• 
  fantastic storybord(as always) =)
  simply so

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  00:43:633 (1) - hmm,why new combo? I just do not understand, there is no need to, because the last word ends right there! + delete Finish and make Whistle (I think that it is even in the very rhythm)
  01:03:883 (4) - here two beat in this place,i think you can make how here > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2888086 but 01:04:633 - but it will be a new combo(so)
  01:16:633 (1) - here too(but idk)
  01:25:633 (1) - make Drum-Finish(sounds good)
  01:55:633 (1) - here too, as in the beginning!

• 
  00:43:633 (1) - too ^
  00:59:383 (3,4) - hmm maybe > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2888117 (in rhythm)
  01:39:133 (3) - straighten https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2888134
  01:46:633 (1) - very merges with the background (fix it)
  01:55:633 (1) - . . .

• 
  in those places where I spoke about the new combo too сorrect

Kogure wrote:

Le holi. Le mod

[General]

No dejas de sorprenderme con tus sb, este esta muy bueno.
En 02:43:633 (Para easy y normal) y 02:45:133 (para hard e insane) deberias decidir si poner los NC amarillos o grises (dependiendo de tu gusto) para que fluyan junto al sb.

[Normal]

00:37:633 (1) - Como que cuando pusiste el NC en 00:34:633 (1) - causo que los colores de los combos que vienen se cambiaran tambien. Arreglado

[Insane]

01:31:508 (7,1) - This jump tho. El problema con ese es que un poco "sorpresivo". Imagino que puedes dejarlo asi, pero en caso de que tengas que cambiarlo te sugeriria mover 01:31:633 (1) - a x:256 y:160, lo cual lo hace un poco mas accesible. Claro, pero lo dejaré como está por ahora
02:00:883 (1,1,1) - Como hiciste en la dificultad hard, seria mejor que el primer NC fuese amarillo, el segundo rosa, y el tercero gris, para que esten acordes al sb. Boo, te me adelantaste

Bueh, eso fue lo mas relevante que encontre. Haciendo tan buenos mapas me haces dificil el trabajo xD
Suerte con el rank~

Gracias

Kazuya wrote:

Hello. \o

[Insane]

AR: 9! This song is not slow, and AR8 bit slow. I'm gonna use 8.5

01:31:508 (7,1) - This spacing is extremely hard. Don't use 5,20x distance. This song is not slow! Changed
01:53:383 (4,5) - This flow weird, not best. :/ Use similar: http://puu.sh/gvfIk/4af0dbdeca.jpg I'm not really, the sense is almost the same
02:23:383 (3,4) - Hmmm... http://puu.sh/gvfWI/1da7074bf3.jpg Similar? I think, better. I prefer mine

[Hard]

01:00:383 (2) - This long slider not best here, and weird. Please, follow the instrument. Done!
01:14:383 (3) - Same as ^Change slider end here: 01:14:633 - and put circle here: 01:14:758 -
01:21:758 (3,4,5) - This part bit too hard. Remove: 01:21:758 (3) - circle
01:31:508 - Missing circle. Not at all, I don't want to add a lot notes because of star rating :c
02:00:883 (1,1,1) - Combo spam is neccessary? Yes, It follows the SB
02:06:758 (3) - Delete circle. Don't follow drums here. This is only a small relief.
02:09:383 (2) - Same as 01:14:383 (3) - Change slider end here: 02:09:633 -
02:09:883 (3,4) - I think, use repeat slider. Nah, feels bad imo

[Normal]

01:18:133 (4) - This slider end is not best here. Please, follow stronger sound. Change slider end here: 01:18:633 - (and change all similar parts)


[Easy]

01:37:633 (1,1,2) - This part is bit random. Beautiful, but not fit here. 01:37:633 (1) - Change slider end here: 01:38:758 - put 16' slider here: I'm not really sure about this, let me ask

01:39:133 - and add 1 reverse. Put circle here: 01:40:258 - 01:41:008 (4) - Move slider here: 01:40:633 - and put circle here: 01:41:758 -

Good Luck.

Gordon123 wrote:

Hello bro XinCrin
[general]

• 
  fantastic storybord(as always) =)
  simply so

[Easy]

• 
  00:43:633 (1) - hmm,why new combo? I just do not understand, there is no need to, because the last word ends right there! + delete Finish and make Whistle (I think that it is even in the very rhythm) Fits fine with the music and for consistency with other diffs
  01:03:883 (4) - here two beat in this place,i think you can make how here > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2888086 but 01:04:633 - but it will be a new combo(so)
  01:16:633 (1) - here too(but idk)
  01:25:633 (1) - make Drum-Finish(sounds good)
  01:55:633 (1) - here too, as in the beginning!
  
  I'll not change any hitsounds , sorry!

[Normal]

• 
  00:43:633 (1) - too ^
  00:59:383 (3,4) - hmm maybe > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2888117 (in rhythm) Sure!
  01:39:133 (3) - straighten https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2888134 Looks bad imo
  01:46:633 (1) - very merges with the background (fix it) xD
  01:55:633 (1) - . . .

[Hard-Insane]

• 
  in those places where I spoke about the new combo too сorrect

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ok,Star for you , i think what your map will be rank in future)
Good Luck

Lust wrote:

My only issue with the map is the grey on grey with the skin and storyboard is kind of hard to see, maybe pick a different shade for one or the other.

Combo1 : 205,218,218
Combo2 : 255,206,231
Combo3 : 255,81,168
Combo4 : 159,207,255
Combo5 : 0,103,206
Combo6 : 255,255,128
Combo7 : 244,244,0
Combo8 : 108,133,134

1. changed 2 combo colors
2. no other changes has been made

-Nya- wrote:

Heya, XinCrin~
Responding to your request from in-game.
So, let's get started.

Easy:

1. 00:50:008 (2,3) –Spacing error. Please fix. Fixed
2. I guess the only thing that I saw here that could be improved are those downbeats. Like here: 00:52:633 - 01:19:633 – 01:28:633 - 02:04:633 - 02:07:633 - 02:10:633 - 02:31:633 - 02:37:633 - for example. But you don’t have to fix these, it’s more my own taste, since I think a diff plays better when important beats are emphasized with a circle or the start of a slider. So I suggest just remembering that for your future mapsets. It’s always nice to learn something new where you can improve your skills~ I'll take in count
3. 02:16:258 (1) –Don’t you think it will be better to rather start this slider here: 02:16:633 – and then add a circle here: 02:16:258 – If you listen to the music, then it sounds as if that new-combo-slider should rather start here: 02:16:633 – Here’s a picture of a rhythm I suggest: I know, But I don't want to change the current "rhythm" because of Claps, If I change to the ryhthm that you suggest, the claps that should be on there will not sound anymore.So, I'll keep it
   
   Picture

   

Normal:

1. 01:49:133 (5) –I don’t really like this rhythm. Maybe try this instead: Sound really bad imo, Anyways I've changed it
   
   Picture

   

Hard:

1. 01:46:258 (4) –Rather try this rhythm. I think it’s more effective and this beat: 01:46:633 – will also be emphasized better: Yeah, It will emphasize better the music, but I will make a "hardest" hard. I don't want to increase the difficulty with some patterns . Anyways it's a great but I'll not take it
   
   Picture

   
2. 01:51:133 (1,2) –I don’t think it looks that nice if these two sliders are almost touching. Maybe try to do something like this: Yep, you're right. Fixed!
   
   Picture

   
3. 02:13:445 –Why not place a note here? There’s a beat that suggests one. Maybe, but it's not really necessary. At least for the "hard"
4. 02:45:133 (1) –Why not place this circle like this, like you did with this one: 02:46:633 (1) – Nah, I like how the current position is
   
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Insane:

Love the Insane~! <3

Call me back~