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SYNC.ART'S ft. Sakaue Nachi - Green Grass Garden

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xierbaliti
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月16日 at 19:38:01

Artist: SYNC.ART'S ft. Sakaue Nachi
Title: Green Grass Garden
Source: Touhou
Tags: Gojou Kai Crazy Jay ignorethis kaouji Alace
BPM: 87.5
Filesize: 8024kb
Play Time: 02:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. !ignore this (4.62 stars, 315 notes)
  2. Easy (0.88 stars, 58 notes)
  3. Hard (4.58 stars, 545 notes)
  4. Lunatic (4.83 stars, 653 notes)
  5. Normal (3.56 stars, 293 notes)
Download: SYNC.ART'S ft. Sakaue Nachi - Green Grass Garden
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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12th beatmap.

Song from album ALTERNATIVE200812.

原曲/東方地霊殿~緑眼のジェラシー~
アレンジ/五条下位
Vocal/坂上なち
作詞/やまざきさやか


-Staff-
Easy:xier
Normal:xier
Hard:Alace
Lunatic:xier&Crazy Jay
!ignore this:ignorethis
Story Board:kaouji
gdeath
:shock:
Cyril Scarlet
SAKI HOKORU HANABIRA ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
rustbell
pc2 FC :)
star
ignorethis
Crazy Jay
._.~
Sumeragi Amane
star~
_lolipop
star~
subarasikibuta
i miss your maps so much xier T.T
Alace
Done
<Lunatic>
最後有一些NOTE是無聲的,會讓打擊感變差,用一點點聲音會比較好

Download: Sakaue Nachi - Green Grass Garden (xierbaliti) [Hard].osu
kiddly
yeah ;)
Mystearica
Excellent
Vibty99
Pump up Power
AngelHoney
>3<
Furawa
:P xixiki
TW-KUMA01
冒昧問一下
可以讓我做張Taiko嘛?
謝謝:3

star w
saymun
[Easy]
00:00:327 (1) - (1) and (3) not aligned?
00:18:155 (4) - use the reverse horizontal flip of (2)?
some people might complain about not having enough spin recovery for some of the spinners, but it doesnt mind me XD

[Normal]
:D

[Hard]
WHERE IS THE EVIL ALACE SPACING! XD
02:29:297 (4) - since (3) isn't aligned with (1) and (2), move (4) 1 grid left/right? (or straighten 3)

[!ignore this]
i would've ignored this if there wasn't a !
*looks through map*
man i should've just ignored it XD

[Lunatic]..is not that lunatic XD
03:31:183 (1) - i dont think you need new combo?

:D
Ex Boy
嫉妒姬/~~~~很棒的歌,很棒的图!基本没什么问题,有几处细节稍微要改一下:

[Easy] 实在是太短了,可以偷懒点,复制粘贴嘛,反正这歌很多重复节奏的说~~

[Hard] 要不然还是把老师的名字标上吧,有些人是直接在listing下map的,又不翻edit,会误会的

[!ignore this] 。 。 ign终于做好打的map了!
00:53:469 - (3,4,5)老板为什么就不许完全覆盖呢,这样上边盖不住下边漏半截好难看啊,干脆错开放算了
01:18:669 - 要不要考虑加一个circle?有点意犹未尽的感觉

[Lunatic] 有够抽的……CJ的几个jump放的很喜欢(jump什么的,最喜欢了 >\<
03:34:611 - (1,2,3,4...)换个排法吧……反正我就是沙包啦(试了N遍仍未能pass
tsuka
:P
yaya
[ignore]
slider tick rate : 1 or 0.5
00:27:411 (9,10) - jump有点大。虽然可以打到,但是是175 bpm 1/2 beat

nice hard
Alace
難度名沒有關係啦
打一串很長很醜 lol
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
All fixed :3

thanks~
Shinxyn
:o
Add "Gojou Kai" to tags or it's actually supposed to be spelt "Gojyo-Kai" (~"五条下位")
I modded really lightly xD

Easy-
x_x whats with the spinners, they're not hard... but notes comes out at nearly same time as spinners, just remove those short spinners?
Since this diff is shorter, the sb keeps going even when the map's finished... so make the rest of the storyboard diff specific for the rest or map this whole diff...

Normal-
00:27:411 (4,1) - on purpose jump...? seems like only one on map...
Great~

Hard-
=/ I could nazi some parts to make them look a bit better, but no biggie ><~
Good

!ignore's-
Shorter... D: also a reason to make the storyboard diff specific to each diff...
and... why IS this short? :(

Lunatic-
I question if this diff is even worth 15mil
Great

Hitsounds too simple to nazi ><~ (and the custom hitsound clap doesn't stand out too much to nag upon)
Hmmm, I'm willing to bubble this... but not yet...
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Shinxyn wrote:

:o
Add "Gojou Kai" to tags or it's actually supposed to be spelt "Gojyo-Kai" (~"五条下位")
I modded really lightly xD yeah I added it

Easy-
x_x whats with the spinners, they're not hard... but notes comes out at nearly same time as spinners, just remove those short spinners? I think that's fine. O_O
Since this diff is shorter, the sb keeps going even when the map's finished... so make the rest of the storyboard diff specific for the rest or map this whole diff... fixed

Normal-
00:27:411 (4,1) - on purpose jump...? seems like only one on map... fixed~
Great~

!ignore's-
Shorter... D: also a reason to make the storyboard diff specific to each diff... fixed
and... why IS this short? :(

Lunatic-
I question if this diff is even worth 15mil ._.
Thanks for modding and star :D
dvorak_old
map are good

just SB correction

38:000 盡きない > 尽きない
              ↑must
1:14:000 白盡夢 > 白昼夢
               ↑must
1:53:000 天國 > 天国
              ↑must
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

dvorak wrote:

map are good

just SB correction

38:000 盡きない > 尽きない
              ↑must
1:14:000 白盡夢 > 白昼夢
               ↑must
1:53:000 天國 > 天国
              ↑must
yeah,you are right. thanks :3

fixed
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are soime suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Delete "Thumbs,db" and full submit next time.
- You have a "logo.png" on the folder but I don't see it on the storyboard, if you aren't using it, please delete it.
Storyboard:
175869ms: These little fades are too fast imo. It'll probably look better if you just make a single and slow fade =x

~Easy~
00:55:183 (1,1) - I find the spinner too short for an Easy and also, having a note that close to the end of it doesn't help so much...
01:00:669 (1,1) - Same. Let the newbies recover from spinners >:

~Normal~
No problems here~

~Hard~
00:45:583 (5) - New Combo.
01:02:040 (1) - Stack under (5) or (6)?
01:13:011 (1) - ^
01:33:240 (6) - New Combo.

~!ignore this~
- Why is this diff shorter? o.o

00:48:840 (6) - New Combo >:
01:34:783 (7) - New Combo and delete it on (1).

~Insane~
00:40:783 (1) - The reverse arrow is completely out of the grid =(
01:32:383 (5) - New Combo.
03:03:069 (5) - ^

Meh, just so light suggestions xD
Nice map! ^^ *star*
Lybydose
Artist should be either "SYNC.ART'S" OR "Gojyo-Kai ft. Sakaue Nachi" or even "SYNC.ART'S ft. Sakaue Nachi". Either way, the artist should not just be the vocalist.

Smoke2.png is visibly clipped off on the left side during the storyboard, and ha.png is also clipped on the right and bottom edges. You can see it in this screenshot: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12358. If you want to fix smoke2.png, you'll need to change the image. You can fix ha.png by scaling it up in the storyboard so that it takes up the full screen.

S-2, S-3, and S-7.png are also clipped on the sides and it looks bad: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12361

Also, you can see the edge of BG2.png on the right side, which looks kind of bad: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12363. It would probably also look better if you disable letterboxing during breaks.

Remove the thumbs.db files (there are 3 of them)

Add an epilepsy warning for those strobes at the end (Song Setup => Storyboarding tab) in Normal, Hard, and Lunatic.

Change combo color 2 - I can't even see it against the background.

Easy:

Background isn't showing after 00:22:269 like it is in the other difficulties.

00:26:383 (1) - this spinner is too short, especially since the next slider appears on screen at the same time it does
01:00:669 (1) - ^

!ignore this:

Source is missing in this difficulty

Lunatic:

Source is missing in this difficulty

00:40:783 (1) - Beuchi already pointed this slider out of the grid
01:18:840 - this break is bugged and isn't working for some reason. Make sure the break appears on the timeline next time you save and upload.

03:34:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Increase the volume on those silent notes. Since the silenced notes aren't even really synced to anything in the music, it makes it even more confusing. Actually it might sound better if you used sliders like you did at 03:42:497 (1,2,3,4,5) if you want. At least increase the volume of the near-silent notes so that I can actually hear the hitsound.
Alace

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Hard~
00:45:583 (5) - New Combo.
01:02:040 (1) - Stack under (5) or (6)?
01:13:011 (1) - ^
01:33:240 (6) - New Combo.
oops All no
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
Thanks Beuchi-chan and Lybydose ~

fixed.
Alace
my diff has CJ and your name l
can you fix the SB XD
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Alace wrote:

my diff has CJ and your name l
can you fix the SB XD
lol
DeadAlready
喜兒歡迎回來~ >w</
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

quintitem wrote:

喜兒歡迎回來~ >w</
五条学姐 >w</
Shinxyn
I guess you're not ganna fix some of the clipped sb images Lyby mentioned, oh well...

hmm...
Everything looks fine... though... is the last spinner on Lunatic supposed to be 1/2 shorter compared to Normal/Hard? D:<
Lybydose

Shinxyn wrote:

I guess you're not ganna fix some of the clipped sb images Lyby mentioned, oh well...
I'd fix it myself if I was any good at photoshop and such :o

Anyway, everything else looks fine, just change this at least:

Add an epilepsy warning for those strobes at the end (Song Setup => Storyboarding tab) in Normal, Hard, and Lunatic.
kaouji

Shinxyn wrote:

I guess you're not ganna fix some of the clipped sb images Lyby mentioned, oh well...
i fixed,if problems are still there.i hope you can tell me where are they.
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
fixed :)
Lybydose

kaouji wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

I guess you're not ganna fix some of the clipped sb images Lyby mentioned, oh well...
i fixed,if problems are still there.i hope you can tell me where are they.
Smoke2.png is clipped on the left side. Smoke.png is fine though, and it's the same thing. You could just copy Smoke.png and rotate it instead of using Smoke2.png.

Scale hana/ha larger in the SB editor so that it takes up the whole screen.

S-3.png and S-7.png look kind of weird. Look here:

It would be better if you just remade them instead of trying to fix up the sides.

Oh and xier.png and cj.png had some weird stuff in them. I was able to fix those, replace with these two:






Everything else is fine. Let me know when you've changed this stuff/don't want to change this stuff.


kaouji

Lybydose wrote:

Smoke2.png is clipped on the left side. Smoke.png is fine though, and it's the same thing. You could just copy Smoke.png and rotate it instead of using Smoke2.png. remade

Scale hana/ha larger in the SB editor so that it takes up the whole screen. fixed

S-3.png and S-7.png look kind of weird. remade

Oh and xier.png and cj.png had some weird stuff in them. thx and fixed
It's my first stroyboard. thx for help to fixed them.i guess i left many problems and now it will better this time.
If these are any problem still be there,tell me and thx.

wait for your recheck.
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

kaouji wrote:

Lybydose wrote:

Smoke2.png is clipped on the left side. Smoke.png is fine though, and it's the same thing. You could just copy Smoke.png and rotate it instead of using Smoke2.png. remade

Scale hana/ha larger in the SB editor so that it takes up the whole screen. fixed

S-3.png and S-7.png look kind of weird. remade

Oh and xier.png and cj.png had some weird stuff in them. thx and fixed
It's my first stroyboard. thx for help to fixed them.i guess i left many problems and now it will better this time.
If these are any problem still be there,tell me and thx.

wait for your recheck.
oh thanks :3

uploaded :)
Andrea
Great map. Just fix this 3 little things and I'll bubble it.

[Hard]

01:40:440 (1~15) - This combo is too long compared to the others. Add a new combo on 01:41:811 (6) & 01:43:183 (11).
03:17:811 (1~14) - Same here. Add a new combo on 03:19:183 (6) & 03:20:554 (10).
03:34:269 (1~14) - ^ again on (6) & (10).


EDIT: Bubbled~
Alace
Hold on
i want to change those new combo you ser
and the SB came back again
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Alace wrote:

Hold on
i want to change those new combo you ser
and the SB came back again
Why the SB came back again? x.x Sorry for this.

Sure you can change the new combo sensei. :3

Just fixed the SB,and waiting for your change sensei. :D
Alace
Pettan_old
good ! :)
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
>_> uploaded
Andrea
Okay.

Bubble Repair~
Lybydose
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Open the Easy .osu and delete these two lines (lines 46 and 47):

 F,0,72326,122726,0
F,0,122726,166269,0

It's right under

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SBblack.jpg",320,240 (don't delete that though)

These two lines are causing Easy to not end at the correct time.

Or you can just use this, I've already made the change:

Download: SYNC.ART'S ft. Sakaue Nachi - Green Grass Garden (xierbaliti) [Easy].osu


EDIT: Ranked after this minor fix
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
wow thanks a lot ,Lybydose. :)
Gens
Grah, last time I checked Alace wasn't done fixing the SB. Sorry I didn't have a chance to mod it. =3=
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