>.<

:P

star~

= =~

先star吧。

星星是浮云啊..

[General]

• osb文件没什么用就删掉吧
  难度名最好直观点 能表现出难度的
  建议Hitsound(特别是clap)加在这里

[RINKO]

• 这是Easy吧 建议HP和Overall减2—3
  总体来说 间距有点乱 建议开Distance Snap重新放置一下
  00:33:629(1):Finish
  00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
  00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
  00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:10:296(1):去掉结尾Finish 另外感觉延长一拍或在后面一拍加个Circle感觉比较好（后面也是）
  01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
  01:30:772(2,3,4):^
  01:44:105(1):Finish
  01:59:343(1):^
  02:09:820(5):去掉Finish
  02:10:772(6):从5下移走
  02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[MANAKA]

• 间距也是很乱……
  最好不要有太多地方与[RINKO]难度一样
  00:31:248(2,3):从1下移走 另外建议去掉Finish音效或者在3,4,1加Finish
  00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
  00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
  00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:11:724(1):Finish
  01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
  01:30:772(2,3,4):^
  01:56:963(2,3,4,1):统一间距
  02:10:772(8):去掉结尾处Finish
  02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[NENE]

• 00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:00:296(1,2,3,4,5,6,7):不太容易理解
  01:15:534(1,2,3,4,5,6):间距过小
  01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
  01:30:772(2,3,4):^
  02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[love plus]

• 这个难度……
  有的地方太简单，有的地方太难 需要做大幅度改动
  00:31:963(5):去掉Finish
  00:32:201(6):Finish
  00:43:629(20):从19下移走 另外Combo数不要超过15
  00:44:105(1,2,3):间距明显不一
  00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:23:153(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11):我彻底晕了

后面不说了……

Good map!!!
~STAR~

beautiful song~

Just suggestion If you feel weird or don't like plz ignore it ^^

Over all

　● maybe change manaka,nene,rinko,konami to manaka nene rinko konami in Tag


Easy

00:17:925 (3,1) - this jump I think hard for Easy ^^" plz don't make jumpy in easy XD
01:03:639 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:07:925 (1,2,3,4) - ^


Normal

00:24:592 (6,7,8) - move right 1 grid
00:32:211 (1) - Remove new combo
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:57:925 (1) - Remove new combo


Hard

00:29:830 (1,2) - I think this jump is crazy for hard
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:46:020 (9) - new combo ?
01:49:830 (9) - ^
01:53:639 (9) - ^
02:01:258 (9) - ^
02:05:068 (9) - ^
02:09:115 (10) - delete note



Love Plus

00:43:163 (3) - I think stop stream at this point is better
01:02:925 (4) - up 1 grid
01:12:449 (4) - new combo ?
01:14:592 (10) - ^
01:15:544 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:17:449 (2) - new combo
01:39:830 (6,7,8,9) - I think this part is hard to see >x<
01:42:925 (1) - end of slider at 01:43:163
01:57:925 (1) - move down little and use spacing same with 2-3 is better for me and remove new combo
02:06:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - stop stream at 02:08:877
02:58:996 (2) - delete note
03:07:568 (4,6,8) - delete note and set spacing again ^^

impossiblexu wrote:

[General]

• osb文件没什么用就删掉吧
  难度名最好直观点 能表现出难度的
  建议Hitsound(特别是clap)加在这里

[attachment=0:e7db9]mod6.JPG[/attachment:e7db9]

[RINKO]

• 这是Easy吧 建议HP和Overall减2—3
  总体来说 间距有点乱 建议开Distance Snap重新放置一下
  00:33:629(1):Finish
  00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
  00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
  00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:10:296(1):去掉结尾Finish 另外感觉延长一拍或在后面一拍加个Circle感觉比较好（后面也是）
  01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
  01:30:772(2,3,4):^
  01:44:105(1):Finish
  01:59:343(1):^
  02:09:820(5):去掉Finish
  02:10:772(6):从5下移走
  02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[MANAKA]

• 间距也是很乱……
  最好不要有太多地方与[RINKO]难度一样
  00:31:248(2,3):从1下移走 另外建议去掉Finish音效或者在3,4,1加Finish
  00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
  00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
  00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:11:724(1):Finish
  01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
  01:30:772(2,3,4):^
  01:56:963(2,3,4,1):统一间距
  02:10:772(8):去掉结尾处Finish
  02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[NENE]

• 00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:00:296(1,2,3,4,5,6,7):不太容易理解
  01:15:534(1,2,3,4,5,6):间距过小
  01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
  01:30:772(2,3,4):^
  02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[love plus]

• 这个难度……
  有的地方太简单，有的地方太难 需要做大幅度改动
  00:31:963(5):去掉Finish
  00:32:201(6):Finish
  00:43:629(20):从19下移走 另外Combo数不要超过15
  00:44:105(1,2,3):间距明显不一
  00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
  01:23:153(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11):我彻底晕了

后面不说了……

Good map!!!
~STAR~

谢谢impossible的MOD～～～～努力修改中

S i R i R u wrote:

Just suggestion If you feel weird or don't like plz ignore it ^^

Over all

　● maybe change manaka,nene,rinko,konami to manaka nene rinko konami in Tag


Easy

00:17:925 (3,1) - this jump I think hard for Easy ^^" plz don't make jumpy in easy XD
01:03:639 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:07:925 (1,2,3,4) - ^


Normal

00:24:592 (6,7,8) - move right 1 grid
00:32:211 (1) - Remove new combo
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:57:925 (1) - Remove new combo


Hard

00:29:830 (1,2) - I think this jump is crazy for hard
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:46:020 (9) - new combo ?
01:49:830 (9) - ^
01:53:639 (9) - ^
02:01:258 (9) - ^
02:05:068 (9) - ^
02:09:115 (10) - delete note



Love Plus

00:43:163 (3) - I think stop stream at this point is better
01:02:925 (4) - up 1 grid
01:12:449 (4) - new combo ?
01:14:592 (10) - ^
01:15:544 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:17:449 (2) - new combo
01:39:830 (6,7,8,9) - I think this part is hard to see >x<
01:42:925 (1) - end of slider at 01:43:163
01:57:925 (1) - move down little and use spacing same with 2-3 is better for me and remove new combo
02:06:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - stop stream at 02:08:877
02:58:996 (2) - delete note
03:07:568 (4,6,8) - delete note and set spacing again ^^

THANKS SIRIRU help me MOD this map I will remake the LP diff

Rinko 我爱你啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊！！！！！

咳咳

嗯，我加了个diff，并制作了skin，希望大家喜欢

再来一遍

Rinko 我爱你啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊！！！！！

>\<

很好听的歌~继续加油啊~~~！

恩 很好的图~继续加油吧~

[General]
在"Hayami Saori,Tange Sakura,Minaguchi Yuko - Eternal Diary (xinhe).osb"里,cursor.png是什么?似乎没看到你有这个文件?要么补文件，要么删掉这语句吧
把"LOVE PLUS - Eternal Diary (xinhe).osb"删掉
把多余的四张图删掉
把"Ex Boy"加入所有难度的tag中,并注意统一所有难度的tag
为所有难度设置合适的preview point(在你认为合适的地方选timing-set current position as preview point)
完成以上所有步骤后full submit

用空白sliderslide.wav 消音slider?

[RINKO-EASY]
HP Drain Rate-1,Overall Difficulty-1

[MANAKA-NORMAL]
HP Drain Rate-2
01:59:711 (2,3) - 像这样的4分连打,虽然只有两个,对Normal来说可能有些难

[Ex Boy's lover!!]
又见草坪!XD
00:54:592 (8) - new combo
02:54:592 (8) - ^
02:58:401 (8) - ^
03:05:067 (7) - ^
[Insane]

Nice map.
+Star

以下均为建议

[NENE-HARD]
hitsound加的太少,多加些吧 重复普通声音会觉得无聊
把slider静音吧
音量太高了,70-80会比较好
00:20:296 (6) - new combo
00:24:105 (8) - ^
00:27:915 (6) - ^
00:35:534 (7) - ^
00:39:343 (7) - ^
00:41:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里finish加的太多了,建议最多用3个
01:47:915 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:09:820 (7) - new combo

><LP

以下均为建议

[love plus]

貌似没加hitsound,那就不MOD了(其实我也不擅长MOD hitsound...
难度名大写?(或者至少首字母)
00:08:867 (1,2,3,4) - 利用0倍DS让1与2,3与4重叠的更完美 3,4其实直接复制1,2再做X轴对称(Ctrl+J)就行
00:35:772 (8) - new combo
00:39:820 (9) - ^
01:57:677 (9) - ^
03:09:820 (4) - ^
03:19:344 (7) - ^
03:31:010 (8,9) - 建议去掉这两个note,并在10new combo

...eggpain.

Download: Hayami Saori,Tange Sakura,Minaguchi Yuko - Eternal Diary (xinhe) [RINKO-EASY-hitsounds].osu

Download: Hayami Saori,Tange Sakura,Minaguchi Yuko - Eternal Diary (xinhe) [MANAKA-NORMAL-hitsounds].osu

Download: Hayami Saori,Tange Sakura,Minaguchi Yuko - Eternal Diary (xinhe) [NENE-HARD-hitsounds].osu

唔 移到Pending里吧...

I'd say.. hitsound in [Love Plus] are messed up, I can't catch up why they we added. I am working on it and fix some bugs.
BTW... "lover" in English means... err... not that good...

abalee wrote:

I'd say.. hitsound in [Love Plus] are messed up, I can't catch up why they we added. I am working on it and fix some bugs.
BTW... "lover" in English means... err... not that good...

abalee~~~~thanks~~~!!!!

star~

3天内rank不容易啊- -加油吧……

/me facepain

I made a great changes on your map(except ex boy's diff. I just do a little tags changed),before you use them please make sure you like them.

Download: Hayami Saori,Tange Sakura,Minaguchi Yuko - Eternal Diary.zip

abalee wrote:

/me facepain

I made a great changes on your map(except ex boy's diff. I just do a little tags changed),before you use them please make sure you like them.

都不知道该怎么谢谢阿爸了～～～T T～～～感动～～～～

>_____< I'm not the right BAT if you want speed rank... blah
Please include a space between the comma's of each singer's name (Hayami Saori, Tange Sakura, Minguchi Yuko)
The sliderb images, from what I see, the template for them is 118x118, yours are 128x128 (sliderb9 is 132x132!?), I noticed the slider balls were kinda cut off a bit when playing
You need a hitcircle overlay when adding a hitcircle skin, and it would be nice if you added an approach circle for both the hitcircle and spinner, also... try to trim the hitcircle so its smaller than the overlay.... (even though I think I've seen this hitcircle before)
Adjust the spinner-circle so you can at least tell something is spinning D:!
^ You'll need to full submit >_<

Do those diffs have to be all caps?



RINKO- T-T why is she easiest diff, lol
This diff is missing the tags
00:47:439 (1) - you seem to be following the vocal here... then maybe end this 2 beats earlier or add a hitsound?
Seems like you didn't include some claps on purpose.. okay..
Fair enough for easiest.

MANAKA-
same suggestion as Rinko's
01:59:701 (2,3) - slight spacing
=/ fine

NENE-
00:47:558 (1) - starts on wrong time, and maybe end with same suggestion as the other two
Distance snap changes a lot >_<... after getting used to that, the map's okay...
Still... the random change in distance got kinda annoying

Ex-Boy's- capitalize "Love"?
Countdown is disabled.. oh well, guest diff, I don't mind
02:20:296 (1) - ? was there supposed to be a custom clap here?
02:41:963 (10) - I was expecting the clap.. er... custom finish hitsound on the end (compared to 02:47:677 (9)...?)
03:10:296 (2) - missed a clap? i mean.. custom finish? (argh, its confusing meeee xD)
03:35:058 (6,7) - continue the claps (custom finishes)? or no, on purpose? (on 6 and 7's end)
This diff sounds nice, but only if the notes were hit on time xD
Good~

Love Plus- Increase the lead in so the countdown is there? (since there's countdown on your other diffs)
Hard to tell if you stopped the clap pace on purpose or you forgot to add a clap sometimes ._.
Spacing changes a lot too... :(

@.@;;;; oh wait, some people did the hitsounds for you.. okay...?
I went easy on first map >: but okay..

except the mod above, I think you should resize the spinner-osu.png to 1x1 pix coz it is just a blank file.

abalee wrote:

except the mod above, I think you should resize the spinner-osu.png to 1x1 pix coz it is just a blank file.

i have fix the all question

歌很有爱……LP难度做的也太那啥了吧……节奏完全是胡来嘛，还不如让Ex Boy的难度当最后一个难度呢 D:

Evangeline AK wrote:

歌很有爱……LP难度做的也太那啥了吧……节奏完全是胡来嘛，还不如让Ex Boy的难度当最后一个难度呢 D:

还好吧～～～确实节奏下的不太好～但是还不至于那么糟糕啦～～主要是前4个难度都太简单了～～所以想做个难点的～～～

嘛 来给STAR了。。 支持新河>.<

star>_>

浮云~~

xinhe

Continue to work hard

When I try to download your beatmap, I get

Try doing a full submit.

额 提几个建议

-General-
非常赞的skin

-Love Plus-
这么慢的歌你居然用0A8 太蛋疼 改成7比较好(强烈建议
02:30:534 (6,7,8,9) - 这和前面的间距不一致啊..
02:38:391 (2) - eggpain spacing 不如把这个拿到屏幕下方,和(1)对称

嘛 基本没啥大错误 不过我不是很喜欢这个spacing，抱歉

-EX-
同样 蛋疼OA8
00:55:177 (9,10,11) - 音量-20%较好 有些吵>_>
01:33:748 - +个circle? 感觉不错的样子
01:37:201 (8) - 卧槽音量太低了 打击感非常差 后面很容易出100

其他难度还好我就不zazi了<_>

*star*

谢谢xierbaliti 的MOD～

[Rinko]
00:18:391 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning.
00:33:629 (1) - ^
01:26:963 (2) - Replace whistle with finish.
01:44:105 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
01:57:915 (3) - Remove finish from the end.
01:59:343 (1) - Replace whistle with finish~
02:10:772 (4) - ^

[Manaka]
00:18:391 (1) - Replace whistle with a finish.
00:33:629 (1) - ^
01:44:105 (1) - ^
01:59:343 (1) - ^
02:10:772 (8) - ^

[Nene]
00:18:391 (1) - Replace whistle with a finish!
00:33:629 (1) - ^
00:45:058 (3) - ^
01:26:963 (2) - Add a finish at the beginning.
01:38:867 (4) - New combo.
01:44:105 (1) - Replace whistle with finish...
01:59:343 (1) - ^
02:10:772 (8) - ^

[Ex Boy]
Enable the countdown.
01:14:582 (3) - Missing a custom finish at the end?

[Love Plus]
Enable the countdown.
00:18:391 (1) - Adda finish at the beginning.
00:33:629 (1) - Add a finish.
01:42:439 (1) - Unnecessary note.
01:44:105 (1) - Add a finish only to the beginning of this slider.
01:58:867 (5) - Remove finish from the end.
01:59:343 (1) - Add a finish here.
02:10:772 (4) - Add a finish only at the beginning.
02:26:010 (10) - New combo since it's a slowdown and spacing changes.
03:04:582 (4) - Remove finish.
03:08:153 (1) - Remove this note. >_>
03:08:391 (Kiai Time): Start Kiai Time at 03:09:820 (1) instead.
03:09:344 (3) - Remove finish.
03:09:820 (1) - Add a finish here.
03:25:058 (1) - ^

[Tags]: Just a nit-pick but change "EX BOY" and "ex boy" to "Ex Boy" on all difficulties except Ex Boy's difficulty.

Edit: I talked with Nene and she told me to take it easy and let you have a bubble. Lucky~

[Love Plus]

03:25:29(2) The reverse arrow is almost blocked by the slider(9) before.<_<

0.0

>_<! ack
"pause-back.png" = Back to meun
Are the combo burst supposed to be facing that way? (the images will be facing outwards)
Still can't see the spinner rotate ._.; not sure if nearly invisible (just cuz I can't see it spinning or not) is allowed..

Rinko-
01:36:010 (3) - if you're ganna just use lowest volume for that last repeat, then remove it (the last repeat) =/

Ex Boy-
01:21:963 (8) - mm the whistle at end? shouldn't a (custom) finish be there? like 02:26:724 (6)

Love Plus-
ahh, still missing claps.... don't have to follow theses-

The stuff for the diffs are minor suggestions, as for the skinning... I already asked you, should I force you to fix it... hmm

EDIT: elements fixed, Rebubbled

thanks deepsea and Shinxyn

oops
<Rinko>
slidertick 1 sounds better

<Nene>
00:32:201 (6) - spacing error
00:41:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this pattern doesn`t really fit, and (10) is very confusing
01:33:153 (7,1,2,3,4) - this part has 2 normalhit, they sound really suddenly and randomly
01:44:105 (1) - from here, you can just copy the beginning part`s hitsounds, claps really fit this part

<EX>
Nice diff
01:00:296 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - i can hear slider sounds during playing, some of your green lines are not C1 or C2 in sliders, try to fix

<Love Plus>
00:01:248 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - remove the sliderwhistle sounds, only keep the whistle on the head and end of slider
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16129 when you click whole slider, NO WHISTLE
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16131 head or end HAS WHISTLE
The beginning part(00:18~00:43) is so jumpy,this jumpy style dosen`t fit the song at all, maybe reduce the distance a bit ?
Also, you can make your clap pattern more stable like Normal or Easy diffs, 02:00:534 (5,6,7) clap like this sounds really bad in a soft song
EX_Boy`s hitsounds are a bit too hard for you, you can just use simple and stable hitsounds.

you don`t need to fix ALL what i point out (except spacing), kick my ass to recheck it after you uploading

fixed~~

Love this song

Ranked!

congrat!

恭喜阿

><xinhe乃不能和我抢爱花