Shoko Nakagawa - RAY OF LIGHT (TV Size) · forum

saymun

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saymun 2010-04-12T13:07:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 1 May 2010 at 1:14:34 PM

Artist: Shoko Nakagawa
Title: RAY OF LIGHT (TV Size)
Source: Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood
Tags: Hagane no Renkinjutsushi DJPop
BPM: 94
Filesize: 12583kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

DJPop's Insane (4.9 stars, 299 notes)
Easy (0.94 stars, 68 notes)
Hard (4.65 stars, 203 notes)
Normal (3.9 stars, 139 notes)

Download: Shoko Nakagawa - RAY OF LIGHT (TV Size)
Download: Shoko Nakagawa - RAY OF LIGHT (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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13th beatmap~ FMA Brotherhood ED 5!

Last edited by saymun 2010-05-01T03:14:58+00:00, edited 12 times in total.

Garven

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Garven 2010-04-12T13:29:48+00:00

[General]
I like using 00:51:345 as a preview point.
Overall, your soft hit sounds are really quiet (except for the parts when you want to emphasize the vocals). Maybe up them a tick or so?
Maybe add fma to tags?

[Easy]
01:10:175 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:12:090, and maybe add a finish.

[Hard]
00:24:537 (1,2,3) - The spacing here doesn't feel like a warranted jump... I didn't have any problem with it though.
00:32:196 (4) - Delete this beat.
00:58:686 (1) - No new combo
00:59:962 (1) - ^
01:01:239 (1) - ^

Nice relaxing song. Star~

saymun

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saymun 2010-04-13T08:50:11+00:00

Garven wrote:
[General]
I like using 00:51:345 as a preview point. Done
Overall, your soft hit sounds are really quiet (except for the parts when you want to emphasize the vocals). Maybe up them a tick or so?
Maybe add fma to tags? Think its all fine

[Easy]
01:10:175 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:12:090, and maybe add a finish. X

[Hard]
00:24:537 (1,2,3) - The spacing here doesn't feel like a warranted jump... I didn't have any problem with it though.
00:32:196 (4) - Delete this beat. X
00:58:686 (1) - No new combo Done
00:59:962 (1) - ^ X
01:01:239 (1) - ^ X

Nice relaxing song. Star~

KIA

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KIA 2010-04-14T14:05:43+00:00

Nice map xD
[Hard]
00:28:686 (7) - New combo
00:29:643 (1) - Remove new combo

SPOILER

00:35:707 (6) - new combo
00:36:026 (1) - remove new combo

00:37:941 (5) - new combo
01:00:282 (1) - remove new combo

Starrr~~
PS. add some tags xD like "ED", etc..

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2010-04-14T14:13:26+00:00

Hi~

General
- Not sure about timing (Maybe lower the offset?)
270 for the offset?
- How about 00:52:303 as a preview time?
- 01:11:771 End kiai?

Easy
01:01:558 (5) - Clap

Normal
01:02:196 (3) - Clap

Hard
Fine

Will wait for DJPOP's
Star~

saymun

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saymun 2010-04-15T02:29:34+00:00

Fixed:

sonnyc wrote:
General
- 01:11:771 End kiai?

Normal
01:02:196 (3) - Clap

alvisto

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alvisto 2010-04-16T15:49:16+00:00

Ugh.... NAZI !!!!

HARD
00:30:760 - imho, this part too quiet, raise volume by 1 tick ?
00:30:920 (1) - soft finish ? And if you don't wanna raise volume tick in this timing section, you can create another timing section here so that the soft finish can have a volume of 1 tick higher. (to make the soft finish sound a bit more audible)
00:33:473 (1) - ^
00:51:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - HRMMM~~~ well, I suck at playing this 1/6 stream
00:58:686 (3,4) - No finish, finish, clap pattern here ? xD intended ?
01:08:899 (3,4) - intended hitsound pattern ?
01:12:409 (6,7,8) - Normal hitsound timing section ? with volume 1.5 tick from the right
01:22:941 - This place screams for a note ! But, well, it's fine without it xD
01:20:707 (1,2) - *refer below*

NORMAL
00:20:069 (3) - clap ?
00:30:920 (1) - finish at start of slider with increased volume. Also finish at here as well 00:33:473 (1) - ?
01:09:537 (6) - why 2 claps here ? remove the 1st one ?
01:20:707 (1) - finish at start, middle and end of slider ? (with increased volume by a bit)

EASY
00:30:920 (1) - same
00:40:494 (1) - clap ?
00:54:537 (3) - add whistle ?
00:57:090 (3) - ^
01:20:707 (1) - finish at start, middle and end ? (increase volume a bit)

GENERAL
Wanna try normal-hitclap as soft-hitclap2 ? Try and see you like it or not ? (because imho, I think it's more suitable. xD Or you can use japanese wind chime, which would be more<3 <3 <3 <3 Find me if you need the chime)

Cool map, as always, map is clean and fun. Love your hitsound pattern. Breeze was right, you do have A LOT OF potential.

Good luck ! and keep mapping ! xD (but you keep mapping the same genre of song ? xD)

saymun

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saymun 2010-04-17T02:57:55+00:00

alvisto wrote:
Ugh.... NAZI !!!!

HARD
00:30:760 - imho, this part too quiet, raise volume by 1 tick ? Done
00:30:920 (1) - soft finish ? And if you don't wanna raise volume tick in this timing section, you can create another timing section here so that the soft finish can have a volume of 1 tick higher. (to make the soft finish sound a bit more audible) Done
00:33:473 (1) - ^ ^
00:51:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - HRMMM~~~ well, I suck at playing this 1/6 stream XD
00:58:686 (3,4) - No finish, finish, clap pattern here ? xD intended ?Yup
01:08:899 (3,4) - intended hitsound pattern ? ^
01:12:409 (6,7,8) - Normal hitsound timing section ? with volume 1.5 tick from the right Okay
01:22:941 - This place screams for a note ! But, well, it's fine without it xD Hehe okay
01:20:707 (1,2) - *refer below*

NORMAL
00:20:069 (3) - clap ? Done
00:30:920 (1) - finish at start of slider with increased volume. Also finish at here as well 00:33:473 (1) - ? Okay
01:09:537 (6) - why 2 claps here ? remove the 1st one ? Oops XD
01:20:707 (1) - finish at start, middle and end of slider ? (with increased volume by a bit) Done

EASY
00:30:920 (1) - sameDone
00:40:494 (1) - clap ? ^
00:54:537 (3) - add whistle ? ^
00:57:090 (3) - ^ ^
01:20:707 (1) - finish at start, middle and end ? (increase volume a bit) ^

GENERAL
Wanna try normal-hitclap as soft-hitclap2 ? Try and see you like it or not ? (because imho, I think it's more suitable. xD Or you can use japanese wind chime, which would be more<3 <3 <3 <3 Find me if you need the chime) Okay i can try XD, just give me the sonud file

Cool map, as always, map is clean and fun. Love your hitsound pattern. Breeze was right, you do have A LOT OF potential. XD

Good luck ! and keep mapping ! xD (but you keep mapping the same genre of song ? xD) Hahaha, i'll change genre SOON i promise haha

jockeytiyan

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jockeytiyan 2010-04-22T04:47:12+00:00

Wow, the ED of the most grotesque episodes of FMA: B. <3 j/k.

I noticed that the timing doesn't apply properly on the first part of the map (00:00:282 - 00:10:175). It goes off late by 20 ms. or so. However, the correct timing applies beyond 00:10:175 then goes off again at the kiai part. I personally got 253, but it's not accurate enough for me so you might wanna tweak around.

I'll mod when DJPop's diff is added. ^^

alvisto wrote:
...you do have A LOT OF potential.

jockeytiyan wrote:
Potential? I'd call it talent. <3

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-04-23T08:19:21+00:00

Sorry for the late.

Download: Shoko Nakagawa - RAY OF LIGHT (TV Size) (saymun) [DJPop's Insane].osu

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-04-23T12:22:54+00:00

-1 Overall in my diff pls

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-04-25T19:48:16+00:00

ooh FMA..
Hmmm... timing is odd, blargh, a second offset... I'm getting -8 on your second offset (52,599), not sure about third offset since theres less notes to test on (it sounds late though)
Djpop to tags, duh

Easy-
00:45:601 - while following the slow pace, I felt there should be a note here (or bring the next slider back 1/1), cuz I wasn't following vocal while playing this, and that next slider is reverted to vocal
00:52:606 (1) - isn't snapped
00:54:521 (3) - remove custom whistle?
00:57:074 (3) - ^ (reason is, 01:04:734 (3) sounds better without the custom whistle, one hitsound per note)
^ that applies to all diffs and places that sound like this... if you care

Normal-
00:34:430 (4) - imo, this would feel better as a 2 repeat, and a note at where this used to end?
01:10:798 (2,3,4,1) - unsnapped
01:16:238 - did you miss a clap here?
Could use more finish hitsounds

Hard-
00:10:494 (1) - finish would fit here nicely?
00:30:282 (2) - the custom clap here sounds weird... seems out of place, remove clap?
00:47:835 (4,5,6) - space this away a bit? (compared to 1,2,3 i mean)? no matter

DJpop's- ...
Can't seem to find anything unintentional or missed... Fine

Don't like the clap+custom whistle mix (default normal hitnormal sound) on one note, as mentioned in Easy, applied to all diffs (though Djpop's is custom clap+ whistle), totally personal preference
For Easy, Normal, Hard - Make the last spinner's fade out better, leaving as it is is kinda unsettling...

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-04-26T10:33:19+00:00

[Easy]
01:10:160 (1) - end this spinner at 01:12:089 ?
00:45:601 (6) - wrong spacing

[Normal]
- Resnap all note

[Hard]
- Fix 2nd offset to 52607 like other diff. and resnap all note

[DJPop's Insane]
Fine.

Orz

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-04-27T12:00:38+00:00

Eh...too many empty spaces before video starts

Well, I guess that's fine then
And yeah, another FA map, if you decide to make "Let It Out", count me in

[General]

Please turn off countdown of [Easy], [Normal] and [Hard]

[Easy]

00:10:494 (1) - Add finish
00:41:133 (2) - ^
01:02:819 (1) - ^
01:21:983 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:10:494 (1) - Add finish
00:41:133 (3) - ^
01:02:819 (2) - ^
01:21:983 (1) - ^

[Hard]

01:21:984 (2) - Add finish

[DJPop's Insane]
fine

star

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-04-30T09:51:41+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Easy]
1.6 slider velocity + 1.0x distance spacing is a bit high for Easy imo.
00:30:920 (1,2) - 0.5x spacing at 0.5x BPM part
00:48:473 (2) - whistle at 1,2,4,5 beat.
01:10:160 (1) - end 1/2 later?

[Normal]
feel custom whistle is a bit loud during kiai... the map is fine.

[Hard]
oh what,1.6 slider velocity + 1.0x distance spacing for Easy, for Normal, and now for Hard? i think this is a serious problem.
00:38:899 (6) - new combo.
00:51:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's weird to let people read stacked 1/6 streams. maybe use two sliders instead?

[DJPop's Insane]
00:34:430 (4) - whistle?
01:02:021 (9) - whistle?

star.

saymun

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saymun 2010-04-30T13:53:12+00:00

Fixed these

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Easy]
00:30:920 (1,2) - 0.5x spacing at 0.5x BPM part
00:48:473 (2) - whistle at 1,2,4,5 beat.

[Hard]
oh what,1.6 slider velocity + 1.0x distance spacing for Easy, for Normal, and now for Hard? i think this is a serious problem. Made it 1.4x spacing
00:38:899 (6) - new combo.
00:51:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's weird to let people read stacked 1/6 streams. maybe use two sliders instead?

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-04-30T14:23:21+00:00

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2010-05-01T03:00:35+00:00

Easy
00:48:154(x) - note(clap)

Normal
00:02:196(5) - clap(volume 30%off)
00:04:750(5) - ^(volume 30%off)
00:07:303(6) - ^(volume 30%off)

Hard
fine

DJPop's Insane
fine

starrr

saymun

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saymun 2010-05-01T03:15:30+00:00

Fixed