CrimmiSkye wrote:

I've Found A Suitable Background For Your Map. =]

shabao_pig wrote:

BD's Easy

00:32:000 (1,2) - I suggest you not stack them in this diff You have 1.4 seconds to read (2). I think that is enough.
01:05:700 (1) - start it at 01:05:800 following the music
02:00:000 (1) - start it at 01:58:800? This makes the star rating go UUUUUP to a point that doesn't feel like the real difficulty. Sorry;

shabao_pig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


it's a instrument song so remove countdown


Insane

00:41:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think it plays better if you change this arrangement into a triangle (4 up) -> Yeah, I agree
01:31:200 - add a spinner here? -> I think it's fine without this spinner
01:45:600 (1) - end it at 01:48:800? -> Hm, I think with the spinner ending at 01:48:800 it will be a loong spinner, so I just put a hitcircle there


Hard

00:32:800 (4,1,2,3) - this kind of arrangement plays uncomfortable to me.maybe you can put 1,2,3 on the side of this slider or change the slider into a 3-note one
00:34:400 (4,1,2,3) - ^
00:36:000 (4,1,2,3) - ^
00:37:600 (4,1,1) - spacing

Ok, I fixed everything

Normal

seems fine


BD's Easy

00:32:000 (1,2) - I suggest you not stack them in this diff
01:05:700 (1) - start it at 01:05:800
02:00:000 (1) - start it at 01:58:800?



star

Hyguys wrote:

as you requested

General
So much long sliders
Star * ~

Normal
01:05:200 Delete then add beat -> Acho que assim está bom
01:05:400 Spinner here (end at 01:08:880) -> ^
01:16:800 Add a beat here with finish -> Ok
01:34:600 Break here Ok
01:47:400 ^ -> ^

Hard
00:52:000 Delete , add spinner (end at 00:57:600) -> Sei lá, acho que tá bom assim
01:05:200 replace with spinner -> ^
01:35:200 Remove finish -> ^
01:55:200 Replace with spinner -> Bls

Insane
00:24:400 (1,2) Remove Finish -> Acho que assim ficou legal
01:03:200 break here -> Tá ficando louco ? :s

orz , cabô lolq

Hyguys wrote:

Easy
00:40:000 Remove clap Não
00:41:600 ^ Não
00:44:800 Add Finish Já tem whistle e Finish é muito forte praquela parte

Xgor wrote:

[General]

Add Blue Dragon in the tags in all difficulties.

[BD's Easy]


Rhythm

Bit tricky to follow for an easy but works most of the times.

01:28:600 (2) - I think this would be much easier to follow if you moved this 1/2 forward on the timeline, I know it's follows the main melody but it's pretty confusing as it's at a different place as the combo before it. It's fine IMO
01:41:400 (2) - ^ ^, but I added a whistle on both notes

Also
00:38:400 (3) - Add new combo here ok
00:40:000 (1) - Remove new combo ok

Hitsounds

Nice use of hitsounds, some things that bugged me though

00:40:000 (1,2) - The claps here feels so out of place... nah
01:34:400 (5) - Maybe make this a bit less louder. ok
01:42:400 (3) - ^ at the clap It's already the lowest volume

Odaril wrote:

General
Remove countdown. It sounds awful. -> Ok

Normal
You shouldn't use small jumps between new combos (like 00:41:200 (3,1) - ) it's very confusing for new players. -> Ok
01:44:800 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is too hard to play in a Normal diff imo, so stacked ? Make the two first a slider at least. -> Ok

Hard
This feels terribly weird. Might be because, while the song is very calm and smooth, the map is not.
01:44:800 (1,2) - This jump is extremely surprising and doesn't even make sense. Just reverse (1), it should fix it. -> Ok

Insane
Sorry but this is overmapped imo. All these jumps/anti-jumps absolutely don't fit the song. It plays fine, though.

1. That offset feels pretty early to me. I'd add at least +20 to it (Offset: 20. Heh)
2. It's minor, but could you perhaps make those backgrounds 4:3? (as in, make them 1024x768) so they fit the screen perfectly?
3. Easy and normal don't have the countdown on, while Hard and Insane does. Perhaps you could make those the same?

Doomsday wrote:

Hey

1. That offset feels pretty early to me. I'd add at least +20 to it (Offset: 20. Heh) -> Done
2. It's minor, but could you perhaps make those backgrounds 4:3? (as in, make them 1024x768) so they fit the screen perfectly? -> I gonna do this when I get time
3. Easy and normal don't have the countdown on, while Hard and Insane does. Perhaps you could make those the same?

-> Done

[BD'S EASY]

Looks good. Some pretty sliders too in here.

[NORMAL]

It's a map of two halves. The first half is pretty dull. Mainly constant beats stuck in straight lines. It gets boring quickly. On the other hand, the second half is more interesting (from 01:24:000 onwards), but then you've got pretty fast beats which compared to the first half, feels out of place, and are pretty damn tough for a normal. It's an odd case.

I'd tone that second half down a bit. Perhaps for the triples (like 01:26:800 (1,2,3)), you could use little sliders instead. Right now, those triples in a normal feel out of place.

-> I remapped some hitcircles, I hope it's better now

[HARD]

00:52:000 (1) - These sliders fit in with the easier difficulties, and as much as I like long sliders, In a hard, ones this long don't really work. They're a bit too slow-paced for the difficulty. Perhaps use something else here? (a break would be a good idea, since the other difficulties have breaks here). -> Done, I used a spinner
01:05:200 (2) - Same with this one. This one isn't quite as out-of-place as the other one imo. -> ^

I see you tried doing some sliderwork. Not bad, but it's still an interesting map nonetheless.

[INSANE]

Hmm. Personally. I really don't think a song as calm as this needs anything more than a Hard. This is ridiculous though. All these jumps and streams don't work at all for a song like this. When you've got jumps like at 00:25:600 with practically nothing in the song backing it up, it's like playing the jumps with no music at all.

Personally, I would remove this difficulty and keep Hard as the hardest difficulty. I don't know if you'd agree with me, but a difficulty of this sheer insanity has no place in a map for this song. -> Insane does not exist anymore

This one's a bit of a mixed bag. most of it is okay, Easy and Hard are pretty nice, Normal is average but passable, and Insane is silly. Ignoring Insane, this is a pretty nice map. -> Thank you

With Insane there, I can't really star this one. -> No more Insane xD

Odaril wrote:

General
I'm glad to see you removed the Insane.
There are two unused osb files; if you want, remove them (you aren't force to though).
Add "Blue Dragon" and "BD" to the tags of all difficulties. -> ok

Normal
00:23:220 (4) - Slightly too close to (3).
00:25:620 (1,3,5,7) - I find these kick sliders confusing for a Normal diff, because the number of repeats is unexpected. -> I liked it D:
00:38:420 (1) - Too close to previous note.
00:44:820 (1) - Too far from previous note.
01:16:820 (1) - Too close to previous note.
01:28:620 (4) - Move it to the left so the spacing is more even with the previous and next notes.
01:36:820 - The spacing starting from here is not consistent. The first combo is spaced using 0.8x, then the next one using 1.00x, then 0.8x again.
01:44:820 (3,4) - I suggest you first move (3) closer to (2) because of the big spacing, then that you make the same rhythm as (1,2), as this one is pretty confusing to play.
01:49:220 - Inconsistent spacing strikes again here.

All done

Hard
I honestly don't like it much because it is not as calm as the song, but I didn't see any major error. -> I think it is a calm diff D: