Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution · forum

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2015-02-09T06:21:19+00:00

みんながmodする前にmodすればよかった('A`)

[General]
Habi's Normalのkiai timeが異なっています
[Easy]

音取りがEasyじゃない(；・∀・)

00:32:828 (2,3,4) - 言葉の終わりにスライダーが始まってて凄く変に感じる。スライダーの始めを00:32:494 (2)にしたい。こんな音取りはどう？ http://puu.sh/fFUBJ.jpg
00:36:161 (2) - この音は大きな音だから拾いたいな。少し(1)を下げてこんな音取り配置はどうかな？　http://puu.sh/fFVfN.jpg
00:43:328 (2) - Easyだしこれを短くして全部白線にしたほうがやさしいと思う。 http://puu.sh/fFVsb.jpg

[Habi's Normal]

This diff need more difficulty imo. Because diff spread about 0.2
I perform suggestion to make it hard of some.

change tick rate? because Easy Max combo 372 but Normal 283.
00:05:494 (X) - add note
00:05:661 (X) -
00:13:328 (1) - how about this? I want to hit 00:13:661 big sound http://puu.sh/fFRyr.jpg
00:14:994 (4,5) - How about this Rhythm? http://puu.sh/fFPST.jpg
00:33:828 (5) - add note?
00:18:661 (1) - same as 00:13:328 (1)
00:23:494 (X) - add note
00:23:828 (X) - ^
00:25:661 (4,5) - same as 00:14:994 (4,5)
00:29:328 (1) - same as 00:13:328 (1)
00:33:994 (5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/fFSCx.jpg
00:34:661 (1) - 00:34:661 (X) - add note and slider start red line http://puu.sh/fFSRB.jpg
00:37:994 (X) - add note
00:38:328 (X) - ^
01:02:828 (4) - slider move to before red line
01:11:828 (1) - How about this Rhythm? http://puu.sh/fFTo9.jpg
01:17:161 (1) - same as 01:11:828 (1) -
01:24:828 (X) - add note
01:26:161 (X) - ^
01:27:494 (X) - ^

[Hard]

00:01:328 (1) - あまりこういう指摘すきじゃないけどmore blanket plz
00:27:161 (3) - これのリバースのところhitsound欲しいな SamplesetをNormalにする？

[Laurier's Insane]

00:04:244 (X) - 00:03:578 (4) - にnoteがあるので同じようにここもnoteを置いてclapの音を鳴らしたい
00:04:911 (X) - ^
00:16:828 (2) - 重ねたいのは分かるけど距離が半分になるのは少しやりにくい。distance1.0ぐらいは離したいと思った。http://puu.sh/fFLMh.jpg
00:51:494 (4,5) - ここの２連打が凄く浮いて見える。00:51:661 (X) - にadd noteしてdistance0.7 または　スタックを使ったほうがいいと思う。http://puu.sh/fFJI7.jpg

[Rescue]

00:02:161 (4) - ここの裏でなってる音叩きたいなと思った(3)を逆に持ってきてスライダーをstreamにこんな感じにどう？　http://puu.sh/fFyqL.jpg
00:34:328 (6) - このスライダーを手前の青線までにして00:34:661 (X) - にadd note。ここの音は大きいしスライダーの終わりにするにはもったいない。また00:35:827 (1) - 00:37:161 (1) - ではスライダーの頭にきてるから多少違和感もあるので変えることを強くお薦めする。
01:14:328 (2) - SV変わるの読めなかったしNC欲しいかな

Ranked目指して頑張るのん

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Abe Nana 2015-02-09T09:51:00+00:00

ShiraKai

SPOILER

ShiraKai wrote:
huhuhu form in-game chat
m4mしに参ったぞい

[Easy]
00:12:661 (4) - スライダーの向きのまま流したいですね・・・・位置を調整したら00:13:994 (2) - も下になりすぎないしどうだろう
あ
00:37:494 (1) - 00:38:494 (2) - と同じ形使って00:37:494 (1,2) - で横の移動繰り返したほうがスマートお気に入りの形なのでとりあえずこのまま
い
00:41:161 (2) - ここの頭のfinishはいらないようなこれであってる
01:06:828 (3,4) - (3)を01:07:661 - までにして(4)を1/2 sliderにしない？長いスライダーのあとって単発はやりにくい気がする

[Hard]
00:01:994 (3) - 終点にwhistle? つけるならRescueにも！必要ないかな？00:01:828 (2) - ここにWhistleがいるのにまた使うと変な感じがするんだ
00:12:661 (2) - 00:11:494 (4) - と重なってるの若干気になるし00:12:161 (1,2) - でブランケットしたいからこんな感じにしない？気になる程度ではないと思う！
a
00:17:494 (5,6) - nazi x:427,y:258ぐらいがすき
01:01:828 (4) - それらしい音はないし終点のclapいらないかもそれらしいclapが見つからなかった
01:13:161 (1) - ctrl+G?あんまり難しくしたくない

[Rescue]
00:21:828 (4,5) - (4)をctrl+Gしてその終点に(5)おきたい　Nope
00:32:994 (5) - あこれもctrl+Gしたい　Nopeうちの流れ観に反するので
00:41:661 (2) - ピアノ(?)の音に合わせて終点にwhistlとかありかも
00:59:661 (6) - 00:59:828 (1) - より左側にあった方がAIMしやすいと思う 00:58:661 (1) - の終点にスタックとかいい感じ
01:14:578 (3) - メッチャ違和感ある・・・・・音無くないか？ 01:14:328 (2) - をここまで伸ばしたほうがよさそうゴリ押しﾀﾞｰ！！！！！
AIM楽し～～～～～

グッドラックですじゃ

rui

rui wrote:
みんながmodする前にmodすればよかった('A`)

[General]
Habi's Normalのkiai timeが異なっています　ゲストとは異なっていても関係ない。Habiの意思が重要
[Easy]
音取りがEasyじゃない(；・∀・)
00:32:828 (2,3,4) - 言葉の終わりにスライダーが始まってて凄く変に感じる。スライダーの始めを00:32:494 (2)にしたい。こんな音取りはどう？ちょっとアレンジ。したけどなんかむずそう http://puu.sh/fFUBJ.jpg
00:36:161 (2) - この音は大きな音だから拾いたいな。少し(1)を下げてこんな音取り配置はどうかな？今の音取りもずいぶんと難しいしコレ以上増やすのは良くない。ここはコレでEasyっぽいしあってると思う　http://puu.sh/fFVfN.jpg
00:43:328 (2) - Easyだしこれを短くして全部白線にしたほうがやさしいと思う。ん・・・問題ないの思う http://puu.sh/fFVsb.jpg

[Hard]
00:01:328 (1) - あまりこういう指摘すきじゃないけどmore blanket plz
00:27:161 (3) - これのリバースのところhitsound欲しいな SamplesetをNormalにする？

[Rescue]
00:02:161 (4) - ここの裏でなってる音叩きたいなと思った(3)を逆に持ってきてスライダーをstreamにこんな感じにどう？　http://puu.sh/fFyqL.jpg
00:34:328 (6) - このスライダーを手前の青線までにして00:34:661 (X) - にadd note。ここの音は大きいしスライダーの終わりにするにはもったいない。また00:35:827 (1) - 00:37:161 (1) - ではスライダーの頭にきてるから多少違和感もあるので変えることを強くお薦めする。3/4のスライダは好きではないし今の感じはいい感じだと思う。
01:14:328 (2) - SV変わるの読めなかったしNC欲しいかな
[/list]

Ranked目指して頑張るのん

Thanks for mod

Sylphi

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Sylphi 2015-02-09T16:00:54+00:00

[Hard]

00:38:994 (5) - 휘슬 있는것도 나쁘진 않을꺼라 생각합니다
00:52:994 (4,5,6,7) - 개인적으로 하드에서 이런 5연타는 선호하지 않네요. 리핏슬라로 바꾸는게 어떤가요?
01:21:161 (1) - 176, 272로 옮기는 편이 흐름이 약간 나은것 같은데
01:00:661 (3) - 보컬에 맞춰서 이렇게 바꾸는게 좀더 어울리는것 같아요.

[Laurier's Insane]

00:17:161 (1) - Change to clap that follow drum(?) sound.
00:19:828 (1) - Same as above.
00:27:828 (1) - ^
00:30:494 (1) - ^
00:37:161 (1) - To add finish would be not bad imo.
00:50:911 - How about adding a circle that follow drum sound?
00:51:494 (4,5) - I just suggest changing to triple stream. i thought this is 1 / 2 when first play. (俺が下手だからかも知りません)
01:21:661 - This clap is a bit weird. how about removing clap?

[Rescue]

01:10:494 (5) - Add new combo
01:20:661 (1) - 제 생각엔 강조할만한 부분은 아니라 이 뉴콤보는 필요 없을것 같습니다.
01:22:494 (3) - 음악에 맞추어서 뉴콤보 추가

Good luck!

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Abe Nana 2015-02-10T12:45:19+00:00

Underflow wrote:
[Hard]
00:38:994 (5) - 휘슬 있는것도 나쁘진 않을꺼라 생각합니다 전에있는 휘슬이랑 안어울리네요
00:52:994 (4,5,6,7) - 개인적으로 하드에서 이런 5연타는 선호하지 않네요. 리핏슬라로 바꾸는게 어떤가요? 보류
01:21:161 (1) - 176, 272로 옮기는 편이 흐름이 약간 나은것 같은데
01:00:661 (3) - 보컬에 맞춰서 이렇게 바꾸는게 좀더 어울리는것 같아요. 별차이 없는거같은데 흐름이 이게 더 좋아보이니 그대로

[Rescue]
01:10:494 (5) - Add new combo
01:20:661 (1) - 제 생각엔 강조할만한 부분은 아니라 이 뉴콤보는 필요 없을것 같습니다.
01:22:494 (3) - 음악에 맞추어서 뉴콤보 추가
Good luck!

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감사합니다

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2015-02-11T08:26:04+00:00

In game M4M

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.

[General]

ビデオEditで早送りとかしてるとめっちゃ重いからランクのやつから持ってきたがいいと思う
Easy Tickrate１でいいと思うんだけど、そんなTick使ってるわけでもないしうるさい＆汚く見える

[Hard]

00:14:161 (2) - Gした方が流れ良くない？
00:48:661 (1) - わざわざリバースで取る必要あるの？こんなんでいいと思うんだけど
SPOILER
00:53:828 (1) - NCいらないと思う
01:01:161 (1,2,3) - この赤点減速スライダーからの３連めちゃ押しづらいと思うよー
01:06:161 (4,1) - BPM１８０でこのジャンプはInsaneだと思う

これStarRate以上に難しいと思うよ

[ろりえもん]

00:03:828 (1,3) - それぞれ終点Sampl Normal付けたい、現状00:04:328 (2,4) - この間が寂しくて浮いちゃってる
00:07:161 - Insaneでも書いたけどここに入れるなら00:07:328 (5) - こいつにもないと変だから消していいと思う
00:09:828 - Finish入れるとキレイになると思う
00:11:328 (3) - whistleよりもSampl Normalのが自然だと思った
00:31:661 (4) - Bodyにwhistle入っちゃってます
00:32:494 - Finish入れたい
00:34:328 - 頭だけでもSC6のホイッスルにしたい
00:37:828 - ここもpattern的には6のwhistleだと思った
00:42:161 (1,2) - 配置好きだけどrhythm逆にして欲しい、00:42:161 (1) - ボーカルも音も伸びてるのに切るのはすごい違和感
00:46:828 (2) - 00:47:161 - Insaneと同じでFinish付けたい、サビ前だし盛り上げたいよね
00:51:494 (4,5) - 00:51:661 - 音あるし３連にして欲しい、２連は優しくないと思う
01:01:828 - 前半はいいけどこっちはFinish欲しい
01:05:828 (3) - ここもジャーン的なのなってるし同じ
01:21:828 - ホントは２にも欲しいけど見てる感じFinish嫌いそうだからせめてここに付けたい感
01:24:494 (3,3,3) - ここも欲しいよねーｗ

[Rescue]

00:07:161 (2) - Remove whistle、ここを取るなら00:07:328 (3) - こっちもaddをSoftにしていれなきゃ変
00:12:161 (1,2,3,4) - 同じ音の４浮いてて対応しづらそうだし、こうしたい
SPOILER
00:15:661 (2) - soft whistle
00:15:828 (3) - 00:15:994 - swap whistle
00:19:828 - whistle欲しくね？
00:20:661 - ^ 7にもあってもいいと思うけどお好みで
00:46:494 - 個人的にFinish押し、Vol１０％下げて00:46:828 (2) - 00:47:161 - にも入れると尚好き
00:48:661 (3,4,5) - 正直Overmapだと思った
01:04:328 (2,3,4) - ^　Image君のExもこういう音取りしてBATに言われてたし無難に単発でいいと思う、こっちはInsaneの事も考慮してね
01:07:328 (1,2,3) - それぞれ頭にSoft whistle付けたい
01:22:494 (1,2) - ここだけ近すぎて浮いて汚く見える、繋げるか離して欲しい
01:27:661 - ここSoft Finishだと思うんだけど、Keepするならwhistle付けたい

mod time: 2hour

gl

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Abe Nana 2015-02-11T17:16:19+00:00

-Nanaka- wrote:
In game M4M

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.

[General]
ビデオEditで早送りとかしてるとめっちゃ重いからランクのやつから持ってきたがいいと思う[/color]
Easy Tickrate１でいいと思うんだけど、そんなTick使ってるわけでもないしうるさい＆汚く見える[/color]
[Hard]
00:14:161 (2) - Gした方が流れ良くない？流れがあわない
00:48:661 (1) - わざわざリバースで取る必要あるの？こんなんでいいと思うんだけど[/color]
SPOILER
00:53:828 (1) - NCいらないと思う
01:01:161 (1,2,3) - この赤点減速スライダーからの３連めちゃ押しづらいと思うよー
01:06:161 (4,1) - BPM１８０でこのジャンプはInsaneだと思う[/color]

これStarRate以上に難しいと思うよ

[Rescue]
00:07:161 (2) - Remove whistle、ここを取るなら00:07:328 (3) - こっちもaddをSoftにしていれなきゃ変
00:12:161 (1,2,3,4) - 同じ音の４浮いてて対応しづらそうだし、こうしたい　そうでもない
SPOILER
00:15:661 (2) - soft whistle　Nope。今のがいい感じ
00:15:828 (3) - 00:15:994 - swap whistle　歌詞に合わしてるんでね
00:19:828 - whistle欲しくね？終点にあるしここにも付けるのはちょっとうちには合わない
00:20:661 - ^ 7にもあってもいいと思うけどお好みで今のを維持しつつ00:20:828 - 流れ的にこっちが抜けてると思ってこっちに
00:46:494 - 個人的にFinish押し、Vol１０％下げて00:46:828 (2) - 00:47:161 - にも入れると尚好き[/color]
00:48:661 (3,4,5) - 正直Overmapだと思った今どきにこういうのはデフォ
01:04:328 (2,3,4) - ^　Image君のExもこういう音取りしてBATに言われてたし無難に単発でいいと思う、こっちはInsaneの事も考慮してね[/color]
01:07:328 (1,2,3) - それぞれ頭にSoft whistle付けたい
01:22:494 (1,2) - ここだけ近すぎて浮いて汚く見える、繋げるか離して欲しい
01:27:661 - ここSoft Finishだと思うんだけど、Keepするならwhistle付けたい

mod time: 2hour

gl

Thanks!

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Abe Nana 2015-02-12T14:59:23+00:00

2015.02.12 Change the Background

N a s y a

510 posts

Joined March 2012

N a s y a 2015-02-14T07:20:49+00:00

yoyo

[easy]
01:27:911 - vol5%って大丈夫だったっけ…

[habi]
fine

[hard]
01:27:911 - easyと同じ

[laurier]
00:51:494 (4,5) - 3連打？
01:11:744 (7) - x186y334に移動させてもいいかも？
01:27:911 - easyと同じ

[chata]
00:12:827 (5) - 終端drumwhistleが合うと思う
00:37:494 (2) - drumwhistle
00:39:994 (1) - 始端のSamplesetのNormalいらないかも？
01:07:828 (4) - キックスライダーでもいいかも？
01:14:328 (1) - 個人的にはx0.75スライダーの方が好き
01:27:911 - easyと同じ

ganbatte!

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2015-02-14T14:33:09+00:00

[Habi's Normal]

00:32:994 (3) - Ctrl + H 하는게 더 모양이 좋아보이는것 같아요.

[Hard]

00:04:994 (2) - 이거를 00:04:328 (3) 랑 겹쳐주는게 깔끔해보이는듯?

[Laurier's Insane]

00:15:161 (3) - x:355 y:220 imperfect stack
00:51:494 (4) - i recommend change to like this
SPOILER
00:59:494 (5) - imperfect stack
01:01:828 (3) - ^
01:13:994 (1) - ^
01:24:994 (4) - ^

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Abe Nana 2015-02-14T14:44:01+00:00

N a s y a wrote:
yoyo

[easy]
01:27:911 - vol5%って大丈夫だったっけ… ok

[hard]
01:27:911 - easyと同じ　ok

[chata]
00:12:827 (5) - 終端drumwhistleが合うと思う合わないかも
00:37:494 (2) - drumwhistle　おｋ
00:39:994 (1) - 始端のSamplesetのNormalいらないかも？ん・・今がいいと思う
01:07:828 (4) - キックスライダーでもいいかも？保留。難易度を上げるつもりは特にない
01:14:328 (1) - 個人的にはx0.75スライダーの方が好き⊂（＾ω＾）⊃ﾌﾞｰﾝって音は加速の合図
01:27:911 - easyと同じ　ok

ganbatte!

Enon wrote:
[Hard]
00:04:994 (2) - 이거를 00:04:328 (3) 랑 겹쳐주는게 깔끔해보이는듯? 음. 엇갈리는 스택은 제 스타일이여서 이대로 두고싶네요

thanks for mod ⊂（＾ω＾）⊃

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-02-15T00:11:54+00:00

(╯°□°)╯彡

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Abe Nana 2015-02-15T04:34:28+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
(╯°□°)╯彡

？_？

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-02-17T05:30:53+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47328
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
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TimelineZoom: 1.299999

[Metadata]
Title:Gimme! Revolution
TitleUnicode:ギミー！レボリューション
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:-Chata-
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:俺、ツインテールになります。
Tags:Ore Twintail ni Narimasu opening Laurier HabiHolic
BeatmapID:623243
BeatmapSetID:264087

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.97
SliderTickRate:1

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koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-02-19T17:00:03+00:00

let's recheck

텔룸미와이

구조!

00:21:828 (4,5) - ㅡㅡ 최선입니까? 1/1 슬라로 쭉그어주시는게 피트도맞고 덜어색하네요. 덤으로 00:22:078 - 여기서 끝나는 음은 하나도없고

Laurier's Insane

00:31:661 (4,1) - this is really hard to read when playing: http://puu.sh/g3LDR/3661329182.jpg can you consider moving 00:32:161 (2) - some grids to the left, up to make this noticeable? like this http://puu.sh/g3LkR/f155dddf26.jpg it would be better to read than http://puu.sh/g3Lnp/bfdac2b8a1.jpg this
00:34:328 (7,2) - http://puu.sh/g3LSe/0892623cfb.jpg it's better to avoid touch score

어려움

00:00:994 (2) - 적어도 이건 CTRL+G 해줘야할듯
00:03:161 (3) - 커브가 아래쪽으로 너무깊은데 하드난이도이기도하고 커브약간 위쪽으로 올려주는게 좋을듯 치기불편함 너무 아래에있으면

하비의 보통

00:23:994 (1) - 피니시 대가리에 추가하실꺼 꼬리에 잘못넣으신거같은데 확인바랍니다, 그리고 꼬리에 노말 샘플셋
00:33:994 (5) - 첫 모딩때 언급했던건데, 보컬이나 드럼이나 백그라운드 소리로도 당연히 http://puu.sh/g3MOc/655a9309ce.jpg 이게 어울리고 안 어색한데 고치시면, 00:33:828 (5) - 이거머리에 노말샘플셋 추가 안고치면 이유좀
00:49:161 (1) - 노말에선 필요없으니 뉴콤 없애는게 좋음 만약 넣고싶다 하면 00:54:494 (3) - 여기에도 똑같이해주셔야할듯 음조랑 가사만 다르고 음악은 같으니 똑같이안해주면 뉴콤 불일치 불일치당한 뉴콤기분생각도좀 해주셔야할듯

다되면 콜미백좀

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Abe Nana 2015-02-19T17:32:42+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
let's recheck

텔룸미와이

어려움
00:00:994 (2) - 적어도 이건 CTRL+G 해줘야할듯 no. 시작지점기준으로 너무 멀어짐. 그래서 1을 반전시킴

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-02-20T00:56:24+00:00

oki, seem fine to me.

Bubbled ~

@Next BN : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/229800 scanter's map is still in qualified, be careful.

and about this 00:00:994 (2) - I suggest ctrl+g'ing this in hard diff, since there are only 2 reverses in this slider, the slider reversing will end on the slider tail, and that creates awkward flow from this slider to the next one which is on completely opposite side of this slider. Besides, this kind of distancing can cause potential confusion on whether this pattern is spaced as 1/2 or 1/4 00:00:994 (2,1) -

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2015-02-25T17:00:53+00:00

Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

fine.

[Rescue]

overmapしてる箇所が多いので誤魔化せそうな場所以外挙げていきます。
00:30:911 (5,6) - 少し無理があるような気がするので5を消して1/2にした方がいいです。
00:32:327 (2) - 1/4スライダーから単発に変更
00:32:994 (5) - ^
01:00:995 (5) - ^
01:03:494 (2,3) - 音ないと思うので何らかの形で変更したほうがいいと思います。
01:09:911 - ここnote加えて3連に出来ると思うんですが、01:10:911 (2,3) - こっちの音がない方に3連を入れているので違和感がありました。
01:14:578 (2,1) - 2を3/4スライダーに変更し1を削除した方がいいです。
01:15:828 (1,2,3) - ここから同じような音取りが続きますが、ほぼovermapです。実際に音が聞こえるのは01:16:161 - と01:16:328 - なのでこれは直すべきだと思います。
01:16:494 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:161 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:828 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:494 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:161 (1,2,3) - ^
01:23:828 (1,2,3) - ^
01:25:161 (1,2,3) - ^
01:26:494 (1,2,3) - ^

[Habi's Normal]

00:17:994 (4) - Try to move the note of x68 y240 here for spacing.
00:26:661 (1,2) - spacing
00:31:994 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I recommend to put the note consistent for Normal diff. It seems that to be confused for a bit random spacing. Try to use 1,10x spading of here.
00:41:994 (5) - Try this shape for spacing.
SPOILER
00:51:494 (3,4) - Spacing keep to 1,10x is better here for me.
01:09:328 (2) - Add finish to slider head instead of clap.
01:09:994 (3,4) - Spacing is weird.

問題点はovermapのみでした。そこさえ直せばqualifiedできると思います

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-02-26T07:05:57+00:00

@Guy : 01:09:328 (2) - Add finish to slider head instead of clap. / Very Bad hitsounding me Sorry

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SPOILER

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ギミー！レボリューション
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:-Chata-
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:俺、ツインテールになります。
Tags:Ore Twintail ni Narimasu opening Laurier HabiHolic
BeatmapID:623243
BeatmapSetID:264087

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.97
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"video.avi"
0,0,"Kunka.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
-5,333.333333333333,4,2,2,60,1,0
48328,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
67994,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 200,200,200
Combo2 : 255,70,70
Combo3 : 40,148,255
Combo4 : 255,255,66

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