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download works fine to me
maybe is your connection/firewall idk :p
maybe is your connection/firewall idk :p
Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff
Red: Highly recommend
[General]
- Current video offset is pretty late, you can figure it out easily by looking at the wave at the end of the video at 03:11:924 -. Add -237ms to all diffs.
- 00:37:346 (1,1) - I cri for how unrefined this still looks ;-; .
- 01:26:451 - It feels more comfortable if there'd be a beat here to click as well since the 3/1 gap feels irregular.
- 01:57:557 (1,2) - Trifle, but would be cool if you could move this up a bit so 01:56:925 (4,2) - don't overlap
- 00:17:924 (3) - I think you miss whistles on this tail since there is a high-pitched vocal beat on it.
- 00:34:661 (2) - Whistle on tail? This is a pretty strong beat after all.
- 00:34:661 (2) - That normal-sampleset on the head just doesn't feel right as the strong beat clearly lies at 00:34:819 - and not at this point. Soft-sample.
- 01:17:609 (2) - Whistle on tail rather than reversearrow since there's a strong piano beat on the tail that should be emphasized.
- The hitsounds still feel pretty inconsistent throughout this map, specifically your placement of softwhistles and I really can't see a clear system out of it.
Just as an example, take this section 00:11:767 - to 00:18:872 -: this has pretty confusing whistle-patterns throughout all three combos. Does the focus lie on high-pitched vocal beats, on strong piano notes? They feel arbitrarily placed since there is no focus on anything.
Compare the section to your insane diff where the whistles actually follow only strong piano & high-pitched vocal beats which feels much more reasonable. Focussing beats on vocals is probably the reason why this happened orz.
- 01:18:240 (4) - Whistle on head?
- Gero pointed out the hidden notes issue in your diff, so i'll give me feedback on the ones that worry me:
02:08:293 (3,5) - This still look pretty difficult to read, the sliders should be visually a bit more away from each other to make it more readable. http://puu.sh/gmDYx/6fbdcd0427.jpg - 02:53:767 (4,1) - Same as above, it's even more dangerous actually even with the NC since people just passed the 02:53:609 (2,3,4) - triple and you expect them to sightread this 'semi-hidden' slider right after, which is pretty difficult at this stage imo.
- 03:06:556 (7,8) - Welp, you could blanket these already while you are at it lol.
- 00:53:924 (3) - Yup, this offbeat slider sounds terrible and it doesn't follow the vocal well either, it's better if you 00:53:924 (3,4) - ctrl+g these.
- 02:15:556 (3,1) - Feels overhitsounded since this is a somewhat calm section and I don't feel this vocal beats needs this emphasis. How about deleting these and set a whistle on 02:15:714 (4) - this sliderhead only instead.
- 02:16:819 (4) 02:19:346 (6) - - Delete whistles on tail, there's nothing to emphasize here.
- 02:21:082 (5) - This vocal beat doesn't need emphasis, delete whistle.
- 02:22:503 (5) - Following rhythm feels more reasonable to play since the beat at 02:22:819 - is really strong and should be played, not only followed with slider.
- 02:54:714 (2) - 02:56:609 (4) - There's no need to clap here as there's no drumclap at these beats, delete.
- 02:57:714 (4) - Forgot clap on head.
- 03:05:293 (5) - Clap on tail.
- 03:08:767 (3) - Clap on tail.
- 03:09:240 (5) - Delete Whistle on this beat.
- I still dislike how you set so many whistles at the calm part between 02:34:188 - 02:41:609 - , it feels way too crowded.
I specifically mean the following whistles: 02:34:977 (4) - on head 02:36:398 (4) - 02:37:188 (3) - on head 02:38:293 (2,4) - on heads 02:40:030 (4) - on head 02:40:819 (2) - on head. Try to delete them and listen again, it feels much more appropriate imo.
I still don't feel comfortable with the rhythm placement in your Normal diff and your placement of softwhistles still need more improvement in the Normal and Insane Diff in my eyes orz... might be just me.
I will just leave this here as a cleanup for you, no KDs. I'm sure Gero would like to take a look at it again~
Anyway, good luck for this set!
I was about to mod this again, @Pho ninja xD
Everything fixed, thanks a lot Pho :3/
I re-arranged the patterns that you've pointed out so take a look to them just to be sure :3
I'll leave the vid offset change to Natsu :p
I re-arranged the patterns that you've pointed out so take a look to them just to be sure :3
I'll leave the vid offset change to Natsu :p
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Tags:Hatsune Miku Aoiiro ゆいこんぬ yuikonnu Silve ねじまきと置き手紙 Nejimaki to Okitegami 魔法のための少女クラブ Mahou no tame no Shoujo Club 初音ミク Xinely pkhg
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Topic Starter
thanks for checking o/Pho wrote:
[General][Easy]
- Current video offset is pretty late, you can figure it out easily by looking at the wave at the end of the video at 03:11:924 -. Add -237ms to all diffs. ya
[Normal]
- 00:37:346 (1,1) - I cri for how unrefined this still looks ;-; . mmm to be honest is clearly not a blank, also the current way looks nice to me o.o
- 01:26:451 - It feels more comfortable if there'd be a beat here to click as well since the 3/1 gap feels irregular. if you play this at normal speed there is not way that you will feel uncomfortable, the pause is really nice there, atleast for me
- 01:57:557 (1,2) - Trifle, but would be cool if you could move this up a bit so 01:56:925 (4,2) - don't overlap not really noticeable in game
- 00:17:924 (3) - I think you miss whistles on this tail since there is a high-pitched vocal beat on it. will be not consistent with other parts also with my insane
- 00:34:661 (2) - Whistle on tail? This is a pretty strong beat after all. mmm kk
- 00:34:661 (2) - That normal-sampleset on the head just doesn't feel right as the strong beat clearly lies at 00:34:819 - and not at this point. Soft-sample. nop, there is a sound in the music, that i believe need normal sampleset
- 01:17:609 (2) - Whistle on tail rather than reversearrow since there's a strong piano beat on the tail that should be emphasized. kk
- The hitsounds still feel pretty inconsistent throughout this map, specifically your placement of softwhistles and I really can't see a clear system out of it.
Just as an example, take this section 00:11:767 - to 00:18:872 -: this has pretty confusing whistle-patterns throughout all three combos. Does the focus lie on high-pitched vocal beats, on strong piano notes? They feel arbitrarily placed since there is no focus on anything.
Compare the section to your insane diff where the whistles actually follow only strong piano & high-pitched vocal beats which feels much more reasonable. Focussing beats on vocals is probably the reason why this happened orz. Is where that you said that lol, since I just copy past the hitsounds with the tool, so they are exactly the same as my insane, and yes I prefer vocals over instrument, nothing wrong with it.
[Insane]After some rethinking, I have to say that I wouldn't feel comfortable to rank this map, sorry.
- 00:53:924 (3) - Yup, this offbeat slider sounds terrible and it doesn't follow the vocal well either, it's better if you 00:53:924 (3,4) - ctrl+g these. It fit perfectly there, I don't see a valid reason to changge this
- 02:15:556 (3,1) - Feels overhitsounded since this is a somewhat calm section and I don't feel this vocal beats needs this emphasis. How about deleting these and set a whistle on 02:15:714 (4) - this sliderhead only instead. removed both
- 02:16:819 (4) 02:19:346 (6) - - Delete whistles on tail, there's nothing to emphasize here. sure
- 02:21:082 (5) - This vocal beat doesn't need emphasis, delete whistle. delete the object and liste to the music there is a sound piano?
- 02:22:503 (5) - Following rhythm feels more reasonable to play since the beat at 02:22:819 - is really strong and should be played, not only followed with slider. why? as I said before I follow vocals not drums, I want the vocals to be click'ables as I do in all my maps.
- 02:54:714 (2) - 02:56:609 (4) - There's no need to clap here as there's no drumclap at these beats, delete. there is a sound that I want to follow and clap sound good
- 02:57:714 (4) - Forgot clap on head.
- 03:05:293 (5) - Clap on tail.
- 03:08:767 (3) - Clap on tail. done all
- 03:09:240 (5) - Delete Whistle on this beat. it follows the melody I prefer to keep
- I still dislike how you set so many whistles at the calm part between 02:34:188 - 02:41:609 - , it feels way too crowded. I like to use whistles in the calm part of the songs, ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/180366 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/239374
I specifically mean the following whistles: 02:34:977 (4) - on head 02:36:398 (4) - 02:37:188 (3) - on head 02:38:293 (2,4) - on heads 02:40:030 (4) - on head 02:40:819 (2) - on head. Try to delete them and listen again, it feels much more appropriate imo. is about tastes tho, I prefer how they are
I still don't feel comfortable with the rhythm placement in your Normal diff and your placement of softwhistles still need more improvement in the Normal and Insane Diff in my eyes orz... might be just me. is just you, I do the same since years tho.. there is not a rule ¨about map 1/1 to the drums always in normal (usually this cause so many bad spreads this days) rhythm is a bit confused, but this is the middle point between the easy and hard diff and a normal diff is not more or less than that, about the hitsounds that's just a personal preference
I will just leave this here as a cleanup for you, no KDs. I'm sure Gero would like to take a look at it again~
Anyway, good luck for this set!
mapper's request
fixed bub
fixed bub
miku day check \o/
[Xinely's Easy]
[Xinely's Easy]
- 00:39:240 (1) - i'd personally end this on 00:40:346 - , feels like it emphasizes the music more this way
- 01:44:925 (1) - same, end on 01:46:030 - ?
- 00:23:767 (6) - is this supposed to be a normal clap? i think it should be soft addition here
- 00:30:240 (4) - finish? i hear it in the music
- 01:35:924 (1) - ^ (also the NC isn't consistent with the first phrase here, should check it out)
- 02:12:082 (1,2,3,4,1) - you used normal samples on the first time with this stream, i think you should use them again here
- 02:31:661 - i think it would be a very good idea to have a spinner here like the rest of the diffs, for consistency with the overall set
- 02:54:398 (1) - finish?
- 00:00:714 (1,2) - i'd use soft sampleset on these, so noisy and doesn't really fit the music as is imo
- 00:10:819 (5) - clap? i hear it in the music and it helps close out the phrase well
- 00:21:240 (1,2) - i think the clap pattern you have here makes this sound uneven, i'd either do all four with claps or none with claps
- 00:58:030 (7) - yo can you wiggle the end of this a little bit so the blanket is even it bugged me ;;
- 01:26:924 (2,3) - same comment from before about the uneven hitsounding
- 01:38:766 (2) - clap? with soft addition this time
Topic Starter
all done in normal and Insane, waiting for pkhg replycaptin1 wrote:
miku day check \o/ \o/
[Xinely's Easy]would have checked earlier to qualify this on 3/9 but i was busy this weekend ;; let me know
- 00:39:240 (1) - i'd personally end this on 00:40:346 - , feels like it emphasizes the music more this way
- 01:44:925 (1) - same, end on 01:46:030 - ?
About this, I think she is trying to cover all the sounds, so I'll like to keep this
[pkhg's Hard]
asdfasdf yeah can you double check for duped green lines
i hate green lines issues lol
i hate green lines issues lol
Topic Starter
phkg told me to fix all for him unless the spinner (also fixed that greenline)
grabbed a higher res bg and fixed a slider in normal touching hp bar
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Topic Starter
\:D/
yaay <3
gratz~
goooood
Grats Natsu :3)b
