This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, January 28, 2015 at 6:54:49 PM

Artist: Girl's Day
Title: Twinkle Twinkle
Tags: Expectation, Everyday, k-pop, dance-pop, synthpop
BPM: 150
Filesize: 14325kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.62 stars, 216 notes)
2. Hard (3.51 stars, 382 notes)
3. Insane (4.65 stars, 487 notes)
4. Normal (2.16 stars, 297 notes)

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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy (Done 100% - Hitsounds 100%)
Normal (Done 100% - Hitsounds 100%)
Hard (Done 100% - Hitsounds 100%)
Insane (Done 100% - Hitsounds - 100%)

Video's sync might still be a bit off?

Hi TimeGhost, As requested, here is a general mod of your Insane and Hard. There are still some fundamental issues I have with your mapset, and i've discussed them at the end of each difficulty.

[Insane]

00:08:575 (10) - Why not continue the pattern of triplets you had going on in 00:06:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ?
00:13:375 (1,2,3) - Evenly space.
00:37:175 (7,8,9,10) - Evenly space.
00:46:175 (5,6) - ^
02:08:575 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Really cramped. Consider another pattern that is more readable.
02:13:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make them symmetrical. 7, 8, are noticeably different.
02:19:775 (11) - Make slider symmetrical.
02:33:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - There's no reason to space out the stream.
02:37:175 - You should have the slider here.

Rhythmically it's not bad, but this difficulty has almost no patterns or symmetry etc... I understand you hand-mapped a lot of this difficulty, which is a problem, because it leaves the difficulty rather messy. Incorporate more patterns instead of just clicking and placing a note somewhere. Think about why you are placing the circle or slider there, and think about why they are in that particular shape/form. If you don't know why, then it's best to think up a pattern first.

There are also spacing issues throughout the map. You don't have to use distance-snap, but you should still space your circles/sliders evenly so that the map is more tidy. Uneven spacing also contributes to bad flow.

[Hard]

00:10:575 (10) - Symmetrical.
00:11:775 (11) - NC
00:12:575 (1) - Remove NC
00:13:375 (6) - NC
00:17:175 (3) - Slider should begin at 00:17:375 -
00:22:575 (7,8,9,10,11) - Is this stream necessary for Hard?
00:22:975 - The beat picks up here. You should NC here and make the previous stream a triple if you decide to keep.
00:27:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Space them evenly.
00:35:775 (2,3,4) - 1/4 sliders aren't necessary on Hard. You don't even use them on Insane .
00:38:975 (11) - NC
00:39:775 (1) - Remove NC
01:02:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is way too difficult.
01:14:175 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove the NC's.
01:20:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are the streams necessary?
01:23:775 (14) - NC
01:31:375 (8) - Begin slider at 01:31:575 -
01:53:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Huge combo. Trim it down. Add NC's
02:08:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not on a Hard...
02:13:375 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Improve the pattern. Make it even.
02:23:375 (2,3,4) - 1/4 sliders again.
02:34:175 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - Streams again on Hard.

You use a lot of unnecessary jumps in your Hard, as well as streams. Consider making them easier... Same with Insane, this difficulty needs more patterns and structure. The spacing needs to be improved. Many notes are hand-mapped and thus look messy. Typically Hard maps will use at least a bit of distance-snapping. Some mappers even use DS for the majority of their Hard difficulty, only breaking it for jumps.


Going through your Easy and Normal quickly, I can say they are much better because of their distance snap. They are neater. There are also more blankets. However, they still lack in patterns imo.



This is just a general mod, I don't want to weigh you down with all the minor issues (imperfect stacking, blankets, not parallel, minor NC changes, flow, etc...) what I've listed here are more important. I trust you'll use them to improve your map. Look at other maps in editor and see the patterns they use in their maps. Maybe they'll give you some ideas on what to put in yours? The best way to get better at mapping is to mod others' maps.

You may call me back again for a more in-depth mod once you are confident your map has been improved. Please give this at least a week . I wasn't expecting you to call for a mod 2 hours after we chatted in game. Take your time.

monstrata wrote:

[Insane]

00:08:575 (10) - Why not continue the pattern of triplets you had going on in 00:06:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ? - Agreed.
00:13:375 (1,2,3) - Evenly space. - Done.
00:37:175 (7,8,9,10) - Evenly space. - Done.
00:46:175 (5,6) - ^ - Done.
02:08:575 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Really cramped. Consider another pattern that is more readable. - I am going to have to think about this one.
02:13:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make them symmetrical. 7, 8, are noticeably different. - They are 100% symmetrical now
02:19:775 (11) - Make slider symmetrical. - Made new slider couldn't seem to make that one symmetrical.
02:33:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - There's no reason to space out the stream. - I will look to see how to make something out of this.
02:37:175 - You should have the slider here. - Agreed

[Hard]

00:10:575 (10) - Symmetrical. - Ok
00:11:775 (11) - NC - Ok
00:12:575 (1) - Remove NC - Ok
00:13:375 (6) - NC - Ok
00:17:175 (3) - Slider should begin at 00:17:375 - - Agreed
00:22:575 (7,8,9,10,11) - Is this stream necessary for Hard? - >.<
00:22:975 - The beat picks up here. You should NC here and make the previous stream a triple if you decide to keep. - triple's does sound better thank you.
00:27:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Space them evenly. - Ok
00:35:775 (2,3,4) - 1/4 sliders aren't necessary on Hard. You don't even use them on Insane . - :O
00:38:975 (11) - NC - Ok
00:39:775 (1) - Remove NC - Ok
01:02:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is way too difficult. - it is? Ok fixed.
01:14:175 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove the NC's. - Ok
01:20:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are the streams necessary? - not anymore.
01:23:775 (14) - NC - ok
01:31:375 (8) - Begin slider at 01:31:575 - - agreed
01:53:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Huge combo. Trim it down. Add NC's - ok
02:08:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not on a Hard... - Ok
02:13:375 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Improve the pattern. Make it even. - done
02:23:375 (2,3,4) - 1/4 sliders again. - Ok
02:34:175 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - Streams again on Hard. - Ok

Thanks for your mod!

Hi! sorry for the late mod.
modder came from: t/267877&start=0

General

1. you need to place the offset on the moment the song begins.
   you got it one beat later, i think the right one is: 7.007
   i will continue using the NEW offset so you need to change that first, else you don't know of which note im talking about.
2. since i've changed the offset, all the NC are off. im going to mention them only in easy that are obvious to correct,
   the ones that aren't i will mention(saves me from a long and unnessecary long mod -,-).
3. careful! i might have snapped a few notes and some not, so i hope you can figure it out which note i mean,
   since the timing of the notes are slightly off.

Easy

1. 00:19:407 (1,2) - switch NC.
2. 00:25:807 (5,6) - why not move these to the next white tickle, so the first one begins on: 00:26:207
   if you do this, make the first slider i mentioned a NC. you need to adjust some sliders and circles if you do this.
3. 00:29:407 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:09:407 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:12:607 (1,2) - ^
6. 02:14:607 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:35:407 (1,2) - switch NC, or make the second one and NC.
8. 00:38:607 (1,2) - switch NC. you might want to add a NC at: 00:37:407 (4) - to make it not too long.
9. 00:41:407 (6,1) - blanket can be better.
10. 00:45:807 (3,4) - ^ (use ctrl + G on slider 3 to see the approach circle of 3, and use that to make a better blanket).
11. 00:48:607 (6) - add note.
12. 00:56:207 (1) - remove note.
13. 00:56:607 (2) - add NC.
14. 00:59:407 (1,2) - switch NC.
15. 01:02:607 (1,2) - ^
16. 01:02:607 (1) - move to: 232|216 to not 'hide' this note, or make it more visible.
    if you do this you have to make sure the DC is equal from there on, so shove the next notes a bit.
17. 01:15:407 (1) - move to: 01:15:807
18. move spinner to: 01:17:507 (1) - and let it end on: 01:19:007
19. 01:20:607 (2) - add NC.
20. switch NC.
21. 01:23:807 (2,3) - blanket can be better.
22. 01:26:607 (1,2) - switch NC.
23. 01:47:407 (1) - remove this note.
24. 01:53:807 (1,2) - switch NC.
25. 02:08:207 (1) - let the spinner begin on: 02:08:607 (1) -
26. 02:11:807 (2) - add NC.
27. 02:23:007 (2) - add NC.
28. 02:29:007 (1,2) - switch NC.
29. 02:35:407 (1,2) - ^
30. 02:47:807 (5,1) - ^
31. 02:53:807 (6) - add NC.
32. 02:54:607 (1) - remove NC.
33. 02:59:207 (1) - let it end on: 03:01:407

Normal

1. the NC here are actually good even with the new offset, so that's a good thing
2. 00:31:007 (1) - this slider has too many repeats imo. all the others have one,
   so letting this one have more might be confusing for people(since it is 2,1 star rating,
   they probably just started playing osu! so, dont let it be too confusing).
3. 00:38:575 (6) - ctrl + G for better flow?
4. 00:17:407 (2) - ^
5. 00:59:007 (5,6,7) - i think it is better to stack these,
   because (at least for me) it is pretty hard to do short streams like these when you just started playing osu!
   streaming in low diffs is not particulary a bad thing, but let the distance not be too big.
   So, stack or make the distance smaller.
   (there are a lot more, i think you should change them all. here is another two: 00:15:807 (6,7,8) -, 01:43:375 (3,4,5) - )
6. 01:04:975 (6) - move to: 376|284 for a better square.
7. 01:08:175 (5,1) - is this a blanket or not?i can't really tell, but if it is, you need to rotate the slider a bit to the left(- ... degrees).
8. 01:16:375 (2) - replace with cirlce on: 01:16:607
9. 01:17:007 (3) - let it begin on: 01:17:407 with the same ending as before, :01:18:207
10. 01:23:775 (1,2) - distance is too big compared to the next circles.
11. 01:31:175 (1) - let it begin on: 01:32:168
12. 01:36:575 (6,1) - switch NC.
13. 01:39:775 (5,1) - ^
14. 01:42:575 (1,2) - ^
15. 01:50:975 (8) - add NC, else the combo will be too long.
16. 01:55:775 (1) - ^
17. 02:05:407 (6) - ^
18. 02:18:175 (9) - ^
19. 02:11:807 (1) - add note here: 02:11:807 (1) -
20. 02:14:975 (8,1) - switch NC.
21. 02:20:775 (1) - let it begin on: 02:21:528 with the same ending as before.
22. 02:26:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - square can be better.
23. 02:29:775 (6) - add NC, else too long combo.
24. 02:38:207 (1,3) - switch NC.
25. 02:59:575 (1) - let it begin on: 02:59:807 with the same ending as before.

Hard

1. 00:13:375 (1,2,3) - triangle can be better.
2. 00:17:075 (2) - i dont think you need a note here. you might as well remove this one.
3. 00:21:207 (4) - add note.
4. 00:22:975 (10,1) - switch NC.
5. 00:26:207 (8,1) - switch NC.
6. 00:29:375 (9) - add NC.
7. 00:30:175 (1) - remove NC.
8. 00:20:175 (1) - ^
9. 00:32:575 (8) - maybe add NC here, maybe the combo is too long here.
10. 00:35:375 (1,2) - switch NC.
11. 00:32:575 (8,9,10) - i dont want to be a rude or something, but this heart shape needs some work.
    this might help with your slider shape: t/37194
12. 00:39:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - - maybe some triangles here? or something different, it kind of looks empty imo.
13. 00:46:975 (1) - let the spinner end on: 00:48:607
14. 00:58:975 (6,7,8) - the distance between these cirlces is imo a bit too big in comparison with the rest of the circles.
    you might want to make it smaller.
15. 01:00:975 (4,5,6) - distance is not equal between notes.
16. 01:10:975 (6,7,8) - ^
17. 01:10:975 (6) - add NC to make the combo not too long?
18. 01:14:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 and 3 have hitsounds, why not give 5 and 7 it too?
19. 01:17:007 (4) - let it begin on: 01:17:407 and end it on: 01:18:607 (i think without repeat is best, but it is your choice).
20. 01:25:375 (5,6,7) - make a better triangle.
21. 01:34:975 (5,6,7) - ^
22. 01:39:775 (5) - add NC.
23. 01:42:575 (4,5) - switch places.
24. 01:43:375 (6,7,8) - this combo is not in the middle of 4 and 5.
25. 01:59:775 (1,3) - switch NC.
26. 02:02:575 (8,9,10,11) - make the distance between 8 and 9 bigger, and the distance between the streams too.
27. 02:09:975 (1) - let the spinner begin on: 02:10:207 with the same ending as before.
28. 02:36:175 (6) - add NC.
29. 02:38:175 (1,3) - switch NC.
30. 02:51:375 (1,2) - ^
31. 02:59:575 (1) - let the spinner begin on: 02:59:807 with the same ending as before.

gl with it! (i'm sorry to say this, but the map needs a lot of fixing. especially hard needs better flow in the map.
the placing of the notes is kind of random to me. if you want to know what i mean i'll give you a link that will help you: t/86329
the reason why i didn't do insane is because it took me a lot of time to do this. plz accept my mod as it is -,-

General

1. you need to place the offset on the moment the song begins. -Yup! fixed
   you got it one beat later, i think the right one is: 7.007 -Its 6,975 Yeah sorry about that.
   i will continue using the NEW offset so you need to change that first, else you don't know of which note im talking about.
2. since i've changed the offset, all the NC are off. im going to mention them only in easy that are obvious to correct,
   the ones that aren't i will mention(saves me from a long and unnessecary long mod -,-).
3. careful! i might have snapped a few notes and some not, so i hope you can figure it out which note i mean,
   since the timing of the notes are slightly off.

-I don't think this changes anything with my NC's also, I moved all the notes 1 note onwards so all the timings fit since my offset was excactly 1 note to late.

Easy

1. 00:19:407 (1,2) - switch NC. -Agreed
2. 00:25:807 (5,6) - why not move these to the next white tickle, so the first one begins on: 00:26:207
   if you do this, make the first slider i mentioned a NC. you need to adjust some sliders and circles if you do this. -This only became a problem because you resnapped the notes there is no need because of my above method.
3. 00:29:407 (1,2) - ^ -^
4. 01:09:407 (1,2) - ^ -^
5. 01:12:607 (1,2) - ^ -^
6. 02:14:607 (1,2) - ^ -^
7. 00:35:407 (1,2) - switch NC, or make the second one and NC. -i think its fine the way it is.
8. 00:38:607 (1,2) - switch NC. you might want to add a NC at: 00:37:407 (4) - to make it not too long. -6 combo is to long?
9. 00:41:407 (6,1) - blanket can be better. -improved
10. 00:45:807 (3,4) - ^ (use ctrl + G on slider 3 to see the approach circle of 3, and use that to make a better blanket). -improved
11. 00:48:607 (6) - add note. -I think its fine the way it is.
12. 00:56:207 (1) - remove note. -^
13. 00:56:607 (2) - add NC. -^
14. 00:59:407 (1,2) - switch NC. -^
15. 01:02:607 (1,2) - ^ -^
16. 01:02:607 (1) - move to: 232|216 to not 'hide' this note, or make it more visible.
    if you do this you have to make sure the DC is equal from there on, so shove the next notes a bit. -I reworked that part thanks xD
17. 01:15:407 (1) - move to: 01:15:807 -Its fine, its because of your resnaps I think.
18. move spinner to: 01:17:507 (1) - and let it end on: 01:19:007 -^ Our timings differ but I did move it not sure if its where you wanted it though.
19. 01:20:607 (2) -add NC. -the notes on that time from 1 to 6 is one sentence I don't think it would make sense.
20. switch NC. -^
21. 01:23:807 (2,3) - blanket can be better. -Agreed! fixed.
22. 01:26:607 (1,2) - switch NC. -I don't think so.
23. 01:47:407 (1) - remove this note. -^
24. 01:53:807 (1,2) - switch NC. -^
25. 02:08:207 (1) - let the spinner begin on: 02:08:607 (1) -Well our spacings and snapping differ so....
26. 02:11:807 (2) - add NC. -This won't fit with the pattern thats going on.
27. 02:23:007 (2) - add NC. -^
28. 02:29:007 (1,2) - switch NC. -^
29. 02:35:407 (1,2) - ^ -^
30. 02:47:807 (5,1) - ^ -^
31. 02:53:807 (6) - add NC. -^
32. 02:54:607 (1) - remove NC. -^
33. 02:59:207 (1) - let it end on: 03:01:407 -Our things differ again so this is where a note of mine is ^^ But I did move the spinner to where I think you meant

Normal

1. the NC here are actually good even with the new offset, so that's a good thing
2. 00:31:007 (1) - this slider has too many repeats imo. all the others have one,
   so letting this one have more might be confusing for people(since it is 2,1 star rating,
   they probably just started playing osu! so, dont let it be too confusing). -Agreed
3. 00:38:575 (6) - ctrl + G for better flow? -Good idea
4. 00:17:407 (2) - ^ -I don't think so.
5. 00:59:007 (5,6,7) - i think it is better to stack these,
   because (at least for me) it is pretty hard to do short streams like these when you just started playing osu!
   streaming in low diffs is not particulary a bad thing, but let the distance not be too big.
   So, stack or make the distance smaller. -I don't think those are classified as stream but rather singletaps.
   (there are a lot more, i think you should change them all. here is another two: 00:15:807 (6,7,8) -, 01:43:375 (3,4,5) - )
6. 01:04:975 (6) - move to: 376|284 for a better square. -Fixed
7. 01:08:175 (5,1) - is this a blanket or not?i can't really tell, but if it is, you need to rotate the slider a bit to the left(- ... degrees). -Fixed
8. 01:16:375 (2) - replace with cirlce on: 01:16:607 -ok
9. 01:17:007 (3) - let it begin on: 01:17:407 with the same ending as before, :01:18:207 -Fixed
10. 01:23:775 (1,2) - distance is too big compared to the next circles. -Agreed
11. 01:31:175 (1) - let it begin on: 01:32:168 -Can't tell where you mean since our timings differ.
12. 01:36:575 (6,1) - switch NC. -Fixed
13. 01:39:775 (5,1) - ^ -ok
14. 01:42:575 (1,2) - ^ -I don't think so.
15. 01:50:975 (8) - add NC, else the combo will be too long. -ok
16. 01:55:775 (1) - ^ -^
17. 02:05:407 (6) - ^ -^
18. 02:18:175 (9) - ^ -^
19. 02:11:807 (1) - add note here: 02:11:807 (1) - -Those are the same times, but I think I know what you mean.
20. 02:14:975 (8,1) - switch NC. -ok
21. 02:20:775 (1) - let it begin on: 02:21:528 with the same ending as before. -Fixed
22. 02:26:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - square can be better. -ok
23. 02:29:775 (6) - add NC, else too long combo. -Agreed
24. 02:38:207 (1,3) - switch NC. -ok
25. 02:59:575 (1) - let it begin on: 02:59:807 with the same ending as before. -ok

Hard

1. 00:13:375 (1,2,3) - triangle can be better. -Wasn't doing triangle
2. 00:17:075 (2) - i dont think you need a note here. you might as well remove this one. -Agreed
3. 00:21:207 (4) - add note. -I don't think so
4. 00:22:975 (10,1) - switch NC. -ok
5. 00:26:207 (8,1) - switch NC. -^
6. 00:29:375 (9) - add NC. -^
7. 00:30:175 (1) - remove NC. -^
8. 00:20:175 (1) - ^ -^
9. 00:32:575 (8) - maybe add NC here, maybe the combo is too long here. -^
10. 00:35:375 (1,2) - switch NC. -^
11. 00:32:575 (8,9,10) - i dont want to be a rude or something, but this heart shape needs some work.
    this might help with your slider shape: t/37194 -Sorry I was trying something here and forgot to remove it.
12. 00:39:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - - maybe some triangles here? or something different, it kind of looks empty imo. -ok
13. 00:46:975 (1) - let the spinner end on: 00:48:607 -Agreed
14. 00:58:975 (6,7,8) - the distance between these cirlces is imo a bit too big in comparison with the rest of the circles.
    you might want to make it smaller. -ok
15. 01:00:975 (4,5,6) - distance is not equal between notes. -^
16. 01:10:975 (6,7,8) - ^ -^
17. 01:10:975 (6) - add NC to make the combo not too long? -Good idea!
18. 01:14:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 and 3 have hitsounds, why not give 5 and 7 it too? -5 and 7 does have hitsounds, just different ones
19. 01:17:007 (4) - let it begin on: 01:17:407 and end it on: 01:18:607 (i think without repeat is best, but it is your choice). -Yeah it should begin on that time
20. 01:25:375 (5,6,7) - make a better triangle. -ok
21. 01:34:975 (5,6,7) - ^ -^
22. 01:39:775 (5) - add NC. -^
23. 01:42:575 (4,5) - switch places. -^
24. 01:43:375 (6,7,8) - this combo is not in the middle of 4 and 5. -^
25. 01:59:775 (1,3) - switch NC. -^
26. 02:02:575 (8,9,10,11) - make the distance between 8 and 9 bigger, and the distance between the streams too. -^
27. 02:09:975 (1) - let the spinner begin on: 02:10:207 with the same ending as before. -^
28. 02:36:175 (6) - add NC. -ok
29. 02:38:175 (1,3) - switch NC. -ok
30. 02:51:375 (1,2) - ^ -^
31. 02:59:575 (1) - let the spinner begin on: 02:59:807 with the same ending as before. -Agreed

Thanks a lot for your mod!

[General]
Source - Everyday (?)
Extra tags: k-pop dance-pop synthpop

Objects are not snapped. Use AiMod to check all issues

[Easy]
00:12:575 (4) - let's think about finish than clap; remove clap at end
00:14:575 (3) - remove clap
00:16:575 (1) - this clap. same to others
00:26:175 (5) - NC
00:32:575 (5) - NC
00:48:175 (5) - NC maybe
01:05:375 (5) - try with no-reverse. it's okay anyways
01:55:775 (6) - NC cause of beats routine
02:06:575 (1) - same this. NC that
02:40:175 (3) - no reverse like at all?
[Normal]
00:10:165 (7) - NC
00:26:965 (1) - no NC I think, it's normal diff
00:30:165 (2) - why NC this?
00:32:565 (5) - NC this, then 00:35:365 (1) make same combo, and NC 00:36:165 (3). this beat routine were before
01:08:565 (6) - not sure if this stay there, just look before refrain. then this became to this 01:09:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) :/
01:08:565 (6) - no NC if you stay at this
01:14:765 (2,3) - why that so tight?
01:15:765 (1,2,3) - this part change to this 00:32:565 (1), not good. please repeat refrain the same
01:22:965 (5,6) - two 1/2 sliders hmm
01:42:965 (2) - no clap
01:56:965 (1) - NC
01:59:765 (1) - no NC
02:02:565 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this part is strange
02:40:965 (4) - this is bad
02:41:765 (1) - no NC
02:44:965 (1) - no NC
02:45:965 (1) - do longer spinner
02:53:765 (1) - no NC
02:54:965 (7) - NC
This with DT+HR is pretty hard:/ Maybe change AR -1, or even CS -0.5

TAILOW wrote:

[General]
Source - Everyday (?) -Yes but this also goes to tags.
Extra tags: k-pop dance-pop synthpop -Thanks!

Objects are not snapped. Use AiMod to check all issues -ok

[Easy]
00:12:575 (4) - let's think about finish than clap; remove clap at end -Sounds better thanks
00:14:575 (3) - remove clap -Agreed.
00:16:575 (1) - this clap. same to others -This kind of ruins the pattern
00:26:175 (5) - NC -ok
00:32:575 (5) - NC -ok
00:48:175 (5) - NC maybe -ok
01:05:375 (5) - try with no-reverse. it's okay anyways -It fits the rhythm imo.
01:55:775 (6) - NC cause of beats routine -Yes
02:06:575 (1) - same this. NC that -There is an NC there :O
02:40:175 (3) - no reverse like at all? -I think its fine.
[Normal]
00:10:165 (7) - NC -Yes
00:26:965 (1) - no NC I think, it's normal diff -I will change if other modders says the same.
00:30:165 (2) - why NC this? -I changed this to fit with previous pattern.
00:32:565 (5) - NC this, then 00:35:365 (1) make same combo, and NC 00:36:165 (3). this beat routine were before -I NC'ed the 32:565 one, but I think the rest it fine.
01:08:565 (6) - not sure if this stay there, just look before refrain. then this became to this 01:09:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) :/ -Agreed.
01:08:565 (6) - no NC if you stay at this -^
01:14:765 (2,3) - why that so tight? -Untightened!
01:15:765 (1,2,3) - this part change to this 00:32:565 (1), not good. please repeat refrain the same -Not sure what you mean but I made an NC on 4.
01:22:965 (5,6) - two 1/2 sliders hmm -Made one of them a circle.
01:42:965 (2) - no clap -Agreed.
01:56:965 (1) - NC -ok
01:59:765 (1) - no NC -Hmm, this will create a 12 combo part :/
02:02:565 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this part is strange -Will hear from other modders.
02:40:965 (4) - this is bad -Yes it is!
02:41:765 (1) - no NC -This will result in a 16 combo part, I didn't NC but made a few changes.
02:44:965 (1) - no NC -^
02:45:965 (1) - do longer spinner -ok
02:53:765 (1) - no NC -No
02:54:965 (7) - NC -Agreed.
This with DT+HR is pretty hard:/ Maybe change AR -1, or even CS -0.5

I lowered AR

Thanks a lot for your mod! :3

Hello! From my queue

I'm not going to mod the map, because I think you need a little more experience first.
I will give you some general advice though, and that is that the vocals are very important in a song like this. I saw a lot of 1/1 circles and sliders, but the vocals have a more complex rhythm which should be mapped instead. Otherwise you will get a rather boring map. Example: 01:03:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . You used simple 1/1 circles, while if you followed the voice you would get something like this:

One other thing I can say is that the offset is too early atm, I recommend you to change it to 7001, as that is way more on-spot

no kds

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