1. Easy (0.12 stars, 83 notes)
2. Hard (4.33 stars, 257 notes)
3. Normal (3.05 stars, 188 notes)

orioncomet wrote:

1. Easy (0.12 stars, 83 notes)

Timing Points wrote:

General: Some timing sections that were used to change volume or to utilize a custom hitsound weren't 1/4 tick away from the target note. Please try to place them at the nearest 1/4 tick before or after it. One example would be the timing sections targeting this slider's end: 00:12:784.

00:00:-07 - 1-2 volume ticks up.
00:13:40 - 1-2 volume ticks down.
00:34:74 - 1-2 volume ticks down.
00:58:319 - Add timing section here and retain volume (7-8 ticks).
02:18:498 - This one counts in the general mod too. Move it back to 02:18:319.

SPOILER

00:11:355 (1) - I don't think a new combo is necessary.

SPOILER

00:27:426 (5) - I don't think slider fits well in the song, since you're mapping it with the vocals.
01:54:212 (1,2) - Decrease their volume too like 01:54:926 (3,4) - since it sounds a bit weird when they are too loud while the next ones are quite soft.

SPOILER

You wanted me to find some sliders that don't fit well with the map. So I tried my best to find them without modifying your mapping style that much. But yeah, they're just my opinions, so you can ignore them.

Unfitting sliders, IMO wrote:

00:20:284 (6) -
00:38:498 (10) -
00:43:498 (5) -
01:00:998 (2) -
01:45:462 (4) -

00:12:069 (5) - Suggestion: Might as well add a finish.
00:21:355 (8) - Suggestion: Add a whistle at the slider's end.
00:29:212 (8) - Suggestion: Add a new combo.
00:33:141 (1,2) - Suggestion: Add new combo at (2) and delete new combo in (1).
00:42:605 (x) - Suggestion: Add a beat here.
00:44:569 (6) - Suggestion: Add a whistle at the slider's end.
00:51:355 (5) - I don't think this fits. I suggest extending the end of 00:50:462 (4) - on its place instead.
01:20:998 (3) - Suggestion: Add a whistle.
01:41:712 (6) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the slider's end.
02:05:819 (2) - I don't think whistle fits in. I suggest deleting, but you can ignore it.

jockeytiyan wrote:

Wow, this is going to be a tough mod since it's mostly about the timing sections.

Timing Points wrote:

General: Some timing sections that were used to change volume or to utilize a custom hitsound weren't 1/4 tick away from the target note. Please try to place them at the nearest 1/4 tick before or after it. One example would be the timing sections targeting this slider's end: 00:12:784.

00:00:-07 - 1-2 volume ticks up.
00:13:40 - 1-2 volume ticks down.
00:34:74 - 1-2 volume ticks down.
00:58:319 - Add timing section here and retain volume (7-8 ticks).
02:18:498 - This one counts in the general mod too. Move it back to 02:18:319.

Fine =A=

Easy:

SPOILER

00:11:355 (1) - I don't think a new combo is necessary.
Fixed

Normal:

SPOILER

00:27:426 (5) - I don't think slider fits well in the song, since you're mapping it with the vocals.
Fine =A=
01:54:212 (1,2) - Decrease their volume too like 01:54:926 (3,4) - since it sounds a bit weird when they are too loud while the next ones are quite soft.
Fine =A=

Hard:

SPOILER

You wanted me to find some sliders that don't fit well with the map. So I tried my best to find them without modifying your mapping style that much. But yeah, they're just my opinions, so you can ignore them.

Unfitting sliders, IMO wrote:

00:20:284 (6) - Fixed
00:38:498 (10) - Fixed
00:43:498 (5) - Fixed
01:00:998 (2) -
01:45:462 (4) - Fixed

00:12:069 (5) - Suggestion: Might as well add a finish. It's
00:21:355 (8) - Suggestion: Add a whistle at the slider's end. Fixed
00:29:212 (8) - Suggestion: Add a new combo.
00:33:141 (1,2) - Suggestion: Add new combo at (2) and delete new combo in (1).
00:42:605 (x) - Suggestion: Add a beat here.
00:44:569 (6) - Suggestion: Add a whistle at the slider's end.
00:51:355 (5) - I don't think this fits. I suggest extending the end of 00:50:462 (4) - on its place instead.
01:20:998 (3) - Suggestion: Add a whistle. Fixed
01:41:712 (6) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the slider's end. Fixed
02:05:819 (2) - I don't think whistle fits in. I suggest deleting, but you can ignore it. Fixed

Lol, if I have available kudosu, I'd definitely shoot some for this map. :3

If you have questions, you can always ask me in MSN/IRC.

Leorda wrote:

Swasdi

[Skin]
Why you transparent the slidertick? Why?
I don't like them =w=

[Timing]
Try these offset
Offset : -1.502 (Resnap all notes pls)
It's same offset with -73, I mean If I change.. I don't need to resnap all note >_<'

[Easy]
01:17:069 (2) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider?
X

[Hard]
00:49:391 (1) - No new combo
00:53:141 (7) - New combo?
00:58:498 (5) - ^
X, I always use combo with lyrics, sorry

Not bad
STAR

xierbaliti wrote:

Very good map =w=

-Easy-
Nice

-Normal-
01:01:355 (5) - Need clap here.

-Hard-
01:16:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds a bit out. How about substitute (2,3,4,5) for a slider with a repeat like this? :
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Maybe you need add clap at slider's start and add finish at slider's end. If you want change this.
01:47:605 - Add a circle here?

*star*

• • Add some Source (if possible) and some Tags
  • Add kiai

• • 01:54:212 (1,2,1) - Spacing

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Add some Source (if possible) and some Tags
  • Add kiai
  >A< Added

[Easy]

• • 01:54:212 (1,2,1) - Spacing
  oh.. yes.. Thankyou for remind me ;w;

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hey this is good

Well I'll just comment then
I kinda giggling when I heard the song, the singer's accent is still heavy kinda like western people speaking Japanese
oh rawr,They're not westerner. They're half Japanese as well, If you don't know. they're use to popular in Japanese too x:
Don't get me wrong the song it self is very calming, I like the music makes me wonder how is the full version

First Time I see Easy have difficulty with no star on the selection screen (even tutorial still have a half star )
My favorite diff is Hard, well yeah more hit objects means more hitsound and that's what make its good

Enough with the comment
Star~

PS: Next time please give me something fresh from the oven plz

abalee wrote:

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