Itou Kanako - Fake Me · forum

vincerio

Joined April 2009

vincerio 2010-05-14T00:24:45+00:00

Hiya~
BPM 148
resnap all notes
increase a bit of overall difficult will be better

[Normal]
00:04:959 - No break time (it's too short and not good(your song is short then try to put some notes.)
00:17:731(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wrong spacing just follow a distance snap...
00:21:583 - no more short break like this again

00:24:016(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wrong spacing
00:28:071 - no break if no idea to deal with left it without break...( due to the drain rate it will be okay)
00:33:950(4,5) - wrong spacing
No....
You should use distance snap all the whole song......it's unacceptable for your spacing
00:46:926 - unsnap
00:49:952 - new combo
00:56:049 - no new combo
01:02:942 - new combo
01:06:186 - no new combo
01:07:605 - unsnap
etc...
[combo mod]your combo is too long try to shorten them...
01:20:986 - combo like this is not allowed
01:34:722 - why kaia stop?
01:38:422 - don't place spinner at the same point of the end of slider start at 01:38:827 end with 01:43:287 add finish hitsound

^
[Hard]
use all above for a guideline editting you map...
[overall] you need distance snap
[combo] combo is not uniform (some is too short some is too long...)

Selee

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Selee 2010-05-14T21:44:35+00:00

Lol, thanks your modding anyway, I'm just putting notes now.
And I believe 147.97 works fine.

Teras

902 posts

Joined October 2009

Teras 2010-05-16T01:42:58+00:00

Hey.

[General]

Personally I think you should have the kiai start at 1:09:633 But that is totally up to you.

[Normal]

I don't like how you have put those slow sliders first and then they suddenly becomes faster. They can be confusing to newbies. :-/ Oh well. I don't find it being too much of a problem though.

00:31:112(1) 1 Grid up.
00:31:518(1) 1 Grid up.
00:36:992(6) New combo?
00:54:630(12) - 00:57:671(3) I can't read this part..I don't even thin k you can hide the slider like that. It confuses alot. :-/
1:02:942(8) New combo?
1:06:186(1) Break combo?
1:20:986 (1) - 1:22:000 (1) Jump on normal?

[Hard]

00:49:967 New combo.
00:53:413 ^
00:56:657 ^
00:58:076 ^
00:59:698 ^
1:11:660 - 1:11:863 (7) - (8) HUGE spacing error. You must fix this.
1:15:918 New combo.
1:16:323 - 1:16:526 Spacing error. Fix this.
1:28:893 New combo.
1:30:515 ^
1:32:339 ^
1:34:975 ^
1:35:178 - 1:35:381 (4) - (5) Spacing, fix this please.
1:35:786 (6) New combo?
1:36:597 (9) ^
1:37:813 (13) Add a finish at the end of this slider?
1:40:246 (1) Break combo and add a finish at the beginning?

Gawd damnit. This map sure needs alot of work

I won't star for now as you're not even done with all your diffs.
Oh well, just keep on mapping and I will be back to mod. ^^

Good luck! I'm sure this can turn out fine

EDIT: Woops, I didn't see the post above until I submitted this ><

roflninja

348 posts

Joined October 2009

roflninja 2010-07-18T20:56:26+00:00

Hi,
set a preview point the same in all difs (timing>set current position as preview point)
you have a .osb file in your folder, delete it and full submit, unless your planning on making a sotryboard (or i just didnt notice it)

[silent sky]
resnap all notes (timing>resnap all notes)
01:30:701 (1) - no new combo?

[crying sky]
00:04:756 (3) - to far away from the end of (2)

[blue sky]
00:41:445 (6) - move closer to (5) , or if you want that jump, new combo so its a bit more noticable
01:32:931 (4) - to far from (3) isnt it?
01:39:418 (12) - new combo?

nice map

Selee

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Selee 2010-07-18T23:23:09+00:00

roflninja wrote:
Hi,
set a preview point the same in all difs (timing>set current position as preview point) I just decided where it should be started..
you have a .osb file in your folder, delete it and full submit, unless your planning on making a sotryboard (or i just didnt notice it) I deleted it 5 times...hell, again...

[silent sky]
resnap all notes (timing>resnap all notes) I forgot that ? @_@ Thx
01:30:701 (1) - no new combo?

[crying sky]
00:04:756 (3) - to far away from the end of (2) I know...but it's 0.5X BpM...And it's the same spacing from the end of (1) to the start of (2)

[blue sky]
00:41:445 (6) - move closer to (5) , or if you want that jump, new combo so its a bit more noticable That's the same 1.5x spacing @_@
01:32:931 (4) - to far from (3) isnt it?
01:39:418 (12) - new combo?

nice map

Thanks your modding & star

Vikon

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Vikon 2010-07-19T10:33:28+00:00

(可以說中文吧囧?)

[Silent Sky]
00:16:107 (5,6,1) - 在easy 或 normal中jump...好像有點難
00:41:647 無意義timing secion?還是你忘了改變它?
00:59:688 (1) 與其突然變靜音，或多加幾個timing section, 作一個淡出效果?
01:07:593 (1) ^
01:20:972 (3) 這個實在有點混淆，或移開點?

[Crying Sky]
00:11:242 (1) 加finish?
00:13:269 (2) 在slider尾加whistle?
00:14:891 (2) ^
00:16:512 (2) 在reverse和尾也加whistle ?
01:30:499 (1,2,3) spacing?
00:35:566 (1) 與其突然變靜音，或多加幾個timing section, 作一個淡出效果?
00:51:580 (1) 雖說不太嚴重，但因這個slider被00:49:958 (1,2) 爆出來的"300"遮住了，有少許混淆及不好看
01:00:701 (1) 與上一個diff同建議

[Blue Sky]
00:19:553 (5) new combo?
00:20:972 (14) 囧......這速度...最少加一個bpm2x的標誌吧?
00:27:458 (6) ^
00:35:566 (1) 與其他diff 同建議
00:42:053 (1) ^
00:48:337 (1) ^
01:00:701 (1) ^

不錯的map, star~

Kilala

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Kilala 2010-07-19T12:49:14+00:00

I really like this song so I just made a new Difficulty o,o
Use it if you like :D

Download: Itou Kanako - Fake Me (Selee) [Kilalas Fake].osu

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-07-19T16:56:20+00:00

[General]:

.osb的话应该删掉了? 记得删掉后full submit一次然后每次上传前打开文件夹看看有没有
01:34:756 (T) - 这之后继续用normal音效啊...soft怪怪的
01:09:620 (T) - KIAI建议这里开始

[Silent Sky]:

00:14:485 (4) - new combo
Slider Velocity略高了当然你可以再做个更简单的难度活着就是降低后重新map这个难度(也能去找那些不太挑刺的BAT :D)
00:34:756 (3) - 这个末尾note感觉没有必要静音啊
00:39:823 (6) - new combo
01:23:810 (4,5) - 需要整容

[Crying Sky]:

00:16:107 (1) - finish
00:16:512 (2) - 末尾finish移除
00:58:066 (7) - new combo

[Blue Sky]:

00:20:972 (14) - 很突然...建议x0.5而不是x2.0
00:27:458 (6) - ^

star~

Selee

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Selee 2010-07-20T03:59:38+00:00

Fixed XD

Gomo Psivarh

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Gomo Psivarh 2010-07-20T18:43:56+00:00

star

Tatsuo

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Tatsuo 2010-07-20T18:44:19+00:00

Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
I love the way you used those timing sections to volume down those spinners~

[Silent Sky]
Pretty difficulty for something at two and a half stars.
Otherwise good.

[Crying Sky]
Pretty good here.

[Blue Sky]
Good.

Overall a great beatmap. Have a star
*star*

Selee

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Selee 2010-07-20T20:50:54+00:00

lol, anyway, thanks for testing.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-07-21T13:14:06+00:00

since Vikon modded I'm not going to mod this but star just becoz I'm Chaos;head fans.
Good job!

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-07-21T14:08:55+00:00

[osz File Scan!]
Consider removing the audio from the video to reduce file size

[Blue Sky]
Fine, i love it

[Crying Sky]
Awesome!

[Silent Sky]
Fine

Yay let's all have a Starry Sky~

Hinagiku

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Joined August 2009

Hinagiku 2010-07-21T15:34:01+00:00

good map~~

Neethime

168 posts

Joined May 2010

Neethime 2010-07-22T06:27:27+00:00

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[Silent Sky]
SV偏高的问题之前也有人说过了……remap也不现实，希望下次注意吧

00:17:323 (6,1) - 这里的slider突然加快可能让新手有些措手不及,考虑删掉00:17:323 (6) ?
01:30:701 (1) - 移到 01:30:499 开始

[Crying Sky]
01:20:972 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:985 (2) - new combo

[Blue Sky]
00:11:242 (1) - finish
00:12:053 (4) - whistle , 后面5段也在末尾whistle
00:20:364 (9) - new combo
01:36:580 (7) - ^

Nice~ star

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2010-07-23T05:44:47+00:00

Hi~

以下只是建议：

[General]

Offset 不应该是3134吗
01:22:593 : 在这之前Kiai Time来一个小的间断
然后Kiai Time再在这里开始

[Silent Sky]

00:11:242 (2): New combo
00:17:729 : 这里的突然加速建议在SB中加个警告什么的
01:27:256 (4,1): 距离有点近

[Crying sky]

01:02:323 : 转盘在这里停止就好了
01:07:391 : 转盘在这里开始

[Blue sky]

00:47:728 (9): 提前1/4拍停止
00:52:593 (8,1): 距离过近
01:02:323 : 转盘在这里停止就好了

Good map~~

'STAR'

Kurai

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Kurai 2010-07-23T15:28:34+00:00

Hi

[General]
I think that'll be better if you can find a mp3 with a better quality.

[Crying Sky]
00:59:688 (1,2,3) - That's confusing :/

That's all I can find :/

Last edited by Kurai 2010-07-23T20:50:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Selee

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Selee 2010-07-23T20:35:30+00:00

impossiblexu wrote:
Hi~

以下只是建议：

[General]

Offset 不应该是3134吗
01:22:593 : 在这之前Kiai Time来一个小的间断
然后Kiai Time再在这里开始
[Silent Sky]

00:11:242 (2): New combo
00:17:729 : 这里的突然加速建议在SB中加个警告什么的
01:27:256 (4,1): 距离有点近

[Crying sky]

01:02:323 : 转盘在这里停止就好了
01:07:391 : 转盘在这里开始
[Blue sky]

00:47:728 (9): 提前1/4拍停止
00:52:593 (8,1): 距离过近
01:02:323 : 转盘在这里停止就好了
Good map~~

'STAR '

Thanks for modding~

[nAnSi-cHaN]

32 posts

Joined March 2010

[nAnSi-cHaN] 2010-07-26T23:26:24+00:00

Star~

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2010-08-10T18:22:10+00:00

Star~

nice map

Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2010-08-12T01:05:38+00:00

[Blue Sky]
00:20:972 (6) - 不要用clap，换成whistle
00:25:431 (1) - 建议把这个slide往上移动，(按ctrl+j使用对称，完成后的位置也正好容易读出来）
如果想保持原有位置的话建议加一个new combo

[Crying Sky]
01:22:593 (1) - 取消new combo
01:23:404 (2) - new combo
01:32:931 (2) - 此处end的节奏应该停在往前2格的红线上，把slide修改一下

star

jameskong1

403 posts

Joined December 2008

jameskong1 2010-08-14T20:21:03+00:00

- S

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- S 2010-08-14T20:21:32+00:00

nice star

Kamina

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Joined August 2009

Kamina 2010-08-14T20:21:42+00:00

nice map
star~

LKs

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LKs 2010-08-14T20:22:01+00:00

1

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-14T23:03:46+00:00

Thanks

eveless

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eveless 2010-08-15T00:16:06+00:00

nice map

感觉最低难度SV用1.5稍微快了点...还有最低两个难度音效几乎没下。。最高难度音效也很少的样子...

考虑最低难度CS到最大?

slider很艺术XD
感觉MOD不出什么东西来所以KDS也不要了> <
图本身很不错的:D

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-17T00:04:33+00:00

Slidertick 1 sounds better IMO

<Silent Sky>
00:03:134 - 70%volume for this part
00:17:729 - 60% volume for this part
00:34:756 (3) - use the slider like (2) ?
00:51:174 (?) - add a note? (if you do ths, fix the spacing to next one)
00:52:796 (?) - ^
01:02:931 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:32:931 (2) - don`t make the end silenced (突然沒有音量聽起來有點怪)

<Crying Sky>
00:03:134 - 70%volume for this part
00:17:729 - 60% volume for this part
00:47:729 (4,5) - remake this part XD
the best diff in the mapset

<Blue Sky>
This diff is a bit overmapped.some parts have too many notes but some parts are too empty
00:11:242 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Too much notes XD
00:21~too empty
this diff is fine anyway

題外話,剛開始map的玩家大多會比較喜歡跟著人聲作,但是配合著背景音樂打節奏並混合人聲的話
map整體的流暢性會比較好,可以試試看這個方式 (不過這首歌其實並不好作就是了)

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-17T00:26:55+00:00

多谢Alace老师指导~

我会继续努力的 =w=

All fixed 不过Blue Sky那段空白不是很想填满...

背景音实在不明显...

deepsea

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deepsea 2010-08-18T08:21:41+00:00

._.

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-18T17:33:34+00:00

Thanks your bubble~

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-20T15:21:51+00:00

迪西大大可以帮忙补个泡么自己不小心给戳了 ._.

deepsea

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deepsea 2010-08-21T07:41:58+00:00

O_O/

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-21T07:42:35+00:00

If your map is bubbled
Edit thread and upload map will pop your bubble

I rechecked your diffs
they are better now,but you already get deepsea`s bubble,so i can`t give you a heart
try your best to pick another BATs
good luck

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-21T15:09:41+00:00

Thank you so much, Alace and deepsea. > <

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-08-21T15:44:35+00:00

[Overall]

Mp3 quality it's really bad... Can you find a better one and adjust the timing? Remember to full submit after the fix.

[Difficulties]

[Silent Sky]

00:33:945 (2) - Slider repeat is hidden because of this other slider 00:31:918 (4). Do something for fix it.

[Crying Sky]

00:15:701 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Blue Sky]

00:13:877 (4) - New combo.
00:14:080 (1) - Remove new combo.

Popped for now.

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-21T16:25:14+00:00

All fixed, 192Kbs sounds better ._.

Could't find a much better better audio since it was split from the video...The original ver is totally different....

Thank you Andre, all fixed.

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-08-21T16:48:11+00:00

Old mp3 was totally better O.o

If you can't find others please replace the old mp3 with a full submission.

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-21T22:52:43+00:00

Change the audio to the old one

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-08-23T19:23:48+00:00

Okay then.

Re-Bubbled~

Selee

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Selee 2010-08-23T20:01:48+00:00

Thanks for your help

DarkRingSystem

DarkRingSystem 2010-08-23T21:54:10+00:00

shot~star~

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-27T15:18:59+00:00

ranked

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-08-27T15:38:44+00:00

おめでとうおめでとう～

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2010-08-27T17:17:03+00:00

............again the mp3 is HORRID

come on ppl, this one is almost ear bleeding D:

im sorry to say it, but i cant play this song while the mp3 is like this

James2250

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James2250 2010-08-27T17:18:03+00:00

jericho2442 wrote:
............again the mp3 is HORRID

come on ppl, this one is almost ear bleeding D:

im sorry to say it, but i cant play this song while the mp3 is like this

Agrees