1. Insane (5 stars, 365 notes)
2. Kenezz's Gift (3,13 stars, 112 notes)
3. Sallad's Tomoe (3,42 stars, 109 notes)
4. Shulin's Hard (4,89 stars, 193 notes)

onigiri-lol wrote:

yiaaaaaaaaaaaaan~!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Here's my diff
If you don't like the name you can change it yes I like Chie that's why

please do full submit, I used some custom hitsound

Your best SB lyrics
I present you double star

Dusty wrote:

KenezzEdward to tags on all diffs?

[SB]
00:54:542 - When these pop in, it's hard to see what they are because they're already fading out, so probably it'd be a good idea to leave them on the screen longer mmmm

[Kenezz's]
Your OD is too low, which makes things confusing. OD 2 should really only be for easier diffs, so go 2 or 3 more ticks to the right.rdy

Grid snap 1? Next time probably use grid snap 3, because grid snap 1 makes the spacing on this diff more confusing

00:42:542 (4) - Add a repeat.rdy
00:45:012 - Maybe add a note here?rdy
00:46:424 (3) - Extend to red tick? Or add a note on the red tick?
01:01:600 (1,2,3) - More space between these sliders?they are fine

[Sallad's, Shulin's]
nice

[Insane]
ack, can't mod this well right now, I'm feeling sick, but have your star anyways

orioncomet wrote:

[Shulin's Hard]
00:30:895 - add note? >_< I just hear it with singer [or move 00:30:718 (4) - to 1/2 forward]
00:36:542 - ^ [or move 00:36:365 (1) - to 1/2 forward]

Starr ~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestios for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Make the kiai have the same length on all the diffs.
- Totally transparent spinner circle looks weird, add something to it so you know you're actually spinning when you're playing rdy
- White combocolours + Kiai time = x_x. Use Shulin's diff combocolours, I think they fit more than just those 2 you have owo okz
- The first 3-4 words of the lyrics storyboard doesn't appear, fix them =x Agh, evil .osb

~Kennezz's Gift~
00:09:012 (1) - Extend to 00:10:953.rdy
00:40:777 (6,1) - Fix spacing. Compare this with (1,2) spacing. rdy
00:47:306 (5,6) - Fix spacing. they are fine o_o

~Sallad's Tomoe~
Cool, no problems <3

~Shulin's Hard~
00:30:718 (4) - New Combo.

~Insane~
00:59:306 (1) - Sounds weird starting here, move to white tick and make a shorter slider? rdy
01:03:718 (7) - New Combo. no =(

Nice map :3 Good luck!! *star*

NoHItter wrote:

Good. Just an inconsistency with the SB though.

01:17:483 (X) - The appearing of the SB objects here should be at 01:17:130 to follow the pattern set by the others.

Also I would suggest changing your title from Reach Out To The Truth -Inst version- to Reach Out To The Truth (Instrumental)

It looks much better when you play it. (The title text that appears when you start playing a map)

• • 00:21:100 (2) - Delete this circle
  • 00:26:747 (1) - ^
  • 00:29:836 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't like this "accelerated spacing "; fix the spacing and make it linear
  • 01:03:718 (7) - New combo
  • 01:15:718 (2) - 1 square down (grid level 3)
  • 01:16:071 (4) - 1 square to the right (grid level 3)
  • 01:16:424 (6) - 1 square up (grid level 3)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[Insane]

• • 00:21:100 (2) - Delete this circle mm no
  • 00:26:747 (1) - ^ -----^
  • 00:29:836 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't like this "accelerated spacing "; fix the spacing and make it linearmmm fixed?
  • 01:03:718 (7) - New combordy
  • 01:15:718 (2) - 1 square down (grid level 3) ok
  • 01:16:071 (4) - 1 square to the right (grid level 3) -^
  • 01:16:424 (6) - 1 square up (grid level 3) -^

xxheroxx wrote:

Pubbled~

• Awesome job on muting the sliderticks in the way you did.

• .Opinions:
  Great

• .Opinions:
  Cool

• .Opinions:
  (Insert a "good quality" adjective here)

• .Opinions:
  00:11:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seven beats feel out of place. I suggest removing the 6th.
  .Suggestions:
  01:08:483 (1,2,3) - add new combo to (3); remove new combo from (1)

1. The P4 as a star2.png doesn't seem too fitting for me, but I guess it's just an opinion.
2. The play-warningarrow.png image doesn't seem too fitting either.
3. What is scorebar-colour.png used for? The only one that is being used is scorebar-colour-0.png.
4. The pause menu buttons' text looks a bit pixelated.
5. There's something I don't like about the spinner-background.png... at least you should make the "spinner metre" background, so it looks more like a spinner background. Right now it just looks like a random Persona 4 wallpaper.
6. If you aren't going to force default skin, you'll need to include these images too:
   
   1. hitcircleoverlay.png
   2. hit0.png

Gens wrote:

Sorry~ but the combobursts' height cannot be higher than 767px. I'll have to pop the pubble for the time being. rdy

Also, I have several issues with the skin:

1. The P4 as a star2.png doesn't seem too fitting for me, but I guess it's just an opinion.:P
2. The play-warningarrow.png image doesn't seem too fitting either.rdy
3. What is scorebar-colour.png used for? The only one that is being used is scorebar-colour-0.png.I forget that lol
4. The pause menu buttons' text looks a bit pixelated. rdy
5. There's something I don't like about the spinner-background.png... at least you should make the "spinner metre" background, so it looks more like a spinner background. Right now it just looks like a random Persona 4 wallpaper. rdy
6. If you aren't going to force default skin, you'll need to include these images too:
   
   1. hitcircleoverlay.png rdy
   2. hit0.png rdy

[Sallad's Tome]

00:38:130 (1,2,3) - Something about these notes doesn't convince me; maybe make them follow the lyrics closer? mmm no xD

[Insane]

00:34:600 (1,2,3) - I found these jumps kinda unfitting. I don't know, I think they are the only jumps in the whole map, plus... the song doesn't call for jumps there. ;( rdy

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That's it. Wow, this is the first time I've complained about a map made by Astom. hahaha u are welcome
Still worthy of star. Call me back and I'll recheck and re-pubble. okz

EDIT: Oh, also, just a personal thing but can you fix the thread title too? :p only u care about that lol

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:

• Awesome job on muting the sliderticks in the way you did.

- Kenezz's Gift:

• .Opinions:
  Great

- Sallad's Tomoe:

• .Opinions:
  Cool

- Shulin's Hard:

• .Opinions:
  (Insert a "good quality" adjective here)

- Insane:

• .Opinions:
  00:11:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - seven beats feel out of place. I suggest removing the 6th. rdy :3
  .Suggestions:
  01:08:483 (1,2,3) - add new combo to (3); remove new combo from (1) rdy

Modding perfect maps makes me feel useless xD xDDDD sry <-<

Gens wrote:

Proto-bubble returned!

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Insane
00:04:424 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These reverse stacks are really, really not fun. Could you put something better there? :>
00:52:424 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ :< :>
01:28:247 (1,2,3) - Please don't put notes so soon after a spinner :>

Everything else is fiiine

ztrot wrote:

offset is wayyy wayy off
offset 1234 or 1232 what ever feels right for you I couldn't pick one.

ztrot wrote:

offset is wayyy wayy off
offset 1234 or 1232 what ever feels right for you I couldn't pick one.

ztrot wrote:

GAH modding with my stream mess with me

sorry Ranked

Mafiamaster wrote:

Congrats!

Agent Spin Here wrote:

WHY did this get ranked with notes so soon after the spinner on Insane? It's ridiculous!

It's ridiculous if u can't play it, that spinner is long so I don't see the problem