1. Run away (5,85 stars, 1527 notes)

ClickNoise wrote:

Yo. Here is the Mod you wanted :3

00:42:165 (2) - Maybe make him more straight. Nope
00:49:587 (2) - Perfect stack with 1 Osu doesn't allow me to do so
00:50:837 (2) - ^ ^
01:17:556 (7,1) - Perfect stack with these sliders :3 ^
02:32:400 (3,4) - Perfect stack ^
02:35:993 (2,3) - Maybe a better blanket? Done

There you go c:
I hope i was helpful

inspectorscout wrote:

yo, not from my queue, but I'll use the banner anyway.

consider changing the combo colours, the green hurts my eyes and is not relevant in any way....maybe make the colours a 50 shades of brown? lol jk, I'd say light brown, dark brown, dark red, white (but still a bit grey since something completely white is unrankable)
Copy that, green has been changed (I might change it back to a dark green later, we'll see)

00:09:900 (3,4) - this overlap doesnt look that pretty, but maybe you can try to blanket them if you twist them a bit?
Ok

00:11:775 (1,2) - curve these
Nope

00:30:525 (1) - the new measure starts only here, so the new combo's before aren't needed, so I suggest keeping this and 00:29:275 (1) - this, delete the others in this part
Eeeeeh, no

00:36:775 (1,2) - change the angle of these to make the a bit more horizontal, it wouldn't interrrupt the flow as much as it does now
I broke that 3 times there, I just wonder why you point this out
That's the point of it, btw

00:53:806 (3) - curve this one outwards, not inwards
No

00:54:900 (3) - ctrl+g
Ok

01:10:681 (1) - place this one on x 360 y 312
No, why? xD

01:10:837 (2) - on x 96 y 348
No

01:15:993 (2) - curve this one upwards
No

01:20:525 (1,2,3) - maybe make these anti jumps and place the 2 and 3 on respectively x 280 y 80 and x 232 y 88
Nope, just the idea sounds bad for me :\

02:09:118 (5) - curve upwards
No

02:09:743 (2) - curve downwards
No

02:15:525 (1,2) - purely aestethical: these overlap by just that little bit, fix it
That thing disappears during gameplay, pointless

02:30:993 (2) - maybe ctrl + g?
No

02:43:025 - cmon, this break has some nice drums going on, please map it
Nope

(I am not skipping a part here, I think this part is way better than the first part
Cause it was mapped months after the last part xD

05:00:172 (4,5,6,7) - looks a little bit messy, maybe curve it from the left like this:

SPOILER

No, sorry

04:47:772 (1) - this part doesn't really feel like kiai, maybe remove it here
I keep it for now

05:26:172 (5) - I'd say NC
Agreed

05:27:572 (12,13) - you are building up a climax yet the spacing suddenly lowers here, fix it
No

05:40:172 (12) - if you do spaced streams, don't put the slider under the last note but space it too, it feels and looks better
After I did the rest like this, you think I don't know that? XD
But yes, it was a mistake, fixed

also a suggestion: maybe gradually reduce hitsound volume at the end to emphasise the fade-out
I might do, we'll see


That's it for this mod. I think this set could use a couple of mods more, but I definitely see the potential of this map.
Good luck!

~Scout

oscar45 wrote:

My only complaint is that the song is censored, other than that good job.

Hullahopp wrote:

inspectorscout wrote:

yo, not from my queue, but I'll use the banner anyway.

consider changing the combo colours, the green hurts my eyes and is not relevant in any way....maybe make the colours a 50 shades of brown? lol jk, I'd say light brown, dark brown, dark red, white (but still a bit grey since something completely white is unrankable)
Copy that, green has been changed (I might change it back to a dark green later, we'll see)

00:09:900 (3,4) - this overlap doesnt look that pretty, but maybe you can try to blanket them if you twist them a bit?
Ok

00:11:775 (1,2) - curve these
Nope

00:30:525 (1) - the new measure starts only here, so the new combo's before aren't needed, so I suggest keeping this and 00:29:275 (1) - this, delete the others in this part
Eeeeeh, no

00:36:775 (1,2) - change the angle of these to make the a bit more horizontal, it wouldn't interrrupt the flow as much as it does now
I broke that 3 times there, I just wonder why you point this out
That's the point of it, btw

00:53:806 (3) - curve this one outwards, not inwards
No

00:54:900 (3) - ctrl+g
Ok

01:10:681 (1) - place this one on x 360 y 312
No, why? xD

01:10:837 (2) - on x 96 y 348
No

01:15:993 (2) - curve this one upwards
No

01:20:525 (1,2,3) - maybe make these anti jumps and place the 2 and 3 on respectively x 280 y 80 and x 232 y 88
Nope, just the idea sounds bad for me :\

02:09:118 (5) - curve upwards
No

02:09:743 (2) - curve downwards
No

02:15:525 (1,2) - purely aestethical: these overlap by just that little bit, fix it
That thing disappears during gameplay, pointless

02:30:993 (2) - maybe ctrl + g?
No

02:43:025 - cmon, this break has some nice drums going on, please map it
Nope

(I am not skipping a part here, I think this part is way better than the first part
Cause it was mapped months after the last part xD

05:00:172 (4,5,6,7) - looks a little bit messy, maybe curve it from the left like this:

SPOILER

No, sorry

04:47:772 (1) - this part doesn't really feel like kiai, maybe remove it here
I keep it for now

05:26:172 (5) - I'd say NC
Agreed

05:27:572 (12,13) - you are building up a climax yet the spacing suddenly lowers here, fix it
No

05:40:172 (12) - if you do spaced streams, don't put the slider under the last note but space it too, it feels and looks better
After I did the rest like this, you think I don't know that? XD
But yes, it was a mistake, fixed

also a suggestion: maybe gradually reduce hitsound volume at the end to emphasise the fade-out
I might do, we'll see


That's it for this mod. I think this set could use a couple of mods more, but I definitely see the potential of this map.
Good luck!

~Scout

Thank you so much for this mod, you're awesome! ^^

inspectorscout wrote:

So, I'm awesome but 80% of my mod gets denied? Ok I guess...