Updated everything except for 00:21:737(1,2,3,4,5,6) on alvisto's. I'll let him decide what he wants to do.
Thanks everyone!
Thanks everyone!
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Horie Yui - Love Countdown
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Topic Starter
lol another ToraDora! song
alvisto's Hard is pretty good XD
alvisto's Hard is pretty good XD
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, but you dont have to
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Nice Storyboard
[Midget's Normal]
00:09:104 (1) - I think this spinner doesnt fit this part very well, maybe move it to where the lyrics say imasuuuuuuuu!
00:24:262 (1) - This spinner doesnt seem to fit well either, maybe use some notes instead?
01:40:051 (1) - This note feels like an extra
[alvisto's Hard]
Looks fine to me
[Insane]
Flawless
I really enjoyed this one btw
Really nice map +Star
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, but you dont have to
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Nice Storyboard
[Midget's Normal]
00:09:104 (1) - I think this spinner doesnt fit this part very well, maybe move it to where the lyrics say imasuuuuuuuu!
00:24:262 (1) - This spinner doesnt seem to fit well either, maybe use some notes instead?
01:40:051 (1) - This note feels like an extra
[alvisto's Hard]
Looks fine to me
[Insane]
Flawless
I really enjoyed this one btw
Really nice map
+Star
[deleted user]
Mafia, >.< im not pro at modding.
can i mod4mod with u? >>>Dj Splash - A Beautiful Day
[Midget's Normal]
00:24:262 (1) - its better end at 00:26:472 -
01:37:525 (1) - its better end at 01:39:735
[Alvisto's Hard]
01:57:104 (6) - overlapping with 01:56:314 (5) -
[Insane]
00:50:472 (3) - add finish?
star >Q< 1 2 3 4 5~
can i mod4mod with u? >>>Dj Splash - A Beautiful Day
[Midget's Normal]
00:24:262 (1) - its better end at 00:26:472 -
01:37:525 (1) - its better end at 01:39:735
[Alvisto's Hard]
01:57:104 (6) - overlapping with 01:56:314 (5) -
[Insane]
00:50:472 (3) - add finish?
star >Q< 1 2 3 4 5~
Topic Starter
Fixed some. Grats on your first kudosu SIC0~
I am here Mafia~~ 
Here, I fix that personal rhythm and go with yours instead. xD
Oh, also I wonder Mafia, is the mp3 used in this map the full version or the cut-down version ? *whisper* If it's not full version, can you send me the one with the full version ? I wanna save it into my mp3 LOL *end of whisper*
Download: Horie Yui - Love Countdown (Mafiamaster) [alvisto's Hard].osu
Here, I fix that personal rhythm and go with yours instead. xD
Oh, also I wonder Mafia, is the mp3 used in this map the full version or the cut-down version ? *whisper* If it's not full version, can you send me the one with the full version ? I wanna save it into my mp3 LOL *end of whisper*
Download: Horie Yui - Love Countdown (Mafiamaster) [alvisto's Hard].osu
HI mafiamaster
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This is a mod4mod
→→→ Tenyu Huang - Screen wiz you .thx~
Umm..Im waiting for abalee's recheck ( maybe several days ) , i'll Contact you in game when i get a bubble ( if you accept my request ).
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general
I dont like the custom "reversearrow.png" . The default "reversearrow" feels better..
suggestion : i saw a lot of green/blue lines(ticks) like this
. although this is not a important problem but i think you should fix
Midget's Normal
[00:05:946] [00:37:525] (3,4) maybe move 1 grid left?
[00:49:998] remove this clap
[00:57:104] spacing too close, adjust the slider shape to sovle
alvisto's Hard
Music track -- lead in : how about make it = 3s ?
[00:10:367] substitutu a note for the slider
Insane
[01:32:156] whistle?
[02:23:946] add a note?
star~
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This is a mod4mod
→→→ Tenyu Huang - Screen wiz you .thx~
Umm..Im waiting for abalee's recheck ( maybe several days ) , i'll Contact you in game when i get a bubble ( if you accept my request
). ··········································
general
I dont like the custom "reversearrow.png" . The default "reversearrow" feels better..
suggestion : i saw a lot of green/blue lines(ticks) like this
Midget's Normal
[00:05:946] [00:37:525] (3,4) maybe move 1 grid left?
[00:49:998] remove this clap
[00:57:104] spacing too close, adjust the slider shape to sovle
alvisto's Hard
Music track -- lead in : how about make it = 3s ?
[00:10:367] substitutu a note for the slider
Insane
[01:32:156] whistle?
[02:23:946] add a note?
star~
[alvisto's Hard]
00:49:525 (1,2,3) - Stack these under the 3 slider? D;
01:10:367 (2,3,4) - This looks awkward. IMO, you should make them rotate from 1 like this
[Insane]
00:58:209 (1) - From this point on up to 01:09:577 (6), there are no hitsounds...I think it still sounds fine but why
?
02:11:472 (1) - ^ 02:25:209 (3), ^
02:22:998 (1,2) - Add a finish to the start of the slider like these ones: 01:09:735 (1,2)?
+Star~
00:49:525 (1,2,3) - Stack these under the 3 slider? D;
01:10:367 (2,3,4) - This looks awkward. IMO, you should make them rotate from 1 like this
[Insane]
00:58:209 (1) - From this point on up to 01:09:577 (6), there are no hitsounds...I think it still sounds fine but why
? 02:11:472 (1) - ^ 02:25:209 (3), ^
02:22:998 (1,2) - Add a finish to the start of the slider like these ones: 01:09:735 (1,2)?
+Star~
Topic Starter
Lots of lulz. Thanks!
note: seemed to have modded it just b4 it was updated so =.= <- either that or i forgot to press update LOL
[Midget's Normal]
00:21:735 (4) - make this a slider, new combo and get rid of that break
00:52:051 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like the time gap seperating 2,3,4 (the feel of the song at this point makes me want to keep clicking)
01:34:998 (6) - same as 00:21:735(4)
02:15:419 (1) - lazy to map? lol, it doesnt fit
02:40:367 (4) - new combo? (yey!)
-Hitsounds
00:04:998 (2) - no whistle?
01:14:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - why notmake this the same as the start?
01:37:525 (1) - add finish?
01:52:367 (6) - whistle instead?
01:54:893 (7) - ^
02:08:788 (2) - missing clap at start of slider?
[alvisto's Hard]
00:22:209 (2) - it feels weird when i play it, i guess i prefer it at 00:22:367 instead
-Hitsounds
00:37:525 (3) - whistle?
00:40:051 (3) - ^
00:42:262 (2,3) - ^
01:30:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i really think this would sound better as soft
01:50:788 (3) - whistle?
01:53:314 (3) - ^
01:55:840 (3) - ^
[Insane]
-Hitsounds
00:36:262 (4) - whistle?
00:55:367 (4) - missing clap? (keeping consistent with the previous combo?)
02:08:630 (4) - ^
02:35:946 (3) - imo, the clap doesn't fit in this part
02:37:209 (3) - ^
[Midget's Normal]
00:21:735 (4) - make this a slider, new combo and get rid of that break
00:52:051 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like the time gap seperating 2,3,4 (the feel of the song at this point makes me want to keep clicking)
01:34:998 (6) - same as 00:21:735(4)
02:15:419 (1) - lazy to map? lol, it doesnt fit
02:40:367 (4) - new combo? (yey!)
-Hitsounds
00:04:998 (2) - no whistle?
01:14:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - why notmake this the same as the start?
01:37:525 (1) - add finish?
01:52:367 (6) - whistle instead?
01:54:893 (7) - ^
02:08:788 (2) - missing clap at start of slider?
[alvisto's Hard]
00:22:209 (2) - it feels weird when i play it, i guess i prefer it at 00:22:367 instead
-Hitsounds
00:37:525 (3) - whistle?
00:40:051 (3) - ^
00:42:262 (2,3) - ^
01:30:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i really think this would sound better as soft
01:50:788 (3) - whistle?
01:53:314 (3) - ^
01:55:840 (3) - ^
[Insane]
-Hitsounds
00:36:262 (4) - whistle?
00:55:367 (4) - missing clap? (keeping consistent with the previous combo?)
02:08:630 (4) - ^
02:35:946 (3) - imo, the clap doesn't fit in this part
02:37:209 (3) - ^
hello, umm.. here is my mod4mod , and all suggestion ._.
[Midget's Normal]
01:48:104 (2) - change to spinner such like 00:34:683 (1) ?
02:05:946 (2) - finish at 02:07:209 and add a circle on 02:07:525?
02:15:419 (1) - saymun already point it out
[alvisto's Hard]
00:23:788 (X) - add a circle?
00:37:998 (5) - 2 grid down
[Insane]
00:22:367 (2) - no whistle?
00:23:630 (7) - ^
02:10:683 (4) - clap in reverse?
one two there four five~
[Midget's Normal]
01:48:104 (2) - change to spinner such like 00:34:683 (1) ?
02:05:946 (2) - finish at 02:07:209 and add a circle on 02:07:525?
02:15:419 (1) - saymun already point it out
[alvisto's Hard]
00:23:788 (X) - add a circle?
00:37:998 (5) - 2 grid down
[Insane]
00:22:367 (2) - no whistle?
00:23:630 (7) - ^
02:10:683 (4) - clap in reverse?
one two there four five~
Sorry about not reading your sig earlier. mod4mod?
Midget's Norm
00:54:577 (1,2) - I don't like the feel of these 2 sliders, don't play very well, in my opinion. What I would do is something like this: Not a big deal, really, just a suggestion.
alvisto's Hard
seems fine
Insane
Also seems fine
Nice job guys
Midget's Norm
00:54:577 (1,2) - I don't like the feel of these 2 sliders, don't play very well, in my opinion. What I would do is something like this: Not a big deal, really, just a suggestion.
alvisto's Hard
seems fine
Insane
Also seems fine
Nice job guys
all suggestions.
[Midget's Normal]
01:12:577 - 01:14:788 too short as a break, i suggest remove.
01:34:998 (6) - whistle-normal-normal-whistle, and i don't think choose the slider and press W is a good way to add hitsounds, you should do on every beats.
02:05:946 (2) - end 1/2 later.
02:39:419 (1,2,3) - maybe stack them= =..?
[alvisto's Hard]
wow no break?
00:30:262 (2) - suggest align with 00:29:314 (6)'s end.
00:36:577 - add a note? (finish)
01:34:998 (1) - you need another timing section before it to change the volume, and i think it's a bit loud... and do the same on the slider's end.
02:38:156 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - one~two~one~two, enough= =
[Insane]
still no break...?
00:13:998 (4,1) - spacing. since 00:11:630 (3,1) is at the same place, it's 1/2 and this one is 1/1
00:22:051 (1) - turn up the volume of soft part... maybe 70 i guess.
01:04:683 (9,1) - switch new combo
02:39:419 (1,2,1,2) - one~two~three~yay...? i think that's better...
and orz. a mod4mod request here.(since when you are online i'm always in sleep mode and can't catch you in-game...)
Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstacy Short Ver.-
thanks..~
[Midget's Normal]
01:12:577 - 01:14:788 too short as a break, i suggest remove.
01:34:998 (6) - whistle-normal-normal-whistle, and i don't think choose the slider and press W is a good way to add hitsounds, you should do on every beats.
02:05:946 (2) - end 1/2 later.
02:39:419 (1,2,3) - maybe stack them= =..?
[alvisto's Hard]
wow no break?
00:30:262 (2) - suggest align with 00:29:314 (6)'s end.
00:36:577 - add a note? (finish)
01:34:998 (1) - you need another timing section before it to change the volume, and i think it's a bit loud... and do the same on the slider's end.
02:38:156 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - one~two~one~two, enough= =
[Insane]
still no break...?
00:13:998 (4,1) - spacing. since 00:11:630 (3,1) is at the same place, it's 1/2 and this one is 1/1
00:22:051 (1) - turn up the volume of soft part... maybe 70 i guess.
01:04:683 (9,1) - switch new combo
02:39:419 (1,2,1,2) - one~two~three~yay...? i think that's better...
and orz. a mod4mod request here.(since when you are online i'm always in sleep mode and can't catch you in-game...)
Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstacy Short Ver.-
thanks..~
Listen carefully. It's not following the lyrics, it's following the instrument(s) in the background.NatsumeRin wrote:
[alvisto's Hard]
02:38:156 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - one~two~one~two, enough= =
i know. i just think follow the vocal here may be better= =RL Link wrote:
Listen carefully. It's not following the lyrics, it's following the instrument(s) in the background.NatsumeRin wrote:
[alvisto's Hard]
02:38:156 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - one~two~one~two, enough= =
Topic Starter
Fixed necessities.
Uh, my lame mod
Offset: 260 would be better (not a big difference though). But I feel notes are a bit off. Or it's just my osu window lagging.
nvm
[Midget's Normal]
01:09:735 (3) - this one is kinda ugly tbh :[
[Insane]
02:40:051 (1) - why not to make this one 3 since she sings 'one two three'
That's it. Damn my mods are so useless D:
If this helped, could you please check this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15200 ? :]
Offset: 260 would be better (not a big difference though). But I feel notes are a bit off. Or it's just my osu window lagging.
nvm
[Midget's Normal]
01:09:735 (3) - this one is kinda ugly tbh :[
[Insane]
02:40:051 (1) - why not to make this one 3 since she sings 'one two three'
That's it. Damn my mods are so useless D:
If this helped, could you please check this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15200 ? :]
[Overall]
Comboburst is too big. Reduce it and do a full submission.
[Difficulties]
[Insane]
I suggest to use 0,5 slidertick rate like Alvisto's difficulty. Only Easy sounds good with 1 slidertick rate IMHO.
Comboburst is too big. Reduce it and do a full submission.
[Difficulties]
[Insane]
I suggest to use 0,5 slidertick rate like Alvisto's difficulty. Only Easy sounds good with 1 slidertick rate IMHO.
Topic Starter
Thanks, changed slider tick rate.
comboburst isn't too big.
comboburst isn't too big.
I fail. x_x
Bubbled~
Bubbled~
Ranked! XD
Finally~
Finally ranked!
Yeah, alvisto's fist FC :3
ToraDora!~~~
Yeah, alvisto's fist FC :3
ToraDora!~~~
Really nice :O
I really like these kind of storyboards, and you did an awesome job for this song, because everything works fine (Skin and SB do not affect gameplay so much but they fit each other: that's a great thing many maps don't have in my opinion)
I'd have enjoyed more Circle Size Normal for Insane, though >.<
I really like these kind of storyboards, and you did an awesome job for this song, because everything works fine (Skin and SB do not affect gameplay so much but they fit each other: that's a great thing many maps don't have in my opinion)
I'd have enjoyed more Circle Size Normal for Insane, though >.<
Great map <3
Just love SB
Just love SB