ill kill myself
22:13 Gaia: jk
22:13 Gaia: but
22:13 Gaia: ;w;
22:13 Chaoslitz: nuuu ;w;
22:14 Chaoslitz: may be i ask other for a metadata check? >_>
22:14 Chaoslitz: idk ;w;
22:14 Gaia: nah no need
22:14 Gaia: yolooo
22:14 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651877 Sannen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa&Kayano&Karuma&Isogai&Maehara) - Seishun Satsubatsu-ron [Easy]]
22:14 Gaia: 00:11:601 (3) -
22:14 Chaoslitz: okok
22:14 Gaia: http://puu.sh/gJ4D3/9a562e3bc3.jpg
22:14 Gaia: ?
22:14 Gaia: 00:17:354 (4) - clap too?
22:15 Chaoslitz: ok~
22:15 Gaia: 00:17:354 (4) - you can end on 00:30:505 - if you want
22:15 Chaoslitz: ??
22:16 Chaoslitz: what is that
22:16 Gaia: oops
22:16 Gaia: spinner
22:16 Gaia: i meant
22:16 Gaia: 00:38:724 (1) - finish on the head and clap on end?
22:17 Gaia: 00:39:546 (2) - clap on end
22:17 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - ^
22:17 Chaoslitz: added :3
22:18 Gaia: 01:19:820 (3) - finish
22:18 Gaia: and thats it
22:18 Chaoslitz: ok~
22:19 Chaoslitz: normal?
22:19 Gaia: normal now
22:19 Gaia: 00:31:327 (1,1) - whats with the ncing here
22:19 Gaia: 00:36:669 (2) - this doesnt follow anything
22:19 Chaoslitz: since there is red tick?
22:19 Chaoslitz: or should i remove the NC
22:19 Gaia: remove nc
22:20 Gaia: and delete 00:36:669 (2) -
22:20 Chaoslitz: k
22:20 Gaia: also fix spacing after
22:21 Gaia: maybe this could work too http://puu.sh/gJ4X2/f94811fd4b.jpg
22:21 Gaia: 00:40:368 (3) - whistle on head too?
22:21 Chaoslitz: forget to add whistle lol
22:21 Gaia: lol
22:22 Chaoslitz: ah and for 00:36:669 deleted
22:22 Chaoslitz: fixed ds
22:22 Chaoslitz: btw
22:22 Gaia: 01:19:820 (1) - finish
22:22 Gaia: yeah?
22:22 Chaoslitz: 00:43:861 (1) -
22:22 Gaia: mhm?
22:22 Chaoslitz: suitable to end here?
22:22 Chaoslitz: the spinner
22:22 Gaia: well i was thinking earlier too
22:22 Chaoslitz: can i end it in blue tick
22:23 Gaia: i gues ssince theres a drum sound its ok
22:23 Chaoslitz: ok
22:23 Chaoslitz: the artist is too long that I cant see the diff name lol
22:24 Gaia: oh lol
22:24 Gaia: ok
22:24 Gaia: hard now
22:24 Chaoslitz: kk
22:24 Gaia: 00:19:614 (3,4) - dont let these 2 touch
22:24 Gaia: maybel ike this http://puu.sh/gJ56H/fe46b1ba8a.jpg
22:24 Gaia: 00:25:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - where are ur hitsounds ==
22:25 Gaia: add some claps there
22:25 Chaoslitz: okok ;w;
22:25 Gaia: 00:30:710 (1) - claps on all 3 of these too
22:25 Chaoslitz: ok
22:26 Gaia: 00:44:786 (4) - u forgot clap?
22:26 Gaia: 00:43:861 (1,2) - also dont overlap these either
22:27 Chaoslitz: ok owo
22:27 Gaia: and then just finish on 01:19:820 (1) -
22:27 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2913542
22:27 Chaoslitz: how about this?
22:28 Gaia: thats ok
22:28 Chaoslitz: ok
22:28 Gaia: insane
22:28 Gaia: 00:30:710 (1) - claps on all 3
22:28 Chaoslitz: is that i miss something?
22:28 Chaoslitz: hard
22:28 Chaoslitz: 01:05:025 (1) -
22:29 Chaoslitz: ah nothing
22:29 Chaoslitz: forget what i said ;w;w;w;w;w;w;w;
22:29 Gaia: lol
22:29 Gaia: 00:45:916 (6) - i dont remember
22:29 Chaoslitz: :<
22:29 Gaia: did i tell u to make this into reverse lol
22:29 Chaoslitz: ?
22:29 Chaoslitz: 00:45:916 (6) - ?
22:29 Gaia: yeah
22:29 Gaia: no reverse please
22:29 Gaia: no sound on white tick
22:30 Chaoslitz: ok
22:30 Gaia: 00:49:409 - maybe circle here
22:30 Chaoslitz: ok
22:30 Gaia: 01:19:820 (1) - and then finish!
22:30 Chaoslitz: and i stacked
22:31 Gaia: good
22:31 Chaoslitz: done~
22:31 Gaia: ok now update while i check ur hitsounds
22:31 Chaoslitz: ok xd
22:31 Chaoslitz: updated
22:32 Gaia: yay no problems
22:32 Chaoslitz: owo
22:32 Gaia: redl just incase
22:32 Chaoslitz: kay xd
22:32 Gaia: oh it only took 20 mins
22:32 Gaia: XDDDD
22:32 Chaoslitz: xD
22:32 Gaia: i am lazy bn
22:32 Gaia: ;wwww;
22:32 Chaoslitz: no D:
22:33 Gaia: oh is ur video offset right?
22:33 Chaoslitz: i tested before
22:33 Chaoslitz: lemme recheck
22:33 Gaia: oky
22:34 Chaoslitz: i think it is correct o3o
22:35 Gaia: hue
22:35 Gaia: okay
22:35 Gaia: it doesnt matter really
22:35 Gaia: but if u want to
22:35 Gaia: add nc on 00:31:327 (1) -
22:35 Gaia: normal
22:35 Chaoslitz: i just removed o3o
22:35 Chaoslitz: it is okay i think
22:36 Gaia: i mean
22:36 Gaia: its 1st combo
22:36 Gaia: but it doesnt have combo
22:36 Gaia: xd
22:36 Gaia: ok nvm lol
22:36 Gaia: you dont really have to LOL
22:36 Chaoslitz: >_>
22:36 Gaia: anyways
22:36 Gaia: anything else to change?
22:36 Chaoslitz: nothing ~_~
22:36 Gaia: oky

Fort wrote:

dat artist name o.o

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi there, metadata check as requested.

SPOILER

Reference: http://ansatsu-anime.com/discography/de ... id=1009321
Unicode Artist: ３年Ｅ組うた担（渚＆茅野＆業＆磯貝＆前原）
Romanised Artist: I can't find any sources about the romanised artist, so normal practice to romanise that would work. '3 Nen E Gumi Utatan (Nagisa & Kayano & Karuma & Isogai & Maehara)' sounds more reasonable to me. I will poke KSHR for that before any claims, please wait for a while. C:
Unicode Title: 青春サツバツ論
Romanised Title: Seishun Satsubatsuron (Also leave this to him.)

@KSHR: Here are the booklet images for your reference - http://imgur.com/RVQ9L9v,TpQ4FVr,LRZFXwq,yYL58SL,VfZEzmU,KTmuaAQ,ZBuH8J3,JbQ6WLM
My another two cents here:

DO IT :@

1. 00:05:231 (3,4) - ctrl+g? better flow
2. 00:05:642 (1,2) - 我覺得可以拆成兩個兩連打
3. 00:10:573 (3,4) - 這個距進有點近 可能誤讀成1/4

1. 00:07:902 (3,1) - 1/1 slider?

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

as request

[Assassination]

1. 00:05:231 (3,4) - ctrl+g? better flow
2. 00:05:642 (1,2) - 我覺得可以拆成兩個兩連打 prefer slider o3o
3. 00:10:573 (3,4) - 這個距進有點近 可能誤讀成1/4

[Normal]

1. 00:07:902 (3,1) - 1/1 slider?

call me back

Lanturn wrote:

On easy: 00:25:573 (1) - ouch that DS. >_<

Lanturn wrote:

On easy: 00:25:573 (1) - ouch that DS. >_<

Lanturn wrote:

On easy: 00:25:573 (1) - ouch that DS. >_<

Prophecy wrote:

yay :3

CPLs wrote:

why not put the jap. title in source? or at least on tags (well I know people won't search the jap. name anyway lol)

Frim4503 wrote:

contact QAT to DQ this map. then call BN to qualify again

IamKwaN wrote:

Hello, disqualified upon request by the mapper because of spacing fluctuation in Easy.

[Easy]

1. 00:23:929 (2,1) - The DS soars too much.

It is supposed to be a quick fix, good luck with the requalification!

Lanturn wrote:

If you have trouble reaching Gaia/Kawaiwkyik to get this requalified, then feel free to call me. I'm sure you won't have trouble reaching them though.

Good luck :3

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

rebubbled

1. 00:18:998 - Actually second red point should be here. Fix it :>
   Note: I don't know how to explain it, just catch me in-game and I'll try to explain.

1. 00:16:532 (3) - You missed a NC here if you add it each two stanzas.
2. 01:19:820 (3) - Well, if you added NC here in other diffs, why not here?

1. 00:49:820 (7) - That clap in blue tick sounds a bit bad, I think you should've added it in white tick especially for consistency lol
2. 00:54:751 (5,6) - More or less like here, sounds better the clap added in white tick imo. (Same in other cases)

Inyuschan wrote:

No kudosu.

[General]

1. 00:18:998 - Actually second red point should be here. Fix it :>
   Note: I don't know how to explain it, just catch me in-game and I'll try to explain.

[Easy]

1. 00:16:532 (3) - You missed a NC here if you add it each two stanzas.
2. 01:19:820 (3) - Well, if you added NC here in other diffs, why not here?

[Assassination]

1. 00:49:820 (7) - That clap in blue tick sounds a bit bad, I think you should've added it in white tick especially for consistency lol as explained
2. 00:54:751 (5,6) - More or less like here, sounds better the clap added in white tick imo. (Same in other cases) imo using claps in the white tick is weird x.x

Let me know.

Inyuschan wrote:

Requalified.

Lanturn wrote:

Regrats

That video though XD

Pho wrote:

:)

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.

Inyuschan wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.

You scared me.

Inyuschan wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

Nothing. The video is just silly lol.

You scared me.

Athrun wrote:

Gratz Chao~~

Chaoslitz wrote:

thanks ww

just updated the map description =w=

and...



/me runs