00:02:501 (2501|0) - the synth here may be better distinguished by LNs
Seems cool00:03:420 (3420|0,3420|1,3491|3,3491|2,3562|0,3562|1) - single for bass drum
Seems okay00:03:774 (3774|1,3774|3,3845|0,3845|2,3916|3,3916|1) - ^, same for rest of the bass drum chaos in the introduction
Same with aboveAs a general rule, you don't want to mix [12][34][12][34] with [13][24][13][24] for the same instruments, because they feel and play very differently. Just a heads up.
okay00:06:604 (6604|1) - bass drum starts at this moment, not at 00:06:675 (6675|2)
Nope, for me, this bass drum started on 00:06:675 (6675|2)00:07:064 (7064|0) - maybe it's just me, i don't hear anything here
It's bass drum00:07:170 (7170|3,7241|1,7312|2,7383|0) - make more pitch relevant, I would just ctrl+h this
Looks good00:09:340 (9340|1,9387|2,9387|0) - the sounds these correspond to are barely audible, and players will interpret these as ghost notes as they're playing through all the chaos happening around it
Re-arranged this, but i kept the 1/600:10:614 (10614|2,10708|3,10802|0,10897|1) - make these not LNs to allow for a triple at 00:10:991 (10991|2) for impact
Changed that LN into normal note00:12:123 (12123|1) - double because keyboard block chord
I kept it as one note only00:19:128 (19128|3) - the exact timing of the bass drum here is a little earlier than this, but who cares
Changed into 1/6 beat snap00:19:942 (19942|1,19977|2,20012|3) - these are 1/6
Changed to 1/600:28:255 (28255|0) - make this a triple to keep consistent with your violin + bass drum + snare drum layering (all three are here)
Changed into triple00:28:397 (28397|2) - make a single for same reason above (only snare drum is here)
Changed into single 00:28:821 (28821|3) - make triple for same reason above (all three are there)
Changed into triplecontinue this for the rest of this little section
OkayI want to talk about the miniclimax starting at 00:32:925 (32925|2) for a little bit. This pattern 00:32:996 (32996|1,32996|3,33067|2,33067|0,33137|1,33137|3) is much much harder than this pattern 00:33:208 (33208|0,33208|1,33279|2,33279|3,33350|1,33350|0) . As a result, while the music escalates, the difficulty of the map decreases, which is illogical. Also, there is a major chord change at 00:33:350 (33350|1) . With this in mind, I suggest you relayer this part like this:
http://puu.sh/eL1g9/0ea668a1ba.jpg I don't agreed with this, so i re-arranged iti recommend a similar pattern for 01:33:633 (93633|2,93633|0,93703|1,93703|3) and 01:48:633 (108633|3,108633|1,108703|0,108703|2) -
00:38:196 (38196|1,38232|2,38267|3) - there is no bass drum buzz here, delete the 1/8 notes, you may have mistaken the bass octave jump for a buzzing bass drum
Changed into double LN here00:38:869 (38869|2,39010|0,39293|3) - these LNs should be shorter b/c the notes are staccato, 1/4 length would be ideal
Changed some00:39:718 (39718|3) - this should be an LN to keep layering consistency with prior LNs
Changed to LN00:40:001 (40001|1) - personal preference: add note in 4 to create jack impact
Nope00:42:123 (42123|2) - this note staccato, 1/4 length
00:43:680 (43680|1,43751|2,43821|0,43892|1,43963|0,44034|2) - please make all of these LNs; this is the Infinity map, and I assure you that playing all of these as LNs isn't making your map any harder than it already is. and it will be more fun that way, i promise
Seems good00:44:458 (44458|0,44529|1,44600|3,44670|2,44741|1,44812|0) - ^
continue for the rest of the synth solo
Same with above00:46:015 (46015|0) - nothing here that I hear, delete note
Deleted, and add a LN before00:47:218 (47218|3,47288|1,47359|2,47430|3) - pitch relevancy, ctrl+h is easy fix
Changed the position00:47:430 (47430|3) - there's a Bass Drum here, double it
Doubled00:49:269 (49269|2) - nothing here, delete
Nope, there's little sound there (i don't know the name)00:49:836 - add note here,
00:49:623 (49623|2,49694|1,49765|0,49765|3,49836|2,49906|1,49977|2,50048|1,50048|3) - I will love you forever if you make a pattern like this here:
http://puu.sh/eL2Qx/f652844273.jpg00:50:614 (50614|3,50685|2,50755|1,50826|0,50897|1,50968|2,51038|3) - should be 1/3
00:51:321 (51321|0) - starting here, make all the doubles on the red lines a single; yea, it is quite a mashable pattern, but think about it. Anyone who wants to actually play this stream legitimately would have to be able to stream 1/4 at 424 bpm. (Meaning there is only ten or so people in the world who would actually enjoy playing this part.) There is also little in the music on these red lines, except maybe the higher kick drum. But then in order to layer that, you would have to add 1/4s in the middle of the 1/6th stream. And players would really hate that lol
If you really really really
really wanted to keep this really hard, make triplets on every 1/1 instead. The impact is there to justify that, and it's easier to read. Or lower HP drain a little bit.
Nah, i want to add double in the blue lines, but i'll become worst than this, that's why just use double on red and white lines while the 1/6 fill it. I already arrange it to an easy-read pattern but still hard too play if we doesn't fast00:59:741 (59741|0) - barely audible, especially when the previous few measures have got the player locked into a rhythm
Keep this01:01:935 (61935|1) - make a triple
01:02:218 (62218|2) - there is a gliss here that's almost negligible, up to you to add a note here
Keep it single 01:02:218 (62218|2) - move to 4
Okay01:02:359 (62359|1) - put one of the two notes in 4 to match previous note because the pitch is same from previous note
Seems good01:02:501 (62501|3) - move to 3
Seems good01:02:925 (62925|2) - move to 1 or 2, this piano line here is ascending, so the notes should ascend too
Arranged this part01:07:949 - add note
Added note for that missing rhythm01:10:071 (70071|1) - snare is barely audible, make this a single
I keep it01:11:840 (71840|3,71982|3,72123|3) - shouldn't be doubles imo
I keep it01:14:069 (74069|1) - not audible
I keep it01:14:529 (74529|1) - nothing should be here, if this is for bass drum, it should be on 1/3
Removed01:14:953 (74953|3) - make the bass drum impact points all triples for this part, not just the ones after a snare roll.
Arranged01:20:543 (80543|3) - there's a 1/8 here in the snare drum
I prefer to keep just like that because it'll be badthe LNs starting at 01:26:274 (86274|3) should be adjusted to be more pitch relevant
Adjusted01:27:831 (87831|3,87972|1) - these two should be in the same column (and the first one made shorter)
Nope, i keep it01:36:887 (96887|2) - i would consider make all of these LNs as well, but this may be overkill
Yeah, you already know01:42:831 (102831|3,102902|2,102972|3,103043|2,103114|3) - this hidden right hand trill is too long and unjustified, change the pattering around this a bit
Arranged01:45:236 (105236|2,105307|3,105378|2,105449|3,105519|2) - but this one is fine because it comes at a moment of significant tension in the music. don't change this.
Okay01:47:218 (107218|2,107359|0) - these are staccato notes, should be 1/4 length. this mistake happens quite a bit.
Changed to 1/4 length01:49:199 (109199|3,109269|2,109340|0,109411|1) - i would make these LNs just to differentiate them from the jumpjacks before it and to emphasize the synth coming back into the foreground of the music
Changed to synth for that01:54:576 (114576|3,114576|2,114576|1,114623|0,114670|1,114718|3,114718|2,114718|0,114765|1,114812|2,114859|3,114859|0,114859|1,114906|2,114953|3,115001|1,115001|0,115001|2) - you're forcing the player to one-handed trill at 320 bpm. very very very few players can do that. (please change this pattern, it's an absolutely ridiculous difficulty spike as it is)
I'm sure, i keep this. but removed the first 1/6 because it's not audible well01:56:274 (116274|0,116274|1,116345|1,116416|0,116486|0,116557|1,116628|1) - too many quick minijacks on one hand in a row, this is not much easier than just jacking on a single finger the whole time. spread the minijacks around the hands a bit, like this:
http://puu.sh/eLfDn/a574aba9ac.jpg Re-arranged with my own pattern01:57:548 (117548|0) - adjust this section for better pitch relevancy. at the very least, this note should be in 4
Okay, and re-arranged the pattern after it01:59:246 (119246|3,119246|2,119246|0,119246|1) - does not deserve a quad, make this a triple at the very most
Removed note on 3